* You And Me -- Its Us * : A ShraMan SS (Complete Pg 14)

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Hey guys! Don't get shocked for I am troubling you back to back with my writings... I lay sick in bed, popping medicines so I'm all the free to think of plots and possibilities.

This one is quite a deep, emotional serious story. But I'm sure you'll enjoy it as much as the previous hilarious shot. Let's begin!

Special Thanks To Sidhi aka --awe10some-- for pushing me to take up this matter. Thank you Sidhi!


You And Me : Its Us







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Yes, she was it. My mother, the long lost part of my life, facing me out of the blue. My past , which I had settled issues with, knocked again, only to leave me devastated.

Sumo -- Not Again!! Why does this girl always interfere in my life? Can't I keep a part of me to myself? But today, she'd gone a bit too far. She has pricked me innermost , underlying feeling, my mother!

Yes, Nirmala Ahuja stands right in front of me. I feel rooted to my spot, my legs feel weak. Tears spring up. A part of me says it always longed to see that face, that smile. And a part of me has already revolted, bringing back those nightmares. Well Sumo, if this was the surprise you were talking of, I better not have it!! You have badly messed with me, dear Sumo. You've thrown an outright challenge to a Shravan you never knew. It was you who wanted to know a part of me that you hadn't seen, huh? Your wish comes true today as my blood boils in frustration.


"Sumo, is aurat se kaho ki nikal jaaye yahan se. Mrs. Nirmala Ahuja, you may leave", said Shravan, trying his level best not to open up. But Destiny and of course Suman had different plans for him.


PS: If anyone could suggest a better, family type title, I'd be grateful. I'm running out of titles and this seems so blah.



Hope you all Like it.

Love,
Mahi





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Index

Chapter 1 - Pg 4

Chapter 2 - Pg 6

Chapter 3 - Pg 8

Chapter 4 - Pg 10

Chapter 5 - Pg 13

Epilouge - Pg 14


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orion23 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Me first
Did you say troubling us with your back to back stories😲
The word your looking for is enticing or gifting...
I love reading your work!
Kindly don't apologise for awesomeness!

Now, coming to the post, I love it... trailer aaisa tha toh picture kaisi hogi
Update real soon, this is damn interesting!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow mahi u are on roll today 👏
Superb teaser!!
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks Orion! 🤗Damn, your comments make me blush and smile. Thanks a lot for your warmth and love.😳😳
I really need a change from the Sicky environment, hence decided to write this. Hope it comes out well😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you Priyam! 🤗
Muah! 😳
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Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Thanks Orion! 🤗Damn, your comments make me blush and smile. Thanks a lot for your warmth and love.😳😳

I really need a change from the Sicky environment, hence decided to write this. Hope it comes out well😃

Aww I'm glad I made you smile!
It will come out well...
You're good at this!🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: orion23

Aww I'm glad I made you smile!
It will come out well...
You're good at this!🤗


Fingers crossed😆
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That was damn gud!!
Fabulous, freaking awesome, excellent, masterpiece n my vocabulary is ditching me at this moment!.

All i can say is that if for trailer am that much impressed then for the rest i wud be 'GOD KNOWS'!! I guess i will have to surf bout my dictionary to search for a new mre powerful word

Thanks 4 taking my lame idea into consideration! Do pm me wenever u update.

N pls update soonish. Cn't help it dr. U've got me woven around ur works by ur magical writing

LOVE,
big fan of urs (naam toh pata hi hain);-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great one Mahi..
Update it soon.. 😊
This is currently the hot topic.. 😆

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