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<font size="4">Dil ko tujhse bedili h Dil ko h tujhse hi pyaar </font>
Title of myy ff my second ff okkk there is a small character sketch of lakhan and poonam
LAKHAN THAKUR
Lakhan thakur a successful businessmen of Patna , very reserved person . Anger is his second name , no one can cut his word ,defeat is not in his dictionary . he never ever bow against anyone , very egoistic person .
He relates to a high profile family have power and money in his hand since his childhood .
POONAM
A sweet loving careless girl . full of life wanna enjoy every moment of her life . outspoken what is in her heart is on her mouth . she relates to a simple middle class family .they love each other a lot .
Mithlesh is the elder brother of poonam who works in the company of lakhan thakur
Okkk now first part it can be quite lengthy so bear for me 😊
P.S : index below
PART 1:
Poonam and Mithlesh live in Patna .
It was a lazy Sunday , sunlight are falling on poonam face but because of her laziness she didn't get up , Mithlesh call her but she didn't reply
Mithlesh : poonam uth jao , 10: 30 baj chuke h ladki ab to uth ja
Poonam make face and put her blanket over her face .
Mithlesh : ye aise nhi manegi hame der ho rahi h poonam uth jao
Poonam didn't reply not even move
Mithlesh : abhi batate h ise
He goes to bathroom fill up the mug with water and empty it over poonam .
Mithlesh : utho utho barish
Poonam in her sleepy mod
Poonam : barish barish !! Kahan h
Mithlesh ; laughing han uth jao nhi to dobara kar dengey
Poonam scream bhaiya kya h Sunday ko bhi sone nhi dete aap itni jaldi jga diya hunhhh
Mithlesh : jaldi 11 bajne wala h dophar honi wali h , aur tum janti ho hame bahar Jana hota h chalo utho darwaza band karo chal kar
Poonam get down from bed murming Hunnhhh utho utho
Mithlesh acha huliya thek karo apna touches her hair ye dekho aisa lag raha h chidiya ka ghosla
Poonam : bhaiya aap ko der nhi ho rahi jayiye . ( poonam is still angry )
Mithlesh : acha gussa khatm karo tumhare fav rasgulle le kar ayengey thek h and touches her cheek
Poonam : han thek h and hugs him .
Mithlesh leaves poonam close the door and freshen up and come outside
Poonam took a glass and pour apple juice in it take two three slices of bread with butter ate them . now , her breakfast is done she look at the house it was dusty , she has to clean it up .
Poonam was wearing a loose long top cum t- shirt with two pockets of pink colour and a dhoti of black colour she took his scarf and tie it on her head as kashmiri girls tie , some of her hair are still sneaking out from her , then she switch on the TV and tune in the music channel , she quickly start to collect all the clothes and things which are here and there and starts putting them into place and start to cleaning the floor with the boom . and in between she us singing the songs which are coming on channel
Bheegi Siii hannn bhaagi si meri baazuoon mai samayee lala lala lallla
After cleaning the whole house she went to terrace and was planting a plant in the pot when someone ring the bell . poonam look from the balcony a person was standing outside their door , poonam put her hair behind which are covering her vision and because of that she put some soil at her nose she came down
Poonam opens the door and found a tall dark handsome hank who was wearing a white t- shirt and a cargo with goggles and was busy doing something on his cell phone
Poonam : han ji, kaun
Lakhan look at her she was looking dusty , her clothes were also dirty but yet she was looking so gorgeous , cute and innocent and her innocent is increase by her nose which is blankened due to soil . lakhan was lost in that innocent beauty .
Poonam : excuse me kis se milna h
Poonam Words bring him back in the re world , he remove his google
Lakhan : wo ye mithlesh ka ghar h
Poonam : han hai aapko kya kaam h ( ek dam hadki mai )
Lakhan : wo office ka khuch kaam h
Poonam : par bhaiya to ghar par nhi h aap apna msg hame de dijiye ham unhe bata dengey
Lakhan : nhi , abhi kaam h
Poonam : to aap call kar lijiye
In between all this loud sound of honey Singh song sound is coming
Angreezi beat teee
Lakhan thinks in his mind did I look like a fool to her that I didn't call him .
