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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally read it,it was awesome,do continue.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanika_11

Finally read it,it was awesome,do continue.😳

thanks tanu 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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bishu mai tere se katti hu 😡 u din bother to tell me about your new FF 🤔

mai b nahi karti comment 🤔
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..DRoadSoFar..

bishu mai tere se katti hu 😡 u din bother to tell me about your new FF 🤔

mai b nahi karti comment 🤔

hawww how can u say that sabse pahle tujhe hi bataya tha kal mai kab se tere comment ka intezar kar rahhi hun
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thanks 😊
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Hello my jannis 😊 firstly thank u thank u everyone for the lovely comments 🤗
In part first lakhan was remembering the old days .
Now second part

PART 2 :
Lakhan put on his helmet and follow poonam , poonam goes to some outer part of the city
Najma : arrey ye idhar kahan ja rahi ho
Poonam: arrey , pagal agar ander kai rastey se jayengey , aur bhaiya ne dekh liya to bahut soote jayengey ham aur hame mar nhi khana
Najma : acha , to tum 2 ghante tak yahin ghumti rahogi ghar nhi jaogi
Poonam: nhi , jayengey abhi 2 Baja h bhajya lunch kai liye ghar aaye honge , 3 baje tak chale jayengey tab ghar chale jayengey and winks

And just then lakhan enters with his bike , he was just beside them with the same speed looking at poonam , Poonam was busy in chartering with najma doesn't realise that she was stared by someone , lakhan blow the horn to make poonam look at him . because of that horn poonam looks towards him , and found weird and again turn her face at front but lakhan is still looking at her , and they both are driving at the same speed poonam ignores once , but its now too much since 10 min lakhan was neither going forward nor backward just going with them , poonam suddenly increases the speed , and turn and show him thumps down and said loser that loud so that lakhan can hear it .
Najma : pagal ho gyi ho hamne kaha tha speed 40 se upar mat karna
Poonam : arrey , itna kyun dar rahi ho ham hai na sath mai khuch nhi hota kya kartey wo ladka na aage ja raha tha na beeche bas sath sath chal raha h upar se tade ja raha tha , ab thek h


Lakhan is thinking acha hamko lakhan thakur ko loser kaha ab batate h and increases the speed and with in 2 min he cross them and now its his turn to give them back , he simply move his face towards them and show thumps down .

Poonam ; hawww hamko angoota dikhaya , ye h kaun yaar ( since lakhan was wearing helmet so poonam wasn't able to see his face ) ab isne hame bahut gussa dila diya h
And again she increases her speed
Najma: arrey aaj tum hame upar pahucha kar hi rahogi poonam , dheere karo , ham kyun baith gye is ladki kai sath
Poonam: chup ho najma , itni biijati kabhi nhi hui hamari , ab to beeche karkai hi rahengey ,chahe Jo ho jaye
Najma : poonam , usne helmet lagaya hua h aur tumse achi bike chala leta hoga , kya pata roz hi bike chalata ho par tum nhi chalati ho samjho baat , Jane do aage use
Poonam : hame na yakeen hi nhi hota ki tum hamari Frnd ho , itni darpok hunhhh
Najma : ye ladki to aaj upar pahucha kar hi rahegi

Lakhan sees poonam face in mirror poonam face was mix with angry , desperate , cute expression , lakhan smiles looking at her , and he realise that she is increasing her speed , so he slows down his bike speed so that , she can easily overtake him and not harm herself as he can sense that she wasn't that good rider .
After 5 min poonam reaches near her , lakhan more decrease his speed so that she can win , Poonam cross him and swing her hand in the air and said bye .. ... with a winning smile
Lakhan was awestruck by his beauty

And on the whole way he stay back or to tease her he became near to them , and then poonam quickly increase her speed and Poonam reaches najma house and drop her then she take her way to her house , to threaten her lakhan deliberately show that he has lossen the balance and his bike gonna hit the front tyre of poonam's bullet , poonam small heart frightened but on the mean time Lakhan manages to control his bike , poonam breathe come back and lakhan laugh loudly his laughter was that loud , poonam can hear that and she make face . and finally poonam reaches to her home lakhan was still behind her ,

