Do Dil Jo Kabhi Na Honge Judaa ( PART-1) - Page 2

Yashu welcome to TEI family..

Oh waw. Nice story. Pleae update soon. wanna see how Kunj reacts when he sees twinkle first and vice versa and who is going to fall first to whom.

hey thx dear aditi...😊😊😊

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct

Hi Yashu,

Welcome to our lovely forum.

And you start your journey with FF.

That's really beautiful.

Wait is started for eve.

Nice to know you dear.

-Aditi

Yashu welcome to TEI family..
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Hiii yashu here back again...

I wnt 2 tell u all dat my ff vll b more in hindi as I thnk dat it sounds gud.. it's my point of view.. ok know let's start
Sangeet function starts
A boy and girl is shown coming ... and everybody ws luking at them... they were none other than our uv n chinki... chinki ws wearing a gold colored lehnga and uv ws wearing a black colored traditional suit( actually I really don't know wt it is called) the dance stats and first turn ws of boys.. they wer dancing vv gracefully with their whole heart... their dance ends all wer clapping fr them except twinkle as she had not arrived yet( u know na girls tak so much time... even I am a girl.. soo u all know!!! )
Uv- wah!!!! Bhai kya dance kiya, I am sure

jeetege toh hum hi
Chinki-(interrrupting him) ohooo no doubt boys ne bht acha dance kra bt hum girlz bhi kch ka, nhi he.. infact tum boys ka dance humare dance ka half bhi nhi tha

Uv- itnna overconfidence...
Kunj- bhabhi challo dekh hi lete he ki kaun jeetege oor kaun harega
Uv- yeah!!!!!
Chinki- ok.. jst wait n watch
Kunj- voh sab toh theek he lekin girlsdance shuru kyo nhi kr rhi he... lgt he pehle hi dar gye ( yunj wer laughing )
Leela- are beta dance shuru kyo nhi kr rhe ho
One of the girl- auntije twinkle toh abhi tak aayi hi nhi he
Leela- hai rabba... yeh ladki bhi na.. shaadi behen ki he khud itna tayaar ho rhi he
Chinki- maa yeh twinkle ko kya ho gya mere sangeet k din meri hi behn itna late aa rhi he
And the lights got off

Anita- ohoo ab iss light ko kya hua
( jst than the song drama queen starts and there ws spotlight only on the stage and the girls start dancing... everybody were jst amazed by the entry ... the dance ws over and the lights were again on )
Twinkle- hllo everybody... aap sab soch rhe hoge ki yeh kya hua... actually aaj meri pyaari behn ka sangeet he toh kch chat patakka toh hona hi chahiye... aur vesse bhi twinkle taneja ki bhen ka sangeet he kissi are gere nathu gere nhi toh meri dhamakedaar entry toh honi hi thi
Uv- are wah twinkle swach me sabka sangeet toh normal hi hta he lekin mera toh kch zyada hi special ban gya he ... only boz of u...( smiling)
Twinkle- thankew jiju..

Chinki- twinkle me toh dar hi gyi thi mene soch ki kahi ladkiyaan tre ctayyar hone k chakkar me har n jaye
Twinkle- di tu bhi na faloo me tension leti he...
( and on the other hand our kunj ws in great shock with his mouth opened )
Anita- kun jab kya kehna he... kaun jeeta girls ki boys..
Jst then eveybodyws seeing kunj nt responding.. and ab toh jesse hi twinkle ne kunj ko dekha she ws also super duper shoked... everybody ws staring at them..
Chinki n uv - ( shouts ) twinkle!!!! Kunj!!!!!!!!!!!

And they came to there senses
Twinj together- tum!!!! Yah!!!!!!!!!!!!!... kya kr rhe ho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yuki - tum dono ek dusre ko jaante ho
Uv- tw yeh mera bhai he
Chiki- aur yeh meri bhen... vesse abhi tak toh yeh pta chal hi gya hoga( laughing)
On the other hand twinj ws super shocked and angry( mixed emotion )
Tw in mind - yeh sadu jiju ka bhai he... yani di ka dever...ohhhooo
Kunj in mind- yeh siyappa queen bhabhi ki behen he... yani uv ki aadhi gharwalli... yeh addhi hi 100 k brabar he..

Precap- twinj flashback

Note- tw is chinki's sis n kunj is uv's bro...
Sry fr grammatical errors

Credit to: yashasvi or ur yashu

Awesome update yashu👍🏼😳

hey thxxx anjum😊😊😊

Aaha I like suspense.

hey as u suggested me so thought to like ur comment bt couldn't resist myself from replying u😃😃😃.so sweet of u.thankewww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!sooo sooo much...🤗😳😳..