NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 4 CHAPTERS 7 & 8 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Congrats for new thread lashy 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: lashy

Now that I've finished with 6 (well, nearly 7 chapters) I would

this sunday we get update😊
like the readers' suggestions on one thing - 😊
1) Update every week - is it too much to catch up? Or do you prefer it that way?


2) Anything else to make it an easier/more accessible read

no

Thank you all for being here... and for your support... it means a lot...
🤗


Congrats for new thread.😛
Edited by melovesja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

@ melovesja

Beautiful picture lashy not only your word but pic also speak.😛 As her hazal speak to him.

That is so sweet...Paridhi's eyes and expressions in that picture suited the scene... can see the pain.. and the genteel nature there... yet she seems cunning enough to be able to outwit anyone in a mind game!

Agree😊

Write up of his visit to her room, Kuwarsa's pain and his condition at lost of his love was heart wrenching.😭 Like his dutiful loyal who bring him back to reality and remind him for his duty. Each time you exactly show relation between leader and loyal in that era. He work under sultnat but didn't lost his pride as rana . his is adamant to punish that barbarian who do this heinous crime and fulfill his promise to take care of harka and praja. To gave back her right. He very well knows about prince power and strength of well train people who do crime. Rana is on the way to get back his glory.👏

You have described this so well, Mitu 😳

☺️

You find a way to gave some light moments between their pain .pillaf kand was hilarious. 😆

It's not the end of Chacha jaan's cooking escapades though 🤣

😆

I like rattan kaka who was always on guard to face upcoming things.

He is like a father to her... and everyone else!

Morning rays bring those memory and pain back to her but after the incidents of previous day . she try to get back to herself and dutiful ,sharp heiress. She remember her father as she have that glasses which were her great support. Her past memory was so touchy.

Yes dear..

She keenly observes haveli and surrounding to know he stay here or just now he came here.

Exactly!

😛

take help of her people's talent to know detail of nearby things and about him as a leader to protect themselves from danger . Along with that she notices his quality, loneliness and pain.


what made you think she noticed a 'pain' in him? I only ask, Mitu... because you read the story very deeply... you seem to have an indepth grasp of the characters' thoughts!

Thank you😃

'No one knows anything about his family, since he's never spoken about them... most people presume his family must be dead!'

'Oh... I see...' her expressions turned solemn


if I remember anything I will tell you.



She constantly thought about him, conflict was going on in her mind.. One moment she suspicious over him and another moment she denied with logic or information . Her talk with durga and puzzle she got from him. Like who he is, why he stay like this etc and most hard one why he return 4 dams .she understand he know about her disguise . try to find another reason. She also thought that he must recognize her voice and other things at canal. She notice similarity as sharp mind with him.

👏

😊

Her complain and mental challenge to Durga had ting of confidence and pride about her ability. Her self talk was marvelous.👏

I especially loved this part you pointed out.. yes she knows her limits... but she also knows her abilities

☺️

Other side Akber was not unaffected hazel affect him too. With the ring colour and quality of stone remained him of her eyes. He remembers her partial blindness and in one look he knows its beauty in spite of dressing and her spirit which she not lost because of fear. Cunning man with returning money he told indirectly about he is not mean or opportunist and( by voice and grace. hand with glass bangles which is not of commoner )😛

Yes... 😃 Actually, the thing is he can be mean and he is an opportunist (he has to be, as a businessman) but he didn't want to be those with a person like Heera's character, if you know what I mean!

Yes..😃

Destiny brings two different people in front of each other for few moment which affects one with his presence and other with interaction. Unknowingly its left effects somewhere deep down. His identity makes her constant thought about her and her hazel click him as unique thing. Soft heart wants to find everything about him and hard heart wants to avoid it. 😊

You already know I loved this part
😊
Love you too 🤗
🤗
Edited by melovesja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Kalgi22


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Congratulations Lashy and My darling Banjaras on our success in creating new threads!!🤗</font>


🥳 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: lashy



<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">@harshu27</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">wonderful update...lash sahiba...👏⭐️</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thanks Harshu Sahiba😛</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">so this chap was focused on heera and stranger but more of heera...😛and I just loved d pic u added of pari her eyes r truly beautiful and xpressive...⭐️</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thank you so much dear😳

