Twinj FF:A Modern Fairytale part 5 pg 2

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

I loved it !!!...its sooo amazing ...👏👏

u r a brilliant writer !!👏⭐️

how I wished the scene u wrote on pari and raj was for our twinj...I loved it soo much and I imagined it on twinj...😳😳

secondly I loved the title...such a good name...indeed a modern fairytale... 😛

soo mahi is slave...hmmm interesting

kunj's dream was soo good...ik its twinkle...chote such a cute name for him indeed

loved all ur descriptive sentences...

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Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

wooowwweee
that was niceee
like too too nice you know
I was like, wow, this girl can write soo well
I mean, that's a new kinda imagination and concept and all, and I am impressed.
I loved the twinj scene the best, kunj's small smile more
I liked the yuhi scene too, amazing depiction of slave treatment
I lovvved this yaar
I sooo loved this
cant wait for it to be continued
do it as soon as you can , na?
oh and can you pleaseee pm me the next time to update,
thanks if you do and its alright if you don't
love you loads
sakshi

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