NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 4 CHAPTERS 7 & 8

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Prologue

Three Great Emperors had toiled hard to build the vast and flourishing legacy of the 'Mughal Empire', keeping relative peace by unifying its Mughals and Hindus. However; by mid 1600s, cracks began to appear in its solid foundations. Insecurities crept in through the gaps, widening the gulfs between the two religions once again.

With the old Emperor becoming too feeble to take charge and his jealous successors remaining preoccupied with expansion and power, the damage was never repaired. Not surprising then that new rebellions arose every day. Violence escalated, claiming many innocent lives.

Yet; in the midst of such turmoil and peril, there bloomed a beautiful story - much like a lone flower blossoming upon the steepest edges of a cliff - a story of love, of sacrifice and honour!

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Forced to flee from her motherland, the one home she knew... forced to leave behind her people, for whom, she was their only hope...forced to grievously abandon the last rites of her loved one while the flames on the pyre were still ablaze...the orphaned heiress of 16 overcame grief and many shortcomings, as she embarked on a long dangerous path... setting out to seek help and support, for her people and her lands...

Till a chance stay with a complete stranger would change the course of those very plans forever!

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Being the most shrewd, determined and unforgiving of the lot meant he was formidable... a force to be reckoned with... it also meant he could have owned it all - riches, power, women and fame... but, he fancied none of it...

As a recluse with simple tastes, the rich life held no real appeal... power didn't tempt him... women didn't interest him... his passion was work and his only family were a few loyal friends... he had decided that he wanted little else in life...

Till a chance visit from a complete stranger would change that decision forever!

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Teaser for Chapter 7

No sooner than Akbar had begun proceeding in a different direction to attend to other affairs, Azeez called out from behind

'An interesting morning indeed... you have another visitor...' he chirped 'Harka Sa...'

And just as his pace dropped slightly, Azeez completed the rest of the statement 'ahiba's maid is here to see you...'

Akbar threw a glare over his left shoulder, and noticed the profile of a young maid crossing the meadow 'Ai Khuda' his jaw tightened. Neither did he have the time, nor the patience for this 'I leave it to you to save this lady from my wrath this morning!'

Chapter 7 below...


CHAPTER 7


Refusing to prance around the stables, like most young foals would, the animal lay coiled upon a soft bundle of bale, its head hanging low and its eyes unusually droopy. Evidently, its quivering legs had become too weak to support its weight. In fact, its little body had become so lethargic that it was even ignoring the comforting company of its own mother.

Stepping into the enclosure, the owner approached the animal slowly to avoid frightening it, but it didn't react. He stroked its back, simultaneously whispering a few familiar commands to gauge its response - but the foal's ears failed to twitch. As he placed a firm palm under its jaw to examine how abnormal its beats were, his expressions turned graver.

The owner had gotten his answer.

When it came to his animals, Akbar Khan despised any kind of bad news. After all, he believed that his horses asked for little, gave back a lot and showed him the kind of unwavering loyalty that could rarely be expected from another man. So, not surprisingly, these sort of situations were one of the few instances where life managed to evoke an emotion in him.


Anticipating the worst, he went on to ask the question he hated asking 'Ibrahim, what did Hakim Sahib say? Will it survive?'

Ibrahim paused, knowing his master wasn't going to like the answer 'Hakim Sahib is not very sure it will...'

'Ya Allah' letting out a low frustrated grunt, he stared at the ill foal for a moment, before giving it a final pat behind its ears 'Continue giving it the medicines...' he ordered the stable-boy who was awaiting instructions.

In a heartbeat, he then left that enclosure, to attend to the other horses and sheds - a routine the man led, whatever the circumstances. And in his absence, a routine that his trusted aides maintained just as systematically.



Walking the lengths of the stables with his hands behind his back, Akbar's glimpses combed through every nook and cranny of the dynamic scenes around him. Even amongst that large group of very brusque and brisk men, he stood strikingly tall and prominent. And he commanded that prominence despite the fact that he was no elite highborn like other merchants - if anything, he believed in rolling up his sleeves and getting his hands dirty whenever the need arose. The sole reason he commanded that level of prominence was because of his personality and achievements.


'Salaam Sahib!' a stable manager wished him, as he passed by

'Salaam...' he wished the manager back, before reverting his attention to the three men flanking him

'How many horses have been prepped for the auction?'

'23...' replied Azeez 'Do you want to choose the ones you deem fit and ready?'

'Yes... and then we can leave for the auctions soon after...' he confirmed, before he was interrupted again

'Salaam Sahib...' gestured yet another stable manager, with a humble adaab

'Salaam salaam...' he hurried the manager on.

As a master, Akbar preferred lofty actions from his people, not such lofty gestures - and his employees were well aware of his preferences. Regardless, they adhered to these formalities out of gratitude. Because, they knew that every skill they'd learnt, every rupee they earned and thus every meal they ate, wouldn't have been possible if it were not for the hard work of their 25 year old master, Akbar Mahmoud Khan.

At the age of 19, he'd began venturing into the complicated competitive world of buying and selling horses. Inheritance, he had none - be it, money, house or family. Yet, his brilliance, hard work and self-learning won over all odds. By 25, he had learnt everything there was to learn about horses. Mastered every aspect of commerce that could be mastered. By 25, he was monopolising most of the horse-trade, south of the capital.

And no, this wasn't an achievement that could be sustained by hard work alone. There were just as many instances where he'd had to be street-smart and manipulative too.

For instance, much like the homeless outcast he'd once been, most of his staff were people who'd been picked up from the streets. Sharing a similar background with his men meant he could understand their sentiments well - but it also meant he knew how to play tough to get what he wanted. Gifted with an uncanny knack of being able to spot an honest man, Akbar trained the men he chose very well, while keeping the shrewdest tricks of the trade to himself. This gave him the advantage of having an efficient and loyal work force - but, it also ensured his position remained unchallenged.

Thence, if not gratitude, it was awe. If not awe, it was fear. Any which way, the authority he commanded was irrefutable.


'Salaam Sahib...'

'Salaam...'

With a cursory nod, he continued walking forward - his mind on the next subject already 'That dealer... Bolaram... has he settled accounts?'

'No... he still hasn't paid up...'

'It's been more than a month, hasn't it?'

'Yes...'

'Sayyid' he immediately called forth his mate most suited for the job 'Once we've returned from the auction... please pay the dealer a visit!'

'Certainly!' the large man nodded - a faint grin breaking out on his lips


Following a short lull, 'Ibrahim' uttered Akbar, his eyes still busy monitoring the barns 'Come on... you can spit out whatever it is that's playing on your mind! Even by your standards, you've been unusually silent!'

Caught off guard, Ibrahim briefly faltered. Yes, he DID have something on his mind - but seeing how his Sahib wasn't having a particularly good morning, he'd avoided bringing it up - at least, until now 'Actually...' he sighed 'Do you think I might be able to return home for some time... take some time off?'


Akbar stopped in his tracks.

His expressions steely, he turned to face the three men. His most loyal aides. Three men who possibly came closest to being the family he never had


'Sahiiib!'

'MOOOVEEE...'

With a deafening yell, he suddenly nudged Sayyid and Azeez aside, before lunging forward to push Ibrahim away.

In a flash, a massive stallion had ferociously thundered through, trampling over the very spot where the men had just stood upon. By the time anyone could make sense of the startling scenes, it'd charged ahead, toppling over pails of water, knocking through bales of hay and unsettling the remaining animals in the sheds. Amidst the cacophony and uproar that arose, a few daring stable boys threw themselves at the beast to stop it in its tracks - but the unruly horse was in no mood to be tamed. It managed to dodge them all, even wounding a few men by kicking them away with its powerful hind legs.


'Hold its reins'

'No... grab its saddle' they yelled one over the other

'Pull its mane... that should get it to slow down!'


'THAT'S ENOUGH!' the booming command brought about a temporary respite to the uproar 'LET IT GO...' he immediately added, predicting that the only outcome of such reckless tussles would be further injuries and damage.

And his order couldn't have been more well-timed - because the very next instant, the raging horse had butted into the perimeter fence, thus breaking a few wooden planks - and sped off through the gap into the fields.


'We'll chase it down...' they offered

'I'll fetch it for you, Sahib...' another vowed, heroically


'NO!' his glares indicated towards the mess around them 'There's enough to be taken care of here, first...'

Then; he blew a sharp distinctive whistle.


Out trotted the most majestic steed brandishing a rich coat of shiny black - its attitude, height and rippled musculature perfectly suited to its master's personality.

Not only did the animal identify the tune of this distinctive whistle every single time, it could also understand the mood of its master from the underlying tones in it.

And right now, it knew that something was annoying his Sahib.

