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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

@harshu27

wonderful update...lash sahiba... 👏 ⭐️

Thanks Harshu Sahiba 😛

so this chap was focused on heera and stranger but more of heera... 😛 and I just loved d pic u added of pari her eyes r truly beautiful and xpressive... ⭐️

Thank you so much dear 😳

I really felt bad for kunwar mahendar it was heart wrenching to see him go all numb and it was obvious as his beloved had left him and this world... but then his attitude to take action was appreciable as it was d right time to take action than to shed tears...as its said time is d best healer and it would heal all d inner pain... 😳

Yes dear

d most touchy part of entire chap was heera's convo with durga... 😳 even thou durga was not physically present with him but then still her soul mite b watching her and so she mite b hearing all d convo which heera was having with her...and that too with d heart... 😳

Of course... that's the only thing that would keep Heera going, na!

so now heera's mission was to find about d mysterious persian... 😛 😉 😉 and I simply loved her alertness to find out d minute of d things from bindiya about d barns and d sheds and her sharpness to know about d stranger and his fame was bang on... ⭐️

She is like that always... a curious young lady..loves to learn more .. and when it comes to the stranger.. obviously she'll want to know everything there is to know!

d mystery of 4 dams finally resolved I guess... 😆 that means khan sahib got to know that it was heera herself in d disguise of maid...😎 as he recognized her voice at d canal bank too...😈so d puzzles were getting solved instantly...
Yes... 😉
and d 2nd best part in d chap was of course d Persian stranger... 😉 looks like he did connect d topaz ring with d eyes of heera d hazel orbs... 😉

How could he not! 😉

and so finally heera is back to her normalcy in handling all d matter with diplomacy,...as she finally decided to write a condolence letter to kunwar..and its v much appreciable... ⭐️
Haan 😭
overall another blockbuster update...looking forward for another one... 😉

Thank you darling 🤗 love you

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

@ Sharmacatty

Perfect pic for this chapter.. Loved it.⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thank you so so so much! 🤗

Amazing chapter lashy... loved heera more, in this chapter.👏👏

This line seems to have broken out a controversy of sorts 🤣

First scene-Mahendar's state was written very nicely.. feeling very sad for him and also recalled third chapter-durga's pleas to khalil.., when he saw her room.

The rage he had felt on imagining those men, murdering his love was justified and I liked that but why do I feel that he won't able to take revenge from prince and khalil and will be sent by khalil and his men to durga, his love soon.😕

I know this is meant to be really heart-wrenching... but.. lets see how it unfolds 😉

Anyways, I won't mind that either, as we have our Stranger to take revenge from khalil.😛

>>> 😉

Heera- Self-possessed,Quiet and sagacious. This is what I feel about her,reading this chapter.Heera is becoming normal again.. though she can't able to be happy from inside after losing her precious one, her only family-Durga but for the sake of her responsibilities, the 16 year heiress put aside her grief.👏

Yes dear.. 😉

She was quite enticed by his strong and Confusing personality after her encounter with a stranger at canal yet she was suspicious of him. Afterall, he was the owner of that haveli, where they were staying.. Liked that..😉

This shows how insightful and incisive she is..⭐️⭐️

Of course.. how can she be the successful leader of a clan unless she possesses those qualities? 😳

Though felt quite bad for those guards as the poor men had to eat chacha jaan's Saffron pilaf but liked gokul's words. Be grateful for what you've got!!😊

True! 😆

Heera was asking for glass and I was like, in 16^th century they had/used glass.. I never had interest in history so don't know these basic things too..😳

Then a thought occurred to me, why don't heera use spectacles,then??😆

There were magnifying glasses and reading crystals... but corrective vision specs came later on😳

She wrote a letter to her jija sa.. hope he reads the letter before katwaing his ticket to heavens..😆

OMG payal 😆

Stranger has connections to a royal family.. for a second, many thoughts started wandering in my mind.. anyways, I think this will help him and harka in future to go to prince's palace.

😉

He returned the money.. I just love this Stranger..❤️

You loved this stranger even otherwise 🤣

But why?? Is that because he came to know that she is the one who apologised to his man, after a bad behaviour of bindiya and her guards??

He recognised her voice and knew that she is Sahiba (I love when he calls her that..) then why he returned the money, he charged her for water??😕

With this, he indirectly told her that he knows that she is real sahiba and not bindiya... 😉

I put a lambaa explanation for this on first page...

