Kabir's Diary|| My life in A few words|| UPD- PAGE 39||

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I know it's a bad manner peeping into someone else's diary, but when it's my own I can show it to the world as I please! Here are some extremely precious moments of my life, which I will present to you in a random manner; it may be like my hair grows white first and then a mustache grows on my face for the first time, didn't understand? Never mind!

As I thought of showing my diary to you all, why not start it with Addu, my love?

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#1094- Advika, My Love

#634- what should i do now?

#641- disquietude and pleasure

#648- Uh,Oh!

#1146- How I rely on you!

#655- Fallen in love

#673- something...something?

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#1094

ADVIKA, MY LOVE!

I kept waiting for my turn, though I was hesitant and scared about it. My eyes never bothered to look anywhere else; passing through everyone's arms, that little thing reached back into my wife's arms. She looked at me with saintly and love-filled eyes, and called me near her in a weak voice but I was nervous and she noticed it. I slowly walked towards her, and she smiled, she made me sit beside her and slowly tilted her head on my shoulder and smiled. She saw first at that little thing and then at me, I know she wanted me to take it in my arms, but my hands trembled severely, I feared I might hurt it though I knew how ecstatic I was within; she looked at me again, and I wagged my head negatively due to fear, she glared at me and again I lose!

I slowly stretched my hands a little towards that little thing, but my hands trembled, sweat dripped down my face and I took my hands back again and she chuckled seeing me while I looked at her with helplessness, but her angelic eyes kept giving me the courage to do it, she was always my strength and never a weakness . I slowly gathered some strength and again moved my hands towards that little thing and slowly but carefully I took it in my arms and she helped me with it. She kept looking at my reactions, and I knew my reaction was like that of a surprised and wondering three year old. I kept looking at that little wonder in my hands, it had its eyes closed and looked really tired. I keenly looked at its facial features with wonder, I carefully cuddled it more into my arms to comfort it, and a smile appeared over the little face along with a weird noise and some tiny movements, but it did cheer me up and a smile managed to form over my face. Nisha leaned onto my shoulder and encircled her arms around me and kept looking at us with those tired eyes, and I kissed on the top of her head for gifting me this precious little thing on my birthday. I wrapped an arm around her while my other hand kept that little thing safe in my embrace.

I looked at those little tired eyes, they resembled nisha's and that little nose and the forehead was completely mine; that soft and smooth skin was still pallid and I could see a beautiful skin tone slowly taking place, and it was just as hers. I slowly fondled my fingers over the little thing's cheeks and a smile appeared over its face, that smile was cute yet mine, completely mine! That combination of both our features made it really unique; it was a perfect blend of us as it was made out of our love. I looked at those tiny hands which were clutching onto my shirt softly, I chuckled as this was only nisha's habit, that whenever I cuddle her up she would clutch onto my shirt the same way, I took those tiny fingers in mine and played with them, I got startled as those tiny hands caught my finger and kept it in its mouth, I smiled and cautiously removed my finger from its mouth, but slowly the facial features changed and my little daughter started wailing, I got worried as it crumbled my heart, and nisha who was in a deep slumber in my embrace woke up hearing the wails, she took the baby in her arms carefully and then looked at me questioningly, I told her how I pulled out my finger from her mouth, making painful expressions and she chuckled seeing my expressions and pulled my cheek so hard that they had to become red.

Have you thought of some name for her..?"She asked me and I nodded my head negatively and then positively just like a kid, and when she questioned me through her eyes,

Advika...cause she is unique...!" I said with a smile and she nodded her head, and my daughter who was crying till now paused for a while, as she heard that and smiled and when we smiled seeing her, she started wailing again.

Nautanki..."I said and we kissed her little forehead together and she chuckled again.

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Edited by sam_premc - 9 years ago
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Thats so cute!.. aweee... I am loving the improvement in your writing Baba... You make me sp proud of you❤️
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Awwee !!!
Such a Beautiful Start ...!!!
Loved it Sooo Much ...!!!
You have Written it So Beautifully Annie ...!!!
It Was Sooo Lovely ...!!!
Continue Soon ...!!!
Thanks for the PM ...!!!
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Ah.. i loved the concept behna... 😉
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Such a beautiful part it was ... And a nice concept ...😊
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Aww...its so so so damm cute
Very lovely dear
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pls continue soon 😊
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Amazing start and superb concept 👏
Really really loved it...
Very beautifully written...
Continue soon!!!
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful mumma...
Adu is so cute😳
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Annie I have written nisha's dairy jaldi post bhi hoga
you wrote kabir's😆
nicely written😆👏
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unres
annie after a dark one u give us this cute one😉
lovely annie😃
the way u described how nibir's daughter resembled them was the best part for me❤️
kabir scared that he might hurt her aww god why does he always has to be sho cutee😳
Edited by mishrialways - 9 years ago

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