Love Ya Betrayal SwaSan SS [ Part 20 Epilogue ] Updated on [Page 57 ]

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Hello Guyz..Thnks fr The Wonderful Support n Love for My Previous Wrk.M Really Thnkful to My Super Frnd #Nidhi fr Giving Me an Idea fr Taking A Short Brk frm FFs.Will Post My Nxg FF after Completing My SS...Srsly Thnks Alot Nidhi...So Here is The First Part of My SS..Hope It Reaches ur Expectations..If it has Not,then M Sorry in Advance Only..Will Surely Try My Best to Entertain U..Jst Keep Supporting n Loving My Wrk..And At Last I wud Thnks My India Forum Reader fr Giving this Concept...I will Surely Try to Do My Best n To give Full Justice to Ur Concept..Hope U will Like My Wrk..Do Leave ur Valuable Comments in the Comment Box Below n Let Me knw Ur Views abt The First Part of My SS.

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Love Ya Betrayal


Character Sketch]


Laksh Gadodia : 25 Yrs Famous Businesses Man in India..Also A Business Partner wid Maheshwari Grp of Industries..A Very Kind Hearted Person..Loving Husband of Ragini n A Caring Brother of Swara...n Loves His Sister More dan Anyone..

Ragini Laksh Gadodia : 24 Yrs Caring n Lovely Wife n Sister Yet A Jealous Wife..Tries to Defame Her Sister in Law Swara everytym infront of Laksh..bt Fails Everytym..n A Over Pampered Sister of Sanskaar Maheshwari.

Swara Gadodia : 22 Yrs Bubbly Girl ..Very Simple n A Loving Girl..Love Her Brother Laksh n Bhabhi Ragini Very Much..Tries to Keep all The Relationships in One Bond..Loves Singing n Dancing n A Fun Loving Girl,Bubbly Yet Matured.Loves Sanskaar Secretly..bt Unaware abt Her Feelings

Sanskaar Maheshwari : 26 Yrs Man..Very Successful n A Attitude Business Man..Rules The Business World in India n Loves His Sister Ragini Very Much.. cn go to Any Extend fr His Sister...Loves Swara too bt Unaware abt His Feelings due to Ego n Attitude Prblm

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PART 01


Its A Beautiful Morning n A Beautiful Gorgeous Angel Like Girl was Sleeping Peacefully on Her Bed in A Beautifully Decorated Room wid A Blanket Fully Covered till Her Angelic Face.The Girl Looked Like A Pure n A Innocent Girl wid No Worries n No Tension on Her Face.The Peacefull Sleep of A Girl was Disturbed by An Alarm Set by Her at Night.Hearing The Alarm The Girl Immediately Woke Up wid A Shock n Rushed into The Washroom as soon as possible to get Ready fr Her College as it was An Imp Day fr Her Life n Her Career.The Entire Future n Her Life was Depend on this One Day.So She Immediately Got into Washroom to get Ready in A Hurry..

Girl : ( Wakes Up in A Shock ) Ohh No...Swara u got Late Agn..Ohh God..When will U Grow Up Miss Swara Gadodia..U r Gone Today..Aaj U have to Submit Ur Project Today..Ohh Shit..Hurry Up...( Rushes into Washroom )

Yes The Girl who was Sleeping Peacefully on Her Bed wid An Angelic Smile on Her Face was None other than Swara...SWARA GADODIA..The Heart Beat n Life of Her Brother Laksh..Hearing The Alarm She Rushed into Washroom to get Ready fr Her College..She Immediately after getting Freshen Up Swara Widout Drying Her Hairs n Widout Even Wasting Any Time Picked Up Her Bag n Other Stuffs Hurried Downstairs n Had Her Brk Fast in Hurry.After Getting Down Swara Hurriedly had Her Brk Fast n Set off to Her College in A Hurry after Meeting Her Bhai Laksh n Bhabhi Ragini.