'Bahadur' stroking the back of the animal that was his closet friend and pet; Akbar spoke in a language that only the two of them understood 'Chase him around the fields... tire him down... and lead him back here...' as soon as he gave the stallion a strong pat on its back, it dashed off in the direction of the fields, in pursuit of the errant horse.


'Wonder what set it off like that...' quipped the men

But, Akbar had already guessed.

Turning around, he inspected the stall from which the stallion had escaped - the odd sights he saw therein only confirmed his guesses. The gawky inexperienced stable boy had manhandled the horse so badly, that it was behaving like a frenzied lunatic to show its frustration

'That rascal, Gafhoor!'


The spite in his manner barely hidden, he began taking long strides in the direction of the stall, bringing the chaos in the surroundings to a near standstill. Everyone watched in alarm - wondering what the fate of the boy would be! 'WHAT do you think you were doing?'

'Sahib...' picking himself up from his spot, the nervous attendant approached the man, trying not to bother with the many jeers and sneers being targeted at him by the rest 'I'm sorry Sahib...' noting how his master's stares were sharper than the edges of a razor, he decided to wipe the sheepish smile off his lips 'I was only trying to...'

'THAT horse' Akbar cut short the many explanations that were about to come 'has been patient with you... I have been patient with you... if you cannot learn the job properly... you cannot be worthy of my employment... consider yourself dismissed!'


'Nooo sahib... please hear what I have to say...'

Letting out a long sigh, Akbar redirected some of his annoyance towards the man he held partially responsible for this fracas 'Ibrahim...' his questioning frowns demanded, silently yet sternly 'I specifically asked you to find a better replacement soon...'

'I know...' Ibrahim responded with an apologetic nod 'And I AM on the lookout...but...'

'Ai Khuda!' Akbar exhaled a mild scoff. Ibrahim Mirza was a man more efficient than most - and if HE was being tardy at finding a replacement, the best explanation had to be that the cunning stable boy had somehow gotten to his soft-heart

In the breather that followed, Gafhoor had found his golden opportunity.

Having observed the hush exchanges between not-so-lenient employer and somewhat-lenient employer's friend, he instantly knelt at Ibrahim's feet, taking everyone by surprise - most of all, Ibrahim himself


'Mirza Sahib... please speak on my behalf... please tell Khan sahib that I'm sincere and dedicated...'

'NO!' Ibrahim shook his head in the negative, taken aback by the latest development 'Khan Sahib knows and decides for himself who can stay and who can leave... I work for him like you do...'

'But, please tell him what I told you... that I have three mouths to feed...'

The friend looked up and viewed straight ahead, unresponsive to the pleas. Yes, his conscience felt the boy deserved a second chance, but no, he wouldn't speak up about it. Not if it he'd have to defy his master in public to do so. After all; Akbar wasn't only friend and employer, he was guide and guardian too. So little surprise that Ibrahim treated his word as law 'NO Gafhoor!' he yelled, as sternly as he had in the last instance


'Please Mirza sahib...' the boy paused to wipe a tear 'My brother will die, out of hunger!'

'Oh stop!' for a man who hated drama of any sort, his patience had been drained many moments ago. Towering over the pleading boy, Akbar grabbed him by his collar and straightened him up, like one would sort out a wilted sack 'Do you think I don't see what games you're playing at?' a few moments later, he darted his tight-lipped friend an irate half-glance and then went on to pronounce a verdict - a verdict that actually stunned all present there 'I'm granting you another chance, but remember it's your LAST...' giving his collar a brisk jolt to let him know he meant business, Akbar tossed back the stable boy from his clutches 'Now get going!'

Tripping from the force of the sudden release, the elated stable attendant stumbled over his own feet as he attempted to stand up 'Thank you, sahib... thank you... may Allah bless you!' still unable to believe his luck, he retraced his way towards the stables with his hands tightly clasped together as a mark of gratitude - an otherwise touching display that somehow failed to have an effect on the master.

Of course, Ibrahim Mirza wasn't the only mate surprised by the fact that the stable boy had been given a second chance - something Akbar rarely did. However, if there was one thing they'd learnt in their 5 years of association with the man, it was to expect the unexpected!


Not long after, the rambling horse was on its way back, with Bahadur hot on its tail. Obviously, the exercise had helped calm its frayed temperament down. With its trot much slower now, it didn't take long for the stable boys to be able to catch it by its reins and lead it back towards its stall.

The situation tackled at long last, Akbar turned to face his mates.


After staring at his friend for a moment, Akbar broke the silence with an unexpected question

'So, how is bhabhijaan?'

Ibrahim raised an inquisitive brow 'Actually, she's not very well...'

'Then you must be beside her now...'

'And you arrived at that conclusion because...'

'You requested some time off, Ibrahim. When was the last time you did so?' his voice ebbed into a gentler wave 'Go on...spend some time at home... later on, you can join us at the auction...' he indicated towards the pathway that led to the exit 'Khuda Hafiz!'

'Khuda Hafiz!' responded a grateful Ibrahim, thereafter beginning to make his way out


No sooner than Akbar had begun proceeding in a different direction to attend to other affairs, Azeez called out from behind

'An interesting morning indeed... you have another visitor...' he chirped 'Harka Sa...'

And just as his pace dropped slightly, Azeez completed the rest of the statement 'ahiba's maid is here to see you...'

Akbar threw a glare over his left shoulder, and noticed the profile of a young maid crossing the meadow 'Ai Khuda' his jaw tightened. Neither did he have the time, nor the patience for this 'I leave it to you to save this lady from my wrath this morning!'




The guest quarters...

She peeked closely, scouring through the many small compartments of that inlaid box. On spotting the tiny piece of medicinal bark she was after, Heera picked it up and dropped it into the mortar along with the rest of the herbs. What followed, was a soothing musical clinking of her bangles as she pounded the herbs into a fine mixture.

After a short while, she checked its texture by rubbing a pinch of it, onto her palm - and double-checked its potency by breathing in its scents.

When satisfied, she scooped up with the tip of her little finger, the exact amount required for the kind of injuries she was treating. It was an amount so minuscule and yet a quantity so accurate, that most would require a measuring spoon to achieve that feat 'Not too little... not too much...' she followed her Guru's advice, before checking the temperature of the oil and dropping the portion into it. Within moments, the herbs had begun reacting, its soft vapours pouring over and out of the bowl 'Take it...'


'Yes baisa...' her aide received the goblet, still reeling from the beauty of what she'd just witnessed. Granted, she'd seen it a thousand times before - and undoubtedly, she missed the sparkling smiles that used to be an eternal characteristic of her mistress' face. However, watching the Lady work her magic with the herbs was as alluring a phenomenon today - as it'd been the first time she'd seen it!

'Have it massaged onto the swelling...' Heera instructed, ensuring that her face did not reflect the many concerns she had for the guards' health 'At once, please...'

'Yes baisa...'


'Did it ever strike you as odd, baisa?' asked Mohan thereon, his words thin and raspy from trying to speak through the painful twitches in his leg 'That the merchant mentioned 'Aidabad' but never told us he belonged to this place?'

'Or that he owns a mansion here...' reminded Daya, whose condition was only marginally better than the chief-guard's

'It would've struck me as odd, if both our parties were meeting casually... but, our meeting wasn't casual or friendly, was it?' As she washed her hands in a bowl of water, her brows knitted pensively 'So, while we didn't reveal anything about ourselves, we can't expect a stranger to volunteer all that information to us.'

She paused to help herself to the dry cloth being handed by the chief maid - the chief maid, who was quietly watching on, impressed by the sensible explanation and yet wondering if her baisa could come up with that explanation so promptly because she'd already spent time mulling over the stranger.

'Anyway' continued Heera 'Why are you distressing yourself over all this when you have to rest, banna?'

'Because every waking second I worry for your safety, baisa... we are stranded... in this old haveli... that belongs to an unfamiliar man... in an unknown city...' a particularly strong cramp forced him to interrupt his confessions shortly 'It... it' he grunted in agony 'It's my duty to protect you... instead, you're the one caring for me...'


Heera was aware of precisely what - or rather, 'whom' the guard was referring to. So, while she put her herbs away, she attempted to put his fears to rest too 'If something was to happen to me here, banna... trust me, it would have happened to me by now... so, fret not!'

'What!'

'How do you know?'


Well, Heera just knew. Because if something bad was supposed to happen to her, it would have happened when she was alone, vulnerable and defenceless. When she'd recklessly wandered away from her people. When she was stranded with this 'unfamiliar man', who was thrice as strong as her and armed too.

'What made you say that, baisa?'

'How do you know?'

'I know because my instincts tell me so... and I trust my instincts!' she deliberately adapted a stern tone, knowing the enquiries would never end otherwise, thus putting an end to all their discussions on the matter.



