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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u thank u everyone for showering all ur love on me 🤗 , hame bilkul nhi pata tha ki meri story ko itna ache ache comments milengey thank u all for the lovely comments

PART 4 :
Poonam wasn't able to believe her ears
how can a person who just meet her two or three times can purpose her and that's too for marriage , she wasn't able to utter a single word just looking at lakhan in disbelief with open mouthed .
Lakhan give a smile and put his fingers below her chin in order to close her mouth while saying that
Lakhan : lagta h job , khuch jayda hi pasand aa gyi h
Poonam come back into senses and said
Poonam : u r kidding...
Lakhan : na, na na , I'm not kidding " my princess" I m too damn serious about it
Poonam : how can u ...
But lakhan cut her words in between
Lakhan : I can and only I can marry u no one else with a determined look on his face
Poonam was about to say something but just then , mithlesh interrupt
Mithlesh : poonam , kab se dhoond rahe h aur tum yahan ho
Lakhan and poonam both stand up
Lakhan : arrey , she was getting bored , so she came out .
Mithlesh : oo , ok now we should leave
Lakhan : arrey itni jaldi with cute face
Mithlesh : han , nhi to late ho jayega to convenience ka problem hoga .
Lakhan : wait , I will drop u
Mithlesh : no no , thanks but we will manage its our habit , poonam chalo
Lakhan : okk bye then ,
Lakhan : okk bye then ,
Lakhan was knowing that poonam wasn't comfortable there , so he doesn't pressurised them to stay .
Both poonam and mithlesh leaves and poonam once look back at him , and lakhan give a billion dollar smile to her after looking at her confused face .poonam turn around and leave

NEXT DAY
It was around 2 pm poonam was studying as her exams are near , she was trying to solve a problem but ahh its not working on , she tried it for many times but she wasn't able to solve , irritated she moved back and stand up just then her phone ring , he pick up cell , some unknown no was flashing on her screen after thinking for two sec she picked the call
Poonam : hello
Lakhan : hello , poonam
Poonam : lakhan thakur in astonished
Lakhan : bhahhh !! Princess ek baar mai awaz pehchan li
Poonam : mera , ,, mera no kahan se mila aapko
Lakhan laughs and teasingly said
Lakhan : arrey , tum to aise chaunk ( shocked) rahi ho jaise hamne white house se koi intelligence ki report chura li ho , ye tumhara no h itna mushkil bhi nhi h pta lagana
Aur ye Sab chodo kal khuch pucha tha , to ham job confirm kar de
Poonam : aapka demag kharab ho gya h , samjhe aap apni job aapne pas hi rakhiye
Lakhan : arrey princess pls ans de de in yes
Poonam : bade badtameez h aap samjha rahe h samjh nhi aa raha h
Lakhan : sach bol rahe h aaj tak kisi ne itni biijati nhi ki hamari jitni tumne ki h
Poonam : abhi to hamne khuch kaha hi nhi h , agar aur biijati nhi karana chahtey to chup chap phone rakh dijiye
Lakhan : itna acha job h , kisi Aur ko diya hota to fatafat ready ho jata
Poonam : to Jo ready ho rahi h , usi ko de hamara dimag mat kharab karo
Lakhan : hmm jealous
Poonam : rubbish
Lakhan : arrey , jab se tumhe dekhe hai na , khuch aur soch hi nhi pa rahe h
Ek baar phir soch lo , acha ladka nikal jayega hanth se , waise bhi aajkal hamare jaise Sharif log miltey kahan h
Poonam : hmmm , soch liya , a big bigg big no from my side ab phone mat karna and cuts the call .
Lakhan : arrey yaar
Lakhan again call her she doesn't receive his call , upset lakhan look at his laptop screen which has poonam yesterday party photo as its wallpaper and said bahut ziddi ho tum , aur bahut achi bhi

