LaakhAmff Dilko tujhse bedili h,Dil ko h tujhsehi pyar pt 4u - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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cyndu : mujhse baat nahi arna ab 🤔


bishu : nice update 😛 🤣 i can still imagine his face eating mrchi filled pakore 🤣

wait what... laakhan is dadda ji's beta...🤔 🤣... another shock


keep writing 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..DRoadSoFar..

cyndu : mujhse baat nahi arna ab 🤔


bishu : nice update 😛 🤣 i can still imagine his face eating mrchi filled pakore 🤣

wait what... laakhan is dadda ji's beta...🤔 🤣... another shock


keep writing 🤗

thanks nihuu
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Abhi to aur bhi shock baki h 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ..DRoadSoFar..

cyndu : mujhse baat nahi arna ab 🤔


bishu : nice update 😛 🤣 i can still imagine his face eating mrchi filled pakore 🤣

wait what... laakhan is dadda ji's beta...🤔 🤣... another shock


keep writing 🤗

nihu maine kya kia mujhse q naraz hai tu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Lakhanchamach

nihu maine kya kia mujhse q naraz hai tu


its coz mera chapter update b ho gya magar tereko na dikha😡

ab to main pakka 2017 me next update doongi 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
bishu🤗
itne jabardast ideas aate kaha se tumhare pass😉😆
bt poor lakhan bechara ek jhalak k chakkar me kya kya karna par gaya🤣
poonam is no less itni nautanki😎
enjoyed fully dear👍🏼
update next soon and lenghty😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: lakhamcrazy

bishu🤗

itne jabardast ideas aate kaha se tumhare pass😉😆
bt poor lakhan bechara ek jhalak k chakkar me kya kya karna par gaya🤣
poonam is no less itni nautanki😎
enjoyed fully dear👍🏼
update next soon and lenghty😳


Muski 🤗

Mere ideas tum logo ko ache lagtey h iiye jabardast h meri jaan 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for reading dear 🤗
Edited by bishmakhan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hayee mera hero blue t-shirt me kitna handsome lag rha hoga...next part jaldi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome bishu abhi update kr next part mujhe sath me pdhna hai jldi kr aage kya hua
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Hello everyone , 🤗 may be ye part ki length thek lage tum logo ko 😊
PART 3 :
Next day after that mirchi pakoda incident .
Poonam was with anjali telling her about lakhan condition after eating that pakoda , she was laughing
Anjali : sach yaar tum bhi na bechare
Poonam : arrey yaar hame lga ki hbe mirchi to dali thi phir asar kyun nhi hua ???
And laugh again
Par ..par ..jab dekha hahaha bade rajnikanth ban rage they ab kabhi pakoda nh mangengey
Anjali : kahin wo kisi din Teri band na Baja de .
Poonam : hunhhh , wo kya band bajayengey ek no kai buddho lagtey h , ahimsa wadi and laugh again


