back to basics.. - Page 2

Originally posted by: simple2joy

Hammie hammie hammie, hi safed coat,, aj nehin bole gi it was short??
Wonderful take again. had to make it succinct
I loved ur beginning... hummm its good viplav is her teacher
So beautifully u showed how viplab is teaching dhani,
Viplab is d first teacher of dhani, 👏👏👏 thanks for pointing this out
Taught her how to take a stand for herself,how to become self dependent...
Now teaching her how to read n write.
I loved d interpretation of d blackboard scene 👏
Will have to watch d episode. ohhh you annoy me... taz you have to see it
D rest of d episode didnt attract me, everyone holding her responsible for tarnishing family reputation...
No sympathy for a woman who was dishonoured hours back. that will be the day when they forgive dhani
😡 😡 😡
Thanks hammie for writing for us again...its such a tough job how can u do it on a daily basis , when I was a teenager I tried to play with words, but I hardly could make it more than two pages, n couldnt even finish what I was supposed to do, lol. So much patience u have, will always inspire me.
yes taz... each person has their own strength.. your strength is healing the sick.. how blessed you and Nus are... this forum boasts about you two... much love ,yours hammie

Originally posted by: premparbat

Back to basics.
hi premratan 😃
Ah I can see you liked Viplav's teaching method...and of course I bet you too must be a very good one.
ohhh yep... he taught her a lot
The episode I have to say was a bit erratic..in its track and execution. Its like the writers suffer from short term amnesia or maybe the they are on a shift and the writing is passed on to the next in line. I felt that yesterday with the Dadi bua and Kamini scene and today too with Dhani reporting to police scene.
yes and swathi i think pointed out she didn;t even check with viplav... took it upon her self
So lets start with the basics :

Viplav a very supporting husband makes arrangements for Dhani to study at home and empowers her to be the "Shakti" so that all are proud of her . Proud of you too Viplav .
that was moving Durga maa quality
Dadiji is cranky because of the missing bags of gold and his excuse to Dhani is that he is upset about yesterdays incident. Which part Dadaji " should have been her question. Instead she assumes that Asthana got away free that is why he is bothered..
bit of nit wit but she did what was needed
Now did I miss something here - was it not dadaji who stopped Viplav from reporting him to the police . And Dhani was the one to say - i am letting it go coz i respect dadaji - then why did she go to the police ? Really cvs you need to explain this to me...and she lands at the police station ALONE filing a complaint.
yes true ,but then when she ses dadaji
Maybe the CSV are thinking that no one is watching the show anyways no one will notice.
😆 well they cant my premratan can they
Moving on PC comes in claiming he wants the gold back for mandir. Pray who gave him the authority to do so ..Dadi bua is the mahant does she not have a say at all ...who is the trustee of the funds and mandir. DT stands like a thief and Viplav ( in stand alone shots ) declares "I will do this on my own. Take away all the gold " . His lofty words leave his dadaji in sweat coz of the missing bags of gold. Police is informed and called ...
yes and viplva so forces dshrant the treasure trove!
Suddenly Dhani enters the house and not taking into account of what is happening charges at Viplav to inform him of her trip to the police station !!!! First can you check what is happening girl ? Badly done.
🤣 dashrants's face haaa haa
The police without paper work , again Viplav the lawyer goes dumb . allows his dadaji to be taken away hand cuffed . Its not that he was being charged for murder.
dramatic effects!
Dadi protests ...oh he is such a good man ... dadi you have been living under a rock for so many years falls ill . Viplav asks Dhani to look after her while he heads to the police station.
awww yes.. she says he would never steal and we go wink wink tongue in cheek
Instead of calling the doctor rightaway the ladies try and feed dadi with a glass of water..and begin their taunting session of Dhani .
yes may be they should have called doc... its after her coughing bit
Ah and the topic i was waiting for ... You Bahuriya wore a provocative saree and wonder why men will pounce on you ...Of course its women who are responsible for the behavior of men . I was expecting thsi to come up and it did. Deplorable...holding women responsible and letting men off the hook so easy .
such foul mouths
Dhani is required to call the doctor looking up his name in the phone book while Viplav on a bike heads out with Kamini as his ride.
kamini is such a cheapo

Okaaayyy . So by now you must have guessed that this was one lousy episode. Mondays are usually that.
🤣 👏⭐️ loved you rant its what makes you ratna on a monday blues day

My biggest complain to the writers...STOP making Viplav & Dhani dumb. Just becuase the villans need to look smart making leads look silly is the coz of the show not doing well in TRPs . Its is a complete put off.
you said it mate hppe the

Anyways Hammie...sorry mate that all i could come up without sounding too bitter.
hey we need to moan too !once a while i found too much going on ...negatitve bar
much love hammie
Talk to you soon.

Originally posted by: aimf

Dear Hammie hi aimf was looking for you...

