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Posted: 18 years ago
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Heyyy guys well i decided to start a fanfic for one of my fav couples 😳, I must say the last time i wrote a fanfic for robbie and kasturi, I enjoyed it and i updated often but then the show sucked so i decided to change my mind and havent updated it. well hopefully this show wont let me down like kasturi.

Neways Here is your Title

I Want to Date Kabir Khan (or do i?)

The story's scenario goes somewhat like this. Kabir khan is a huge actor who is given many awards and attention from the ladies for his ever so dramatic roles. Sooner or later though he takes a break from the acting industry and when he attempts to come back with a bang...it fails. Poor Kabir searches for his long lost fame when his brother (Azaan) suggests he should start a reality show kind of like the bachelor and find one special girl to get him publicity. Kabir doesnt want to agree but he eventually does.

On the other hand we have Afreen, a hard working, simple girl who gets forced onto the realtiy show by her aunt, and soon realizes she is falling in love with kabir...or is it really kabir that she is falling in love with?

Yes its based on the film I want to Date Ryan Banks 😳

Characters!

The khans...

Kabir: the rich, somewhat snobby actor whos only passion is to get back to his former star status at any cost. A bit of a bossy, know it all guy. He trusts Azaan with his life, but somehow doesnt trust this idea.

Azaan: Mr. Workaholic, whos only goal in life is to one day start his own management group. But for now Azaan works for his brother Kabir, and though hes against dating show, he sees they are popular and that is the only way that he can get his brother back on his feet. Always wanted to find love, but cant find the girl and doesnt have the time.

Afreen: the small town middle girl who owns her dead father's coffee shop. Her education was cut short, and she moved in with her aunt and uncle. She has been hurt alot when it comes to love and decided that if love wants to find her it can but she aint looking. She runs around all day looking out for everyone else except her. She has a strong head on her shoulders, and never lets anyone take advantage of her.

Jennifer: Afreen's closet and best friend who always is trying to set Afreen up on dates with men. Shes a bubbly personality who Afreen tells everything to, but Jennifer can really stand up for Afreen.

Sana Aunty: the aunt who took in Afreen once her parents died, she always wanted to best for Afreen, and she is willing to get it for her even when Afreen refuses.

Arjun: best friend of Azaan and Kabir, who helps during the show and kabir's problems alot!

*MORE CHARACTERS ADDED AS WE GO ALONG 😃

PLZ REPLY IF U WOULD LIKE ME TO CONTINUEEEE =)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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heres...
PART 1

*It starts off with Afreen running in the rain to the door of the coffee shop and attempting to unlock it but her hands are too slippery, she finally unlocks it and bursts inside and closes the door behind her. She put the open sign in the window and turns on the lights, she moves a couple of chairs and then goes to the kitchen of the coffee shop. We see her hands arranging the sugar, choclate flakes and other things in order and then we hear someone yell her name and she turns around and we see a close up on Afreen's beautiful face.*

Jennifer: AFREEN! AFREEN!

Afreen: itna jilao math, im right here jenny

Jennifer: so tell me *grabbing Afreen's hand* kaisi rahi tumari date? I know hes handsome-

Afreen: *putting up her hand* please jenny, us date ki tho bath math karo...jenny please just be my best friend, meri match maker nahin

Jennifer: kyun kya hua?

Afreen: itna rude aadmi maana meri zindagi main nahin dekha, aur apna aap sa itna smart samaj tha hai, family oriented tho bilkul nahin tha

Jennifer: okay okay...koi bi tumari standard ka liya teek nahin hai

Afreen: hai na

Jennifer: kahan?

Afreen: when i meet him then ill show you. Aur jenny come help me, coffee shop is time busy ho jatha hai
Okay?

Jennifer: likyan meri hair appointment thi

*Afreen raises her eyebrow*

Jennifer: fine fine

AT KABIR'S OFFICE
*Kabir rolls around in his chair and checks out the lady through his office window, he smiles to himself but he is brought back to his senses by the knock of the door, and he turns around in his chair so we can see his face fully and in walks Azaan, perfectly dressed with his ever so cute glasses carrying a file. He walks over to Kabir's desk and throws the file onto it.*

Kabir: yeh kya hai?

Azaan: proposal

Kabir: Azaan not right now buddy

Azaan: kabir, please ek minute ka liye yahan dekho...look i have worked hard on this proposal, me and arjun both, it will definitley cause a publicity stir

Kabir: kya hai

Azaan: just read it, and tell me how you feel

Kabir: *sighs* and takes the file into his hand*
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this is awesome
i cant wait for the first last
pls post it soon
take care
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome first part
pls cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks goldie 😃

here ya go...