And he started to type on his message box
" Ik khoya khoya chaand tha jo tha khafa khafa
Ik toota toota khwaab tha jo tujhse tha juda
Ik aadhi aadhi aas thi jo poori ho gayi
Tum mill gaye to jaane kyun ye doori ho gayi
Piya laage na.. jiya laage na
Tere binaa.. Tere bina..
Tere binaa.. Tere bina..""
Pls say yes pls pls
And text to poonam ,
Poonam : msg , lakhan thakur ka , she smiles , and in the next moment , hunhh to ham kyun khole ... Hmm par dekhe to kya bhejha h and she opens it after reading his msg an unknown smile comes on her face but in the next sec she made a determined face and text to lakhan .
Lakhan ; arrey , reply kiya poonam ne
He become very happy and quickly opens the msg
And he found
"" I m blocking u "'
Lakhan bust out in laugh , how cute and pure she was
Lakhan : u can't block me poonam as I have entered in ur life .and u are ruling my heart ,
AFTER ONE HOUR
Poonam was busy learning her notes and she has completed a chapter
She smiles
Poonam : hahh !! Ek chapter khatm ab dusre ki bari
When someone knock at the door
Poonam : arrey yaar ek to itni mushkil se padhne mai dhayan lga , wo lakhan thakur ki wajah se padh nhi pa rahe they ab thoda sukoon mila to pata nhi kaun aa gya
She was murmuring all this while coming to the door and just she open the door she found him smiling , in grey shirt with denim , he was just about to enter inside when poonam quickly slammed the door
Lakhan: arrey , bach gyi hamari nak , warna aaj to gye they ham aise koi karta h , in so complaining voice and again knocks the door , poonam who was standing just behind the door ..said
Poonam : aap kyun aye h jaiye yahan se
Lakhan : poonam , baat karni h tumse kholo darwaza
Poonam : nhi hame nhi karni koi baat ,
Lakhan : darwaza kholo warna hame unblock karo nhi to ham nhi jayengey
Poonam : arrey hamne bola na nhi karni koi baat hamko , ajeeb jabardasti h
No reply comes from the other side
Poonam hears sound of car is fading away slowly slowly , she wait for two min
Poonam : lagta h chale gye she was about to open the door but stops and said nhi darwaza nhi kholengey kahin yahin par hue to , ham chath ( terrace ) se dekhtey h
And moves to upstairs and peep out from the balcony she found no one at the door also his car wasn't there she sign a relief and comes down
And again take her books and start her study

