Do Dil Jo Kabhi Na Honge Judaa ( PART-1)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hiii everyone yashasvi urf yashu here after reading soo many ffs i hav decided to write my own bt i really dnt know wether u guyzz vl like it or not so pleazzz tell me through ur comments and if u vl like it i vl be able to post 2nd part aft few fays as my school is reopning n still not hhw done...
soo lets start-

a beautiful girl is shown that is practicing fr a dance performance on her friends mehendi. she is dancing on drama queen and that is none other than our twinkle.
scene shifts. there is a big hall and boys r practicing on tu meri and the main lead is our dashing kunj
a boy comes and that is uv and he is the grom.
kunj- bhai tu yha kesse
uv- kyo meri mehndi k liye dance kr rhe ho aur me dekh bhi nhi sakta
kunj- dekh dekh tu toh dulhe raja he
uv- btw tujhe pta he n ki girlz toh jab kr practise kr rhi hogi. tum log ldko ki naak mat kwa dena
kunj- are bhai tu toh bekkar me teshion le rha he jeetege toh hum hi. lekin fir bhi risk nhi lena chahiye
uv- ek kaam krte he me vha chup kr dekh kr aata h unka dance
kunj- tu vha dance dekhne jata he ya chinki ko ( the bride is chinki) i mean humari bhabhi ko
(uv starts blushng) ohooo someone is blushing ha
uv- are nhi yrrr tujhe mujh pr bharoosa nhi he
kunj- noops..

uv- achaa theek he tu hi challa ja... aur ha chinki ko bolna ki call me when she is free
kunj-ok ok hal bye.. me jta hu pyaar ka sendesh dene and starts laughing
uv- tu bhi na and runs behind him.

scene shifts
kunj reaches there where girlz r practising and starts seeing there dance. bt he ws seeing from back..and didnt saw twinkle... bt as she ws in main he ws jst seeing her dance moves and admiring her from back
kunj in mind ( yrrr kya dance kr rhi he pechee se itni sundar lg rhi he toh aage se kitni lgegi.. hai isse toh milna pdega .. are kunj tu yha apni setting nhi unka dance dekhne aaya he.. yeh uv toh sach keh rha tha ladkiyon ne toh humari band bjana ki full tyari kr rkhi he.. pr when kunj is hear why to fear)

To b continued if u liked it.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow yashu. You are too fast han. Welcome to the forum 👏 .
Good start. Will read this for sure. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
thxxx diii...😊 luv u... n ya do read n comment!!!!!!❤️😃😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Hey, liked it...
Plz do continue it..
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thxxx piu😊, glad that u liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi yashu😊
Welcome to the forum 😳
This is awesome 👏continue soon plzz😃
N do p.m. me when the next parts are done 😳


I have to read a lot of pending updates in this forum 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
yups anjum for sure.!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thxxx fr liking it!!!!!!!!!!!!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yashu quite interesting beginning.
Yashu welcome to forum.
Btw i m eshu.
Coming to ur ff or ss its nice.

So kunj nd uv r friends nd chinki is bride.
O oo i get it do dil meaning groom nd brides friends story kunj nd twinkle.
Interested in knowing who will win.
Looks like hero may lose his heart to his friends to be brides friend.
Continue soon.
Do pm me the next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
ummm it's a ff eshu , ya sure i'll pm u , i'll upload the next part in evening, thxxx fr comment n warm wlcm😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Yashu,
Welcome to our lovely forum.
And you start your journey with FF.
That's really beautiful.
Wait is started for eve.
Nice to know you dear.
-Aditi

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