At lakhan house around 9 pm
Lakhan was in his room checking some while sitting on sofa putting his legs on the table . guddi come to his room but she stop at the door and return after few min she again do this , and she done the same thing for about 4 times , fifth time when she was going back lakhan stops her and call her , she come in , he remove her leg and ask her sit , guddi quietly sit on the facing him . she was looking on the floor , lakhan ask
Lakhan : ka baat h , kab se dekh rage aati ho phir bhag jati ho and raised her one eyebrow kya baat h hmm
Guddi : wo bhaiya ,
Lakhan : haan , bolo sun rahe h , dar kahe rahi ho
Guddi : ham us din party mai gye they na doston kai sath
Lakhan : han to
Guddi : wahan khuch ladke pareshan kar rahe they hamne aur hamare doston ne un logo ko wahan se bahar nikalwa diya tha
Lakhan : to acha kiya ismai darne wali ka baat h
Guddi : bhaiya ab wo log roz college kai bahar aa jatey h , aur phir bus stand par bhi wahan ham akele hote h , hame bilkul bhi acha nhi lagta ..
Lakhan becomes angry
Jab tumko boltey h ki gadi le kar jao to pta nhi tum kaun sa independence ka bhoot sawar rahta tha
Guddi starts crying thek h ham ab car se hi jayengey
Lakhan : arrey , ro mat itti si baat hai na , tumko jaise Jana h waise jao kal bhi thek h ham dekhtey h un logo ko thek ab rona nhi jao so jao kal college bhi Jana h na ... chalo sabhash
Guddi goes to her room
NEXT DAY
Anjali and poonam are their way of college ,
Anjali : arrey , poonam tumhari wajah se aaj agar class miss hui na tooo..
Poonam : arrey nhi hogi
Anjali : ek to aaj koi auto bhi nhi mil.
They both are trying to stop auto when poonam sees a girl on the otherside of the road who is all alone and some 4-5 boys are teasing her , Poonam call anjali
Poonam : dekh yaar ye ladke us bechari ko pareshan kar rahe h chal madad kartey h
Anjali ; kahan kaun
Poonam : arrey wo dekho road kai us par chalo
Anjali ; par hamari class
Poonam looks at her angrily
Poonam : agar ham hote to bhi tum yahan karti , madad ki zarorat h use aur in jaise lafango ko achi tarah thek karna aata h hame
Anjali says okkk but before they can cross the road and help her a black duster stops near that girl and lakhan thakur in white t- shirt with denim, and with goggles gets out from the car , ya that girl is guudi and lakhan made a gesture like guddi to sit in car
Guddi does that , he comes in the front of the colour and with all his swag remove the goggle and give them a deadly look
One of the boy ask
Boy ; acha to tum bodyguard ho is ladki kai bachane aye ho
Lakhan : na na , bodyguard nhi Bhai h
Boy : acha to tum akele ham sab ko marogey in a mocking tone
Lakhan give a smrik and said
Lakhan : wo ka h na ki tum logo ko itni itni bhi aukat nhi h ki ham tum jaise tucchon ko mare , tum log mere level kai nhi ho ,
And stretch his both hands and jump on his bonet and sit , one left leg is open and the right is folded and rest his back at the front mirror of his car .
Then said
Lakhan : ham to yahan show dekhne aaye h , arrey show shuru kiya jae

Poonam who was standing on the other side of the road wasn't understanding Wats going on

As soon as lakhan utter these words around 5 people come out with hockey sticks and start beating that boys very badly ,
Anjali and poonam both are shocked , anjali said : ye tere boss h na
Poonam : nhi mere Bhai kai both of their eyes are widened
And lakhan is looking very calm
A policemen came there and try to stop them as they are doing all this on the main road , lakhan call that policemen
Poonam : ab kya hoga phas gye ye to
Anjali : hame nhi lagta , agar phasne ka darr hota to beech sadak aise na pitwatey

Lakhan : arrey daroga sahab idhar idhar
Policemen : to tum ye sab karwa rahe ho , jantey ho tum ko iskai liye andar bhi ...
Lakhan cut off his words
Lakhan : kahe kahe itni mehnat kar rahe h , and he had call someone Lakhan said : hello hain minister sahab sab badhiya
Minister : ji thakur sahab sab acha aapki kripa h , kaise yaad kiya
Lakhan: jra khuch personal kaam kar rahe h ye thoda inspector sahab ko gussa aa raha h jra samjha dijiye
And give mobile to that policemen
Policemen: jai hind sir
Minister : dekho wo Jo kar rahe h karne do tumko beech mai bolne ki zarorat nhi g samjhe niklo wahan se
Policemen : okkk sir
Policemen to lakhan : sir ye lijiye aap ka phone ham chaltey h
Lakhan nods okkk and said : jayda fikr mat kariye jaan se nhi mar rahe h , aur aapka hi kaam kar rahe h jayiye
That policemen leaves
Poonam ;arrey yaar anjali ham to buddho samjhe they inko par ye to ,kafi power wale lagtey h
Anjali nods in yes