He was lost in her thoughts when somebody knocks at her room door
Its their cook cum caretaker of whole house yashpal
Yashpal : beta , khana laga diya h kha lo chal kai
Lakhan : ji kaka , guddi ko bhi bula lijiye ham aatey h
Yashpal : beta choti Malkin intezar kar rahi h neeche
Lakhan : acha chaliye aate h
He get up from the chair and walk towards the door but stop he realise he was missing something he moves to his cupboard and opens the drawer inside it and took out some money . and put that money in an envelope and moves downstair and sit on the table
Lakhan: chalo shuru karo
Guddi : ji bhaiya
And they both start eating ( its not badi haveli , its lakhan house in Patna which is not less than a haveli )
Guddi is his cousin , daughter of bhushan and rekha , and lakhan is the son of manohar thakur ( dadda ji)
Guddi lives with lakhan due to her study
After finishing their dinner guddi was
About to leave when Lakhan stops her
Lakhan : ruko , ye lo and pass her that envelope
Guddi : ismai kya h and opens it and found money inside it with shocked expression she ask lakhan bhaiya ye paise
Lakhan : party karna h na kal doston kai sath to jao ..
And gives a smile
Guddi scream with joy and hugs him bhaiya aap bahut ache ho
Lakhan : hunnn , par mobile on rahega aur call kare to Durant pick karna
Guddi : ji bhaiya , ek baat batiye and sits on the chair again bahut khush h aaj kya baat h bar bar smile kar rahe h
Koi ladki ...
Lakhan gives a angry look .
Guddi : sorry bhaiya but lakhan smiles again
Lakhan : han hai to sahi , pta h guddi aaj ham poonam se mile , itne din baad
Guddi : bhaiya wo begusarai wali poonam
Lakhan excitedly nodes her head in yes
Guddi : par bhaiya use pta chala ki aap kaun ho to ..
Lakhan who was smiling before one sec , his smile vanished
Lakhan : nhi khuch nhi pta chalega , and stand up aur agar is bar koi beech mai aya na to ... ek baar kho chuke h dobara nhi kho sakte
And leaves furiously , guddi calls him but he didn't reply


A week has been passed and he haven't seen a glimpse of poonam , he was walking to and fro in his cabin when manager enter in his cabin and tell her that there is some problem between the labour unit and company employee , Lakhan who was disturbed ask that manager to take someone with him and sort out the matter ,and also said that take some sensible employee with him who can sort out that he wasn't in the mood so he is not going manager walks out .

