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Sorry dear i will try to update regularly 😃

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Note-> hi my dear folks... Now I am giving 33th chapter of this story... I hope you all will love it... Happy reading 😊

Chapter-33


{Jalal was fastly moving his body toward meeting camp... Before a some minutes Abdul informed about chuktai khaan's arrival...jalal did not want to leave jodha for a second but according to Abdul it was very important so he decided to see chuktai khaan... Jalal swiftly entered in meeting camp... Seeing their shahensha Abdul,adagha sahab , monim khaan and chuktai khaan stood up from their chairs and bow down their heads front of him in his respact...Jalal signaled to them for sitting after jalal all presented persons joined their seats...}

Jalal ( with smile)-> " how are you chuktai khaan sahab... I am so happy to seeing you after long time... When did you come from kabul?"

Chuktai khaan ( respectly)-> " I am fine shahensha... I am also happy to see you again... Only before one week shahensha... I heard about amer so I came to see raja bharmal..."

{ hearing him jalal and others looked toward him with curiousness.}

Jalal( surprisingly)-> " why ?"

Chuktai khaan ( taking deep breath)-> " when I was running from shershah shuri's soldiers for saving my life... That time rajaa bharmal saved my life and gave me place in amer... Since that time we are very best friends...( taking deep breath with serious ton) shahensha, mugal army has almost destroyed amer completely... They have not much men or treasurer to fighting with you... Shahensha, I have a proposal for you and trust me after it you will not any need to fight with then and more important rajvanshi warriors will be fighting for you not against you... You will not only win amer but also will win their respect, honesty and true and strong commitment... And most important thing after it your respect will be higher among rajvanshis"

{ hearing chuktai khaan jalal and others looked toward him curiously...}

Jalal( curiously)-> " how?"

Chuktai khaan-> " getting married with rajkumari jodha bai elder daughter of raja bharmal... "

{ hearing him all presented members with jalal shocked like hell... They were not expecting this type of proposal from chuktai khaan...

Munim khaan( shockingly)-> " what are you saying chaktai khaan sahab... Marriage with a rajavanshi shahejaadi... How can it possible... "

Chuktai khaan( looking toward munim khaan )-> " why not monim khaan sahab... It is not first time when shahensha Will get married..."

Munim khaan ( confusingly)-> " But she is Hindu shahejaadi... What will maulivis say about it... They will not accepting this marriage... You know after this marriage our people will against to us...( taking deep breath) I think this idea is harmful more than profitable... So it is my kindly request to my honorable shahensha please refuse this proposal... "

Jalal ( in mind)-> "chanda is still angry on me... Even not ready to trust me... She believe that I cheated her true love and trust... If she will get know about my marriage with another woman... She will definitely run away from me in anger and her forgiveness will become impossible for me and this time god will not also help me... No...no... I can't bear again painful separation... I want peaceful and love full life with my little cute family which is uncompleted without my love ... My chanda... I have to do hard work to gaining her love and trust again... But this marriage will make situation worst between us..."

{Seeing lost jalal adhga sahab decided to break silence}

Adhga sahab( calmly)-> " shahensha what are you thinking... Please tell us about your decision about this matter..."

Jalal (taking deep breath in serious tone)-> " I think munim khaan is right... I can't get married with her... It is impossible..."

{hearing his decision one side chuktai khaan and adhga sahab became very disappointed... And other side munim khaan' s face shined up with proudly... But Abdul could understand about main reason behind this Deni...}

{Flash back}

{ mugal soldier informed Abdul about jalal's arrival... Other side adhga sahab was busy to taking information from sariffuddin about amer and with it shaahi hakim sahab was also treating his wounds.

Abdul was very worried for his shahensha cum best friend so without informing to adhga sahab he decided to seeing jalal himself... He moved swiftly toward jalal's camp... A worried friend without caring about what really was going in camp entered swiftly in it... But when he moved his eyes to searching his friend sudden they stuck on bed... Two form were laying on bed peacefully with holding each other in their arms... Some lines appeared on his forehead because of confusion because his friend was peacefully sleeping with holding a woman... His hidden brother's heart awoke in him and he swiftly moved toward bed to asking clarification for his friend's act... But when he came to near bed now lady's face was clearly visible for him and not taking long time his mind send signal to him that he knew her...ya ofcourse he knew her... Because this innocent and pure face belong to his heart... Ya she was his little one... His dearest , cute and naughty little sister... Who made him proud to himself as big and protective brother because of her love and trust in very short time... She had become his little world... But because of his stupid friend... He lost her... But now god again sent her to him for rectification his mistakes...

