twinj os In Your arms forever part 2 updated(pagee 2)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys ... i write short stories in my diaries only .. so today i thought to write somethng on twinj for the frst tym .. here r so many fab writers u all inspired me n i know m not tht much good but still tried to write somethng ..
n this os is not related with the current track ..

mahi was dead .. twinkle just cant get over from this shock that in front of her she fall from cliff n she unable to do anythng ..
after 1 month .. her state is same she spoke very less n still in trauma
Bebe: kunj puttar woh hamre chandigarh vale sharma ji h na unki bete ki aaj pehli shadi ki sal girah or unhone humsbko bulaya h. pr puttar hum sb to ni ja skte to tu twinkle nu ko apne naal le ja uska bhi mood thk ho jayega thoda sa .. he agreed to her

( here twinkle n kunj didnot confessed yet .. but both knows that inside they have feelings for each other)

both reached there .. sharma ji welcomed them n they stayed in there farm house

kunj: twinkle abhi party ko thoda time h tum thoda rest krlo
twinkle nodded
At night Mrs sharma especially gave twinkle a beautiful black saree to wear .. she agreed
and she helped twinkle in wearing saree
At party
kunj just cant take his eyes off from her she is looking like an angel.. everyone praises her beauty
kunj: twinkle u r looking stunning
twinkle : thnku vese tum bhi bht smart lg rhe ho
mr sharma : are tum dono akele akele bate hi krte rhoge ya dance floor p dance bhi kroge
kunj: chle twinkle
twinkle: nhi kunj mera man nhi plz
kunj: ohk with sad face
twinkle understood this n thn jst hold his arm n says lets go
( m not explaining their dance )
when they r dancing twinkle jerked with pain on her shoulder n she realised that her pin from shoulder fall on floor n now she have no idea wht to do
kunj look at. her tensed face and asked wht happen
twinkle indicated her to look at her shoulder
he understood that her pin fall
suddenly her pallu is about to fall from her shoulder he immediatly put his hand on her shoulder not letting pallu fall
they both managed to come out from party as they all were busy in dancing
now twinkle feel very embarrasing she dont know how to react somehow she manage to fix her pallu with her hair clip
kunj: twinkle its ok .. bde bde shehro mein ese chote mote hadse hote rhte h
twinkle: thnku kunj
kunj: dekh twinkle aaj mausam kitta acha h to kya tu mere sath long walk p chlna pasand kregi
twinkle : agr party main hume kisi ne doondha toh?
kunj: doondha to smjh jayenge husband wife h khi akele time spend kr rhe honge
twinkle : ohk
they both were walking on road hand in hand .. actually thn suddenly rain started
kunj: jldi chl twinkle barish hone lgi hum bhig jayenge
twinkle: nhi kunj mujhe barish main rhna h plzzz bht din ho gye tum bhi chlo na bht mja aayega
she just start dancing in rain with joy kunj just kept staring her lovingly
just thn he saw twinkle eyes get teary he saw here n there
he looked at twinkle
twinkle just kept staring on two sisters which was also playing on road in rain ..
her all memories came in front of her eyes which she spent with mahi
she just sit on road n start crying very badly
kunj just hate the sight which was in front of his eyes ..
he too bent on his knees n kept his hand on her shoulder twinkle ..
she just hugged him very tightly ..
kunj: shhh twinkle chup
twinkle:kunj...v...voh...m...maa...mahi
words was not coming out from her mouth ..
kunj:shhh twinkle plz mt ro plzz main tujhe ese rote hue nhi dekh skta
twinkle: sb meri vajah se hua h meri aankhon k samne mahi mar gyi or main kuch ni kr payi kunj kuch nhi .. n crying more loudly
kunj: teri koi glti nhi h twinkle plz apne aap ko blame mt
kunj jst try to console her ..try to calm her down n just hugged her tightly very tightly
twinkle : kunj tum to kbhi mujhe chodke nhi jaoge na
kunj: jaunga agr tu ese royegi toh
this made twinkle more cry
acha baba m sorry i never ever think to leave u ...
twinkle: nhi tum jhuth bol rhe ho tum bhi mujhe chodke chle jaoge jese pehle papa, uv or ab mahi chali gyi h vese
kunj : nhi twinkle i promise i will never leave u ... n thn he kissed her forhead n hugged her
they both sath there in hugging position just thn twinkle realised in wht position they were she stood up .. kunj also get up .. just thn .. a loud noise of lightning came which make twinkle scared like hell .. she turned back and again hugged him tightly
twinkle: while hugging mujhe lightning se bht dar lgta h
kunj:shh twinkle main hu na yha darne ki koi jrurt nhi h m here its just lightning
twinkle : kunj bachpan main jb lightning hoti thi to main maa ko kaske pakad leti tji taki dar na lge ...
kunj : to ab mujhe pakad lo
twinkle: she sobbed in his arms
literally she was very scared
shhh dont cry just thn another sound came this tym more louder thn before
twinkle hugged kunj more tightly she clutched his coat very tightly in fear ..
after some time lightning stopped and she broke the hug .. n about to walk just thn her pallu fall from her shoulder .. kunj just saw this n twinkle didnt notice tht kunj was staring at her whn twinkle look up she saw his was n quickly crossed her arms around her chest n turned back ... kunj just take baby steps n picked her pallu from road and put it on shoulder n coverd her as its too cold now because of raining ... ...
whts say guys should i countinue or not...?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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whyyy oh whhhyyy!! that was so awesome !!!
you are seriously asking whether you should continue ???
comeee onnn. its purely greattt
I loved the hugs and the rain and what nottt
you should definitely write more
pleaseee do !!
that was amazing I tell you
hayeee, continue sooon !!