Later, when she'd finished shutting her medicine box, a gut-wrenching shriek echoed from the corner. Her spirits instantly plunging many notches lower, Heera looked up. It was Mohan, reacting to the treatment being carried out on his leg

'Ma Bhavani ... please help him...' she prayed, desperately wishing for this dose of medicines to stop the infection from spreading and help relieve the pain. Because most other remedies she'd tried over the past 2 days weren't showing any improvement - which could only imply that she was dealing with a kind of venom that wasn't commonly known.

And as if the misery and worry wasn't enough, the lack of progress in their health also reminded her of another troubling fact. That their party would not be able to leave for Bansi in the next couple of days as she'd originally presumed.

'Jiji... give me strength!' her thoughts soldiered on, as she realised how the unfortunate delays affected them all 'I was hoping to begin making plans for Parnagarh's future as soon as I reached Bansi... but...' her throat swelled up with emotions, deeply saddened by the sight of her chief-guard writhing in agony 'If we're staying behind for longer... I might have to start my agenda... here... at Aidabad...'




'Baisa...'

'Harka Baisa...'

The myriad of shrill-pitched hollers drew her attention towards the entranceway. From the hurried tinkling of anklets echoing one over the other, she knew a bevy of maids were anxiously seeking her out

'What's the matter?'

'Baisa... quick... you have to come with us...'


'But, why??'

'We'll explain on the way... But please come now...'





The corridors...

'Please tell me she hasn't gone all alone...'

'But, she has!'

'Lord...' sighed Heera, suddenly tempted to grow just as concerned as the remaining ladies. A confrontation between an impulsive young lady like Bindiya and an unsympathetic young man like the merchant could spell potential trouble for the entire group - the sort of trouble they could definitely do without at this point 'All right, ladies...' maintaining a brave front, the heiress pulled the veil over her face, preparing to join the young girl before matters worsened 'Gauri... please take me to...'

'But, it's too late to intervene...' informed Dhani 'She's already with him now...as we speak!'


'Baisa... please come over to this window...' cued another maid, from the opposite end of the corridors 'I can see them conversing... in those meadows...'

In less than a moment, that announcement had generated a frenzied scuffle of skirts as the group of women rushed to the window that was to offer them the best view of the unravelling spectacle.

'Come here baisa... take your place here...' they said, reserving the best spot along the window frame for their mistress.


By the time Heera had made her way through the throng of ladies and taken her spot at the window, nearly half of the Parnagarh retinue had manifested in the corridors. Just as curious as they were nervous, everyone who'd assembled, wanted to catch a glimpse of the episode. And why wouldn't they? After all, it was not often that one of their own tended an apology to a vengeful Mughal trader, in public.


'There they are... at the meadows...'

'If you can't see it, we'll narrate it for you...'

'Can you see them, baisa?'

'Just about...' Heera admitted, straining to see the sights that'd raised such a ruckus 'But, why didn't she take someone else along with her?'

'I think... she wanted to prove that she was capable of doing this by herself!'

'And you let her go?' she asked, not too pleased by the developments

'Baisa... we had no idea where she was going... she marched out without telling us anything...'


'Lord' the heiress held her breath, hoping that nothing untoward should take place.

The rest of the maids however, were not so subtle about their apprehensions.

'I dread to think of Bindiya's fate!'

'Is he going to punish her?'

'I am sure he will... he's unforgiving!'


'Punish?' Heera frowned, reflecting upon their growing dislike for the businessman with an open mind. No doubt, she was innately concerned for young Bindiya and would do everything in her power to protect her from harm, if need arose. Yet, when she recollected her few interactions with the man, somehow she wasn't convinced that the merchant would punish a lone girl. That too, in public!


'Baisa, you didn't witness what occurred, a short while ago' another maid joined in, dropping her voice to a cautious whisper 'For some petty reason, the merchant grew enraged with a boy...now, this boy was about 15 or 16 and barely quarter his size... yet, the huge man picked him up by his collar and shook him so hard, the boy's spine was about to snap in two!'

Having listened to that dramatic narration calmly, she posed a level-headed question 'And what was the petty reason?'

'Baisa... the poor boy was careless and ended up hurting one of his horses... I think!'

'I see...'


'Ladies...' Dhani interrupted the commotion with the announcement that most were anticipating with angst 'Khan Sahib is saying something to Bindiya now...'

'And?'

Dhani paused for a short while, observing the proceedings closely 'He doesn't appear too pleased...'

'In fact, he looks irked!'

'Very irked!'

'Oh my...'

'Is she...'


'What's going on?' enquired Heera hastily, hoping the scenes weren't as bad as the women were making them out to be 'Please tell...'

'She...'

'Is she weeping?'

'Yes... she is! How sad...'

'Oh!' the heiress exhaled 'She mustn't have gone by herself... Gauri... come on... we must leave to...'


'I don't think there would be a need for that...' the chief-maid hastily attempted to compose her mistress' concerns 'Bindiya is making her way back... and the men are beginning to disperse too...'

'Already?'

'Yes...'

'Thank the Lord!' they heaved a sigh of relief, in unison


Following a prolonged lull of quiet murmurs, one maid decided to voice her views frankly 'He must have said something to humiliate her!'

'Yes...he must have!'

'Well, he IS a Mughal' a stifled retort arrived from one of the more daring ladies 'What else might one expect!'

That audacious remark managed to draw everyone's attention, and even earned her a disapproving stare from the heiress, but she knew she was only stating popular opinion




'Gauri... Dhani... Heera...'

The sad voice reverberating from the other end of the long corridors brought the chatter to a standstill. A thin veil of grimness shadowed their faces, as all eyes were fixated upon the archway through which she was supposed to enter

'Bindiya...' Heera dispelled the eerie spell as soon as the outline of the young lady became apparent 'Are you all right?'

From the numerous glances that suddenly hit her, it became obvious to Bindiya that she was the subject of their speculations all along. So, she decided to turn towards the one face that offered the most comfort of all 'Baisa...' walking up to the mistress, she stood beside her genteel profile 'My pride has been mortified!'

'What!'

'What did he do?' the women began crowding her

'Was it so bad?'

'Did he say something unimaginably horrid?'


'Ladies... please give her a moment!' Heera interceded with a kind gesture by dabbing the girl's tears for her. She did suspect that the meeting couldn't have been all that bad, seeing how the entire episode appeared to have ended quite swiftly. However, she decided to indulge the girl for a while in order to comfort her hurt ego 'What happened, Bindiya?'

Taking a short while to regain part of her composure, the maid began describing the events in her typically theatrical fashion 'I met the man... I... I... confessed that those remarks were made by me and not by our baisa ... and... and... I apologised profusely... but... but...'

'But...'

'He said that he already knew all that!'


'Already knew?' everyone became dumbstruck

'ALREADY KNEW?'

'How could he guess that it wasn't baisa making those remarks?'

'His words were...' Bindiya dabbed her face 'Anyone who's had half-a-conversation with our 'heiress' would know that she is incapable of being rude...' she grimaced, on recalling the painful encounter 'It seems, he'd already guessed that it had to be one of the unkind maids instead! Then... then... the rest of the men began sniggering too...'

'Oh my!' the maids exclaimed unanimously - alarmed, embarrassed and annoyed. While they were relieved that their mistress' name had been cleared, the remark was something they couldn't overlook 'One of the unkind maids instead?' How disgraceful! A punishment, they would have been prepared for. A mockery of their nature was something they couldn't come to terms with.

'The manner in which he dismissed that boy was frightening... the manner in which he dismissed me was humiliating...' she wiped the last tear off of her pretty cheeks 'I must confess, I do not think very highly of this strange man!' obviously, it didn't take long for nearly everyone present, to agree with her

'Me neither...'

'Me too...'

'No wonder he lives all alone...' a disgruntled maid added 'He's found no wife yet...'

'Obviously... who'd want to marry a man like him?'



'Actually, that's not entirely true!'


Everyone fell silent, gaping at each other dubiously, before turning to the one who'd baited their curiosity

'Dhani?'

'Well...' Dhani shrugged in defence, for having ruffled their illusions 'I spoke to the washerwoman who works at the haveli...' she explained, revealing how she'd come to know of a few things that no one else knew 'And she says that... several people have approached her master with marriage proposals... but, he's the one who has turned them down!'

'WHAT!' numerous audible gasps floated through


'Not only that... apparently, he doesn't visit women... doesn't touch alcohol... in fact, he doesn't even smoke the hukkah!'

'WHAT!' So far-fetched did those facts sound, that they refused to be convinced by any of it

'That is unbelievable!'

'That washerwoman must be lying, Dhani...'

'A powerful young merchant with no wife, no mistress and no weaknesses! Imagine that...' they dismissed the very notion.

'A handsome and powerful young merchant' Dhani added, unable to help her usual prankish self 'With no wife, no mistress and no weaknesses! What a pity!'

Not surprisingly, Dhani's antics managed to generate a few raised brows and chuckles - the bitterness and gloom from earlier steadily making way for something less melancholy.