Poonam : oops !! Is chapter kai to notes hi nahi h hamare pas , anjali ko call kartey h kah dengey ki kal college leti aaye notes ,, arrey hame mobile kahan gya yahin table pe to tha ...
And she start searching her mobile in her whole room but she didn't find it .
Poonam : ek baar bahar dekh lete h
And she comes out in the hall , and what she found , her eyes widened up in astonishing
Poonam : tum tum ander jaise aaye , aur hamara mobile hame wapas karo
It was lakhan inside their house doing something on her mobile , poonam comes to him and try to snatch her mobile but lakhan straighten his hand up , poonam try to get it but he was too tall and now his hands are also up
Lakhan look at him and smile and teasingly said
Lakhan : u r too short hahaha
Poonam who is already angry listen this and her face turn red in anger and she furiously said
Poonam : mobile do
Lakhan : bas 1 sec and gives her mobile back to her
Poonam : aise kaise kisi kai ghar as saktey h , aur hamare mobile mai kya kar rahe they aur ander kaise aaye aap
Lakhan : ohhh goddd angry princess !! U turn red like a tomato , khuch nhi kar rahe theh bas unblock kar rahe they khud ko poonam give him a deadly look
Lakhan : arrey yaar kitni careless ho tum , khidki widki band karke rakha karo koi bhi chor ander aa Sakta h
Poonam : to aap khidki se ander aye h
Lakhan : han , kya kartey ham darwaza khol deti to asani se aa hate itni mehnat karai upar se tum itni laparwah ho apne kamre ki khidki band nhi rakh pati ho
Poonam : to aap hamare kamre se
And she goes in to her room to find out how he had come in , she found her room window open hmmm she said and come back in hall
Poonam : aap kya chor they pahle ,and found no one in the hall arrey kidhar gye ..then she heard his voice which is coming from kitchen
Lakhan ; kya Kare ishq ne nikamma kar diya warna ham bhi aadmi kaam kai they
Poonam look at him he was holding a plate of sweet and just gradually walk out eating from the kitchen and sit on the sofa
Lakhan : hmm , tasty
Poonam : listen I m neither ur friend nor ur girlfriend Jo aap itna free ho rahe h and snatches the plate
Lakhan : I know and I don't want u be my girlfriend rolling his eyes , and he gets up from the sofa and looking into her eyes said cause I want u be my life patner ...
Poonam : ahhh!!! u r irritating
Lakhan lost in her said
Lakhan : and u r fascinating
Poonam look at him what the hell are u talking , just get lost from my house
Lakhan realise what he had say
Lakhan looks at her from top to bottom , in white Patiala suit hair all messed up
Lakhan : no no I mean just look at u
Bal dekho , khuch bechare Baal dusre baalon ko dhakka mar mar kai azad ho gye khuch bechare abhi bhi jalim band kai wajah se azad nhi ho paye h , in bechare par julm mat karo unko bhi azadi pane ka pura haq h
Poonam bite her lower lip in order to control her laugh cause he was saying all this so seriously
Poonam in mind think ye kya pagal h
Lakhan : okk , bahut tang kar liya tumko , ham chale jayengey bas ek baar is na ka koi reason hoga wo bata do
Poonam : sachi phir chale jayengey
Lakhan : han phir kabhi nhi pareshan karengey
Poonam take a long breath and said
Poonam : there is just a simple reason I don't know u
Lakhan made a very bad face and said
Lakhan : ye bhi bhala koi reason hua , arrey take ur time and when u think u know me then say yes okk
Poonam : nhi ,, ham nhi jantey khuch ab bas bahut hua niklo ab yahan se
Lakhan : acha , chale jayengey , ek baar kou suitable reason de do apni big big big no ka nhi to ham peecha nhi chodengey

Poonam ; kya chipko ho tum
Lakhan : han , Sirf tumhare wajah se ho gye h aise nhi to ham to bahut reserve aur sincere h ye meri personality hi nhi aise chichoron wali harkat kar rahe hame khud nhi pta ham aisa kyun kar rahe par tumhari presence hamko change kar deti h , ...
Poonam look at him with shocked expression
Lakhan : aise mat dekho , yakeen nhi h to apne bhaiya se puch Lena
Poonam : hmm , to jab tak hame koi reason nhi batate aap nhi jayengey yahan
Lakhan nodes in yes so cutely
Poonam : thek h hamara reason ye h ki hamare Bhai aaki company mai job kartey h
Lakhan : what!!! Ye kya reason hua
Poonam : ye bahut bada reason h hamare Bhai ki image ki baat h , Sab ulta seedha bolengey unkai bare
Lakhan angrily said
Lakhan : kiska himmat h Jo hamare saale ko khuch kahe
Poonam : excuse me !! Kya h koi shadi nhi ho gyi h hamari , Jo aap rishtey bna rahe h , utni der se aapko jhel rahe h to sirf isliye ki aap hamare Bhai kai boss h , Aur aap rich h aapkai samne koi nhi bolega khuch but hamari bhi koi self respect h
Lakhan : to bas yahi reason h
Poonam : han
Lakhan : to agar ham tumhare Bhai kai boss nhi rahengey to koi dikkat nhi han...
Poonam ; kya matlb aap hamare bhaiya ko job se nikal dengey
Very calmly he said
Lakhan : nhi , apne ek laute saale sahab ko itni takleef nhi dengey
Poonam : aapne phir bola
Lakhan : okk sorry , bas yahi problem h , to agar ham aapke bhaiya kai boss nhi rahengey to u don't have any problem with this purposal
Irritated poonam said .
Poonam : han ,,lekin hamare bhaiya ki job...
Lakhan : arrey kahin nhi jayegi job , itti si baat h bas , thek h ab ham chaltey h ,
And he opens the door , turn and said
Lakhan : yaad rakhna , back off mat hona aapne words se ,
Poonam : han nhi hongey
Lakhan : okk my would be thakurain ,,
Poonam : you
Lakhan move towards his car and said
Lakhan : wo problem solve kar di hamne Jo bahut bar try ki thi go and check and he leaves
Poonam close the door and quickly come to her room and she find that paper her question was solv ed and at the end of the paper this was written
" isi tarah aapki jeevan ki sari problems solve kar dengey promise "with a smiley
Poonam smiles and then she look at hair in the mirror and she recall what lakhan was saying about her , she bust out laughing and just one word came out from her mouth " stupid "