Loved the scene where he was looking at a ring.. that ring reminded him of Sahiba.. Don't tell me he loved someone in past..

Errr... he had NEVERRR seen such an exquisite tint of hazel before 😉

In the whole chapter, I was waiting for Stranger and my eyes getting closed reaching this para.. Suddenly Your words tea and coffee mantra recalled and I opened my eyes..😆😆

>>>

and when I read this para, I was like...😃 Stranger aa gaya and after that.. chala bhi gaya.. 😭aur chapter khatam bhi ho gaya..

😆

But it's ok.. Though there was only a small scene of his, in this chapter but he was present in a whole chapter in heera's thoughts and discernment.

EXACTLY...

And not to forget, loved heera's talk with Durga..😊

This is what we do, actually.. In a day, we can act normal but when we go on a bed after switching off the lights, we remember that someone, who has a special place in our life.

😭 yes we do!

Waiting for next chapter, dear!!😊

Thanks darling 🤗

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sho123

@sho123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

congrs for new thread di
may u have 100 threads
⭐️

Edited by sho123 - 9 years ago

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

congratulations for new thread lashy di...😳

Edited by cute.manasi - 9 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

@ Binduprasad

beautiful update lashy Di
love the pic you put in the chapter,

Thank you darling 🤗

Di I am waiting how will kuwarsa or mahendra will react after Durga death,
poor soul so much in pain, and top of that how will Durga murder happen is increase his pain but now because of encouragement of his senapati he will understand this is not for mourning time but for taking revenge

Yes! 😭

love the most he did not forgot his promise to Durga to take care of her sister heera,
and I am looking forward how he will do that

😊
heera she is just can't forgot about stranger so she inspect everything about her surrounding,
may be she is not believe that how come in a such young age he achieved lots

Of course it's a strange coincidence after coincidence, na? So she is suspicious

OK di the most lovely part of the chapter is tasting the meal ,
everybody assume might be their food is poisonous, I agree in that century how come they believe in stranger who generously give food na so they are inspecting their food.

Yes...

you know what di may be heera lost her only family but she so bless to have such a loyal people who so much care and love her.

True dear..

but not only heera but stranger also bless to have loyal people.

He does... and you'll know the reasons soon why...

now most interesting part stranger return Money which he charge for water, but why
because he know that bindiya is not their real sahiba and real sahiba is one who give money for water ,

I have written explanation on first page dear... see if it helps🤗

you know di your story is quite mysterious and character also,
in previous chapter I assume now everything is clear but no in next chapter you put something new mysterious things,
how much I want to solve but it never be solve.

Hayoo ... but the mysteries will all be solved soon.. dont' worry..😳

Mr stranger also something have in past .

Yes 😉

its strange na both heera and Akbar meet only two times but both can't stop to think about each other.
both don't know each other but they recognize each other by simple things like from their voice, eyes etc
both have sleepless nights before also but now add something new.

I loved this line of yours... you have outlined it so well

di you describe each and everything so beautifully . how you give importance to little little things like heera father gift or Durga ring.

Thank you 🤗
stranger I think you store so many things about him in future more than heera he is so what to say I can't pin point but he is unpredictable may be.

Hmmm 😉
at last di so many things in my mind about this chapter but can't express
thanks for PM di
eagerly waiting for next update

Thank you so much dear... 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sho123
congrs for new thread di
may u have 100 threads
⭐️

How sweet of you Sherry 🤗 just like your name😉

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

congo lash 🤗 fr 4th thread... 😛 🥳

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sho123

@sho123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: lashy
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Thanks di
but u r more sweet and ur writing it always near my heart whether its NJAPA or this one
u r best 👏
love u 😳 ⭐️
Now waiting for ur update

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Thank you darlings🤗 Manuguru and Harshu Sahiba

@ melovesja

Beautiful picture lashy not only your word but pic also speak.😛 As her hazal speak to him.

That is so sweet...Paridhi's eyes and expressions in that picture suited the scene... can see the pain.. and the genteel nature there... yet she seems cunning enough to be able to outwit anyone in a mind game!

