RagYa SS she is my Angel [part 5 on pg 14] updated 15/6

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character sketch


Ragini Gadodia; music teacher in a reputed school. Mature, Responsible, Kind hearted, caring and bread winner of her family.


Lakshya Maheswari; once a successful businessman. But know he finds his soalce in Alcohol. pretends to be rude and arrogant but deep inside he is still the sweet and caring person.


Gadodia family;

Ragini gadodia; only daughter of shekher and janki gadodia

shekher dadodia; father of Ragini, bed ridden unable to walk because of an accident happened 3 years ago

Janki gadodia; mother of Ragini, house wife, very sweet and caring


Maheswari family


Lakshya maheswari; The only son of Durga prasad Maheswari and Annapurna


Durga prasad Maheswari; A big businessman and a strict father but loves lakshya so much but never express it


Annapurna Maheswari; mother of lakshya and a house wife



Prologue;



He comes home drunk like every night. His mother annapurna was waiting for

him like always. He was about to stumble but his mother with the help of a

servent prevents him from falling. They take him to his room annapurna has tears

in her eyes seeing his son's condition. Lakshya, Lakshya she tries to wake him up

but all invain. He was totally under alcoholic effect, why did you do this to me, i

loved you so much. why did you betray me he murmers in the sleep. Annapurna

looks at him helplessly puts off the light and walks out of his room.



Your father and me wants you to get married says janki

ma please we have already talked about it. I don't want to get married she says.

Do you still love him asks janki.

ofcourse not she replies instantly

I have moved on ma. I don't want to cry or remember a cheat like him.

His betryal has made me strong. I loved him truly but all i got in return was pain

But Ragini says janki

ma please cuts off ragini

janki sighs and walks out of her room



please leave your feed back whether to continue it or not😊



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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting ..
well whatisthathappened to both of them..😲
waiting for the next prt pls post it asap.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start..
It is either a love story of separation or a story of second love...

I would prefer the 1st one..

Anyways, awesome start/..

Waiting for next..

Do PM me!👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting story...

Do continue...can't wait to read
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue
continue soon next prt
waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This sounds interesting please continue soon 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds interesting sudhi... do cont soon...wonder what happened in the past n why is Laksh a devdas..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShirishaTeddy

Awesome start..

It is either a love story of separation or a story of second love...

I would prefer the 1st one..

Anyways, awesome start/..

Waiting for next..

Do PM me!👍🏼


Thanks shri😊

sure will PM you when i update

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

interesting ..

well whatisthathappened to both of them..😲
waiting for the next prt pls post it asap.😊


Thanks harshita

will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

Nice prologue
continue soon next prt
waiting...


Thanks😊

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