Heera, on the other hand, continued to gaze outside the window, her expressions betraying nothing, while her thoughts were on a slightly different tangent.

Despite being familiar with their blatant fondness for gossip, the 'realist' in her was surprised by how their moods shifted so swiftly. Until a few moments ago, the maids hadn't been too pleased to learn that he had mocked them. Now that the women had found some fodder for their favourite pastime, they were doing just the same. Nevertheless, she'd wisely remained quiet all through. Neither did she want to sound preachy, nor did she participate in their daring speculations.

However; there WAS one fact she couldn't deny.

Unlike her normal etiquette, she was beginning to find herself paying quite some attention to their banters about this mysterious 'Khan Sahib' - more attention than she'd paid to any such frivolous banters before.


'By the way, Heera' rose Gauri's call from amidst the cacophony of chatter around them

'Yes Gauri...' she guessed from the tone that something was still nagging her companion

The chief maid took some time to weigh her words carefully 'I wonder what made him come to the conclusion that 'you' are our baisa... or that you're incapable of being rude!'

So effective was the query and the manner in which it'd been put forth, that it immediately killed all the remaining petty conversations within those walls.


Made instantly aware of the fact that she was the subject of everyone's close scrutiny, Heera peeped at the diamond ring on the finger that was delicately resting upon the window frame

'You know what...' she replied, cautious not to look Gauri in the eye, lest her little lie was caught 'I wonder how he came to that conclusion too!'

(Glossary of terms included in post below)

See you in a week's time...

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Teaser for Chapter 8

Suddenly, she heard the faint voices of a few men from the corridors beyond - voices that eventually emerged into clearer words and sentences

'How long, Azeez?' one of the men inquired

'Well... on THAT route... we usually cover the first 12 koss in roughly 2-and-half hours... and... the next two thirds of that... in another 2-and-half hours... I think...'

A brief lull followed.

After which, she heard the familiar baritone of his voice

'This place is about 42 koss away... so, shouldn't take us long to reach there...not more than...'

And then, silence prevailed.

Her eyes briefly glistened as she overheard the mathematical question that their discussions had given rise to. She stood quietly, waiting to hear what answer the businessman would come up with.

But she heard nothing.

Instead, what she saw was a silhouette darkening the patterns of the entranceway

With his hands behind his back, he stationed himself by the door, his stature completely overshadowing Bajrang who was not far from him.

'A little more than 10 hours... actually, 10 and half hours to be precise' she ultimately ended the dead-air, with the answer to their discussions

'What?' his eyes narrowed

'The time it would take you to travel 42 koss!'

'Oh yes...' he muttered, betraying no reaction to the fact that she must have figured out the answer, a split-moment before he had 'But, that's only if we take no breaks...'

'Of course!'

Chapter 8 below...


CHAPTER 8

Arena, at the capital...


'Just feel its weight' The proud prince picked one up from the many arrays of weapons displayed on a long table - a fresh cargo of weapons he'd imported from foreign lands 'I think our cavalry will love this...' he said, showing off its virgin blade 'What do you think?'

Visually inspecting the arsenal, his visitor ran an experienced hand over the lethal edges of a Tahar, a battle axe 'It is distinctive' the man pronounced, before turning around to observe the lively arena behind him.

One of the favourite hangouts for his recruits, the 'arena' was a massive training field, exclusively used by the military. An area filled with sweltering pits of sand, where soldiers could practise combat manoeuvres, by pitting their strengths against one another, while they got to test the latest weapons.

'Huzoor...' he finally pronounced his verdict, as he saw a group of men on horseback ably wielding the battle-axes in the arena 'They seem to be comfortable with the new weapons. It's good!'


A look of contentment diffused the prince's features on hearing the approval.

After all, this visitor was a man who knew more about weapons and warfare than all of his other generals put together. Serving on the battlefield until 2 years ago, this man's loyalty and expertise had been put to even better use ever since. He was now an appointed mentor, an 'Ustaad' - who recruited fresh trainees and coached them into becoming the fearsome warriors that the Shehzade's powerful army needed. A master of many arts and yet a man of few words, Ustaad reserved his compliments for the absolute best.

No doubt then that any advice from him was considered valuable - and praise from him good as gold.

'It's European steel, Ustaad!' reiterated the prince, replacing the Tahar back upon the stand 'Cost me a fortune... this is why we need our own iron ores... this is why I need places like Parnagarh! '


'And yet, I was removed from the 'Parnagarh' assignment!' a voice from behind rumbled with calm contempt 'Adab arz hai, Shehzaade...'


'Khalil!'

Shehzaade turned to face his unexpected caller with a wry frown 'You've been posted at Kabul... better be on your way there!'

The general cast a glimpse at the fresh stockpile of weapons on show, before slithering his hand around to slowly grab an axe from one of its holders 'A new Tahar? Impressive!' he admired its structure with methodical composure


Watching his actions with uncertainty, a group of soldiers protectively approached the group, standing between the Shehzaade and the general.

'Step aside' Khalil ordered them dryly

But, the soldiers didn't retreat. Though he was their superior and close to the prince, they were aware of the destructive volcanic temper that lay under that calm mountainous exterior. So, as a cautionary measure, they stayed rooted at their spot.


'Huzoor...' Khalil eventually addressed the prince 'Have I ever fallen short before?' clawing his nail around the sharpest point of the weapon, he shifted his stares to his Ustaad 'Have I ever failed an assignment before?' With no warning whatsoever, he whipped the axe around like a firebolt - till it stopped precariously close to the neck of one the guards, nearly nicking off the first layer of his victim's skin as he did so

'Can any of your other recruits wield a weapon like this, Ustaad Sahib?' he asked, deriving quiet pleasure from the sight of nervous sweat trickling down the guard whose neck he'd only just spared.

Still reeling from what they'd witnessed, the rest of the soldiers began bracing themselves for a violent fight, but the general issued them a disciplinary warning 'I am talking to my Sarkaar here... don't interrupt!'


'One answer for all your questions...' replied the Shehzaade, trying to restrain his rage as he did so 'Durga Sahiba...'

At the mention of the fateful name, Khalil retracted his axe slowly.

'None of your previous assignments shared the fate of Durga Sahiba...'

Khalil didn't reply.

'Sad waste of life...' the prince mused at the irony of the circumstances 'Actually, I would have liked to meet her... she's proved she really WAS everything that was said about her!'

The general glared on, still saying nothing.

'I admire you, Khalil... and you remain my most trusted general... but even the best soldiers suffer a bad day, and this seems to be yours... besides, it's better this way... stay away for a while... the Hindus will be out for your blood, very soon!'


'Huzoor! My sources got it wrong... I need more time, that's all!'

'Time?' Shehzaade snapped 'Time will not undo the damage this has done to my repute and to my plans...'

'She killed 5 of my men...' on the spur of a moment, Khalil sliced the axe again, splicing the air with its blade. It landed upon another guard's neck - and so neatly this time, that it'd managed to nick a minute cut on the man's skin, giving rise to exasperated gasps 'She challenged me... and my pride...'

'I don't care...' the prince retorted, displeased by the dangerous manner his general was using to show off both, his skill and his frustration 'When I'd said use any means to get me the Farmaan, I thought you were shrewd enough to NOT let things go this far... that too, with a Mansabdar's daughter! And to what means... she fooled you... despite everything you did to her, you ended up with a fake document, not the real Farmaan.'

Disappointing his master was a kind of setback Khalil was not used to. A kind of setback, he could not come to terms with. Things had gone overboard that night - and he was aware of that. But, he'd hoped that his master would turn a blind eye to the lapse. Especially, after everything he'd done for the Shehzaade - after the many wars he'd won for him and the many lauds he'd earned. Thus, this unanticipated decision was turning out to be a bigger blow, than his ego could deal with.

'One chance, Huzoor...' he gave it a last shot 'I shall find the Farmaan and gift you Parnagarh!'

He slowly withdrew the weapon from the guard's neck, much to everyone's relief. But before anyone knew what was happening, he'd whirled it in the other direction the very next instant, faster than a flash of lightning 'I'll sniff out the younger heiress... wherever she's hiding... and have that wretched lady delivered at your fee...'


Suddenly, it came to a halt - both, his claims, and the hair-raising speed at which his battle-axe was descending down to toy with his next scapegoat's neck.


As a frightful stillness pervaded, Khalil glared at the hand that'd challenged his speed and strength


'Salaam Ustaad Sahib...' he frowned at the man who'd taught him those very moves 'I sense greater hostility in your stance than before... I AM attacking like how you taught me to, am I not?' saying so, he used the force of his weight to gain footing over his mentor and the might of his fist to pry the handle out

But, the Ustaad's grip was no easy one to shake off - as the general already knew. Neither did his mentor lose footing, nor did the axe move 'I taught you well, Khalil... but, you've forgotten many lessons!' he cautioned 'Forgotten how to rein in your temper... forgotten when to let go...'

