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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Why he wants to kill shlok?

Who's mother is in custody?
Thank you sai
Nice update

u will know soon
wait and watch
pleasure is mine 😳
thanks a lot 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Catherine06

Very interesting,liked it very much,keep going

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hope u support me throughout the ff
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

A really cute update it was... Enjoyed it. But still confused regarding the anonymous person!! Think it's something regarding the accident which Niranjan was worried about!

thanks a lot
hmm u will know about it soon
till then njoy ashlok romance
hmm u r right but far away from the real point

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzles

Nice update Sai...
Ashlok scenes are wonderful
Mystery is again make me tensed good going

thank u
dont tense too much it is not gud for ur health 😆
thanks for liking it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Wonderful update...

Ashlok part was just too good..loved it😳
Curious to know about the unknown person ...
Thank you

thanks a lot
oh yes they r always cute 😳
hold ur curiosity u will know soon
stay tuned to forum 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: syvalini

haiii

lovely update sai...
nice conversation of anjali n astha
i loved the part of ashlok very much sai well written
like shlok for understanding astha
really astha was a kid like kavya
superb that dinner scene
hmm now got that because of niru deeds shlok is suffering hay na
niru did any wrong to that famliy
so they want to take revenge
now it became so curious to read wat next comes...
u r rocking sai...
good going...
thanks for ur lovely n wonderful ff's n os's n ss's sai...
yesterday i missed to read that but today i read it that ashlok part 2
really u ppl r treating us everyday with some exiting, innovative ,funny,n interesting writings.
thanks to neha also giving such amazing writing...
u guys amzing...
keep it up...⭐️

hi akkiii
thanks a lot akkkiii
Hmm yes Ashlok were always cute anyone can like them
Yes Aastha is jus like another Kavya
Niru didnt do anything u will know it wait and watch and Shlok is not suffering he has his own enmity wait for it
revenge hmm it will be justified finally wait for it
thank u akki
no pblm hope u follow daily from today
thanks a lot
hmm yes she is rocking yaar she is my inspiration in writing hope she continues so


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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 32


Shlok "Aastha mujhe wo Khannas ki file aur wo blue color file de." Aastha gave it to him and was arranging the shelf. Shlok went to the door and stopped there and said "Aastha mera kiss bhi de do." Aastha "Shlok late nahi ho raha hain kya." Shlok "arey kya hain yaar." Aastha came to him and kissed him and said bye. Shlok smiled and went away.


Aastha too smiled and started doing all her house chores. It looked very beautiful. Everyone were happy. Aastha too enjoyed her new life with them. Avdoot in his house feeling guilt of wat all happened. They were talking very less with him seeing him like an alien. This is killing him he cant go out. He was very sad wat did he do yaar he stole all the wealth not only his he cant think how many ppl have suffered bcoz of him. He was alone in his room. He cant go anywhere even it was a jail like him where every thing is available.


How can he just lose his morals. How could he blindly believe him. However he returned all the money now he was regretting wat he did he was staring at Aastha's photo. Please beta ek baar mujhse baat kijiye. A lone tear escaped his eye. He wiped it and thought to talk to her. So he called her from his home. Aastha cheerfully picked up the call "Aai kaise hain aap." Avdoot "Aastha main tumhari Baba hoon beta tumse baat karne keliye call kiya bohut man ho raha hain beta kaise hain mere bachchi."


Aastha immediately cut the call in anger and again called her aayi and warned her to not let him call her. She was literally fuming with anger. Anjali came to her at the same time. She listened all the convo and came to her and kept her hand on her shoulder. Aastha turned and saw her. Anjali "Aastha tum apni Baba se itni nafrat karna teek nahi hain Aastha shayad usko afsoos ho raha hain don't take it too far Aastha bcoz I know how he might be feeling."


Aastha saw her "aai pls aai aap iski bare main mat baat kijiye u know u know everything how much I cried for him but wen I knew he made a mistake I cant control myself aai kitni galat thi main ne kitni badi bevakoof I thought Baba didnt do anything such Baba is innocent but he just broke my trust aai I cant easily forgive him." Anjali "theek hain but don't take that much time afterwards u will regret for ur deeds."


Aastha nodded and left. She wanted to ask wats the matter between her and Shlok y is Shlok behaving rude with her but within the time she turned she vanished. Aastha was going to her room but she saw Jyoti laughing to herself and was feeling happy isse kya hua and she went in. As soon as Aastha entered Jyoti suddenly looked at her shockingly. Aastha observed her keenly.


Aastha "Kya hua Tai y r u so happy today batao mujhe." Jyoti "kuch nahi vahini kuch bhi nahi." Aastha "achcha bohut muskura rahe hain app abhi batao mujhe kya baat hain." Jyoti "arey vahini kuch nahi vahini such I was just recalling yesterdays incident how u said story to Kavya." Aastha knows she was hiding something. Aastha "achcha teek hain Tai will u help me in something."


Jyoti "Kya vahini." Aastha "mujhe Shlok ki photos chahiye uski bachpan ki photos." Jyoti "Aai knows she knows where r they." Aastha "arey Tai aap laona pls y to ask this to aai and if she asks then tell her I want to know about all ur relatives that's it k." Jyoti "achcha theek hain." Aastha went from there and thought suddenly to go to his study room.