Abdul ' s eyes filled up with happy tears... A happy and satisfied smile played on his lips... For a moment he liked to hugged his little one tightly and make the promise to protect her from every single evil eyes or pain... But next moment his mind scolded his heart for ruining his little one's sweet and happy moments with her love , her husband... He swiftly wiped out his tears and turn to leave camp... But his bad luck his right leg hit night table and because of this sudden and unwanted meeting water jug felled down on floor.its sound broken the peaceful sleep of jalal.he little lifted and pushed his head little back to find out real reason of this unwanted sound which broke his soothing dream world. Jalal found his dearest childhood friend standing near to his bed... He swiftly checked his lady love who was sleeping peacefully in his arms... But thank God his angle was still lost in her in sweet dreamland...}

Jalal->( in almost whisper)-> " hey Abdul... What are you doing here buddy ?..."

Abdul(bowing down his head on front of his friend cum shahensha )-> " adaab shahensha... "

Jalal (calmly)-> " adaab buddy..."

Abdul ( with embarrassment)-> " sorry to disturbed you my king... I did not know that you are (looking toward his little sister with love full eyes) you are with my little one..."

{ jalal slowly got out from bed before checking that his lady love will remain stay in her sweet dreamland... Now jalal told everything to Abdul that how did he get his little one back and also told his strong decision to not let her go again to leave him alone...}

{ flash back end}

Chukatai khan( in serious tone )-> " shahensha... This marriage wil not only get to amer under your control but also after it u will success to make a positive place in heart of rajvanshi and we all very well know that no one can honest more than these rajvanshi... And after it... It will be easier to you conquer whole Hindustan without losing much your soldiers..."

{Munim khan again tried to stop him but

But chuktai khan stopped him in middle of way...}

"Shahensha please first think about this proposal before deny it... because may be king bharmal will our guest for tonight " Said chuktai khan in calm but hopeful voice.

{ jalal swiftly stood up and silently walked out from camp leaving behind some hopeful and some disappointed souls...

Jalal was now hell confused... he could not decide what he should do... a tough was going on between his mind and heart... His mind was pushing him to say yes for this proposal... But his heart strongly refused it... Jalal very well know that as a king he must accept this proposal because after this central of rajputana will almost come to under his control without wasting much effort and money and most important thing, he will success to save his many dutiful and brave soldiers whom always ready to give up their life for him without thinking once... True lover and honest husband was not let him to say yes for this proposal... he was silently sitting on near to pond... fad up light indicating that sun was all set to say bye and moon was ready to conquer whole sky... it was evening time... jalal looked last time toward little dark sky with taking deep breath before come back to his war camp... now he had taken his decision... but he also knew that after this what will he have to face in his future... But it was very necessary and he has to take it... jalal came back to war camps and swiftly moved toward his camp... He deadly wanted to see and talk to his love, his wife about his decision... But seemed fat was totally against his wish... One mugal soldier informed him about king bharmal's arrival... Jalal knew it was very urgent to meet his king bharmal but before meet him he wanted to share some words with his lady love...}

"I will come to see him within few minutes... now go..." Said jalal in majesty voice.

{After hearing his shahensha's command soldier walked away from there... Jalal swiftly moved toward his camp but his legs stopped on gate... He felt many emotions rushed in his veins...

"stopped jalal... what are you going to do...? Screamed his mind loudly.

" if she will not understand what you want to understand her... then what...

Is you ready to lost her again or living this type of hell , alone life again..."

{ hearing his mind, jalal felt chill down in his spine... Mere thinking to lose his love again... A cold shiver ran in his whole body... Some drops of sweat appeared on his forehead...}

" nooo... I can't bear any more separation from my love..." screamed his heart in teary voice.

" so left this stupid idea to talk to her..." said his mind with winning smile.

" but it will be like cheat her to again..." reply his heart innocently.

" can you shut your mouth for one second..." scold mind to his heart.

" listen jalal... "EVERYTHING FAIR IN LOVE AND WAR..." So don't listen it... if u will go to your wife with it then she will not leave you but also kill u okkk..." said worried mind.