Lakhan : ji kiya tha par pick nhi kiya
Poonam: han bhaiya cricket khel rahe hongey , aap ke boss kai pas dimag nhi h Sunday ko bhi kaam had h
Lakhan : koi idea h kab tak wapas ayengey
Poonam : 1 ghante tak aa jayengey aap aisa kariye 1,ghante baad ayiga okkk
Lakhan : nhi , wait kar lengey
Poonam : OK , as u wish and shut the door . lakhan was stunned how can anyone be so rude she didn't offer him in . this is the first ever time when someone didn't give him importance otherwise people fall for him . it was a new experience for him
Poonam : again opens the door and said mind mat karna par ham akele h ghar par aur aap ek stranger ho pahle nhi dekha aapko to andar nhi bula saktey to aap idhar ye chair h is par comfortable ho jayiye okkk and with a smile she again close the door . lakhan look at the chair which are inside her house small verenda .lakhan sit on that , around 1 hour passed but lakhan was not bored as he was listing all the songs which are playing on TV including poonam voice.
Mithlesh enter and sees him . lakhan is sitting there his eyes are closed .
Mithlesh : arrey sir aap yahan hamare ghar par
Lakhan open his eyes and stand up
Lakhan : han wo wo sharma project ki file chahiye thi
Mithlesh : arey sir to hame bula lete aapne kyun takleef ki
Lakhan : nhi ham yahan se nikal rage they to socha lete chale
Mithlesh ; ander aayiye ,
And Mithilesh ring the bell . poonam opens it
Mithlesh : sir please ander ayiye
Lakhan looks at poonam like he is taking permission to get in . poonam found it wiered and leave from there . Mithlesh move to drawing room , lakhan follow him , mithlesh offer him chair to sit .
Mithlesh : sir , bas ek min mai aaye
Mithlesh go inside ,
Poonam : laughing arrey bhaiya hame nhi malum tha ki wo aapke boss h bechara ander nhi bulaya sorry bhaiya
Mithlesh : sorry kyun hamne hi MNA kiya h aur acha kiya dekhtey h kya kar lengey job se nikal dengey to chodo dusri mil jayegi par meri bahen se jayda imp thodi h koi bhi job aur us hadse se kai baad bahut chinta rahti h tumhari hame
Poonam : arrey bhaiya chodiye purani baatein and smile Mithlesh smile .
Mithlesh : poonam ye rasgulle , aur Jo snacks h ghar Par wo bhi de do
Poonam become angry
Poonam : par bhaiya wo to aap hamare liye laye they na
Mithlesh : beta aur la dengey , pls mera bachha jaldi se plate mai nikal de in sab ko .
Poonam : hunhhh
And put all the things in the plate and give it to Mithlesh
Poonam : sab kaam kar diya h ab nahane ja rahe h thek h
Mithlesh nods okkk
After about half an hour lakhan cane out of the house mithlesh also come with him and greet him good bye , Mithlesh come inside lakhan was about to leave when few drops of water fell on his face and neck he turn and wat his eyes captured was a pure beauty , she was simply looking just awesome , she was putting her clothes on the string on their house roof . her open hair and half wet hair are doing nothing but just enhancing her beauty , she put the last cloth and move from there , lakhan didn't want that he wanna see her but she is gone , lakhan sit inside his black ciaz and leave .
After reaching his home , he freshen up and was relaxing himself on moving chair .
He thought how lucky he was , he was thinking that he has lost her ( poonam ) but no the destiny had again given him a chance again to get his love , poonam , he remember when he saw her first time around two years no no he correct himself it was one year ten month in begusarai . she didn't change a bit she was the same that outspoken that beautiful . the first girl whose attitude and beauty make his heart skip a beat , the first one for which he was badly fall and want her in his life forever to be his side for the rest of the life , but something happened and he has loosen her but this time he wouldn't let that happen . he made a determined thought that she will be his .
He remember when first time he saw poonam back 2 years . he was in begusarai driving his car but as he was not on the main rain he was inside the city main market there was so much rush around and it is impossible for him to cross that crowdy place by car so finally he came out of the car stopping it on the side .he call someone to bring bike for him he was busy in his mobile when someone's voice disturb him he look at the place from where that voice was coming he found a beauty there was poonam in parrot green color patiyala suit with white stole which has cotton balls on the corners and was wrapped around her neck , she was scolding a guy and was too angry her nose become red cause of that
Poonam : arrey kya h ??? Kab se dekh rahe h dhakka mare ja rahe ho
That men :ham kahan dhakka mar rahe h bheed hi h itni
Najma stops her
Najma : poonam chalo jaghda mat karo poonam stare at her and make a gesture like to shut her up
Poonam : abhi chappal nikal kar do lagayengey na to bheed sannate mai badal jayegi samjhe
That men : arrey
Poonam : ka arrey han , ek to choti upar se sinajori hmm
People around there gather one of them ask poonam
Arrey beta kya hua and poonam said aarey bhaiya dekhiye ek to badtameezi kar raha h upar se jaghda bhi kar raha h , look towards that men kyun kya samjh rakha begusarai kai logon ko bahut mar khaogey samjge
All the crowd han han ladki ko chef raha h maro isko and that men run away poonam smiles and leave , and lakhan who was watching all this admires poonam , poonam chatting with najma leave from front of her way he was staring her
Poonam : najma chalo ek surprise dekhatey h
Najma : han , ab dekha bhi do subhah se hamare kaan paka rahi ho
Lakhan was still looking at her she was going far away from her, a boy came up with bike and call lakhan
Boy : bhaiya ji , ye lijiye bike
Lakhan is lost in poonam thought didn't realise that someone is calling him . that boy came down from bike and touch his shoulder and again call him bhaiya ji lakhan come back into senses .