Edited by ..queen.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful plz do continue!! Ur amazing!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow very great dear 😳
Plz continue .. it's very lovely 😛😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start for a first time writer
no need to ask just continue
it was lovely.
emotional and romantic
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is so adorable
Loved it
N is very well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thnku thnku thnkuuu i m glad tht u all like this .. n yes i do continue .. next part will be updated soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its really very very very interesting
how amazingly kunj was helping her...
and twinkle shattered in his arms
and the last bit was so cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ok... guys so here i continue
Part 2

its 11:30 they reached farm house .. luckily there was no one because all were slept due to hangover of the party
they went to their room
kunj: twinkle tu chnge krle othrwise teko sardi ho jayegi
twinkle: haa thk h a...aa...aaaccchhhuuu
kunj : dekha ho gyi na sardi maine mana kiya tha mt bhig barish main nhi pr tu thodi na kbhi meri sunegi
bs tujhe to apni man ki krni hoti h huhhh
twinkle: haa to itti achi barish ho rhi thi bhig gyi tum bhi to mere sath bhighe the toh ab tum bhi apne aap ko danto
kunj: hawww mujhe knosi sardi lgi h jo main khudko dantu jst thn he also sneezed a..aaa...accchuuu
twinkle : frst laugh thn scold him
maine bhi to tumhe mana kiya tha mt bhigo mere sath to tum kyu mere piche piche aaye
kunj:tujhe akele kaise chod deta twinkle
tujhse promise jo kiya h
twinkle blushed after listening to this
jst thn she again sneezed
kunj: plz twinkle tu chnge krle vrna poori raat mujhe preshan kregi
twinkle : huhhh ja rhi hu
after 20 min she came out from bathroom wearing silk knee length nighty with outer
hair all wet .. kunj also chnged his clothes whn she was in bathroom
kunj: twinkle tu yha bed pe soja main sofe p sojata hu
twinkle: nhi voh tum yha bed p hi so jao
kunj :ohk
both sleep looking at each other
at 3'0 clock
twinkle woke up to drink water but the jar was empty so she went to the farm house's kitchen fill the bottle and came back but she listen some noise which made her scared so she hide near the wall . In wall there was a sharp nail inside the wall
when she was hiding she hit her back with that nail n blood was oozing out from tht place she winced in pain
she came back to their room try to stop the bleeding but unable to do so because her hands didnot reach there
she tried to sleep but struggled
kunj's sleep got disturbed by some noise he saw twinkle was struggling while sleeping
he turned on light
kunj:kya hua twinkle tum so ni pa rhi
twinkle: voh kuch nhi bs aise hi with moist eyes
kunj: nhi twinkle btao na kya bat h
twinkle turned back to show her wound and quickly retrned back to normal position
kunj: twinkle show me your back your wound need to be treated
she slowly turned her back

kunj: tumhe kitta khoon aarha h tune mujhe uthaya kyu nhi twinkle dekh kitta jor se lga h
twinkle : voh tum so rhe the
kunj : sohi rha tha utha leti acha chod yeh bta ointtment kaha h
she pointed there
he bring ointment n cotton n sat back
kunj. slid his hand in her waist which make twinkle shiver n slowly open the knot of her outer
twinkle: kunj t..tum y.ye. kk...kya kr rhe ho
kunj:shhh he put his finger oon her lips
tum kitta bolti hu twinkle agr yeh outer nhi utarogi to medicine kaise lgaunga
he removed her outer n start wiping the blood from her shoulder very carefully not letting harm by his touch
he thn applied som medicine there which cause her pain
she winced in pain aaahhh
kunj: tu thk h na thoda jalega is medicine se
twinkle: hmmm main thk hu
he thn start blowing air to reduce her pain
she jst moved a litle bit
he thn put cotton on tht place to cover tht wound after finishing he jst lost in her beauty he slowly slid his arms on her arms n kissed her shoulder
twinkle just hold his hand tightly
kunj thn kissed her neck n about to turn her they both realised wht was happened jst few seconds ago .. both become crimson red
kunj: a. aa..amm tu sojao kafi rat hogyi
twinkle: ha
shewas wearing her outer but she struggled
kunj: twinkle rhenedo agr tum ise phnogi to tumhari cotton utr jayegi
twinkle agreed n sleeps
kunj kept staring at her looking at her beautiful face slowly n decide to tell her tht how much he love her
kunj: chl kunj tujhe kl apne pyar ka ijahar krna h soja thn he also asleep

so here it complete part 2
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was so damn awesome
I so need a continuation right now
please update sooon

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