Swara : ( Comes Down in Hurry while Arranging Her Wet Hairs ) Bhabhiii..Jaldi..M Getting Late... ( Takes An Apple as She is Getting Late ) Ok Bhabhi..Leave It..will Have this Apple..( Eats Apple n Hugd Laksh ) Byeee Bhaiii..Bye Bhabhii...( Hugs Laksh ) Love U ( Kisses Laksh's Cheeks ) Muwaaah !!

Seeing Swara going in Hurry like A Kid going to School,Laksh Laughed n Tries to Stop Swara bt by the Time Laksh cud Stop Her,Swara Left The House by Replying Laksh..

Swara : ( While Eating Apple ) Noo Bhai..Gotta Go..Today I have to Submit My Project Today..wich is really Imp..Soo Byeee..See Ya Later..Love U Agn..Byee..

Laksh : ( Laughs ) Accha Ok Bye Shona..Take Care.. ( Swara Left ) Pagaal...Pata nhi kab Sudregi..( To Ragini ) Ragini..Jaldi laao Yaar Brk Fast..M also Getting Late..Fast..See Shona also Left widout having Her Brk Fast..Zaara Jaldi kara karo tum kaam Ragini..

Seeing Laksh Calling Her Loudly,Ragini comes Out of Kitchen wid A Plate of Brk Fast in Anger n Taunts Laksh Indirectly fr Swara's Lateness..

Ragini : ( Angry ) Soo wat cn I do if Ur Sister Left widout Brk Fast..She shud Wake Up Early na..She knws ki She has to Submit Project Today..So She shud Wake Up Early.. ( Keeps Laksh's Plate in Anger ) Everytym I cnt All Her Wrk..Tell ur Sister to Wake Up Early..if She wants Her Brk Fast..( Angry )

Hearing Ragini Speaking Agnst Swara,Laksh gets Angry n Scolded Ragini Bak fr Her Behaviour towards Swara..

Laksh : ( Angry n Stands Up frm da Table ) Ohh Come On Ragini..Plzz dnt Strt ur Drama agn..i have told u mny tyms dnt dare u tell agnst My Shona..Arrey usne kya Bigada hai tumhara..She jst Suffers all ur Taunts n Scolding all alone in Her Room..She dnt even tell anyone hw much She is Suffering..Srsly Disgusting Ragini..My Poor Shona Searches Her Mother n A Good Frnd in U..bt U.. ( Jerks all His Thots n Leaves in Anger widout Having Brk Fast ) Khair..Leave..M nt Interested in Spoiling My Day coz of U..M Leaving nw..( Leaves in Anger )

As soon As Laksh Leaves in Anger,Ragini too gets More Angry n Vows to Throw Swara Out of The House n frm Her n Laksh's Life n Goes to Her Room in Anger..

Ragini : ( Angry n Throws Cleaning Cloth on Dining Table ) Shona..Shona..Shona..WTH..This Swara is Spoiling My Married Life..jabse iss Ghar main aayi hu tabse har Cheez main Shona..Dimag Khrb kar rakha iss Swara ne..Need to do something asap..

After Vowing to Throw Swara Out of Her Life,Ragini goes to Her Room Leaving The Dining Table Un Cleaned n Ordered da Servant to Clean The Table in Anger.


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St.Thomas College

12PM

Time Passed it was 12 at Noon n Swara and Her Grp of Frnds were in Canteen n were Enjoying their Free Tym.As Swara was Talking to Her Frnds,She Recieves A Call on Her Phone n Seeing Her Phone Ringing Swara sees da Name Flashing on Her Phone,Swara has A Big Smile Appears on Her Face wich Lead to Immediate Pick Up of Call.

Swara : ( Smiles seeing da Call n Picks da Call ) Haa Hello Bhai..