The general intensified his efforts, but, it didn't get him anywhere - the man on the other end was no less of an opponent. Their quivering fingers turned whiter from the stress of the tussle and their palms chaffed from the heat of the friction. But the axe stayed stubbornly midpoint

The general managed to maintain his typically tranquil exterior, but the veins in his eyes were turning red 'I now realise, Ustaad Sahib...' he whispered through his grating teeth 'that you are the one who put Huzoor up to this...'

Ustaad disarmed his aggressor's threats with an unperturbed stare 'I cannot admire a man who lacks self-control...'


'That's enough, Khalil...' Shehzaade shouted aloud, growing tired of the increasing friction within his group 'The task of locating Harka Sahiba and finding the Farmaan... will now be delegated to someone else...' he showed him the exit emphatically 'You leave for Kabul now... and THAT'S AN ORDER!'

It took a great amount of will, but the general curbed his manic urges to gain control of the axe and slowly loosened his clutches around its handle. He had to, since a direct order had come from the Shehzade. Of course, it hurt his pride immensely to do so. Backing out and bowing down, was not how he'd got to be the right-hand man to the Mughal prince. But in this instance, his master's saying had rung true 'Even the best soldiers suffer a bad day...' - and this was his.

Nevertheless, the vindictive general was going to ensure this 'bad day' didn't last long. After all, Khalil was not one to take failure lying down. Which meant, he wouldn't leave any task unfinished - be it a small fight or something bigger like 'Parnagarh' and its heiress 'Harka Sahiba'.

He would restore his pride and reclaim his position - by hook or crook. And while doing so, avenge this setback by crushing everyone who'd brought this soldier his 'bad day'.



Aidabad...

Seated upon a low step-stool with her legs gracefully crossed at their ankles, the heiress sprinkled the droplets across all potted herbs nestled within that large box. Once she set the brass pitcher down, her fingers ran over the wet leaves.

Five days had passed since they'd arrived at Aidabad - a halt longer than Heera had expected it to be. No wonder then that despite the tender care being nurtured upon them, some of those precious leaves were beginning to wilt. Precious leaves that she was currently using to treat Mohan and Daya.

If their sensitive roots weren't replanted in deeper soil soon, they would perish - something she could not afford to let happen at this point.

'But...' she mulled 'for planting them in the haveli's gardens, I would need permission... and...'


'Baisa...'

She turned around to find them standing behind her - the maids who'd finally brought her what she'd asked for. Taking in a deep breath, Heera put everything aside for the time being and shifted her attention to the enormous responsibility that now lay ahead.

'Thank you... please open it for me...'

Two ladies took four strides back, unfurled the large sheet and held it up by its corners 'How about this spot, baisa?' they asked, just to be sure 'Is it entirely visible from here?'

'That should be fine...' she nodded, closely examining the large picture in it - the detailed painting of a map.


Over the past two days, her mind had developed plans, hatched plots and considered all different possibilities for the future of Parnagarh.

However, it was when the time to act came that the momentous nature of her mission struck her. It was when she actually saw the map of the entire Mughal Empire dangling in front of her eyes that she truly realised what an ambitious step she was taking. A dangerous step from which, there was no going back - and possibly a step that no other orphaned 16 year old would've ever taken.

Strike when the iron is hot

Recalling the one motto that was going to keep her going, Heera carefully noted the various regions, East, West, North and South of Parnagarh, where news of the tragedy would have spread by now. Where people would have just learnt of what horrible fate befell Durga Bai. Currently, emotions would be running high-and-raw in those regions. And it was these 'high and raw' emotions that was going to help achieve her goals.

Her hands gradually turned cold and her beats began racing in a nervous flutter as she went over her scheme once again - mainly to be sure, but also to give her fighting spirit some encouragement 'I'll get in touch with every province, big or small... every influential person, prince or noble... anyone and everyone who has been affected by that monster Khalil, and his army of murderers...' her senses numbed into a stupor as the horrors of that brute raided her psyche. As always, even the briefest reminder of his deeds, left her feeling tainted 'I'll write to them... appeal to these people's sentiments... move them to tearful distress... make them feel such pangs of sympathy that they would HAVE to support me in court... I have no money or army... so I'll use the only armour I can lay my hands on -'people's support' she pledged, her quivering fingers unwittingly snapping out a dead leaf from her herbs as she did so 'Jiji, your Harka Bai will use the voice and influence of the powerful society, to get you justice... to make sure Khalil gets his due... and to ensure Parnagarh is spared!'

Once reality had finished sinking in, Heera wiped her soft tears away. She'd already succumbed to a bout of grief earlier, during the 10th day rituals - a ceremony that marked the official end of mourning. She didn't want to crumble down once more now - it was not the place or time for it.

So, she steeled her mind and set out to accomplish her life's work.

'Are the scrolls and ink ready?'

'Yes baisa...'

'Please sit down...' she instructed two maids who were waiting at the far end 'and write what I dictate...'



Few hours later...

'You listed, Rana of Karnamer?'

'Yes baisa...' the maid replied

'Mansabdar of Sarpur?'

'Yes...'

And with those two names, they came to the end of their first list - 19 in all. Having sifted through various districts and provinces across the map, she had ended up with 19 prominent families from whom she could hope to garner some help for her cause. There would be others, but she needed more hours for that.

For today though, this was it. The gentle caress of the sunset's orange rays upon the lines of the map was a reminder that evening had set in - a good while since they'd begun. And the soft scuffing of her maids' feet had already drawn her attention to how exhausted they were.

'Thank you ladies... you have been very helpful...' bringing the pursuit to an end for the time being, the heiress addressed her ladies, who appeared grateful for the break 'Please put it all away safely... and then go rest...'

'Yes baisa...'



Sometime later, when she was about to make her way out to the dining area, she could hear the hurried footfall of two guards approaching the doorway

'Harka baisa...'

'Yes Gokul? Bajrang?'


'We have come to update you with some news...'

'Actually three updates...' they revealed, after offering her a salute

'Three?' she enquired. From their rushed salutes, she'd recognised that they must have something significant to convey - but three updates? 'Go on...'

'The scrolls intended for Maharaj Chitranjan and for Kunwarsa Mahendar have left Aidabad...'

'Thank you...' a look of reassurance settled upon her features 'Soon kakasa shall know where we are... and why we've been held up here... possibly even send some help our way...'


'Baisa... Khan Sahib and his men have finally returned from the auction fair.'

'Oh!' she paused. And when she realised, she'd paused for a moment longer than she should have, Heera respired in relief 'A favourable news indeed... have you conveyed my request? About using the haveli's gardens?'

'W... we... tried telling him... h... he asked us some questions...' Gokul's firm stares were slowly hazed by a film of uncertainty 'We didn't know what answers to give...'

'B... baisa... I... I think it would be better if you met him personally... and explained it yourself...' Bajrang recommended


Caught slightly off-guard by that recommendation, her brows furrowed quizzically 'Meet him? This evening?'

'Yes baisa... they're going to dine now... so, he suggested that if it was urgent, you could take a seat at the reception... and he'd join you shortly...'

An instant later, she consented with a nod in case the busy merchant became unavailable again 'All right...'

Immediately taking the cue, the guards moved to the side, ready to escort their heiress to the main haveli, while her maid-in-waiting helped straighten out her attire.

'Let's leave then...' drawing her veil low, she gave the orders thereafter. By appearance, she was all set to meet him, but somehow her mind was still getting ready for what was to come - still preparing itself for this unexpected encounter with the much talked-about 'Sahib'.


'By the way' she quickly remembered 'What was the third update?'

'Oh yes...' mentally chiding himself for the negligence, Gokul then dropped his volume to a discreet murmur 'I am not sure what to make of this... but, one of our guards just spotted someone... behind the marketplace...'

'Who was it?'

'One of Khan sahib's men...'

'And...'

'And that man was secretly meeting up with someone else... another Mughal... possibly handing him some money...'

'Oh! I see...' her perceptive mind debated if there was cause for panic 'Was there anything suspicious about this stranger he was talking to? Are you certain it wasn't a harmless meeting?'

'What if he was selling us out, baisa?'

'What if he was betraying our whereabouts to a Mughal soldier?'

Still not sure what to make of the cynical deductions, she decided to take the cautious route. In her position, one could never be too careful 'Fine...' the Lady exhaled deeply 'Does the guard know the direction in which this man left?'

'Yes he does...'

'Have him tracked if you can, Gokul... and then let me know what you find... keep a safe distance, though!'

'Yes baisa...'




The main haveli...

'At the end, the chamber to the right ...' Bajrang guided her along 'That's the one, baisa...'

'Thank you' Heera muttered.

