Love Ya Betrayal SwaSan SS [ Part 20 Epilogue ] Updated on [Page 57 ] - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome part...this ragini is so mean...apne aur lakshya ko chod kr kuch ni dikhta...kya rakh diya h swara ke bag mei god knws...plz do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hii Guyz..First of All A Very Happy Mother's Day to All Mothers of The World..May God Bless All The Mothers Today n Alwyz...n Secondly Thnks fr The Response fr My Previous Part..Here is the Nxt Part of #Love_Ya_Betrayal.Hope U will Like It :).


Recap : SwaRagini Shopping,SanLak Talk ,Swara Decided to Confess Her Feelings n Ragini Evil Plan..


Love Ya Betrayal


PART 08


After Clearing their Doubts Both Swara n Ragini were Relieved n Relaxed n Went Resumed their Own Shopping Yet Agn Wid A Relieved n A Relaxed Smile on theit faces wich were of 2 Different Types While Ragini had A Evil Smile on Her Face On the Other Hand whereas Swara had A Happy n A Excitement Smile on Her Face Unaware abt The Storm or Shock Waiting Fr Her at the End of the Day...Soon Swara n Sanju Completed their Shopping n went towards Ragini who was Alrdy Present at Counter to Pay The Bill fr The Items they Purch

Swara : Sanju Chal..My Shopping is Completed..Lets Go..

Sanju : Haa Chal..bt b4 We Leave..Did U Buy something fr ur Mr Khadus to Propose Him ??

Swara : ( Blushes ) Haa..I did..bt dnt tell Anyone haa..i want to Surprise.Him..

Sanju : Teasing ) Y wud I tell Anyone Mr Khadus ki Banderiya.. ( Giggles ) its all ur Ryt only to tell Him..So dnt Worry i wont tell anyone..infact i wont tell My Heart too ( Laughs )

Swara : Pagaal..abb chal..lets see Bhabhi Completed or nt Her Shoppinh..

Sanju : Haa Chal..( Sees Ragini ) Dekh Swara..Bhabhi is also Alrdy Present at Counter..Come Lets go thr..

Swara : Ok Chal..

Soon Swara n Sanju Reached the Counter Near Ragini n Strtd Paying their Bill too n was abt to Leave the Shop wen They Heard A Beep frm Their Security Machine wich Made Everyone Shocked n Surprised..

Shop Keeper : ( Shocked n Goes Near Swara ) Ma'am Cn we plzz Chk ur Bag ?? Sorry fr the Inconvenience..We knw u r Laksh Gadodia's Sister bt since the Machine has Beeped We have to Chk ur Bag.( Helpless )

Swara : ( Smiles ) Its Ok..Sure..u cn Chk..I have No Prblm..U r doing ur Duty..

Shop.Keeper : ( Smiles Bak ) Thnks Ma'am..

As the Shop Keeper Strtd Checking Swara's Bag,Ragini was Smiling Evilly n was Eagerly Waiting fr The Moment wich wud Chng Swara's Life Forever ..Soon Shope Keeper Finished Checking Swara's Bag n as He Finished Chking Everyone Especially Swara was Shocked n Speechless seeing An Item Found in Her Bag widout Paying where as Ragini was Smiling Winningly n was Watching n Enjoying The Drama Quitely..

Shop Keeper : ( Angry ) Wat is this Ma'am ?? U were Trying to take the Item widout Paying ...n was Acting Soo Innocent as it U did nt do anything ??..

Swara : ( Shocked ) No..Listen..I have nt done anyhting..( Fumbles ) I ii dont knw hw is came in My Bag..

Shop Keeper : ( Nt in Mood to Listen ) There is nthing to Listen Ma'am..What do u Rich Ppl think of Urself ?? If U r Rich..u all cn do anything? ? U cn Take n Buy Anything wid the Use of ur Money..U r soo Rich u cud have Paid da Money n Buy it na..Bt No U ppl Like to do all the things Illegally..( Continued Insulting )

As Shop Keeper was Insulting Swara Very Badly Ppl Present in Entire Mall Strtd Gathering the Area n Strtd Gossiping while Sanju kept on Consoling n Supporting Swara n Ragini Kept on Smoking Evilly n Enjoyed the Scn..After Some Time Ragini came n Saved Swara n Strtd Insulting Her Indirectly making Swara Guilty n Depressed...

