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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Niya_789
Thats so cute!.. aweee... I am loving the improvement in your writing Baba... You make me sp proud of you❤️

aww...thankoo so much niyuu!😳

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Amina...
Awwee !!!
Such a Beautiful Start ...!!!
Loved it Sooo Much ...!!!
You have Written it So Beautifully Annie ...!!!
It Was Sooo Lovely ...!!!
Continue Soon ...!!!
Thanks for the PM ...!!!

thankoo amina!😳

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: mansi_as18
Ah.. i loved the concept behna... 😉

thankoo behna!!😳

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: poornima_15
Such a beautiful part it was ... And a nice concept ...😊

thankoo pooh!😳

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Snow12345654321
Aww...its so so so damm cute
Very lovely dear
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pls continue soon 😊

thankoo sanjana!😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Aww that was so cute!

Everything from the start where he was scared to hold the baby to the very end where he names his daughter was so so adorable!

Especially loved the part where he notices the features the baby has acquired from them! Lovely!

Very nice concept annie! 👍🏼

Thanks for pm 😊

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arviabhigya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Such an beautiful start Annie😳😳😳

You have penned down Kabir's thoughts so well👏👏👏

His nervousness, excitement, fear is described so well😳👏

Advika What a beautiful name❤️

Nibir ki beti born on Kabir's birthday😳😳😳

What a birthday gift indeed❤️

Love how Kabir is hesitant to hold Advika but Nisha manages to convince him and he gives in😳

Kabir's reaction oh holding her was chooo adorable😳🤗

Love how he carefully examining her features and she is wonderful combination of both😳😳

Indeed a symbol of them and their love❤️

Love how her habits are similar to Nisha's😳

Absolutely loved that part where Advika kept putting Kabir's fingers in he mouth and Kabir was trying to remove them😳 It was super adorable and cute😳🤗

Love how she started crying and Kabir got so worried😆😳😃

Also love when Nisha asked Kabir if he had thought a name for the little one, he nodded negatively and then did the complete opposite😆 He was behaving like an adorable 3 yr old😆

And that last part where Advika stops crying listening to her name and then starts crying again as soon as Nibir smiled at her 😆😳

She is indeed a nautanki like her parents😆😆

Indeed such a sweet, wonderful chapter🤗

This is for u Beta🤗 For the improvement u have shown as a author. Your writing has got mature and better😃 And I very proud of you😉

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anmol333
Amazing start and superb concept 👏
Really really loved it...
Very beautifully written...
Continue soon!!!
Thanks for pm

thankoo anmol!😳

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...
Beautiful mumma...
Adu is so cute😳

thankoo betu!😳

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@Klaustrophillic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: mishrialways
Annie I have written nisha's dairy jaldi post bhi hoga
you wrote kabir's😆
nicely written😆👏
res for full comment
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annie after a dark one u give us this cute one😉
lovely annie😃
the way u described how nibir's daughter resembled them was the best part for me❤️
kabir scared that he might hurt her aww god why does he always has to be sho cutee😳

aww..thankoo ritika!😳

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