NEXT DAY
Poonam wakes up it is 8 am
Poonam : ohhh !! Shit aaj to bhaiya late ho jayengey
She quickly come out from her room just wash out her face .and directly enter in kitchen quickly make breakfast and within 20 min it was ready , she come out with a tray and put it on the table
Poonam: bhaiya jaldi nashta taiyyar h jaldi kar lijiye nhi to late ho jayengey
Mithlesh ; han aa gye
And he begans to eat breakfast very calmly
Poonam : bhaiya thoda jaldi kariye late ho gye to daant padegi
Mithlesh : arrey nhi padegi tum aaram se baitho
Poonam : arrey aap hi to kahtey they ki aap kai boss bahut khadoos h Jo late aata h usko bahut daant padti h
Mithlesh : han wo to pahle , aaj kal bahut acha mood rahta h , har waqt smile kartey rahtey h pata nhi kya ho gya h , khair Jo bhi acha h late aane pe daant nhi padti , Sab ki mauj h
Poonam : ye to galat baat h , wo kisi ko khuch nhi boltey to aap log manmarzi karengey
Mithlesh ; arrey tum kahe emotional ho rahi ho
Poonam : nhi hamko kya
And mithlesh leaves for office

IN OFFICE
Lakhan has called his lawyer and one of his friend
Lakhan : to sare papers ready hone mai kitne din lagengey
Lawyer : thakur sahab , 3- 4 din to lag jayengey
Lakhan : thek h , jitna jaldi ho sake utna jaldi karo
His friend : soch liya h tumne thek se
Lakhan : ismai sochne jaise to khuch hai hi nhi
Chalo phir ham log chaltey h and they both leaves
Lakhan : poonam tumhare liye khuch bhi kar saktey h , aur kya kya kar saktey h ye to ham khud bhi nhi jantey .