About an hour passed lakhan didn't knew wat excuse he made so that he can meet her , ahhh now its a limit he decide to go out and take some fresh air else his mind will burst out and take his key and was leaving when he found that someone mobile is ringing he looks at the table its mithlesh mobile may be he has forgotten that , manager has Taken mithlesh with him , he pick his mobile poonam name was flashing on the screen , he thanked the almighty he can't see her but can listen her voice he answer the call , said hello but on the other side it was not poonam some other was there bhaiya ham anjali bol rahe h poonam ka accident ho gya h pair ( leg) mai thodi chot bhi ayi h aap jaldi aa jayiye ham city mall kai pas h
Lakhan become tense and said kya ham abhi aa rahe h and rush towards his car and in the next moment his car was talking with the winds it take hardly 6 min for him to reach there
Ahhh she was there in black short kurta and black plazo with red duppata wraped around her neck , that was signature style of her wrapping stall around her neck she was sitting on someone's bike and holding her feet little amount of blood was there on her right leg's finger , a girl was standing there all worried it is her friend anjali who called , poonam was consoling her that she is fine lakhan quickly rush toward her
All tensed he ask ye chot kaise lagi jaldi chaliye hospital chaltey
Poonam looked at him shockingly
Poonam : aap kya kar rahe h yahin ,
Lakhan : wo sab baad mai pahle hospital chaliye and was trying to lift her in his arm when poonam quickly get down from bike .
Poonam : ham khud hi chal lengey , aur chale jayengey hospital bhi chalo anjali and start walking and was about to fall when lakhan hold her hand .
And help her to stand poonam gave a scolding look to him , lakhan quickly leave her hand and said
Lakhan : pls , car leke aate h baith jayiye aise problem hogi aapko
And open his car back door and gesture like to pls get in anjali also request her to sit , poonam slowly walks towards the car holding anjali and sit lakhan quickly close the door and hold the driving sit and move to hospital after few min they were inside the hospital
Lakhan : doctor doctor look at her
Doctor took poonam inside and bandage her feet lakhan is standing just at some distance poonam look at that tall boy , who was in full black attire black coat , black shirt and in back trouser , his face was all tensed poonam was not able to find out why he was so bother about her , he just meet her once she was busy in her thoughts when doctor said no need to worry Lakhan quickly get towards doctor yes doctor , doctor said no need to worry she is perfectly fine , ek do din mai ek dam thek ho jayengi aap ghar le ja saktey h pain killer de di okkk young men . lakhan nods okkk and thanks doctor , and leaves with the doctor , anjali support poonam to stand , they come to the exit .
Anjali : tum yahan par baitho ham bill pay kar kai aate h
Poonam : han thek h
Poonam : han thek h
Anjali go to pay bill but receptionist tells her that their bill is already paid by the men had come with them . anjali came back to poonam , poonam ask wat amount she paid so that she will pay back to her but anjali tells her that her bill us paid by that men , and ask poonam who is he , Poonam tells her that he is boss of her brother and they both came out of the hospital lakhan is waiting for them , and he sees them coming outside he walks towards them .
Lakhan : chaliye poonam chod dete h aapko ghar ...
Poonam.cut his words
Poonam : pahle aap ye batayiye ki aap yahan kya kar rahe h aur aapne bill kyun pay kiya ??
Lakhan says okkk and tells her the whole incident .
Lakhan : ab baith jayiye nhi to dard badh jayega .
Poonam : nhi ab thek h ham khud hi chale jayengey
Lakhan is now irritated , cause he has never listen no from anyone but this girl is making him to request to help her woww
Lakhan : itni argument kyun kar rahi ho chup chap baith jao na ..
Poonam became furious and said
Poonam: excuse me !! u r no one to tell me what I should do and what should I not get it , I m just bearing u for the sake of my brother else ...anjali call the taxi .
Anjali said okkk , poor lakhan make a innocent face and start looking at the floor . anjali calls poonam to sit in the taxi poonam says ya coming but look at lakhan who is still there looking at floor , poonam feel a bit guilty and walk towards him .
Poonam : sorry for being rude , and thanks for the help . lakhan said angrily
Lakhan : no no why are u sorry the mistake is mine , galti hamari hi h Jo hamne socha ki chalo someone need help kar de uski help yahi hamari sabse badi galti , I m sorry ma'am
Why u r ?? Aur rahi baat bill ki to thek h aapke Bhai ki salary se cut kar lengey
Poonam : arrey ham bol to rahe h sorry ..
Lakhan : shh.. Pls go your Frnd is calling u but Poonam arrey ham ..
Lakhan : pls leave , now this time more angrily leave I said .

Now, its enough for poonam and she become angry and leave , Lakhan look at their taxi and after few second he realised what blunder he made he bang his forehead by his hand and said " bahhh lakhan thakur , 2 min kai liye apne ego ko side nhi kar saktey they errr gussa kar diya poonam ko , aise to beta tum pata chuke poonam ko aur ho chuki tumhari shadi " while saying this he had sitten in the car and start it and his eyes were searching poonam taxi and after few min struggle he got it , lakhan is behind poonam's taxi until she reach her house , Lakhan didn't go too near to poonam house he keep a safe distance fron their taxi and as soon as poonam enter her house lakhan get back to his office

SAME DAY AT ABOUT 8PM
mithlesh come back home and found injured poonam , Mithlesh ask her what had happened and poonam told him the whole scenario , Mithlesh is impressed by lakhan's gesture and decide to thank him tomorrow , poonam thinks " lo bhaiya to impress ho gye apne boss se , agar inke boss ne bta diya ki hamne unhe kaise thank u bola tha to kahin bhaiya gussa na kre"
Next day mithlesh says thanks to Lakhan but lakhan didn't tell anything about poonam behavior to him , when in evening mithlesh come back and didn't scold poonam fir her hrash behaviour poonam was relived.