Sanju : ( Consoles Swara ) Swara..Listen..Dnt Cry..I will Call Laksh Bhai Wait..( Dials Laksh's Number bt Stopped by Swara )

Swara : ( Stopped Sanju ) No Sanju..Bhai will be Bzy ..dnt Disturb Him..Plz ( Teary Eyes )

Sanju : ( Surprised ) Bt Swara..agr Laksh Bhai ko Call nhi karege toh Who will Save U ?? Laksh Bhai cn Only do something nw..so plzz Let me call Him..

Swara : ( Requests ) No Sanju Plzz..

As Swara n Sanju were Talking Ragini comes in Front n Saves Swara Indirectly Making Swara More Shocked n Guilty too wich Broke Swara frm Inside Very Badly n was Completely Shattered.

Ragini : ( Pretends to be Concern ) Omg..Swara..wat Hapoened ?? Sorry i was Out fr An Imp Call after Paying Bill..bt u tell me wat Happened Here ?? N Y r u Crying ??

Swara : ( Fumbles n Hugged Ragini n Cries ) Wwohh Bhabhi.. ( Telld Everything )

Ragini : ( Hugs Bak n Smiles Evilly ) Its Ok Swara..wait..let me See da Matter. ( Scolds the Shop Keeper n Smiles Winningly at Him )

As Ragini n Shop Keeper were Smiling Winningly at eachother Sanju Notices it n Feels Awkward n Fishy in Ragini's Behaviour bt In gores it seeing Swara's Condition n Soon SwaRagini n Sanju Left the Mall n Reached the Car..As They Reached the Car Sanju Left fr Her Home in Her Car where as Ragini Strtd Consoling Her in A Indirect Way bt in Other Ragini was Actually Insulting Swara Making Swara Shocked n Shattered too.

Ragini : ( Fake Concern ) Its Ok Swara..it happens..thr is No Need to get Sad or Upset..Everything is Sorted Out na..So.Come On Stop Cr Crying..See Yr Bhai too Scolds Me fr Scolding or Shouting at U..abb see na Today Only He Scolded Me fr Nt going wid U coz I was Angry on Him fr Cancelling Our Plan.Me n Laksh were Supposed to go Out Today together after His Video Conference bt seeing U getting Bored He sent Me wid U..In was Angry on Him..n coz of that We both had A Fyt too.. ( Hugs Swara wid A Evil Smile ) So Its Ok..

Swara : ( Shocked ) Kya ?? Bhai Cancelled His Plan fr going Out wid U jst Coz of Me ( Guilty )

Ragini Haa..bt its Ok..Swara..it happens everytym..its nt da First Tym..He Cancelled Our Most of the Plans coz of U..n Y nt..U r His One m Only Sister na.n Je Proved dat U r Most Imp fr Him wen We Planned to go Out Together On A Day bt seeing U Shivering jn High Fever He Cancelled Our Plan..He Really Loves U More dan Me Swara..So its Ok.. ( Acts Like Teary Eyes )

Swara after Listening n Seeing Ragini's Fake Teary Eyes was Shocked n Shattered Thinking She is da Reasom of Usual Fights Between His Brother n Bhabhi..She was Totally Shattered n Heart Broken n Tears Flowed frm Her Eyes Continously while Ragini Smirked Evilly n Wiped Her Fake Tears wid A Winning Smile on Her Face..