Lakhan look at that boys they were now bleeding , then he looks at guddi who is inside the car , and ask her is this enough guddi says yes
Lakhan jumps off from the bonet and ask his men to stop then he walks towards them
Lakhan : main sargana , chief kaun h tum logo ka
All the boys point towards a boy who is in red T-shirt lakhan grab his collar
Lakhan : saale , hamare shaher mai rah kar hamari bahen ko pareshan karogey ,
That boy : nhi ab aage se kabhi dekgengey bhi nhi unki taraf
Lakhan : wo to malum h hamko , hamari ka kisi ki bhi bahen ki taraf dekhe na to is bar zinda ho agli bar..
That boy bend down on her and hold lakhan's leg is bar maaf kar dijiye
Lakhan took him up
Lakhan : ye hamari bahen kai ek sirf ek ansu ka gussa tha bas , kismat achi h tum logo ki agar wo jayda roti to aur zayda pittey tum log
And lakhan moves a step back
Lakhan : rumaal h tum logo kai pas
All the boys see him in a confused way

Lakhan : Abe sunai nhi deta ka ek bar mai
All boys : hai hai
Lakhan : nikalo sab aur apne apne chehre par dalo jaldi
All of them take out their hanky and put on their face
Lakhan calls guddi , guddi come out of the car and stand next to lakhan
Lakhan : chalo sab ko ek jor dar lappad lagao fatafat
Guddi ; par bhaiya
Lakhan : dekho dhoop bahut tez h aur dimag hamara gram to Jo kah rage h fatafat karo phir college bhi chodna h tumko .
Guddi : ji bhaiya
And slaps each of them very hard
Lakhan : jee baat , ye tumne ki thakuron wali baat jao ab , aur tum log bhi
All the boys quickly leave from there Lakhan sees his hand his palm was a bit red coz of the blood of that boy which he holded from collar , one of his men offer him water to wash his hand , and he ask why he put hanky on their faces
Lakhan : arrey bewakoof jab ham unko hanth nhi lagaye to ka hamari bahen lagayegi ,
lakhan wash his hand and move towards guddi and by his two fingers he order his men to leave , then he took out his hanky dry up his hands
Guddi comes to him and hug him , lakhan give a smile and tap on her head
Lakhan : agar hamko pahle bata deti to kya ho jata ..
Guddi : sorry bhaiya , ab sab bata dengey aapko
Lakhan breaks the hug and said
Lakhan : hmm , chalo ab waise lappad jor dar tha ,
And they both started laughing
And then they both sit inside car and leaves for guddi college
Poonam and anjali who are watching all this ,
Poonam : arrey yaar ye to latest tarika h Marne ka ...
Anjali : beta tum ab Bach kai rahna mirchi pakoda yaad h na
Poonam : eee tu dra mat hame
Anjali : ohh damn !! Tumhari ye fighting dekhne kai chakkar mai class miss ho gyi ab chalogi college
Poonam look at time its 12:15 pm
Hahhh ab kya karengey ja kar sir ki class to gyi aur ham yahan dhoop mai khade khade ,,, chalo kise cafe chaltey h relax karengey phir ghar chale jayengey sham tak notes ke Lena tum atul se ( atul their classmate) thek h kal tumse le lengey phir ham
Anjali says okkk

And they both leaves for the coffee shop , they enter a d sit at a table , anji said she will get the coffee by herself poonam says okkk and started to wait for her but when around 10 min passed and anjali didn't come back she get up and made her way to the counter , she reach at counter but anjali wasn't there she took here and there and found anjali at one corner talking to someone on mobile , poonam come to her
Poonam: ham kab se wait kar rahe h aur tum yahan batiya rahi ho
Anjali put her hand on the mobile and said its atul notes Lena h na jao tum lo coffee ham aate h . poonam hit her feet on the floor and get to the counter , she takes two cold coffee and just then she turn she become freeze , just then anjali comes and ask her why she is standing hereike that poonam points her fingers to their table ,
Anjali : arrey ye to tumhare boss h
Poonam put the cup on the desk and give a slap on anjali's head
Anjali ; aaooo
Poonam: kitne baar bataya h hamare nhi hamare Bhai kai boss
Anjali : acha acha mar kyun rahi ho chalo ham dusri table pe baith jate h .
Poonam : aur Jo hamare handbag wahan par h uska kya
Anjali : to thek h na chalo chal kar le aate h
Poonam : pagal h tu dekha nhi tha kitne gusse mai h aaj hamara chehra dekha na to wo wo..mirchi pakoda yaad aa jayega ek kaam kar tu ja kar kahin aur baithne ko bol nhi to purse hi le aa
Anjali : mai kyun tu khud hi ja
Poonam with request
Poonam : ja na anjali , tujhe acha lagega kya ki ham apni hi hanky apne chehre pe rakh kai inka bhari bharkam thappad khaye just imagine
Poonam imagine that and say no no no anjali ja jaldi and anjali goes there
Anjali : excuse me , ye hamari table thi wo hamara purse bhi idhar h
Lakhan look at the purse which was on the opposite chair and he quocy get up
Lakhan : ooo so sorry I didn't see that pls be sitted and walk to the next table
Anjali call poonam and poonam quckily sit on the chair both lakhan and poonam's back are facing each other ,