Laksh : ( Concerned ) Shona..Tu theek toh hai na ?? U did nt have ur Brk Fast Properly na..so dats Y i was Worried fr U..thot to Call U after Half n Hour of ur Leaving..bt got Bzy in An Sudden Meeting..isiliye cud nt Call u..abb jab wen i got Free Time i called U..Did U Eat anything.. ?? If No Go n Have something Shona..U knw na U cnt Handle ur Hunger much..n u get Ill if u r Empty Stomach fr Long..( Continued His Concerned )

Swara : ( Smiles at Laksh's Care ) Aww..Bhai..Relax Plzz..M all Fyn Bhai..n Dnt Worry i alrdy had something..The Moment I entered College i went to Canteen to Eat Something ..so Take A Chill Pill Bhai ( Giggles )

Laksh : ( Fake Anger ) Chill Pill ki Bacchi..here m Concerned fr U n tumhe Maazak succh raha hai..tu Ghar aa..will show U wat is Chill Pill ( Laughs )

Swara : ( Smiles Naughtily ) Ok Fyn Bhai..Lets see..( Sees Tym frm Her Eyes Wrist Watch ) Accha Bhai..Gotta Go..Nxt Class ka Tym Hogaya..Bye.Love U...

Laksh : ( Smiles ) Ok Shona Bye..n Haa Take Care haa..n Love U too..

As Laksh n Swara were Talking to Eachother,Swara Heard Another Voice frm Other Side wich Made Swara Smile A Lil Bit Unknowingly n Strtd Teasing The Other Person Present on Laksh's Side Making Laksh to Smile at Her Childish Behaviour.

Boy : ( Sees da Tym ) Ohh ..Laksh..Come On Fast Yaar..Meeting ke liye Late horahi hai..So Hurry Up Dude..Apni uss Banderiya Behan Ghar per Baath karlena..nw lets go . client myt be Waiting.

Swara : ( Smiles bt Fake Anger ) Bhaaaii..Is dat Mr Khadus over there wid U ?? If Yes den Plzz Keep da Phone on Speaker..

Laksh : ( Smiles n Enjoys ) Shona Phone is alrdy on Speaker...n wat ever U Spoke till nw is Heard by ur Mr Khadus..So nw Speak after thinking Twice..

Swara : ( More Fake Anger ) Haaww Bhai..U r Soo Bad..Y did u keep da Phone on Speaker ? It means Mr Khadus Heard Everything wat We Talked ..

Laksh : ( Laughs ) Yes My Dear Sissy.Ur Mr Khadua yaani Sanskaar Heard Everything..i was Bzy in Some Wrk so Kept the Phone on Speaker..

Yes Guyz The Boy is None Other than Our Rough n Touch Mr Sanskaar Maheshwari...Inspite of being Rough n Tough frm Outside,Our Hero was Really Kind Hearted n Polite Guy frm His Heart,bt being A Business Man His Ego was Much More Imp to Him..bt wenever He Listens or sees Someone Talking abt Swara,Sanskaar has A Unknown Smile on His Face n gets Bzy in His Own Thots.Hearing to Swara's Voice frm Long Time while Laksh was Talking to Her,Sanskaar thot to Tease Her Lil Bit n Decided to Enjoy Her Sweet Angry Voice.

Sanskaar : ( Smiles Naughtily ) Laksh Tell Ur Banderiya Behen to Stop Her Childish ryt nw n Allow us to go to Our Meeting..We r nt at all Free like Her to Spend Our Tym Roaming Here n There Like A Bander ( Smiles n Enjoys )

Swara : ( Angry ) Fyn ) Ohh Hello Mt Khadus..Wat do u mean by Nt Like Me ?? M i Looking Like A Bander 6o U.( Angry n Irritated ) Ok Fyn..U come Tonite at Our Home i will Show u Wat This Banderiya cn do...So Come at ur Own Risk haa...Later dnt Complain to My Bhai dat ur Sis is Really A Banderiya..( Sees the Time n Shocked ) OMG !!! Byeee Bhai n Mr Khadus..Need to go..Nxt Class ka Time..See Ya both in Evening..n Bhai Plzz Send The Driver on Time to Pick Me Plzzz..Hamesha He Comes Late n I have to Wait fr Him All Alone..

Laksh : ( Serious ) Ohh..Is that Shona ? Ok I will tell Him..Be Careful Shona..That Place in Evening is nt Safe for Girls..So Stay inside The College only till The Driver Comes..Ok ??