Swara : ( Guilty n Fumbles ) Mm Sorry Bhabhi..I did nt knw dat coz of Me U n Bhai Fights Usually..i was Totally Unaware abt it..agr mujhe pata hota toh I wud have Stopped Disturbing Bhai..Mm Really Sorry Bhabhi.. ( Wipes Her Tears ) Bt Bhabhi dnt Worry..Nw i came to knw the Truth na..I wont Disturb U n Bhai ..n wont Create Any Prblm in Ur n Bhai's Married Life..I will Leave The House Today Itself n go to Dida's House ..Then U n Bhai cn Live Happily.. ( Shattered )

Hearing Swara's Words Ragini was All Happy n A Winning n Excitement Filled Smile Appeared on Her Face n Hugged Swara wid A Fake Concern n Smiled Winningly wid A Fake Tears in Her Eyes.

Ragini : ( Hugs wid Fake Concern ) Swara..Sorry..i did nt Mean da Way u r taking it..i was Jst Explaining U ki it Happens Sometimes..Sometimes its nt ur Fault bt still U get Scolded or Blamed fr the Things u haven't Done..M Sorry Swara ( Cups Swara's Face ) Dnt Take Me Wrong Plzz.

Swara : ( Touches Ragini's Jan's wich Cupped Her Face ) No Bhabhi..M nt Taking it in Wrong Sense bt Taking it in Right Sense Bhabhi..U were Right..its coz of Me Bhai used to Scold U..i shud have Thot ki My Bhai is nt Only My Bhai nw He is Ur Husband too..M Sorry.
( Wipes Her Tears n Diverts da Topic ) Now Chalo Bhabhi..its getting Late..I need to Pack My Bags too fr Leaving.. ( Sees Ragini's Fake Concern Expressions wich She thot is Real ) No Bhabhi..dnt Stop Me..if U Stop Me nw na frm Going den I wont be Able to Forgive Myself..Plzz Let Me go Away frm Ur's n Bhai's Life so dat U both can Live Happily..( Sits in Car wid Tears jn Her Eyes )

As Swara Sat in Car wid Teary Eyes in A Heart Broken n Shattered State Ragini too Sat in Car bt wid A Fake Guilt on Her Face bt wid A Happiness n Excitement inside Her Heart n Drove Bak Home to See Swara Going Out of Her Life Forever..


Precap : Ragini n Laksh Congratulation n Swara Shocked. ..


Done wid Another Part of Love Ya Betrayal Guyz..I knw Its nt Upto The Mark n Ur Expectations.So Forgive Me fr The Bad Part..Bt Still Hoping fr Ur Valuable Comments. .So Do Comment n Shower Ur Valuable Comments in the Comment Box Below n Let Me knw Ur Views abt Todyz Part so That I cn Improve :)..

P.S - Silent Readers too.Comment :).

#Goldie
Edited by Goldie93 - 9 years ago
hadiali thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Intresting
Superb work as always
N hate that ragini 😡
Waiting for next
Love u ... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update 👏 and a sad update also 😭
That shopkeeper was 🤬 why does he is nonstop radio 😡
And ragini 😡 i hate her seriously she is a big drama Queen
Poor swara felt really bad for her
Now the precap i hope ragini truth comes out and why i am thinking there will be some misunderstanding between swasan after raglak fight 😲 am i right? 😉
Beautifully written 👏
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Helee

nice chapter. 😊 poor swara.


Thnks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Superb update 👏 and a sad update also 😭
That shopkeeper was 🤬 why does he is nonstop radio 😡
And ragini 😡 i hate her seriously she is a big drama Queen
Poor swara felt really bad for her
Now the precap i hope ragini truth comes out and why i am thinking there will be some misunderstanding between swasan after raglak fight 😲 am i right? 😉
Beautifully written 👏
Thanks for pm


Thnks alot yaar 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hadiali

Intresting
Superb work as always
N hate that ragini 😡
Waiting for next
Love u ... 😊


Thnks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update bt if it is possible
pls ragini ko positive dikhao
Edited by malhotrariya8 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: malhotrariya8

nice update bt if it is positive
pls ragini ko possible dikhao


Thnks fr Liking My Update..n Still Mny Twists n Turns r Coming Up 😆 so keep reading 😊
Edited by Goldie93 - 9 years ago

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