Lakhan : han , le aaye bike
Boy : ji bhaiya ye lijiye chabi ( key ) lakhan takes it and start the bike and goes into that direction where poonam has gone after five min he again sees her she was standing out a house
Poonam : ye dekho ( very happily)
Najma : ye ye bullet kahan se mili tumhe in so shocked mode
Poonam : aman ki hai , hamne mangi aur usne de di lekin sirf 2 ganton ( hour) kai liye mad sad face
Najma : acha usne de bhi di
Poonam : kya zinda nhi rahna h use Jo nhi dega , ab ye sab chodo jaldi se baitho thoda ghum kai aatey h very excitingly she said
Najma : nhi tum pagal ho hame nhi marna abhi , aur mithlesh bhaiya ko pta chala to ??? Aur upar se jaghda bhi kiya h tumne pata nhi kya karengey
Poonam : bhaiya ki kaise pta chega chalo ab bas chup chap baith jao , ki yahan aman kai ghar kai bahar hi khadi rahogi
After a lot of argument , poonam manages to satisfy najma that she will drive at low speed and finally nas sit on bullet ..
Okkk I'm stopping here
Dekh lo story samjh aa rahi ho to continue kare tum logo kai comment jaise hongey waisa hi karengey
Waise agar next part diya to next part mai there will be bike racing between poonam and lakhan .
This is for all who read it 🤗
INDEX
PART 2
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/133925074
PART 3:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/133982853
PART 4
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/134039706
Tum logo kai comment hi decide karengey whether I continue or not
<font size="4">Dil ko tujhse bedili h Dil ko h tujhse hi pyaar </font>
Title of myy ff my second ff okkk there is a small character sketch of lakhan and poonam
LAKHAN THAKUR
Lakhan thakur a successful businessmen of Patna , very reserved person . Anger is his second name , no one can cut his word ,defeat is not in his dictionary . he never ever bow against anyone , very egoistic person .
He relates to a high profile family have power and money in his hand since his childhood .
POONAM
A sweet loving careless girl . full of life wanna enjoy every moment of her life . outspoken what is in her heart is on her mouth . she relates to a simple middle class family .they love each other a lot .
Mithlesh is the elder brother of poonam who works in the company of lakhan thakur
Okkk now first part it can be quite lengthy so bear for me 😊
P.S : index below
PART 1:
Poonam and Mithlesh live in Patna .
It was a lazy Sunday , sunlight are falling on poonam face but because of her laziness she didn't get up , Mithlesh call her but she didn't reply
Mithlesh : poonam uth jao , 10: 30 baj chuke h ladki ab to uth ja
Poonam make face and put her blanket over her face .
Mithlesh : ye aise nhi manegi hame der ho rahi h poonam uth jao
Poonam didn't reply not even move
Mithlesh : abhi batate h ise
He goes to bathroom fill up the mug with water and empty it over poonam .
Mithlesh : utho utho barish
Poonam in her sleepy mod
Poonam : barish barish !! Kahan h
Mithlesh ; laughing han uth jao nhi to dobara kar dengey
Poonam scream bhaiya kya h Sunday ko bhi sone nhi dete aap itni jaldi jga diya hunhhh
Mithlesh : jaldi 11 bajne wala h dophar honi wali h , aur tum janti ho hame bahar Jana hota h chalo utho darwaza band karo chal kar
Poonam get down from bed murming Hunnhhh utho utho
Mithlesh acha huliya thek karo apna touches her hair ye dekho aisa lag raha h chidiya ka ghosla
Poonam : bhaiya aap ko der nhi ho rahi jayiye . ( poonam is still angry )
Mithlesh : acha gussa khatm karo tumhare fav rasgulle le kar ayengey thek h and touches her cheek
Poonam : han thek h and hugs him .