Here lakhan is thinking that he had seen anjali somewhere but where he is not getting that he also order coffee.
Poonam and anjali both finishes their coffee and leaves , lakhan who was drinking his coffee sees Poonam from the glass wall of the cafe , he quickly put down the mug and was going outside when waiter stops him for bill , irritated lakhan quickly took out his credit card put it on table and rush to the door , but alas poonam was too far away and sitted in a taxi Lakhan come back inside the coffee shop
Waiter : sir , ham credit card nhi lete
Lakhan look at him and shook his head ; lao kitna bill hua h cash dete h and take his credit card and pay the bill

He was just to going to get in his car when he got call from his office
He reach office , his company had got a major project .
Lakhan announces in the front of whole staff
Lakhan : aaj hamari company ko bahut badi opportunity mili h , ek to hame ye project mila aur dusri khushi ki baat ye h ki Patna mai hamari ek aur branch open hui h to Isi khushi mai kal sham ko meri taraf se pure staff with their family party h
Whooo everyone applause
Lakhan : aur han han sab ko apni family kai sath aana h , aur mithlesh , amar , anuj aap teeno ko to ham personally check karange ki aapki family aayi h ki nhi okkk kyunki aap logo ko bahut support tha is project mai , and one more thing there will be holiday tomorrow , no office so enjoy everyone .


It was 9 pm lakhan was returning from his office he was on his way when red traffic light made him stop , he was waiting for it to turn green while tapping his fingers on the steering when he saw outside the window , there was a small stall of golgappe , he remember it is like the same place where he saw poonam second time

FLASHBACK
It was around 1 pm he was in begusarai when guddi called him to pick her up from college , he get up took his jeep keys and reach her college , waiting upto 15 min he call guddi
Guddi : ji bhaiya
Lakhan : arrey kahan ho kabse intezar kar rahe h
Guddi : bhaiya ham to kabse gate pe hai par aap to yahan par nhi ho
Lakhan : ka bakwass h ye maharana college h na
Guddi : nhi bhaiya , hamare college ka naam saraswati h , ab aap rahne do hamari ek Frnd aa gyi h ham uskai sath aa jayengey thek h
Lakhan : Abe yaar ham bhi na
He was about to go but that voice that laugh made him stop he look at his right ooo she was there in white top and red long skrit , scarf as usual was wrapped around her neck of red colour , hair open she was looking that gorgeous that lakhan thakur who haven't take any interest in any girl was badly badly falling for her , he wasn't able to take his eye off from her , this was the first time he was doing all this he never believed in such thing that u see a girl in n first sight u start falling for her , he was a very practical men , who have his own values but this girl.is driving him crazy , she was doing something like a competition who will eat more golgappe , she was changing her
expression every sec with in five min of that competition she has given 100 of different expression from hurriness to furiness from loss to win , from anger to smile she was a beauty and finally she won the competition and the girl gang near her starts to scream her name Poonam ...poonam ...
And they leave from there
So Lakhan come to knew her name like this , he utter Poonam ...

He was lost in her thoughts when somebody knock at her window ,
It was a traffic policemen
Policeman; kya Bhai light kab ka green ho gya h peeche sab gadi wale intezar kar rahe h nikalo jaldi
Lakhan says yes and move his car .