AFTER THREE DAYS
Poonam was in college , she attend all the class and both of them anjali and poonam are returning , anjali calls poonam but poonam is lost in other world , anjali wave her hand in front of her face
Anjali : kahan khoyi hui ho
Poonam : kahin nhi
Anjali : apne bhaiya kai boss kai bare mai soch rahi ho
Poonam : nhi yaar ,
Anjali : acha agar lakhan thakur ne khuch aisa kar diya jisse wo boss na hue tumhare bhaiya kai to phir tum kya karogi
Poonam : aisa to khuch bhi nhi ho sakta h , jab khuch hoga to dekha jayega
And they come outside the college .
Lakhan was standing outside his car and looking at her on the other side of the road
Poonam : arrey ye ye nhi sudhrengey
and she furiously walks towards him
And said
Poonam : apne bola tha ki aap pareshan nhi karengey , phir yahan kya kar rahe h
Lakhan look here and there and then at the bottom
Lakhan : ham to sirf yahan khade h , ab kya hamara ghar se nikalna bhi ban karogi , itna acha mausam h isliye gadi kai bahar aa gye ,
Very innocently he said
Poonam : jayda smart mat baniye , aapko hamara hi college mila h jiske samne khade hoke aap msusam kai maze le rahe
Lakhan : arrey hame to malum bhi nhi h ki ye tumhara college h
Poonam : han han , aap se jayda koi innocent ho hi sakta
Lakhan : han wo to hai
Poonam : tum jhote ho ek no kai lafengey , chichore ...
Lakhan : arrey arrey rajdhani ruko , hamari baat to sun lo , Aur pahle ye decide kar lo ki hamko aap kah kar pukarna h ya tum kah kar bade confuse ho rahe h ...ek pal mai respect phir agle pal phir se biijati
Poonam : aapko ko ham...
Before poonam can more insult him , scold him guddi interrupt
Guddi : bhaiya chaliye kaam ho gya hamara
Poonam look at her then at lakhan and she feels she had done something wrong
Lakhan : hamari bahen h , janti ho , isko khuch kaam tha isliye aye they par tum to tum ho khuch sunna hi nhi hota h seedha aag barsane lagti ho
Poonam : wo sorry ..
Lakhan : nhi nhi sorry kyun ham to chichore h , lafengey h na
Poonam : arrey bola na sorry , hame lga aap hamare liye yahan khade h
Lakhan : acha!!! And teasingly he ask
Aur tumhare liye kahe khade hongey ham
Poonam ; kyunki aap hamse ...
Lakhan : hmm , bolo ..
Poonam hit her feet on the ground and leave

Guddi ask lakhan
Guddi ; bhaiya isne ye Sab kaha tha aapko aur aapko gussa nhi aaya
Lakhan says nhi kaise ayega in par gussa aata hi nhi h hame chahe ye khuch bhi kare khuch bhi bole
Guddi : bhaiya kahin ye poonam to nhi h
Guddi expression are like she had solved a big mystery .
Lakhan : han wahi h chalo ab gadi mai baitho ghar chalna h

NEXT DAY
It was around 9 pm both mithlesh and poonam are taking their dinner , mithlesh seems lost in something
Poonam : bhaiya kya soch rahe h khana khayiye
Mithlesh: hame abhi bhi yakeen nhi ho raha h
Poonam : bhaiya kis baat par yakeen nhi ho raha h
Mithlesh : tumko pta h aaj office mai Jo hua us se Sab chakra gye
Poonam : ab suspense banana band kariye aur batiye ki hua kya h
Mithlesh : aaj lakhan thakur ne pore staff ko bulaya phir ye announce kiya ki , aaj se is company kai owner wo nhi h , unhone apne ek dost ko apni company gift kar di
Poonam who was taking her dinner , food chocked and she remain stunned
Mithlesh : dekha tumko bhi vishwas nhi ho raha h
Poonam : matlab , ab wo aapke boss nhi h
Mithlesh : arrey pagal , jab company hi nhi rahi unki to boss kaise hue
Poonam : hmm,
Mithlesh : batao koi company gift kar deta h kya doston ko

After dinner poonam came back into her room she sit on the bed
Poonam : arrey yaar , company hi chod di ye to sach mai pagal h , she was still in disbelief , when her mobile rang she receive the call
Lakhan : to ab sab problem khatm ho gyi
Poonam : aap pagal ho apni company kisi ko sirf hamari wajah se ..
Lakhan : aapki wajah se nhi aapkai liye ,
Poonam : kitna loss hua hoga
Lakhan : arrey bas ek branch hi to di h , dusri khol lengey , waise bhi aapkai samne paison ki kya aukat h ,
Poonam : hame nhi samjh aa raha h , hame yakeen nhi ho raha h ki aap ye bhi kar saktey h hamare liye
Lakhan : poonam, ham tumhare liye kya kar saktey h kis had tak ja saktey h ye to hame khud ko nhi malum
Poonam : aap kaise ek ladki jisse aap 3 ya 4 bar mile h uskai liye ...
Lakhan : ye sab nhi pta hame ki kyun kar rahe h kya kar rahe h , bas I wanna u in life my as my life partner at any cost .
Poonam: ham...
Lakhan: bas aap hi ,
Poonam cuts the call
Poonam : ham nhi chahtey h ki aap ko koi nuksaan pahuche , ham bahut bure h hamari wajah se bahut logo ne bahut mushkil uthayi h , lekin ham aapko nhi dal saktey is musibat mai lakhan thakur ,
A tear rolled our from the corner of her eyes ,, she wipes it and said
Ham aapko apni zindagi ka hissa nhi banne dengey with a determined face