Thank you for the wonderful take. The plot indeed thickens, as it has several layers and nuances and points to some interesting paradoxes.

yes the plot does thicken and the leads become more thick by the second

While the main theme revolves around the dangers of Dhani being uneducated, which is equated by Kanak and Bua as uncultured and unfi5 to be a responsible and suave bahu for the highly esteemed Tripathi family, the undercurrent irony is in the educated and cultured people like Kammy, Asthana, Phool Chand and DT behaving in the most uncouth manner possible. 👏... yes... they come as the ones without values
What other name can we give these avaricious plotters, whose greed for things that belong to others, be it wealth or Viplavr, knows no bounds? Each one schemes and plots to bring down another and get ahead at also costs, without heed to ethics or injury. In the midst of all this, Dhani becomes the convenient scapegoat, to be sacrificed at the altar or feigned cultural and moral outrage by people who are caricatures of the very morality they appear to preach and profess.

well said encore... but I daresay dhani should open and say NO! to kammy at least if not to bua

Now the latest ploy of showing Dhani as dangerous, because she nearly killed off Dadhi due to her illiteracy buries Kanak's plotting of her own husband's death and the numerous times Dasharth tried to kill off Dhani.

yes it does.. wish the cvs bring what you point out... hope the get ideas from you

If an unlettered Dhani is dangerous, then these men and women of letters need to be tethered in s cage which has skull and crossbones sign on it.

😆 yes... the sign she spoke about ... and tuesday's episode was the pits! listen thanks so much for such a thought provoking comment... happy to see you aimf..😃 much love hammie

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

HI HAMMIE 🤗

sun! listen... so barbs your exams done great!

After so so so many days I read ur take...

so dhani had reported about asthana to the police...i did not know that...she did the right thing no-doubt...

she did but it will be used against her tuesday take shows that

Heiin!! DT is arrested!! (i am typing the reply while reading ur take..isiliye i am getting shocked with every para...these incidents are happening in AN these days😲)

i like the actor playing PC...His dialogue delivery impresses me so much...Very talented actor he is, i must say..

yes DT jail ke hawa me to like PC actor love his dialect

Bua and kanak are always shown badmouthing and insulting dhani...DT and KT are the two chief antagonists of this show whose main motive is to separate vidha and throw dhani out of AN..but their plan fails everytime and uper se kanak and her cheap plottings are not getting anymore screen spaces...if u remember, our tai was never side-lined, which ever new character had entered, the protagonists and the chief antagonists always used to get more importance...the villains should be intelligent, u know, warna maza kaise ayega...hero ko takkar kaun dega?😕 i often feel bad for kanak...but its good that IKRS brought Dhani's education track which seems to be good...and interesting...i think many forum members are finding interest in this track...
yes I REMEMBER barb har dutta.naku scene was interrupted by kala tia she got so much screen

we used to get so irritated it was awful

Yep u r right that All kinds are problems are arising due to dhani being educated...but i am sure with Viplav's love and support, she will overcome all these obstacles coming in her way..

yes but want dhani to open her mouth again

.I am highly impressed...Such a beautiful piece of writing Hammie...👏👏 very nice and it was easy...shukar hai warna...mujhe dictionary kholke baithna padhta😆...i had missed monday's episode...i did not even go through the LUs and today morning i read ur take...Ahhh! everybody says it right...reading ur take is better than watching the episodes...but still mishal ko ghoorne ke liye we need to watch the episodes...😳😳😆..

yes... he looks sooo lethal but viplav's glare too has warmth in it...

Hammie my exams are over..Thank God!! I read four takes of LTL..21-24 feb 2011 yesterday and i enjoyed every bit of them...they were amazing..wonderful..⭐️ toh tum pehele bhi itni achchi writer thi??..purane din yaad agaye and its only u with whom i can share my happiness...what i was feeling while reading those takes...The epiosdes were amazing and so is ur takes...claps for hammie lion👏👏 i wish i could go and comment there but that forum is locked

I KNOW barbs... you reading them is a big appreciation... my heart sunk when I read the first episode I wrote.. i want to put my takes in threads too its a big job to collect them from IF and put them on one post... its making the time waise you made me put them in fanfic post... copied and pasted them from locked laagi thread

toh hammie has no birthdays😆😆 yes who in the world goes to a lion and asks his Bday...?😆 sabko dar lagta hai😆😆..pun mein nahin darti ...Aapse kya darna Hammie, ap toh mujhe moth se bachaye...errr😆😆😆 so you read us swathi ka commet...😆 kya hogaya use...?😕

haaa haaa...🤣 which naku koyal ya gori wali... koyal is who he fell inlove with

ok will see u everyday from today onwards...hey i missed yesterday's episode too...will be waiting for u to post ur take on yesterday's episode...Take care and stay happy ...

with lots of love from baji for his/her (😛) bhau... 😆 eyeee baji nautanki Byee😊
thanks so much barbzi... lovely to hear from you and delighted to hear exams all done and dusted... much love dharrr! hammie