Do Dil Jo Kabhi Na Honge Judaa ( PART-1)

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FK (Fatima Khan)

@.Anjum.

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Yashu dear 😊the update was fab n fantastic😳😃

You know uv chinki marg can be covered up in an epi😉😛

Enjoying twinj n their tashan 😳

Thanks for the p.m. 😃

What you do is while updating every chapter , you edit the 1st page of your ff thread n change the title .. like when updated 2nd chap , write chap no. n page no.. so that viewers can be notified easily...n of possible , on 1st page of this thread only , edit ur 1st post n make an index kind of a thing where all chappys n page numbers wll be written 😃😳

And don't worry bt the comments bcoz most prolly the activity of this forum has gone to -ve so when ppl come here they'll see n appreciate a lot 😃co you deserve it ... n don't think that you aren't a good writer coz of its ua 1st ever story that's mindblowing👏

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Aditi

@adi_FMT_ct

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Yashu,love the 2nd part.

It's awesome.

At first Twinj's tashan just loveee it.

Then Sid's entry as bff of Twinkle is most welcome.

By the way i want to ask you who is this Sid?

Jamai Raja ka Sid or Sidhant ka Sid or any random character of ur mind.

I want to know because I found this character damn interesting.

Then the flashback,I believe u cause one and only Twinj can make a rift for 1...hour.😆

And the last,Twinkle certainly create a new siyappa this time by writing K word with mehendi.

Let's see what is happened now.

And for your question u can cover up the marriage of Yuki in one chapter with Twinj's nokjhok.

Waiting for the next update.

P.S.-Anjum is right about comments of your story.😃

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Sristi Malhotra

@20160990159

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

yashu 2nd part is amazing buddy
I loved every bit of it specially the flashback part
but like Adi I also want to know who is sid???
and the last part is so good Twinkle and her siyappa's
and about Yuki marriage please don't describe it too much as I want Twinj 😃
don't be sad about the amount of comments you will get much more after some time just wait n watch 😆
and follow what anjum said
you know even didn't know that this story is updated only after looking at the PM I got to know about it
please change the title and add the part you update

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