ArHi 2S - Cherished Malevolence ::Shot-2B:Pg.33:01/07:: *Complete*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing update dear...
hope nothing happens to khushi... please please bhaiyu don't let anything serious happen with khushi...

superb concept kiddo.. best treat ever... love u both

yours
behna
Edited by arshi_abhigya - 9 years ago
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For my story updates..

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Edited by MahrunLuckyPMs - 9 years ago
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OMG!!! Aaahhh!!!!!!!!!! Am I dreaming??? Nooo??? I am not dreaming, right? It is true.. It is real.. It is damn real... Yuuuhhhooo... Finally one of my favorite tracks by my darling Vampire. Oh! How much I Love You my darling Vampire sis!!!
Aapne almost sab cheezo ka credit muhhe de diya didu! *hitting my forehead* Aap bhi na!

Remember I had said I had lost my dictionary and I was looking for it? Ahh! I wanted to confirm the meaning of Malevolence which later I had to beg to my Google Devta. I just wanted to be something that reflected love as well as revenge and here u go. For the first time, don't know why I am loving title I had suggested.. Maybe bcoz u accepted it. Thank you for that didu.

The start! My God the start! It was.. It was just so beautiful. It, so, beautifully reflected Arnav's love towards Khushi and how much he missed being with her. Since afternoon I had been racking my brain thinking and thinking of how did Arnav let Khushi get kicked out and here I got the reason.

Even HP was sad with Khushi's departure. Khushi ne sabka dil jeeta except for some 'thick-headed' ones.

B****! Seriously! I was horrified when I read such word being used by someone who believed so much in God and never tolerated any such words. It's said truly that if love can make person strong, it can even make the person weak and ignorant. Love reduces people to seriously disastrous things in many cases as in Anjali.

Wait why do I think this is gonna be a long comment?? Anyways continue...

And who asked this Shyam to speak in between? Supreme Court ka judge hai kya? Yaa apne aap ko bahot mahan samajh ta hai? Huh! I hate him from the core of my heart and feet and core of the earth. Argh! He is such a moronic jerk. (Okay! I accept I hate using Smileys so imagine one urself)

And woah woah woah! See who speaks in between... My my! the biggest spineless Aakash Singh Raizada! Woah! My God! Mujhe toh aaj pata chala that he even had a tongue and a voice box fitted in his system. I really believed that he is dumb. I am surprised. Tnx for letting me see the truth. Aakash is it that you're permitted to open ur mouth only for your oh-so-fragile porcelain thick headed dumb sister? Huh? Answer me idiot. I am asking you something.. Open your damn bloody mouth. Gadha! You have hurt Payal whom you claimed to love and wanted to marry but I really pity her. She married a spinless person who doesn't deserve anyone... ANYONE...

"Everything that Di says is a truth to be written with golden ink, Aakash. Akal kya ghaas khaane chaligayi tumhari?"
Gosh! I was laughing my head out reading it and re-reading it. That was so funny. Arnav dude, Aakash should have dimaag.. Tabhi toh wih ghaas charne jaayegi... Don't forget uske pass dimaag nahi hai.

Dadi aap apni taang sab cheezo mein daal ti hai? Dadi!!! You have grown old. C'mon go back to your Aashram and stay there and plot whatever you want. Don't you dare enter my ArShi's life and try spoiling it.

Just imagine a WWF between Arnav & Shyam. Bechara Shyam! He would be beaten to pulp without a scratch on Arnav.

And Anjali you know what Arnav isn't a two timer like you. I agree to Arnav. She has been a parasite all her life. Just bcoz she has polio doesn't make her less fortunate. She could do almost each task a normal person can do. She just is lazy and wants everything at the click of her fingers. First learn to earn then raise your voice Mrs. Jha.

But I din like one thing. Why did Arnav leave the house? Isn't Shyam a 'well renowned famous' lawyer? Ask him to take care of the family. Even Aakash can help them. Why does he need to get the hell out of the house when it is HIS. It's HIS hard work, HIS mehnat, HIS devotion.

And my God! Didu thank you so so so so sooo much yaara. Thank you for making Mami a positive character here. Thank you sooo much.. I LOVE YOU!!!! Thank you Mamiji for trusting the Gupta Sisters who are now finally you're daughters too.

And oh my god! Khushi is missing! Sh*t! Where is she? Where the hell did she go? Why is she blaming herself? Hope she is safe. *fingers crossed* pls pls pls let her be safe.

And my God! VAMPIRE! YOU'RE MY FIRE BRIGADE. You're supposed to spray water on the fire but you're increasing it. Dead body! Seriously! Arnav!!! Why did Arnav react that way? I-I-I am sure it's not Khushi. It can't be. Please. Main ro lungi didu. Please don't let that be Khushi.

I LOVE YOU DIDU! U know that Na? Then pls pls pls update soon. Pretty Please didu... I beg u...

I love you sooo much... Thank you for this amazing piece of work. Loads of kisses and tightest hug!! Muahh!!!

Love,
Yours,
Baccha ❤️
Edited by Kiddo_Star - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG! I am so scared for khushi!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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please don't kill khushi please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really awesome. Love arnav for defending khushi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my god.. That was without a doubt one one the best story ive read on Arhi till date

The starting was amazing awesome.. Im so so sooo happy that Arnav finally stood up for khushi.. He finally declared that he loves her more than anything in his life.. And he gave a good one to Anjali she deserved it like anything

Uh oh khushi goes missing.. I just hope that the dead body he found is not of Khushi's..

Loved it like anything.. It was phenomenal.. Please please pretty please post the next chapter soon.. Can't wait to read it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow great short story please update soon
I'm really looking forward to the next part of your story and i feel so scare right now and i hope khushi is going to be ok and i feel so sorry for Arnav
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww diii i just loved this concept...
woww my arnavji i..i.just love him..
that too that line..woh koi nahi hai woh mera PATNI HAI..
i just loved it when he says like that...wanna hug him.😳😳😳

and everyone MU khushi?? how can they?? that's so cheap of this raizada family..huh😡😡

and the final scene..i'll surely die if u not update it soon..🤢🤢

plss di pretty plsss😭😭😭

thank for the pm..😃😃




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