Swasan os dil ko mili uski dhadkan

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Swara was sitting idly in her room.she is really confused whether to believe her heart or her mind ; Heart which says she belongs to sanskar and mind which says sanskar tried to kill her.so she has decided to go to temple. She goes to her mother maa mein mandir hoke aati hoon.
Sharmishtha- par Shona tumhari tabiyat
Swara- maa mein theek hoon. Darasal dil bohot bechain ho raha hai
Sharmishtha-acha theek hai lekin jaldi aana.
Swara goes to mandir.
Maheshwari mansion
in swasan room
sanskar is crying continuosly seeing swara's and his pics and remembering their special moments. Laksh comes there to see him.seeing sanskar crying tears fall from his eyes but soon composes himself and go to sanskar enveloping him in a brotherly hug.
Sanskar- dekh na lucky Swara doesn't even remember me
Laksh- bhai pls shant ho ja tere Rone se Swara ko kuch yaad nahi aayega tujhe kuch karna hoga.
Sanskar composes himself and says tu theek keh raha hai lucky mein aise nahi toot sakta mein baadi jaa raha hoon.
Sanskar comes to baadi. He sees sharmishtha and goes to her and takes blessings from her and asks her maa where is swara.
Sharmishtha replies wo mandir gayi hai beta.
Sanskar- thanks maa.
Meanwhile in mandir Swara completes her Pooja and is distributing Prasad to the poor.after distributing she turns and climbs down the stairs. She doesn't see water on the stairs and mistakenly keeps her leg and she slips. She rolls down the stairs and falls on the ground. Her head is wounded and bleeding badly. Crowd gathers around her. Sanskar comes there and sees the gathering. He goes there to see what happened and is shocked to see his life on the ground unconscious. He immediately lifts her and keeps her in car. He sprinkles water on her but she doesn't respond. So he takes her to hospital. On the way he informs family members and they too come to the hospital. Even saahil also comes there.
Doctor checks her and tells- there is nothing to worry.ghaav itne gehre nahi hain. She'll get her conscious within few mins.
Everybody go to her room except sanskar as he doesn't want her to get scared again.
Swara gets her conscious after sometime and see everyone but couldn't see sanskar so stars getting hysterical and continuosly murmurs- sans..kar...sansk.ar
Saahil heard her and says dont worry Swara wo khooni Yaha pe nahi "chatak"
Swara slapped him and said - not a word against my husband.tum hote kaun mere pati ke baare mein aise bolne wale haan.
Saahil was shocked and others were relieved because swara regained her memory.
Swara started shouting- sanskar,sanskar.
Sanskar heard her and immediately rushed to her. Swara on seeing sanskar ran to him and engulfed him in a bone crushing hug. After few seconds both of them broke apart and sanskar said- finally tumhe tumhari yaaddaash Wapis mil gayi. Swara looked confused and Said- yaaddaash.
Sanskar explained her everything and Swara felt guilty and said- I'm sorry Sankar Meri wajah se tumhe kitni takleef jhelni padi.
Sanskar- it's okay princess no need to be apologetic.
Swara thanked saahil for saving her and giving her second life.
Saahil said its okay Swara I'm happy ki tum apne pariwar se mil gayi I'm happy for you. Acha theek hai ab mein chalta hoon take care.
Swara returned to Maheshwari mansion with sanskar and lived happily with him.


Uff this is my first work.everyone please comment bohot mehnat lagi hai story likhne mein I think 3-4 ghante lage honge so pls pls comment Karo acha ho ya bura koi baat nahi hai.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsm... Mainly swara slap to sahil
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Crisply

Awsm... Mainly swara slap to sahil


Thank you so much and yeah the slap was much needed because saahil is behaving too touchy touchy in the show so I showed my frustration here . I'm happy you liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice os.
Bhagwan ne Swara ko apne pyar se mila diya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i am very happy after reading this os...thank u so much dear for giving this os ...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb os 👏
Loved it
But my favourite part was that slap 🤣
Do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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best part was "tum hote kaun ho mere pati k bare mein aise bolne wale"...
it was a nice os...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Nice os.
Bhagwan ne Swara ko apne pyar se mila diya


Thank you so much and yes if love is true then even God can't separate the lovers
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mridulakrishnan

i am very happy after reading this os...thank u so much dear for giving this os ...😊


My pleasure

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