NEXT WEEKEND
There was next Sunday and lakhan has meet poonam on Tuesday , he wanna see her , at last a glimpse of her , not that even her voice , he was thinking all this while driving his car , and he didn't realise that when he was at poonam 's house he stop his car , and quickly take reverse and at a distance stops it , he was thinking wat excuse he can made to enter in the house , thinking thinking finally got an idea he again move his car and stop in the front of Poonam house , he get down from it and opens the bonet he looks here and there like he is gonna steel something and made some of the wire useless by snatching them hahh he was done , a smile come on his face , then he close the bonet and call mechanic but now new problem how can he get in excuse is ready but hmmm that doesn't looks nice to disturb anyone on weekend he sit on his bonet it was around 2pm and sunlight is on its highest temp , about 10 min passed , he was thinking when he saw a kid going from there idea strike his mind he quickly get down from bonet and stop that kid . lakhan sit on her knees and ask him
Lakhan : beta agar aap na hamara chota sa bahut chota sa kaam karengey to ham aapko bahut sari chocolate dengey and shows him chocolate but ahhh bad luck of him .
Kid ; nhi mummy bolti h kisi se bhi cheez nhi lete usmai khuch ho Sakta h
Lakhan : arrey beta tumhare shravan Kumar banne kai chakkar mai hamara kaam adhura rah jayega ,
Kid ; ab hame Jane dijiye
Lakhan : acha ham aapko paise de to chalega na , wo to aap saktey ho aur phir usse chocolate bhi le saktey ho and made cute face , kid think and finally he said okkk lakhan give him 100 rupees

Kid : bas itna hi
Lakhan : chote ho beta abhi itne se hi kaam chalo , tumhari mummy ne ye nhi bataya lalach buri bala h , ab suno wo samne Jo ghar h bas tumhe uski bell Baja kai bhag Jana h bas
Kid : bas itti si baat ye to mai 50 mai bhi kar deta
Lakhan laughs and lift that kid and kiss on his cheek .
And that kid ring the bell and quickly run and lakhan says bye to him , and lakhan again sit on the bonet ,

Mithlesh who was enjoying his paneer pakoda gets disturbed
Mithlesh : ab kaun aa gya ...
And he opens the door and find no one he was about to go inside again when he saw lakhan whose blue T-shirt has tuned wet due to sweat . mithlesh come near to him
Mithlesh : sir , aap yahan par dhoop mai kyun baithe h
Lakhan : arrey , kitne bar bola h aapko sir mat bola kariye u r like my elder brother
Mithlesh : acha boss boltey h aapko thek , acha ye bataiye yahan kyun baithe h
Lakhan made sad face and said
Lakhan : kaam se ja rage they par pata nhi car ko kya ho gya ruk gyi ..
Mithlesh : acha , ham check kare
Lakhan : nhi nhi , mechanic ko bula liya h wait kar rahe h uska ..
Mithlesh : arrey to yahan kyun baithe h ander chaliye
Lakhan : nhi nhi ab bas aane wala hoga ,
Mithlesh : arrey aap bhi chaliye itna dhoop mai yahan kahan baithe rahengey chaliye
Lakhan was so happy from inside but shows like that okkk u r insisting so I m coming with u
They both enter inside in the house , lakhan sit on the sofa there was plate of pakoda on the table and two three pakoda are left Mithlesh offer him and he takes it
Lakhan : wahhh , bahut tasty h ye to
Aur mil saktey h
Mithlesh : han han abhi le kar aatey h