Part 2

*A startled Afreen wakes up to the alarm clock and looks around, realizing she is in the coffee shop. She looks down at the piles of papers she was sleeping on and sighs, she begins to rub her temples from all the stress. Jennifer walks into the coffee shop and sees Afreen rubbing her temples*

Jennifer: Dekha na afreen, itna kam sar ka liye acha nahin hotha

Afreen: Jen, please apna band baja shuru math karna

Jennifer: well excuse me for being concerned, tum rath bar ghar nahin gaayi, aur yahein ho, tuma patha hai ka sana aunty phone karkar pagal hogi thi

Afreen: Hai allah! Sana Aunty ko maan phone karna bhool gaayi

Jennifer: Hai, tuma tho kam sa kahbhi fursat nahin milthi

Afreen: dekho maan fresh ho kar aathi hun, tum coffee shop teek 8 baja kol thana

Jennifer: hai hai I know, and please go shower, smell aana laagi hai

Afreen: eh?! *smacks Jennifer on the head, Jennifer laughs and they both laugh and Afreen leaves.*

*Jennifer is working at the coffee shop waiting for Afreen to come back and just then Sana Aunty walks in*

Jennifer: Aunty!

Sana Aunty: Jennifer afreen kahan hai?

Jennifer: who abhi aa rahi hai, rath bar woh yahein thi

Sana Aunty: hai Allah! Yeh larkhi ko kam ka siwa kuch aatha bi hai ya nahin? India ki har larkhi chathi hai ka ek din uska liye ek raj kumar aaya ga…likyan ya afreen-

Jennifer: hai aunty iska tho ilaaj karna para ga

Afreen: *walks in* kiska ilaaj?

Sana Aunty: *smacks Afreen on the head lightly* tera ilaaj-

Afreen: Please aap bi shuru math hoyia, mujhe malum hai aap yahi kaha gi ka afreen tuma aab ek acha larkha tund na chahiya

Sana Aunty: aur is main buri bath kya hai?

Jennifer: correct

Afreen: tu tho chup hi ra, aunty ki chamchee

Jennifer: eh! *starts chasing afreen, afreen begins to run and both girls run laughing*

Sana Aunty: *to herself* hai Allah, shayad afreen ko malum nahin ka hum safar ka bina zindagi adhoori hai, aab humara sahara ka sath kitna chir jiya gi *looks at Afreen and Jennifer laughing*

AT KABIR'S OFFICE

*Kabir sits on his chair, almost half asleep when Azaan and Arjun walk in*

Arjun: kabir!

*Kabir startled wakes up and rubs his eyes*

Azaan: acha tho kam ka time aap sau raha ho

Kabir: woh bus-

Arjun: acha acha whatever, tum huma bathao ka tumna humara proposal para ya nahin?

Kabir: oh yea!

Arjun + Azaan: kaisa laaga?

Kabir: not happening

Azaan: likyan bhai kyun?

Kabir: kyun ki, yeh mujhse nahin hoga

Arjun: Kyun? Huma tho laaga ke 25 larkhian ko date karna tumara sapna ho ga

Kabir: hai, likyan jo tum propose kar raha ho, who tho thora different hai

Azaan: problem kya hai bhai?

Kabir: tum thono chatha ho ka maan 25 larkhian ko date karun…yeh saab tho teek hai…tv pa yeh show broadcast ho…yeh bi teek hai…likyan i choose one girl in the end to marry….im not looking for love guys

Azaan: hai likyan aaj kaal aisa bachelor shows bohoth popular hona laaga hai

Arjun: aur tum koi aam bachelor nahin ho, ur kabir khan, former top star of bollywood, yeh show will give you media attention, and movie offers tho itna aaya ga, tum dekhna

Kabir: likyan phir mujhe ek larkhi ka saath rehna para ga, she will get her emotions involved…aur phir maan kya karun ga?

Arjun: date her after the show, break up with her, and tell then press that we had too many differences, its all about using the girl

Azaan: nahin nahin, we cant use people

Kabir: tho tum kya chatha ho ka maan shaadi kar lun? Azaan i don't want to settle down at this age, yeh show nahin hoga

Arjun: shit…

Azaan: *thinking* okay idea!

Kabir: kya

Azaan: don't propose to her in the end, propose if you want to, see it as a chance to meet a nice girl you could possibly marry in the future

Kabir: Azaan maan koi one woman man nahin hu

Arjun: Aaara duffer, koshish tho karo, shayad tuma ek larkhi kaafi pasand aaya gi

Azaan: yeh!

Kabir: likyan-

Azaan: kabir, itna networks yeh show broadcast karna ka liye thayar hai

Arjun: just say yes

Kabir: fine!

Azaan + Arjun: YESSS!

Arjun: dekhna larkhian ki line laaga gi

Kabir: chalo dekh tha hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lol...do continue..i wanna c how ull bring AA into this
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
hey
plzzzzzzz continue yaar, your fanfic is great and i'm waiting to see how AA fall in love 😳
chal cya
plzzzzzzzz update kar de
thankx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey plzzzz continue...its interesting....would like to know what happens next...

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