NEXT DAY
Poonam doesn't go to college , lakhan call her many times but she didn't pick the call ,,
She don't wanna face him , as she had said that she will say yess to him but now she can't , she wants to be but her past is not allowing her ,
Whole day passed , in the evening mithlesh calls him and tell her that he will be late tonight .

Around 8pm
Poonam mobile rings he picked up the call it was anjali calling her ,
Poonam : hello
But other side very panic voice come
Anjali ; Poonam hamara accident ho gya h tum jaldi se ye highway kai pas Jo petrol pump h wahan aa jao .
Poonam : han ham aate h , par tum wahan kya kar rahi ho ,
But anjali cuts the call Poonam got worried , bhaiya bhi ghar par nhi h ,us taraf to bahut sannata hota h , par hame Jana to padega ,
And she leaves ...
After 1 hour she reached at the spot , but it was too dark , there was no source of light there , Poonam was going forward calling her name when somebody grab her hand and drag her with him , Poonam become very panic and started to scream after sometime her hand was losen , she was standing there all alone her heart beating too fast , suddenly lights on and she found herself inside the garden of a huge house , she was standing in the middle and whole garden was beautifully decorated by lights and flowers and on the floor a beautiful path is made by the help of roses , poonam become to tensed what was happening where was anjali wat was going on , suddenly her picturres started sliding over a big projector and the song start to play , and roses petals are showering upon her .
mere bina mai rahe laga hun ,
Teri hawaon mai bahne lga hun ,
mujhe to lagta h main shayad tere.. dil ki dua hu.. haan
tujhko jo paaya ...aha
tho jeena aaya..
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaan
tujhko jo panaya ...aha
tho jeena aaya..
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan...

Until her pictures are changing and from one of the corner , lakhan come out and start walking towards her
Song continued . ..
Pehle se zyada ..mai jee raha hun
jab se mai tere.. dil se juda hun
rahon pe teri.. mai to chala hun
And on this line he bend his one knee and forwards a beautiful ring towards her ...
tu meri manzil hai tere kadmon pe.. bas rukne laga hu..haan
tujhko jo paaya ...aha
tho jeena aaya..
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaan
tujhko jo paaya ...aha
tho jeena aaya..
And song stops ...,...

Okkk done ...
I hope hope ki hamne kisi ko bore na kiya ho , agar bura lage to u all are free to say anything as I write only for u all

And a big big thanks to for bearing me 🤗

Edited by bishmakhan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
arre itni mystery😕 hum agle update ka intezar nahi kar paynge...

with every line i was smiling iss lakhan thakur ko wo mana kaise kar sakti hai...
😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
ufff itna suspense kyu bish...plz jaldi update kro I just cnt wait
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
bishu sorry for late comment
lovely update here lakhan is soo cute gudda
romantic date 😳
waiting for next jaldi update kar de is baar jaldi parh lu gi🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
iss baar koi comment nhi dugi jb tk next part nhi milta ans kya diya poo ne kya past hai uska jldi bta vrnaaa😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Awww my darlos thank u soo much all 🤗

@muski baby don't need to be sorry read only when u have time 😳 I will not mind sweetheart 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Baah,ka update diya,done with pt4.
badhhiya chal rahi esstory,keep it up..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: girlTalks

Baah,ka update diya,done with pt4.
badhhiya chal rahi esstory,keep it up..

thank u sooo much sweetheart 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanika_11

Just loved it😳

thanks tanu 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Bishu update de wrna juta khaygi

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