Mithlesh move inside and call poonam who was busy in chatting with her friends , and was enjoying disturbed by Mithlesh voice
Poonam : han bhaiya
Mithlesh : wo pakode aur bna do
Poonam make faces
Poonam : abhi to diye they itne sare sab khatm kar diya ham nhi bna rahe h aur jayiye abhi chatting kar rahe h
Mithlesh : arrey wo boss aa gye h unke liye bna do pls
Poonam : bhaiya ...
Mithlesh : bas acha unhone khud mang liye to kya kare mna kar de ab natak band aur fatafat bna do bahut tarif kar rahe they
Poonam make poor face and said okkk .and gets into kitchen and start frying . while she was frying she gets an idea
Poonam : aise pakode khilayegey ki zindagi mai kabhi nhi khaye honge
And puts a lot of chilies in the mixture . then she called mithlesh to take it .

Poonam : bhaiya ye blue wali plate aapki aur red wali aapke boss ki and an evil smile comes on her face , Mithlesh sense that something is wrong
Mithlesh : nhi red wali hamari aur blue wali boss ki
Poonam : nhi bhaiya ..
But mithlesh didn't listen , and mithlesh come back in the drawing room , mechanic had fix the wire and car is ready lakhan pay him and he leaves , Mithlesh calls lakhan and they both start eating as soon as lakhan put that pakoda into his mouth he fills like someone has put a lot of chilies in his mouth he , very difficulty engulf that and look at mithlesh who was enjoying his one , it took no time to understand wat poonam has done , he saw towards the door from where poonam is sneaking with a smile lakhan raised his one eyebrow up and eat the second one , then next and he finishes all of them
Poonam is thinking bhaiya ham bhi aapki bahen h pta tha hame aap khuch aisa hi karengey tabhi hamne aisa kiya par ye lakhan thakur ko mirchi nhi lagti kya ,
Lakhan leaves and mithlesh come up to door to see off him as soon as mithlesh enter into his home again lakhan with the speed of light opens his car and start searching for water and finally he get it he drink the she bottle in sip but it was not helping him he is waving his hand in the air and breathing outside , he found some mouth freshener and eat it , while he was eating he hear a sound of laugh he slowly move his car's side mirror facing towards poonam balcony and he saw her she was in black long kurta with plazo and with a pony she was smiling over his condition as soon he turn towards her she quickly ran from there , all the bitterness of chili is no where there her smile was enough to fill sweetness in his mouth.

He smiled and get into car finally his motto of coming there was complete , he was so happy ...


Okkk done second part ends here
In next part Lakhan will through a grand party and there he will ask poonam something which made poonam stunned .

Thank u all who read it 🤗
I tried my best to give long one I hope tum logo ko ye part acha lage bore na lage 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww i love dis beechara lakhan 😕 kitna rudly baat ki aur mircha wala pakoda bhi khilaya...

but sersly m lovin dis story so much it was like m watching it in frnt of my eyes i luv dis 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Marvellous Bishu tu meri ummido pe khari utri h itti pyari story dil grden grden ho gya ek tu or inu reader ko palak jhapkane ki fursat n dete ...mai kisi ek scene ki trif n kr sakti qk har ek movemnt awsm h ... 👏 next update jldi krna 😭


Or thoda long likha kar 😉 😆
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Originally posted by: crazy_inu

awww i love dis beechara lakhan 😕 kitna rudly baat ki aur mircha wala pakoda bhi khilaya...

but sersly m lovin dis story so much it was like m watching it in frnt of my eyes i luv dis 😃

thank u sooo much suggu 🤗 ur comments means a lot 😃
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Originally posted by: Lakhanchamach

Marvellous Bishu tu meri ummido pe khari utri h itti pyari story dil grden grden ho gya ek tu or inu reader ko palak jhapkane ki fursat n dete ...mai kisi ek scene ki trif n kr sakti qk har ek movemnt awsm h ... 👏 next update jldi krna 😭


Or thoda long likha kar 😉 😆

aww thank u so much cynduu 🤗
Na baba suggu bahut mast likhti h mai uska adha bhi detailing nhi kar pati hun
Par tujhe acha lga mai khush hun 😃
Try karungi Thursday tak de dun update mujhe khud ko bahut jaldi rahti h par kya kare time 😕
Aur tujhe aur lamba chahiye

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