{Now this time heart did not speak anything because somehow his heart was convince at some points with his mind... now this war had finished with step back of jalal from there...}

{ meeting camp}




{ abdul, munim khan, adga sahab, and chuktai khan were sitting peacefully on their seats... meanwhile King bharmal was sitting on their opposite side... Their faces were super tensed... they were egerly wanted get know about jalal's decision... which would make history todat... But one soul was more and tenser from others if jalal will say yes to this proposal then first he have to face his family, friends and whole rajputana for his decision... but one thing would be more going to tough or difficult for king bharmal to taking a single yes for this proposal... but if jalal will say no for this proposal... Then amer will face worst condition then now... because amer had already lost a big part of its treasure and most of soldiers of amer, if they got died or arrested by mugal army... if jalal will say no for this marriage... Then it will mean that he want to war with amer again and if it will happened then amer will ruined completely and it was biggest reason behind that a rajput was ready to surrender his ego and self respect front of biggest enemy of whole rajputana... Sudden mugal gate keeper announced his shahensha's arrival... now this announcement made higher his heart beat more than before... Jalal swiftly entered in camp... All presented persons bow downed front of his majesty aura... Jalal gave quick glance to worried face of king bharmal... After jalal , all presented members took their respective seats...}

Jalal( calm but with majesty voice)-> " welcome Raja sahab...welcome to mugal camp... Say raja sahab, which condition did make you to come to me... Is it any special reason behind your arrival...?

{ king bharmal was understanding main motive of jalal behind these sweet talk... he wanted to king bharmal will put proposal of marriage with his daughter himself front of him and in another words... It was style of jalal to insult or crushed his enemy mercilessly... King bharmal Closed his eyes helplessly... After taken a deep breath}

King bharmal (calmly but in emotionless voice )-> " shahensha-a-hind... amer want to end this enmity and start to new friendship between mugal and rajvanshi... And for it we will need a strong foundation for it...so..."

{ sudden king bharmal stopped in middle of way... he felt like his throat got dry... }

Jalal( camly)-> " sooo..."

King bharmal( controlling his emotions)-> " so... so... I want to marry my elder daughter jodha with you shahensha..."

{ finally king bharmal uttered those very tough or hard words to jalal... seeing his condition playful smirked appeared on jalal's face... seeing right time,chuktai khan stood up...}

Chuktai khan(respectfully )-> " my shahensha... Princess jodha bai is not only most beautiful woman of the world... But she has also many more qualities... Which make her to perfect bride for you... I kindly requested to my dear shahensha... Please accepted king bharmal's proposal... I hope it will be best decision for whole Hindustan..."

Jalal( camly, looking toward adhga sahab)-> " what is your opinion at this matter adhga sahab...?"

Adhga sahab( with standing , in politely)-> " shahensha ... We all very well aware about this fact that Rajvanshi and mugal are cruel enemy since long time ... but after this relationship this enemy line will broke... And near in future we can see mugal and rajvanshi in one side...

if allah give us to this chance to take two religions together then we should accepted this proposal... I think after it Hindustan will see new but good change in future... And without wasting any single drop of blood, if we get what we want then this is best decision shahensha... I know mulvies and some of your near and dear one will against you for this decision... after some time when result of this decision will come, trust me shahensha whole world will remember you in their good note book for this kind and best decision... and by the way amer is not in fighting position so if shahensha rejected king bharmal's proposal then war will again started and..."

{Before he could complete what he wanted to say... sudden jalal stood up from his seat... seeing his behavior... All presented members also got up from their seat... he walked little toward king bharmal...}

Jalal(looking in king bharmal's eyes with serious face )-> " hmmm ok... start your preparation for this marriage... I will get married with your daughter within five days..."

{ after saying it jalal swiftly walked out from there... leaved a happy king and worried father behind him...}

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapter 👏
Plz update soon😳
Edited by pinu20 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very beautiful chapter update nest chapter soon pm me thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc chappy
Jalal when find chanda is jodha yr
wht jodha reaction after knowing this ?
Updateee sooon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hope no more fight between akdha again... n lovely chappy
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb Update buddy😊
So finally Bharmal had formally proposed for Jo's marraige to jalal
It is very unpredictable how Jo would react on this whole scene as Jalal thinks she may not like it and once again she will get a reason to despise Jalal
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
That was another fabulous one from ur pen..
Woww marriage proposal for jalal 😃 that too with jo
but poor jalal doesn't know that jodha is his chanda only..
After having a long fight between his heart and mind, he finally agreed for the alliance..
Thanku for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really can't believe that you gave update

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