She went there and examined everything. Wat might have happened mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain something worse might have happened is that the reason Shlok hate aai lekin kaisa pata chalna hain shall I ask Jyoti Tai nahi I just came here as new bahu I should first mingle with them nicely she thought. She then went to her room and then got bored and called him. She talked all useless things which made him go mad.


Shlok finally requested her to cut the call "Aastha pls call cut kardo na mujhe na kuch kaam hain after coming to home we will go out k." Aastha cheerfully said k and also said I love u to him. Shlok thought sach main pagal ladki hain bacho ki tarah behave karti hain.


Aastha was thinking about his first marriage who was she how is she does she look better than me wat would have happened to stop the marriage y is she thinking all these she is happy with him now y to bring all those now she wanted to throw all those nahi if I throw he will get angry y is he preserving all those until now if he is happy with me. She was pacing here and there. Jyoti came in and brought album. Aastha cheerfully took it and thanked her.


Aastha opened it and saw all his photos and excited herself. After seeing all those she opened his cupboard and saw all his shirts, blazers and thought ye kya ho raha hain mujhe main pagal ho raha hain iski pyaar main. She smiled herself and went to cook lunch. Here Shlok too was no where his concentration she was the only one he was thinking about wat to do with this lady she always surprises me.


She was fearing of SR oh my Aastha jaldi tum apne aap mere paas aaogi and for that hard work begins from today he thought. Aastha was feeling bored she always wanted to be with him. She got an idea she thought to take lunch to him haan that would be better she thought. She immediately went down quickly.


Anjali saw her cheerfully isse kya hua achanak. Anjali "Kya hua Aastha y r u running." Aastha "Aai main Shlok ko lunch le jaongi pls pls pls." Anjali "achcha teek hain pagal jao." And she smiled. Anjali "lekin Aastha jaldi aao baahar bohut garmi hain." Aastha "haan teek hain." Jyoti observed Aastha leaving immediately she went in.


Aastha rushed to office. She directly stormed into his cabin without disturbing her smile in the face but suddenly her smile faded seeing a lady wiping the juice on his coat and saying "sorry sorry Sir I m really its my fault." Shlok saw Aastha. He was confused y she was there. Sukanya the lady too saw her and moved away. Aastha's eyes watered. Immediately she went away. Aastha was throwing daggers with her eyes tearfully.


Aastha came to Shlok silently and gave the lunch didn't utter a word and was going to leave. Shlok was confused isse kya hua. Shlok "Aastha kaha jaa rahi hain." Aastha "main main ghar jaa rahi hoon aap ye khalijiye." Shlok "arey wat happened Aastha kya hua tum aisa kyun behave kar rahi hain." Aastha "mujhe kya hua aap us ladki se khalijiye wo achchi se tujhe khiladoongi shall I call her wait uska naam kya hain Sukanya right." And she was leaving to call her.


Shlok dragged her and said "arey Aastha kya hua tum aisa kyun kar rahe hain dekho spilled juice on me she was cleaning even though I was refusing I m sorry mujhe na tumhari haath se khaana hain pls khilao na pls." Aastha smiled in tears and said "I cant see u with other lady I will kill her if she comes near u again." And she brought him close to her and said "aap mere ho sirf meri kisi aur ka nahi."


Shlok "Hmm hmm madam ko gussa aa rahi hain." He dragged her closer and kissed her on both the cheeks "I m urs dont worry in every birth I m urs k ab aao late ho raha hain." Aastha smiled and kissed him back. She fed him as he asked. Shlok and Aastha had an eye locked. Aastha just leaned her head on his shoulder and said "don't know y Shlok suddenly everything changed in my life after u came I thought to suicide wen no one helped me..."


Shlok shouted "Aastha aisa sochna bhi mat main hoon na." Aastha "I know Shlok aajse sirf pyaar hain hamare jindagi main." Aastha smiled and came forward to kiss him. Shlok moved his hand around her neck and brought her closer and kissed her hard. They were licking each other. Shlok didn't miss the chance he was backing her until she was lying n the couch. He was on top of her and was caressing her tummy.


Aastha roamed hands on his back. Food on her hands was stuck to his coat now. Shlok broke the kiss and licked her cheeks by kissing and also followed by chin followed by neck. Aastha then came to senses and shouted "Shlok." Shlok suddenly got up and was feared "Aastha kya hua." Aastha "Shlok!!! Ham office main chiii ab main jaati hoon bye." And she was going to leave and saw his shirt and laughed out loudly. Shlok "ab kya hua." And she then said food was stuck to his shirt. Shlok took it and saw it and laughed. Aastha took that blazer away with her.


Next day morning Shlok was skipping in his room intentionally with a boxer and nothing left on his upper body and sweat was pouring on his body. Aastha didn't wake up now she woke up bcoz of sounds he was making. She once saw him wen she opened her eye and was shocked and she pretended to sleep again.


Shlok was bare on top and sunrise was projecting his body exactly how every lady desired. Our drama queen Aastha saw each and every bit of him through the sheet. She was thinking Shlok was not aware of her. He knows wat she is doing. Shlok suddenly stopped the skipping and came near her and took away the sheet and came on top of her.

Episode 33

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi sai I am the first one to comment today sooo happy
As usual amazing update
Thank you
Edited by nadeeka1200 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome and beautiful update
Shlok is getting all romantic ...😉..
Thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update again... Loved it!!

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