Swara : ( Smiles ) Haa Ok Bhai..Sure..Nw Bye.. n Hello ( Tell Lil Louder ) Mr Khadus..Bye to U too..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles ) Haa Bye Banderiya..Take Care .

Swara : ( Smiles ) U too Mr Khadus...

Listening to Laksh n Swara's Talk abt The Place in Evening Sanskaar got Lil Tensed n Worried abt Swara n Decided Something n Smiled Unknowingly..

Sanskaar : ( Worried ) Laksh..I guess U shud Take A Strict Action agnst dat Driver or Chng Swara's Driver..Its nt Safe fr A Girl to Stay Alone in dat Place Till Late Evening..

Laksh : ( Thinks n Worried ) Yes Sanskaar..u r ryt..Especially A Girl Like Shona..Its nt Like She cnt Handle..She cn..She knws hw to Protect Herself..bt Still She is A Girl Only n I heard at that Place Near Her College in Evening Some wat 3 to 4 Rowdies comes thr fr their Fun..So I shud Really Take A Strict Action..Today only I Tell dat Driver n take A Good Class of Him.. ( Serious )

Sanskaar : ( Satisfied ) Haa.U Shud..( Diverts The Topic ) Accha Come Lets Go..Meeting is going to Strt in Few Minutes..

Soon Sanskaar n Laksh Both Took their Imp Files frm their Respective Desks n Left The Cabin to Attend Meeting.While Leaving fr The Meeting Sanskaar Thot abt Swara n Had a Smile on His Face n Decided Something n Headed towards The Meeting Room wid A Slight Smile on His Face.

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Precap : Swara Waiting fr Her Driver n A Car Stops in Front of Her n Swara Get Shocked..

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So Guyz Here is The First Part of My SS.Hope I reached to ur Expectations.If Not then M Really Sorry fr Disappointing U All...Leave Ur Valuable Comments in the Comment Box Below n Let Me Knw Ur Views abt The First SS..

#Goldie

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LoveSonu2408 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!awsm strt.
Love it.
If m nt wrng i thnk sanskar ll b with swara bcz of ragini's insistense as she wnt 2 throw her out.
So thts y title z lk tht.swara ll b cnfusd tht is it sanskar's betryal or love?
M i ri8 or wrng?
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Wow goldie nice concept ! Continue soon 👍🏼 🤗 😎
Edited by _Esha_ - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Wow!awsm strt.
Love it.
If m nt wrng i thnk sanskar ll b with swara bcz of ragini's insistense as she wnt 2 throw her out.
So thts y title z lk tht.swara ll b cnfusd tht is it sanskar's betryal or love?
M i ri8 or wrng?


Thnks alot fr The Appreciating My Wrk...N I cnt Disclose anything..Jst Wait n Keep Reading to Knw More..Hope U will Like The Story 😊
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Originally posted by: _Esha_

Wow goldie nice concept ! Continue soon 👍🏼 🤗 😎


Thnks alot 😊
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Nice. Both love each other but has not realised their true feelings yet.
By the looks of it Swasan will get married as Sanskar will want to remove the "problem" in his sister's happy married life. By the time he realise it will be too late. I hope I'm wrong about that last part.

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wow nice start dear👏
congrats for new story
will surely enjoy it lots
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Thnks 😊
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Oh goldie tum great ho tu mera humsafar se direct to betrayal 🤣
Superb concept 👏
Ragini as villain 😲
Lakshya as caring brother 😳
Swara as bubbly like always 😉
But i am confused about sanskar what he will be a villain or hero 😉
But totally lovely start
This story is very interesting
One question is this story will be also update daily 😃 ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Goldie 🤗
u back!!!!!
nice start...
good title 😉
by d way in precap the car must be of sanky right???? 😳
Ragini why she is lyk ds????
Swara is such a bubly girl.
oho mr.khados is cncerned fr her banderiya
do cntinue soon dear.
love u ❤️

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