Mithlesh leaves poonam close the door and freshen up and come outside
Poonam took a glass and pour apple juice in it take two three slices of bread with butter ate them . now , her breakfast is done she look at the house it was dusty , she has to clean it up .
Poonam was wearing a loose long top cum t- shirt with two pockets of pink colour and a dhoti of black colour she took his scarf and tie it on her head as kashmiri girls tie , some of her hair are still sneaking out from her , then she switch on the TV and tune in the music channel , she quickly start to collect all the clothes and things which are here and there and starts putting them into place and start to cleaning the floor with the boom . and in between she us singing the songs which are coming on channel
Bheegi Siii hannn bhaagi si meri baazuoon mai samayee lala lala lallla
After cleaning the whole house she went to terrace and was planting a plant in the pot when someone ring the bell . poonam look from the balcony a person was standing outside their door , poonam put her hair behind which are covering her vision and because of that she put some soil at her nose she came down
Poonam opens the door and found a tall dark handsome hank who was wearing a white t- shirt and a cargo with goggles and was busy doing something on his cell phone
Poonam : han ji, kaun
Lakhan look at her she was looking dusty , her clothes were also dirty but yet she was looking so gorgeous , cute and innocent and her innocent is increase by her nose which is blankened due to soil . lakhan was lost in that innocent beauty .
Poonam : excuse me kis se milna h
Poonam Words bring him back in the re world , he remove his google
Lakhan : wo ye mithlesh ka ghar h
Poonam : han hai aapko kya kaam h ( ek dam hadki mai )
Lakhan : wo office ka khuch kaam h
Poonam : par bhaiya to ghar par nhi h aap apna msg hame de dijiye ham unhe bata dengey
Lakhan : nhi , abhi kaam h
Poonam : to aap call kar lijiye
In between all this loud sound of honey Singh song sound is coming
Angreezi beat teee
Lakhan thinks in his mind did I look like a fool to her that I didn't call him .
Lakhan : ji kiya tha par pick nhi kiya
Poonam: han bhaiya cricket khel rahe hongey , aap ke boss kai pas dimag nhi h Sunday ko bhi kaam had h
Lakhan : koi idea h kab tak wapas ayengey
Poonam : 1 ghante tak aa jayengey aap aisa kariye 1,ghante baad ayiga okkk
Lakhan : nhi , wait kar lengey
Poonam : OK , as u wish and shut the door . lakhan was stunned how can anyone be so rude she didn't offer him in . this is the first ever time when someone didn't give him importance otherwise people fall for him . it was a new experience for him
Poonam : again opens the door and said mind mat karna par ham akele h ghar par aur aap ek stranger ho pahle nhi dekha aapko to andar nhi bula saktey to aap idhar ye chair h is par comfortable ho jayiye okkk and with a smile she again close the door . lakhan look at the chair which are inside her house small verenda .lakhan sit on that , around 1 hour passed but lakhan was not bored as he was listing all the songs which are playing on TV including poonam voice.
Mithlesh enter and sees him . lakhan is sitting there his eyes are closed .
Mithlesh : arrey sir aap yahan hamare ghar par
Lakhan open his eyes and stand up
Lakhan : han wo wo sharma project ki file chahiye thi
Mithlesh : arey sir to hame bula lete aapne kyun takleef ki
Lakhan : nhi ham yahan se nikal rage they to socha lete chale
Mithlesh ; ander aayiye ,
And Mithilesh ring the bell . poonam opens it
Mithlesh : sir please ander ayiye
Lakhan looks at poonam like he is taking permission to get in . poonam found it wiered and leave from there . Mithlesh move to drawing room , lakhan follow him , mithlesh offer him chair to sit .
Mithlesh : sir , bas ek min mai aaye
Mithlesh go inside ,
Poonam : laughing arrey bhaiya hame nhi malum tha ki wo aapke boss h bechara ander nhi bulaya sorry bhaiya
Mithlesh : sorry kyun hamne hi MNA kiya h aur acha kiya dekhtey h kya kar lengey job se nikal dengey to chodo dusri mil jayegi par meri bahen se jayda imp thodi h koi bhi job aur us hadse se kai baad bahut chinta rahti h tumhari hame
Poonam : arrey bhaiya chodiye purani baatein and smile Mithlesh smile .
Mithlesh : poonam ye rasgulle , aur Jo snacks h ghar Par wo bhi de do
Poonam become angry
Poonam : par bhaiya wo to aap hamare liye laye they na
Mithlesh : beta aur la dengey , pls mera bachha jaldi se plate mai nikal de in sab ko .