As they passed through the long stretches of corridors, her curiosity continued to be piqued by the new sensation that every footstep of hers experienced. Used to evenly hard expanses of marble and stone flooring that Marwari houses commonly had, walking atop a soft Persian rug was a new phenomenon indeed.

Having said that though, beyond the Persian rug, the hallway possessed nothing to show it was lived in or loved. And the rest of the mansion was no different either. Lighting was kept to a minimum, the walls exhibited no paintings worth a second view and the simple pieces of furniture showed no sense of sophistication. Unusual for a dwelling so large owned by a businessman so successful - but not so odd when considering this was a house with no woman in it.

No wonder then that he was the source of such gossip amongst her ladies - a mysterious businessman, disinterested in the kind of life every other man his age and position strived for. What could it be that made this 'stranger' such a paradox? 'A life-changing incident, maybe?' she surmised somewhere along the way.

A few moments on and Heera heard sounds of muffled conversations alternating with the clinks of metalware

'The dining'


Subsequently, they passed by a lattice wall that secluded the dinner hall from the corridors.

As the mellow golden light poured out through the latticework and bounced off her blue silk, she drifted past without sneaking a peek inside the chamber. She couldn't have seen much if she peeked in anyway, and her manners didn't permit her to do so either.

That however did not mean that she wasn't intrigued to know the scenes inside - an intrigue driven by both, cultural and personal reasons.


'Baisa...' Bajrang whispered 'I saw something in the dining chamber...'

She signalled 'Yes?'

'Earlier, Chacha Sahib had mentioned that he wanted to sample our food... so, kakasa sent some over...' the guard huffed quietly 'I noticed all of them relishing it now... but Khan Sahib has touched none of it... his plate has nothing but that dry dish prepared by Chacha Sahib!'

'Oh!' she frowned, not knowing what to make of the information she'd just heard - especially since Chacha Sahib was not the choicest of chefs. Either the merchant hated Marwari food or he was so indebted to his Chacha that he refused to touch dishes made by anyone else - even those prepared by a renowned Marwari Maharaj.

Regardless; she decided not to pay much heed and continued her trek to the study, unfazed. His personal preferences were not something she was meant to pry into, she told herself.




The reception room...

While Bajrang waited at the entrance, Heera took her first steps into the reception room - her first steps into a new world that seemed to unleash more of a 6 year old's guarded curiosity within. As her eyes grew accustomed to the large yet poorly-lit surroundings, she decided to stroll around the room, hoping to get a better view of its unexplored interiors - after all, she was by herself with nothing else to do.

A short spell thus, and it became obvious that the reception chamber doubled up as a business office or possibly, a study.

'A study?' she wondered if she must call the room that - because her own study back at Parnagarh, was a reader's paradise. A bright and sunny chamber that was a homage to books - books that had been resourced by the Mansabdar from various places over the years. Works on religion and poetry. Texts about soil and plants. Scrolls explaining medicine and science. Literary works in Urdu, Sanskrit, Marwari and Persian. Paintings depicting various cultures, and the list went on.

This room appeared less like a study - and more like a mishmash of three chambers in one 'Interesting'


Suddenly, she heard the faint voices of a few men from the corridors - voices that eventually emerged into clearer words of a boisterous discussion.

'How long, Azeez?' one of the men inquired

'Well... on THAT route... we usually cover the first 12 koss in roughly 2-and-half hours... and... the next two thirds of that... in another 2-and-half hours... I think...'

A brief lull followed.

After which, she heard the familiar baritone of his voice

'This place is about 42 koss away... so, shouldn't take us long to reach there...not more than...'

And then, silence prevailed.


Her eyes briefly glistened as she overheard the mathematical question that their conversation had given rise to. She stood quietly, waiting to hear what answer the businessman would come up with.

But she heard nothing.

Instead, what she saw was a silhouette darkening the patterns of the entranceway


With his hands behind his back, he stationed himself by the door, his stature completely overshadowing Bajrang who was not far from him.

But the silence that succeeded didn't disappear till Heera spoke up 'A little more than 10 hours... actually, 10 and half hours to be precise' she gave him the answer to their problem

'What?' his eyes narrowed

'The time it would take you to travel 42 koss!'

'Oh yes...' he muttered, betraying no reaction to the fact that she must have figured out the answer, a split-moment before he had 'But, that's only if we take no breaks...'

'Of course!'



Thereon, Akbar cast a steady glimpse to his side 'Khuda Hafiz'

'Khuda Hafiz...' his four companions wished him in return, before making their retreat from the place.

Once Bajrang followed suit and shifted to the corridors outside, she watched as Akbar stepped into the large chamber - for an encounter that somehow didn't feel like it was only their 'second' one.


'Khan Sahib...' she wished him for the first time by the name that was actually his. Because, during the strange circumstances that they'd come face-to-face before - all he was to her, was a familiar voice and a gruff stranger who'd pulled her out of a canal.

Five days on, he was the owner of the place she was staying at - and a man she had some business with.

'Sahiba...' he wished her back, and for the first time by the title that was actually hers. On the last occasion that they'd crossed paths, she was a vulnerable lady in the guise of a maid who couldn't swim to save her life. Right now, she stood in front of him as a dignified aristocrat, as the self-assured leader of her clan. And the stunning transformation from the garb of a dull cotton attire into an apparel of shimmering blue silk with such flattering ornaments, only enhanced her already-rich elegance as one would imagine.


'Languages... medicine... and numbers too?' he frowned, a hint of sarcasm prevalent in his pitch 'That's quite a few areas you're skilled at...'

'Skilled?' she acknowledged his sarcasm with similar doses of scepticism 'But, you're not far behind yourself, Khan Sahib...' her gazes trailed around her own crossed palms 'That was quite some display that night, at the canal... I must say, I haven't seen anyone else possess such good aim!' She waited, eager to hear what he had to say to justify himself


'Was that a compliment? Or another one of your underhanded investigations... like the one you've just sent your guard on, Sahiba?'


Taken aback, she glimpsed up. In spite of her limited vision and even through the blue of her veil, the ire flashing in those deep eyes were unmissable. But, how did the merchant come to know that she'd had him followed? Drawing in a sharp sigh, an embarrassed Heera decided to come out with the truth straightaway, since there was no escape from this one 'Yes I did... but, how did you find out?'

As though his attitude weren't intimidating enough already, his physique seemed to widen as he folded his arms in disdain 'I am a businessman in a competitive world... my travels take me through dangerous routes... my success has made me many enemies...' his words came to a temporary halt 'If I have to stay alive and afloat, I must know how to defend myself... and be aware of who's tracking my men! As for the man at the marketplace today... you'll soon find out that the man WAS obeying my orders...' he shrugged a shoulder nonchalantly 'I'd sent some money over... for the sake of 2 children...' for a moment, the steeliness in his manner marginally dropped 'Their parents were found guilty of burglary few years ago... ever since, the town has abandoned the children too... so, I help them out whenever I'm here, because I think it's wrong to punish a child for a parent's fault! But, why did YOU have me investigated?' he asked, the steeliness that'd diminished steadily returning back

Heera had to admit - she was quite impressed by what she'd heard. Now, the sceptic in her might have doubted the authenticity of that story. But there was something 'different' in his tone when he'd spoken about the children that she couldn't overlook. A certain tinge of sincerity that suggested he was telling the truth. A sincerity that implied that underneath the toughened armour which Akbar Mahmoud Khan always donned, lay a soft-spot, after all.

So, on that note, she decided to set a few matters straight 'I apologise for having offended your sentiments... but I had to be vigilant...' not surprisingly, it took a good amount of will and a deep breath to maintain her composure, before she could continue with the next sentence 'There have been threats to my life... in fact, m... my sister's life was brutally taken away... barely 10 days back...' at that point, she abruptly concluded her explanation - not wanting to reveal any further.

'Yes...' his voice dipped, as a sign of courtesy, and empathy 'Chacha jaan mentioned about your sister... I am sorry to hear that...'

A solemn beat passed, before he moved on to the next question 'By the way, what did you want to meet me for?'

Finding the shift of topic a welcome change, she replied 'Khan Sahib... I needed your permission... but, before that, I must thank you...'

'Thank me?' he took a few calculated strides towards a side table 'For?'

'For helping me out that night... and saving my life.'

'I had to fix the bridge... and you were in the way... that's all...' Akbar had scoffed in response, like she was a mere inconvenience to him then


'Oh...' she frowned, pinched by his remark. Just when she thought she'd seen a glimpse of the man's kindness, his blunt self had re-emerged. However, no point brooding over it. The businessman was, what he was 'brazen' - and he made no bones about it.

So, she decided to preserve her own sense of pride by forgoing the niceties, and progressed with matters that had brought her here 'Anyway, I came by because I wanted your permission... I'd need to use a patch of your garden... to plant a few herbs of mine... before they die out.'