Write up of his visit to her room, Kuwarsa's pain and his condition at lost of his love was heart wrenching.😭 Like his dutiful loyal who bring him back to reality and remind him for his duty. Each time you exactly show relation between leader and loyal in that era. He work under sultnat but didn't lost his pride as rana . his is adamant to punish that barbarian who do this heinous crime and fulfill his promise to take care of harka and praja. To gave back her right. He very well knows about prince power and strength of well train people who do crime. Rana is on the way to get back his glory.👏

You have described this so well, Mitu 😳

You find a way to gave some light moments between their pain .pillaf kand was hilarious. 😆

It's not the end of Chacha jaan's cooking escapades though 🤣

I like rattan kaka who was always on guard to face upcoming things.

He is like a father to her... and everyone else!

Morning rays bring those memory and pain back to her but after the incidents of previous day . she try to get back to herself and dutiful ,sharp heiress. She remember her father as she have that glasses which were her great support. Her past memory was so touchy.

Yes dear..

She keenly observes haveli and surrounding to know he stay here or just now he came here.

Exactly!

take help of her people's talent to know detail of nearby things and about him as a leader to protect themselves from danger . Along with that she notices his quality, loneliness and pain.

what made you think she noticed a 'pain' in him? I only ask, Mitu... because you read the story very deeply... you seem to have an indepth grasp of the characters' thoughts!

She constantly thought about him, conflict was going on in her mind.. One moment she suspicious over him and another moment she denied with logic or information . Her talk with durga and puzzle she got from him. Like who he is, why he stay like this etc and most hard one why he return 4 dams .she understand he know about her disguise . try to find another reason. She also thought that he must recognize her voice and other things at canal. She notice similarity as sharp mind with him.

👏

Her complain and mental challenge to Durga had ting of confidence and pride about her ability. Her self talk was marvelous.👏

I especially loved this part you pointed out.. yes she knows her limits... but she also knows her abilities

Other side Akber was not unaffected hazel affect him too. With the ring colour and quality of stone remained him of her eyes. He remembers her partial blindness and in one look he knows its beauty in spite of dressing and her spirit which she not lost because of fear. Cunning man with returning money he told indirectly about he is not mean or opportunist and( by voice and grace. hand with glass bangles which is not of commoner )😛

Yes... 😃 Actually, the thing is he can be mean and he is an opportunist (he has to be, as a businessman) but he didn't want to be those with a person like Heera's character, if you know what I mean!

Destiny brings two different people in front of each other for few moment which affects one with his presence and other with interaction. Unknowingly its left effects somewhere deep down. His identity makes her constant thought about her and her hazel click him as unique thing. Soft heart wants to find everything about him and hard heart wants to avoid it. 😊

You already know I loved this part

Love you too 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

@ Kalgi

Lashy Chellam 🤗 Another fantastic chapter it is. 👏 You started with Kunwar Mahendar. Everyone is sad about his state and happy about his revenge but I feel pity about him Who knows what Lashy maata has for him on her cruel store. She already compared him with Suryabhan somewhere😭😭😭

I know I shouldn't be laughing... but the way you've worded it, made me chuckle!🤣

Lashy maata didn't even saw her mercy over lead. She took away everything from hero and heroine. Now this poor soul 😆

😆 You make me sound like Khalil!

And I'm terrified when reading about Akbar's enough stories that keep him awake... Now at this point I was telling to my poor heart... Worse is yet to come and be prepare for that. 😆

Ada paavee! 😆

Ok worry not! Let's concentrate on Topaz ring and that 4 dams as you said. 😳😛

PHEWWW!

I'm really curious over why Akbar returned that 4 dams. 😛 😃 Yeah We know that he got to know who's the real Sahiba. And he know she's once fair with his servants but still why? He doesn't care when that same Sahiba had something to tell him. So what's the purpose now to prove that he's not mean and Why he care to show them he knows who's the real Sahiba to the already frightened group specially Kakasa and why he care to check Sahiba's sharpness😆😉 But we care that uncertain care!! 😳

I explained on first page... 😆 which I know you got bored of reading, already

The entire Saffron pilaf scene is hilarious 🤣 They already have had some many things in recent days now this pilaf too.🤣 Ayyo Lashy maata didn't even leave the guards 🤣🤣

Very funny! 😡

And coming to Heera... Happy she's back to her protocol while puzzling puzzler keep her busy 😉

Yes... 🤗 thanks da