Poonam : hunhhh
And put all the things in the plate and give it to Mithlesh
Poonam : sab kaam kar diya h ab nahane ja rahe h thek h
Mithlesh nods okkk
After about half an hour lakhan cane out of the house mithlesh also come with him and greet him good bye , Mithlesh come inside lakhan was about to leave when few drops of water fell on his face and neck he turn and wat his eyes captured was a pure beauty , she was simply looking just awesome , she was putting her clothes on the string on their house roof . her open hair and half wet hair are doing nothing but just enhancing her beauty , she put the last cloth and move from there , lakhan didn't want that he wanna see her but she is gone , lakhan sit inside his black ciaz and leave .
After reaching his home , he freshen up and was relaxing himself on moving chair .
He thought how lucky he was , he was thinking that he has lost her ( poonam ) but no the destiny had again given him a chance again to get his love , poonam , he remember when he saw her first time around two years no no he correct himself it was one year ten month in begusarai . she didn't change a bit she was the same that outspoken that beautiful . the first girl whose attitude and beauty make his heart skip a beat , the first one for which he was badly fall and want her in his life forever to be his side for the rest of the life , but something happened and he has loosen her but this time he wouldn't let that happen . he made a determined thought that she will be his .
He remember when first time he saw poonam back 2 years . he was in begusarai driving his car but as he was not on the main rain he was inside the city main market there was so much rush around and it is impossible for him to cross that crowdy place by car so finally he came out of the car stopping it on the side .he call someone to bring bike for him he was busy in his mobile when someone's voice disturb him he look at the place from where that voice was coming he found a beauty there was poonam in parrot green color patiyala suit with white stole which has cotton balls on the corners and was wrapped around her neck , she was scolding a guy and was too angry her nose become red cause of that
Poonam : arrey kya h ??? Kab se dekh rahe h dhakka mare ja rahe ho
That men :ham kahan dhakka mar rahe h bheed hi h itni
Najma stops her
Najma : poonam chalo jaghda mat karo poonam stare at her and make a gesture like to shut her up
Poonam : abhi chappal nikal kar do lagayengey na to bheed sannate mai badal jayegi samjhe
That men : arrey
Poonam : ka arrey han , ek to choti upar se sinajori hmm
People around there gather one of them ask poonam
Arrey beta kya hua and poonam said aarey bhaiya dekhiye ek to badtameezi kar raha h upar se jaghda bhi kar raha h , look towards that men kyun kya samjh rakha begusarai kai logon ko bahut mar khaogey samjge
All the crowd han han ladki ko chef raha h maro isko and that men run away poonam smiles and leave , and lakhan who was watching all this admires poonam , poonam chatting with najma leave from front of her way he was staring her
Poonam : najma chalo ek surprise dekhatey h
Najma : han , ab dekha bhi do subhah se hamare kaan paka rahi ho
Lakhan was still looking at her she was going far away from her, a boy came up with bike and call lakhan
Boy : bhaiya ji , ye lijiye bike
Lakhan is lost in poonam thought didn't realise that someone is calling him . that boy came down from bike and touch his shoulder and again call him bhaiya ji lakhan come back into senses .
Lakhan : han , le aaye bike
Boy : ji bhaiya ye lijiye chabi ( key ) lakhan takes it and start the bike and goes into that direction where poonam has gone after five min he again sees her she was standing out a house
Poonam : ye dekho ( very happily)
Najma : ye ye bullet kahan se mili tumhe in so shocked mode
Poonam : aman ki hai , hamne mangi aur usne de di lekin sirf 2 ganton ( hour) kai liye mad sad face
Najma : acha usne de bhi di
Poonam : kya zinda nhi rahna h use Jo nhi dega , ab ye sab chodo jaldi se baitho thoda ghum kai aatey h very excitingly she said
Najma : nhi tum pagal ho hame nhi marna abhi , aur mithlesh bhaiya ko pta chala to ??? Aur upar se jaghda bhi kiya h tumne pata nhi kya karengey
Poonam : bhaiya ki kaise pta chega chalo ab bas chup chap baith jao , ki yahan aman kai ghar kai bahar hi khadi rahogi
After a lot of argument , poonam manages to satisfy najma that she will drive at low speed and finally nas sit on bullet ..
Okkk I'm stopping here
Dekh lo story samjh aa rahi ho to continue kare tum logo kai comment jaise hongey waisa hi karengey
Waise agar next part diya to next part mai there will be bike racing between poonam and lakhan .
This is for all who read it 🤗
INDEX
PART 2
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/133925074
PART 3:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/133982853
PART 4
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/134039706
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