'Of my garden?'

'And if you let me know where I can plant them... I'll bear in mind to stick to the boundaries...' a formal pause followed 'So, I don't inconvenience you, by coming in your way!' she ended her request calmly, with not a trace of annoyance in her voice - making it difficult for anyone to figure out if there was a 'wry remark' hidden in that request at all.

However, he knew what she was doing.

The heiress had returned his 'You were in the way' comment with a subtle retort - but in a manner very few could have done so. Her approach was civil enough so the reply wouldn't be counted an insult, and yet her words were clear enough to remind him that she was capable of being blunt too.

Raising a brow, Akbar sternly looked up to dart her a glance, before turning aside. As a man who'd never let his grit be swayed by beauty or charms - as a man who didn't want to be fascinated by her finesse, this was a juncture where he found himself failing in front of Harka Bai's perfection. Yet again!

(Glossary of terms included in post below)

See you in a week's time...
Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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GLOSSARY OF TERMS

Takht-e-Sulaiman - Solomon's seat i.e. Emperor's throne (Urdu/Persian)
Shehzade - prince (Urdu/Persian)
Shehenshah - Emperor (Urdu/Persian)
Wazir-us-Sultanat - Chief minister (Urdu/Persian)
Farmaan - official decree/document (Urdu/Persian)
Maharaj/Maharani - King/Queen
Maharaj - Chef/Cook
Kunwar - Prince (Generally used in Rajputana)
Baisa - Lady/Miss/Mrs/Madam (Marwari)
Banna - Mr/Sir (Marwari)
Sahib - Mr/Master/Sir (Urdu)
Sahiba - Ms/Mrs/Lady (Urdu)
Dams - copper coins
Vaid - Doctor/Healer
Ustad - Teacher
Caravansarai - Caravan site
Kotwal - Town chief
Kos - old measurement system of distances, used in India

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I didn't want to over-explain in the chapter... kept the connection mystical... but I wasn't sure if the message was conveyed... so, I'm posting here.. what I replied elsewhere... 😳

Mystery behind the 4 dams

Why Akbar knew Harka was the Sahiba

It was obvious from the very first sighting that Bindiya couldn't be the Sahiba... he observed her less-literate dialect and gruff manners.. vs the polished urdu and genteel manners of the other lady, who smoothed-over the entire situation. And as a well-travelled man, he must know of this practice of interchanging-identities while travelling! Plus, the way she smooth-talked the situation would ring bells.. because he must have instantly related it to what his guy must have said about the kind 'Sahiba' from the auction fair!

Then, he saw her at the canal, he was sure... she looked too 'ethereal' to be anything but the leader of that group... plus, her wit.. her grace... how she handled a situation she wasn't at an advantage of etc etc

The reason behind his ironical tone

The irony in his statement was a bit of a triple meaning -
The lady who called herself a Sahiba was acting like anything but a Sahiba
He is also mocking their group for thinking they could outwit 'HIM' with this sort of charade (yes, that's his ego talking)
Plus, the irony was a hidden message.. a puzzle to the 'real' sahiba.. because if they relayed the news to her... somewhere, he had an inkling of how smart she was... and knew she'd get the gist even if no one else got it!

How did she know he knew...

Because she knows one thing for sure - he wanted to give the coins back to its rightful owner (no other explanation for purse)...

And he knows the voice of the rightful owner... just like she recognised him at canal, he must have recognised her voice at the canal, and realised she is the one who gave him the coins..

If that is so, he must know Bindiya who is standing in that reception room is NOT that sahiba.. so if he STILL said 'Must belong to their SAHIBA...' its obvious what he's hinting at! 😉

Of course, he could have just been straightforward and handed it over to her through her guards... but then, that wouldn't be fun, would it? He would have to swallow his ego to do that.. and, while he has nothing against Harka, he is miffed by their group's attitude!

If the entire gist got lost and Harka didn't get the coins back as he intended it to be, it would just show him she is not as witty as he assumed she was... and anyway, he didn't care much either way... he did what he had to do, in his way!

Why he returned the coins at all...

I know we would like to wishfully think that he returned the 4 dams after the effect of the 'hazel eyes'

But I think it's something else... I think it's his nature... just like he would take what was his, he would not touch what wasn't his!

And he is not convinced their young 'Sahiba' is the person who should be 'paying' for him being short-changed at the auction or for the fact that he was called names... he must have guessed that after his two semi-interactions with her...

So he returned the coins back to its rightful owner!

He took an effort to return coins because that concerned him... and as to why he wasn't interested in listening to stories, hearing her out or any of the other stuff... because all that doesn't concern him... at least, not as of now...

Let's put it all of this as a silent uncanny connection between two very sharp-witted individuals embroiled in a mind game - (without even having a proper meeting/intro)!

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@ Allfim

I keep tried to remember Paridhi in such clothes. 😊 You made yourself ?! Stunningly picture!

Yes Zhanna.. I made the edit myself 😳

I think, Akbar and Heera not only two destitute souls, but also two unique personality.

I LOVE YOU FOR THIS LINE... Akbar and Heera are not only two destitute souls... but two unique personalities...

I think, that a stranger for Heeira not only a mystery, he already (let until she doesn't understand it) she likes (not love yet), interesting him. But her mind and unique quality! She not simply behave like an adult, but and as a visionary ruler. Safety and responsibility for his men for her in the first place!

You are right!... so very well put... I take my hat off to you... 👏

I have a lot of assumptions why Akbar kept to himself and who he is by birth. But I do not want to write anything about it. Nothing better than surprises.

Oh no... I would have loved to hear them😲

I, too, all the time trying to imagine the color of the eyes of Heera. By the way, Paridha stunningly beautiful radiant, starlight eyes! Not quite what I wanted, but I found a topaz.

A stone in the ring is more like a rauchtopaz (or bad lighting). Topaz and rauhtopaz are different minerals


In Judaism, it was believed that topaz is one of the 12 sacred stones, topaz also worshiped in ancient Egypt and India.

You accentuate my updates with such beautiful facts and figures Zhanna,... be it paintings or theories or research... I look forward to your reviews after every update now... what my favourite professor is going to come up with 🤗

P. S. I at day started doing my translation about of color eyes, and here, it turns out, such a discussion! 😆

A beautiful discussion 👏

A little information.

"... Magnifying glass became an object of scientific consideration already in the early Middle Ages. The first increasing device used about 2,000 years ago. In ancient Greek and Roman documents describes how to increase the items you can use water-filled round glass jar.

Completely made of glass lenses appeared much later and were probably first used in the XI century the monks worked on the manuscripts.

At the end of the XIII century magnifying glasses with small increase were already used in glasses for farsightedness correction. But concave lens fabrication technique for the correction of myopia was invented only in the beginning of the XV century ... "

Yes... thanks for highlighting it here... spectacles became more prevalent in the 1800s.. till then it was magnifying lenses and crystals...

😊 Love you dear
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@ Divi

I was waiting to write the take for this chapter since I have read it ... but wanted to wait to wrap some office work hanging over my shoulders so I could do justice to your intriguing chapter. So, sorry for the delay.
Not at all.. this time, I seemed to have delayed replying to everyone more than usual too.. 😆

The chapter is like the picture that precedes ... things seem to clear up, just as clear as Heera's hazel eyes ... yet mystery shrouds the answers to emerging new questions like the veil that covers the rest of her face.
Yes.. Bhavu said the same thing.. one thing seems to clear up.. only to unravel more mazes... but, this maze-in-maze wouldn't go for too long.. IYKWIM 😉

The theme of my take is connections with open questions. Connections, I feel, not only reflect the the dots of the story that are beginning to connect but also the way in which you have written the chapter.
'connections'😉

1. We start with the Kunwarsaa , Mahendar, shaken with grief by the brutal fate of his fiance. The grief soon transforms into an anger and revenge that engulfs him ... he is ready to take on the Shehzaade, Khalil, and this new entry Ustaad. As he assures the people he will protect them, he is reminded towards his duty towards their Choti Bhaisaa and sets out to fulfill his promise to Durga to take care of her sister.

And how beautifully that connects to later in the chapter, when as Harka emerges from her sadness, she remembers her duty to send her condolences to her jijasa.
So nice... you picked up on something that I actually didn't intend/plan that way... but came out naturally...

The connection of duty and protection remains between Kunwarsaa and Harka even when only the spirit of Durga remains to bring them together/

What is the destiny of this connection? Now, that remains an open question.
Hmmm 🤔

2. As Harka was getting acclimated to her new circumstances, she looks to connect the dots of her surroundings and the stranger, Akbar, who is becoming more familiar by the day.
A stranger who is no longer a stranger, is he?😛

She used her own observation powers (albiet through Bindiya's eyes) to observe the age of the shed and whether he was an established merchant ... that dot connected , it did make sense he was a famous merchant. But, she wanted to know more about the man who saved her and sent Bajrang to be her eyes and ears and investigate. Akbar's fame and reputation was confirmed. Yet, an unexpected connection emerges ... to the royal family who are frequent patrons of his horses.