The party night
A grand party was organized in the one of best hotel of Patna , everyone was waiting for him and here he comes in pure black attire , he usually wear black , in black trouser and linen shirt with coat he was looking damn good , dapper , every girl look at him , but his eyes was searching only one girl for which he had done all this ,
Everyone was congratulating him on his success , but he was desperately waiting for her , he came upstairs and and stand in the front balcony , everyone who is entering is clearly visible from there gr put his both hand on the grille , and oooh after so much wait the most awaited guest of him finally come , poonam she was in simple blue anarkali , with white stones embedded on the her suit necklane , open hair and a bit curl at the bottom and with a smile she enter with her brother mithlesh , lakhan eyes were just following her , and he came down mithlesh congrats him and poonam also congratulate him with a smile , a broad smile comes on Lakhan face then he leaves to attend some other guest , after about 1hour when he get free from all , he search poonam she was no where in the hall , lakhan become tensed is she had gone ??? He haven't look her properly but soon he got relaxed as he see mithlesh was there so she will also be there , he walk outside , there she was in the garden sitting on the chair .
He comes towards her and while sitting next to her he ask
Lakhan : feeling bored???
Poonam look at him and node yes
Lakhan : can I ask something if u don't mind
Poonam : han puche
Lakhan: aapko koi prblm h kya hamse
Poonam : nhi to hame koi prblm nhi h
Lakhan: acha , to phir aap apne sare guest ko mirchi pakoda khilati h
Poonam who was drinking something split over him
Poonam: ohhh , shit sorry sorry and take a tissue paper and pass to him
Lakhan give a smile and said its okkk
Aap jawab de
Poonam : nhi , wo wo us din thodi chatting kar rahe they , mere ek Frnd ki girlfriend use ditch kar kai chali gye bas usi ka mazak bna rahe they , phir aapki wajah se sab kharab ho gye aur secondly hame cooking khuch khas pasand nhi h
Sorry us din kai liye
And make innocent face
Lakhan : it's okkk hame bhi disturbance pasand nhi aapki family mai aur kaun kaun h
Poonam ; mummy bahut chotey they tabhi chod kai chali gyi phir papa bhi to bhaiya hi sab khuch h and she gets emotional
Lakhan: ohh !! Sorry
Poonam : aap bataiye aapki family mai kaun h
Lakhan : hamari maa bhi bahut chotey they tabhi chali gyi aur baba ...
Poonam : acha to aap bhi hamari tarah h waise wo kaun thi jis se aapne thappad padwaya tha kal
Lakhan get shocked
Lakhan: how u know that
Poonam : ham wahin par they
Lakhan : acha , wo hamari bahen h guddi ,
Poonam : acha to aap bhi ham dono ki tarah h Bhai bahen bas
Lakhan : nhi , wo cousin h hamari , chacha , chachi sath nhi rahtey wo studies kai liye hamare sath rahti h
Poonam: acha
Lakhan : u r looking too pretty today ,
Poonam : kya thakur , line mar rahe h kya
Lakhan remain open mouthed on her words and start fumbling nhi nhi wo
Poonam : chill , mazak kar rahe h
Lakhan : waise aap kya kar rahi h
Poonam : bas masters khatm hone wale h , next two months kai baad exam h phir result aa jaye to ham bhi bhaiya ki tarah koi job kar lengey
Lakhan : waise mere pas ek job h aapkai liye uskai liye aapko masters bhi karne ki zarorat nhi h
Poonam excitedly ask
Poonam : acha , kaun si , kya package hoga
Lakhan : post to bahut achi h , aur package ki to fikr hi na kare
Poonam : bataye to
Lakhan : post h meri wife ki package h meri puri property , aur sabse bada bonus Jo milega h wo h khud ham , is se achi job kabhi nhi mil sakti , kaam bas itna sa hoga ki bas ham aapko jee bhar kai dekh paye aur aap allow kare dekhne ko
He say all this looking straight into her eyes , poonam remain open mouthed looking at him with so confused state ...

Okkk finish ...😊

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