I really felt bad for kunwar mahendar it was heart wrenching to see him go all numb and it was obvious as his beloved had left him and this world...but then his attitude to take action was appreciable as it was d right time to take action than to shed tears...as its said time is d best healer and it would heal all d inner pain...😳</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Yes dear

d most touchy part of entire chap was heera's convo with durga...😳even thou durga was not physically present with him but then still her soul mite b watching her and so she mite b hearing all d convo which heera was having with her...and that too with d heart...😳</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Of course... that's the only thing that would keep Heera going, na!

so now heera's mission was to find about d mysterious persian...😛😉😉and I simply loved her alertness to find out d minute of d things from bindiya about d barns and d sheds and her sharpness to know about d stranger and his fame was bang on...⭐️</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">She is like that always... a curious young lady..loves to learn more .. and when it comes to the stranger.. obviously she'll want to know everything there is to know!</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">d mystery of 4 dams finally resolved I guess...😆that means khan sahib got to know that it was heera herself in d disguise of maid...😎as he recognized her voice at d canal bank too...😈so d puzzles were getting solved instantly...
Yes...😉
and d 2nd best part in d chap was of course d Persian stranger...😉looks like he did connect d topaz ring with d eyes of heera d hazel orbs...😉</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">How could he not!😉

and so finally heera is back to her normalcy in handling all d matter with diplomacy,...as she finally decided to write a condolence letter to kunwar..and its v much appreciable...⭐️
Haan😭
overall another blockbuster update...looking forward for another one...😉</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thank you darling🤗love you</font>
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love u too 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Those days, there used to be novels published in weekly magazines. My grandmom used to say that she used to be at the bookstore dot on time to read the next chapter of very interesting stories. These days, we hardly are aware of the anticipation, the wait and the speculation that accompanies such chapter-wise release of stories. (The HP series being one exception...but even that was different with book-release and the interval of nearly a year). Thanks Lashy for making us experience us the same.🤗
So Heera really IS partially blind. 😲 When she mentioned the same the first time, I thought that she cooked up a story like Tracy Whitney.😆 That she did not want to reveal her identity or the real reason behind her daze, which was probably her depression at her dear one's loss. That she wanted to put the short-tempered man on a back-foot. But her being really partially blind lends a whole new angle to the story. Also the reason why she has to hide behind a stranger.

The best part of the story so far has been the treatment of Heera's handicap. No over-sentimentality. No sympathy. No melodrama. Heera's shortcoming has been treated with grace and dignity.👍🏼 It evokes more respect for the 16 year old instead of the usual wet-kerchief treatments. 👏

I am already forseeing Suryabhaan,...err...Mahendar's fate. Jalal...ahem ...I mean Akbar is getting more interesting with every chapter. 😃 (Royal connections...step-brother of Shehzade????🤔) And Heera is simply loveable.😳 She has the clarity and judgement to draw the lines, to balance her duties and her pain. No lectures, no pre-conceptions. She has the grace, intelligence and aura of a princess. One can almost feel her pain, loss, bravery and coming to terms with the truth.

Topaz...true. Not flamboyant, but earthy. Excellently put.👏

Why did Jalal return the 4 dams? Certainly no scruples at being called mean. Did he want to say that he saw through Sahiba's pretense?

Was the 6th chapter really short or did I read it too fast.😲😆








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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kalgi22


Congratulations Lashy and My darling Banjaras on our success in creating new threads!! 🤗

😲 So many emotions ...all for a new thread?😲😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
A reminder to JA lovers,here😳

Shagun is going to make a special thread tomorrow on the occasion of third anniversary of JA😃

So,you can PM her any message/edits/anything you wish to, reg.this by tomorrow morning(IST)😊

Pls participate to express your love for AkDha😊

Thanks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: .AkDhian.

A reminder to JA lovers,here😳


Shagun is going to make a special thread tomorrow on the occasion of third anniversary of JA😃

So,you can PM her any message/edits/anything you wish to, reg.this by tomorrow morning(IST)😊

Pls participate to express your love for AkDha😊

Thanks!

I will message it to her...
Shagun, wanted to do it yesterday itself... but, I ended up sleeping early
Promise.. wouldn't let my head hit the pillow till I've sent it tonight
Only a simple message... but it'll ring true..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: melovesja


Congrats for new thread.😛

Thank you... 🤗

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