RagYa SS she is my Angel [part 5 on pg 14] updated 15/6 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting chapter can't wait to read more I am sure there is some misunderstanding between them please post the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarshineHues

OMG !!

🤗🤗

What a wonderful wonderful concept Sudhs !!

And so intriguing !!

Our poor BBs...what has happended to them ? How has this misunderstanding happened ?

They're both pining for each other so much...its obvious that they still love each other deeply.

Humara Lucky toh has become an alcoholic...khair you know our weakness for drunk Lucky, lol. 😆😆

Who is this Meera ? I hope she hasn't done all of this.

So many questions, and no answers yet.

Please update this soon Sudhs !!

I can't wait to read further !! 🤗🤗



Aww thank you Aditi🤗🤗

Glad you liked it. 😃

yup both love each other deeply. Drunk lucky is always our favourite isn't it😆

there will be some revelations in the next part

will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Interesting chapter can't wait to read more I am sure there is some misunderstanding between them please post the next part soon


Thanks Ray😃

will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haww!!!Laksh thinks Ragini loves his money !!!!
OMG!!! A very big misunderstanding between both of them...looks like...
Eagerly waiting for the next update... You have created a suspense 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Claptrap-

Haww!!!Laksh thinks Ragini loves his money !!!!

OMG!!! A very big misunderstanding between both of them...looks like...
Eagerly waiting for the next update... You have created a suspense 😆


Thanks for commenting😊


Edited by sudhi03 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36





part 2



Laksh remembering his moments ragini when someone comes from the back and

him from the back laksh comes back to his senses and feels uncomfortable. He

takes out her hands and turns back and gets surprised



Hi Laksh meera greets him with a big smile

Hi meera you're here but ma said you were coming tomorrow

I thought of giving you a surprise. You didn't liked it?

It's nothing meera i'm happy you are here and turns around his face and meera

angrily glares at him but tries to control her anger.

meera; laksh you are still thinking about that girl? why don't you forget her

Laksh; stop it meera i don't want to talk about it

meera; But why laksh after what she did you still love her that girl doesn't

deserve your love she is a cheat laksh

Laksh; Now more angrily shouts i said stop it meera

meera; no laksh i won't stop you have to forget her its' been 3 years she is still in

your heart that B**** why don't she go out from our lives

laksh; angrily shouts enough meera you are my friend but don't cross your limits.

you have no right to say anything about her. what ever happened it's between us

so i'm warning you don't you dare say something like this again i hope i'm clear.

Now go from here and leave me alone laksh shouts and meera gets scared.

she controls her tears and anger

meera; i'm sorry laksh my intention was not to hurt you please forgive me. Leave

this all let's go out for lunch please

Laksh; I'm not interested meera may be some other day

she continuosly pleads and he finally agrees and goes to freshen up.

meera goes out from his room and bumps into DP in the hall

DP; meera beta you are here how are you? what happened you look disturbed

meera; Nothing is fine uncle i just spoke to laksh

DP; did he said something to you?

meera; he did say many thing today he proved i'm nothing to him says angrily

we did so much to throw that ragini out of his life but he still loves her madly. i'm

really scared uncle today i said something bad about ragini and he got so angry

what will happen if he comes to know what dirty game we played with both of

them he will kill us all uncle. I thought he would come to me if ragini goes out of

his life but nothing like that happened he is still living in her memories i got

nothing after doing so much

DP; Don't worry meera i know he is so stubborn i talked with annapurna she will

definately make him agree for the marriage have some patience

Meera; patience she asks angrily i'm tolerating all this for the last 3 years i can't

take this anymore. we have to do something very fast i know laksh has decided

not to meet ragini ever but if they comes face to face it won't take much time for

their misunderstandings to cleared before that i have to get married to laksh and

we shall move to london, I can't loose him to ragini.

just then laksh enters and they stops talking


meera and laksh sitting in the back seat of the car and the car stops at the

signal. It was ragini's school where he saw her for the first time


3 years ago


Laksh maheswari was always a workaholic and a lonely person nothing mattered

to him than his business being the only heir of maheswari industries there was

always pressure on him to do the best but that day other than his work something

else pulled his attention he saw a girl playing with kids in the rain she looked no

less then an angel. Her smile, her beauty, her innocence attracted him and

unknown smile came on his face. For a moment he forgot the entire world that

was the magical moment he never felt something like that in this entire life, That

was so pure and divine.

The best moments in life can't be explained they are meant to be felt. He felt so

lively at that moment as if he got a new birth. she ran into the school building and

he came back to his senses




present;

laksh, laksh meera was trying to talk to him.Are you ok? you look lost what

happened

Laksh; Nothing let's go home

meera;; But we are going for lunch

Laksh; now i want to go home he asked the driver to go back


Ragini's heart beat started racing she felt him so close to her after what all has

happened there is still something which connects their hearts she can still feel his

presence near to her. Her eyes got moist she tried to control her emotions.

Both of them wished to never meet the other person but destiny has always

someother plans.





Edited by sudhi03 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
cant wait to read the full update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

cant wait to read the full update


updated😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Mmm... So Meera and DP created misunderstanding between RagLak...
Loved that when Lakshya shouted at Meera for talking bad about Ragini... Aww!!! He still love her... 😳
Awesome update... Waiting for the next.. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
why didnt i know of this ss anyhow dair aaye durust aaye.
brilliant update. the concept is really nice
please do update the next part soon

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