Yet while he is connected with the royals, why is he living so far off? If he is so famous, why does he travel without guards? If he is just a merchant, how are his hands so adept with blades?

Hence, there remains many an open question.

I loved reading Heera's musings through your eyes, Divi.. 😳

3. And the mystery continues even as another connection is made. We were apalled by the opportunistic nature of the stranger who charged 4 dams for water for sick, thirsty travelers and that incident continued to irk even after he saved Harka's life. But even that dichotomy was cleared and another connection made as the purse that Akbar had "found" was a way for him to return the 4 dams back to the "Sahiba."

Yet, who was the real Akbar , remained the open question.

How sweetly have you worded the underlined...🤗

4. And the ring of questions continue to entangle Harka, as she is drawn to the diamond ring on her finger. A symbol of her Durga and her jiji's vibrance, this ring was now her new confidante. She had asked her jiji to help her out of sorrow and what a distracting puzzle she had sent her.

As why had Akbar returned the coins, tormented the open question.

5. And as Harka spoke to her diamond ring, it connected with another ring that had captured the attention of another pair of eyes not far away- the hazel ring that Akbar spotted as he retired to sleep. The hazel ring that conjured images of a pair of hazel eyes that had many stories to tell. And little did he know the connection, that at this very moment, these hazel eyes were filled with a puzzled "look" about him.

Here's a virtual hug and kiss for this line! 🤗

Yet, what were his own stories that he was too weary to lose sleep over the Sahiba's stories, that was the open question

And, how would the rings of destiny bring together Harka and Akbar, now that is the ultimate open question that only you, writer-e-khaas know the answer to.

Thanks for this reviewer-e-khaas... you make it all so worth it!🤗

Thanks again for an engrossing chapter writer-e-khaas, you sure keep me on my toes to pay attention to the amazing detailing
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KALGI'S MUSINGS


Having removed his rings and neatly arranged them upon the dresser, one after another, his tough gazes were drawn towards a particular one. An oval-shaped ring set with a topaz that was fortunate to possess a rare yet vibrant shade of light brown. Akbar Khan instantly knew what it reminded him of.

Picking the ring up, he felt compelled to do something else - he held its stone in front of the soft light of a night lamp. The earthy glow that shone through made it appear more ethereal than any other gemstone he had seen. Of course, emeralds and sapphires were costlier, but they were also flamboyant and common - two traits he didn't care for.


Thanks darling

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@ Bhavu


Interesting update... Slowly u unfolding one by one mysteries...and forming new puzzles.

Yes just as one puzzle seems to get solved... another arises... 😆

After Durga died I was thinking about Mahendra... but then we all got busy in our stranger. The poor man is so devastated even though he lost his life... his love... mourning for her love still he didn't forget his duty... the way he declared to take care of the village and protect Heera that shows his true royal persona and best part his anger towards Khalil...I loved it how you have portrait... his loyalty, love... pain... and anger altogether. Seems like he going to help Heera in attaining her mission of REVENGE.

Thanks so much Bhavu😳

Pulav the way everyone reacted was kind of funny... Most of them doubted at first the rice poisonous... ISeems like no one trust this stranger... I don't blame them...First, he charged for water and now offering food kind of odd. Slightly raw rice and extra spices... Biryani... (I hate Biryani too)

Actually, left to stranger he wouldn't have offered them the Biryani or anything... it was chacha jaan who was so excited to have people stay offer that he went out of the way to offer them something... I think it was the fact that they know their baisa's life is in danger... and that they are staying at an unknown place that they grew suspicious... not only because it was the stranger's house..😊

My fav part of this chapter the way returned the coin...not to Bindiya but to Heera...to the Sahiba... Both of them are too sharp and intelligent and enough to recognize each other so well.

Yes they are... 😳

Heera's grieving ...and talking to Durga was so heart wrenching...

at first, it was the unexpected connection with the horses... second, it was a voice that intrigued me... strange events happened... (Destiny)

So well said, Bhavu!👏

Finally, this was first chapter I felt Heera was in action... Slowly she is coming out of cocoon and grief. Writing a letter to Mahendra and inquired about Akbar... Throughout the chapter, I felt Heera is getting ready.

there's one more...' she wiped the mistiness in her eyes, as she tried to concentrate 'Why would a man who trades with the royal family... and one who regularly journeys up north, live so far away from the capital?'

Yes.. after all, it's only been a week since the tragedy and she is already having to take care of so many things...

Enjoying each and every chapter and waiting for more mystery to reveal...

I think you'll enjoy it even more as the story unfolds Bhavu ... love you so so so much 🤗

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@ Akdhian

I've read it again and here are my comments:

Lashy di,fabulous chapter it is👏

Thank you darling 🤗

Poor Ratan Kaka😆,I can imagine his plight of being sandwiched between his people like Bajarang & Bindiya and the impassive stranger who seemed to be only source of help.

>>> 🤣 yes

Stranger sahib shocked me with his 4 dams' demand for water.Was wondering how can our HERO behave like this,for which,now I know the answer😳

Actually stranger hero hua tho kyaa hua... right now, he has a mean streak about him 😆

Bindiya..Bindiya..she is really one impatient girl😆

Yes she is... and also the catalyst for many things in this story 😆

'I hope you realise that even Amrit would have cost us less, Sahib!' the heiress stated, using sarcasm to express her disapproval.

'Of course, it would Sahiba! Because water is more precious than nectar...'

I loved her wit and his retort too😃

>>> 😉

Our Heera and stranger,both are quite wise and quick-witted😉.Love them and you,their creator❤️

Awww gosh ☺️

Heera,the healer is admirable and I love the way you show mutual concern and respect,Heera and her people have for each other.Like,how she tends them with utmost care as well as empathy and their refusal to accept water meant for Baisa,even in such a deteriorating condition. I don't feel it's just a sense of responsibility,its more than that.

Thanks so much dear 🤗

' watching how the maid lifted the delicate ends of her skirt and began making her cautious way around the trunks and chests, Heera promptly added 'And please make haste... don't bother about the embroideries of my attire...'

How can you think of such little details!These things make the narration natural and beautiful.⭐️

>>> ☺️

And the fact that the gallant young lady would not complain about any of it, was what stung him most.

So true.I can understand Ratan Kaka's feeling

>>>

You made me fall in love with not only leads but also the supporting characters❤️

Liked Gauri and Bajrang too.Though both had different opinions on leaving their Baisa alone,concern for Heera is common👍🏼

So well explained, Bindu! 👏

What to say about the next part?Heera's emotional turmoil really moved me😭.It's difficult for me to pick up few lines as every line of her's had a great impact.You are an amazing writer,di👏👏

From her drowning into the water to the end of this chapter was gripping.Though it is expected that the stranger would come to her rescue,his indifferent attitude was definitely unexpected😲

As I said before... his heart is good... but, he is not a charming gentleman... never will be... he is a gruff loner... a recluse... a 17th c survivor ... doesn't believe in humanity... a man whose personality has been shaped his experiences in life... it is up to Heera to... 😉 restore that faith in him!

Under the faint rays of the moonlight and behind the gleam of water droplets, there could be no other face that looked more refined. Set against skin that was fairer than fair, the bronzed locks that fell above his shoulders put even the richest shades of brown to shame. With features so sharp and eyes so piercing, she doubted if the man belonged to this country at all. Yes, he was a Mughal, but a Mughal from another land. Her mind went back to the various paintings and books on culture that she owned - trying to find a match 'Not a Mongol. Or a Turk...' she supposed 'Persia? Yes that's it...he's Persian!'

Wow!I'm speechlessWhat a description👏

Thanks ☺️

'Are you blind, or are you plain bizarre?'

He'd finally questioned, dispelling the oddest spell of silence he knew. It was a question he was meant to ask a few moments ago, but for some strange reason 'Hazel' were the first words that came to his mind. Hazel - the colour of her eyes. Blacks, he'd seen. Blues and greens he'd seen. Even browns he'd seen. But such an exquisite tint of hazel, he had not.

Again

Again ☺️

Did he actually suspect her to be the kind of lady, who went around groping strangers for no apparent reason otherwise?

Ha..ha..I thought the same while reading for the first time,what does he think of Heera?😆

In chapter 5, you realise why he was behaving that way 😆

Phew..I edited it many times and hope it makes some sense😆

Sense? this is exemplary... thanks so much for being here, Bindu.. you are like the beautiful rays of sunshine hanging around here..

Finally,a big hug🤗 and 👏👏 to you for this chapter.Comments on next two chapters,later😳

🤗

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