Ashlok ff: Ye Dil Maange More updated Last Episode 50 - Page 58

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Hi sai I am the first one to comment today sooo happy

As usual amazing update

Thank you

Originally posted by: vaishux

Awesome and beautiful update

Shlok is getting all romantic ...😉..

Thank you

Originally posted by: rd0309

Amazing update again... Loved it!!

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

Originally posted by: syvalini

hai innovative boy...

h r u?

wat an update sai...

its very interesting the way wrote ashlok conversation

it is having diff way in ur writing... sai than the other ff's👏

but loved it so much...

see our drama queen na cant be quite as always drama doing...

poor shlok how he is handling her dont understand

still mystery man was not revealed...

shlok have his own enemy! y not after all akudu hai na

astha was right not forgiving his father, how much she suffer n cried for him so he deserve it.😡

good going sai...

eagerly waiting... for the next one

continue soon...

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai gud afternoon. Thanks for your update and pm yaar. 👏 Awesome update yaar. Really I enjoyed it. Ur writing skill is improving day by day. Congrats sai 👏 Day by day it is getting interesting yaar. Really because of this today I started to read this story from chapter 1-32 in one go. Really it's amazing yaar. Thanks for ur treat yaar "
Ashloks noke joke was super. Asking file and asking kiss arey shlok is started romancing his wife. Astha u r going to enjoy ur life with ur Akdu shlok. Hahahaha. She was started to enjoy her life with his family she wants to be with him every time waw superb Sai. What u wrote it is directly came to us yaar. Thanks yaar. 👏 👏 ⭐️
Avdoot was feeling guilty. What he did he know it was mistakes and wrong things. He was living in their house silently. He felt he is living in jail. Really now I feel sad for avdoot. He did wrong but he wants forgiveness Sai..
He wants forgiveness from his daughter asthu. He was alone. He wants to hear astha's voice. He called. But hearing his voice astha cut the call and call her mom and told don't allow him to call her. Y astha u r stubborn 😡.After all he is ur father henna 😳 😡 .Hearing her talk Anjali came waw. Anjali told the right thing. So astha don't do this please hear ur mother-in-law. But u r too stubborn yaar.
Astha want to know y shlok hates Anjali. She went to jyothis room but seeing she laughing. Astha asked jyothi and told the matter.. And she asked shloks childhood photos. Y astha u want to make something . Waw. Shlok ur biwi is really naughty yaar.she saw all the photos and kept on their cupboard. She wants to know about his past. Really asthu it will be dangerous. Sai don't make their life any mistakes yaar pls v wants to see our ashlok always together with love and care with thodasa romance yaar.She wants to be with shlok so took permission and went to office. Waw there she becomes jealousy waw. Sai please make shlok also jealousy. V wants to see it pls pls pls. There our ashlok chemistry was super. Their romance no words yaar. Ashlok chemistry and romance how to say ashlok is the best was the best will be the best pair in the acting industry. No one can't take their place.[COLOR=magenta]Sai no words yaar . I always liked ur stories. U r the rocking star in writing stories yaar. Really u have a huge future yaar. U know I saw so much show but didn't feel like our show because our ashlok r the best. So keep writing. V r waiting Sai for ur updates. Continue soon. ⭐️ 👏

Episode 33

Shlok came on top of her. Aastha was shocked. Shlok "ab dekho jo bhi dekhna hain." Aastha nervously "aap ... pls... Shlok..." Shlok smiled "do u think I don't know anything u want to see me through under cover but not like this haan achcha teek hain I will close my eyes u can see whatever u want haan."

Aastha made a round mouth "Shlok aap bohut badmaash hogayi sach main bohut badmaash hogay." And she pushed him aside and was going away but Shlok caught her and pulled her roughly so that her body will be in contact with his bare body. Shlok from back side whispered in her ear "kaha jaa rahi hain good morning kiss nahi degi kya." Aastha saw him by turning her head back.

Shlok downed his head and kissed her fore head followed by both the cheeks, he slowly caressed her cheek with his hand and slowly turned her face towards him and neared her. Aastha was not in control he was bare on top this was not helping her. She want to touch him. Shlok just came nearer to her and rounded his hand on her stomach and blew air at her lips.

That's it how can she hold she too is a lady right. She lost the control and slowly moved her head front and kissed him on lips. She was tasting his scent through his mouth suddenly she bcame impatient and came on top of him and kissed him harder. She was also roaming her hands on his bare body. Shlok too was losing his control then Aastha broke the kiss and kissed on his chest.

Shlok was enjoying her. He caught her waist and brought her up and kissed her again. He rolled on top of her and took away her pallu. Aastha too doesn't want to back down. She roamed her hands and exploring him each and every bit. Anjali "Aastha Aastha.." Aastha now came down to earth. She just pushed him aside and quickly ran to the bathroom.

Aastha was panting in bathroom wat did she just do haan ab how to face him aaj tho gayi aai bhi bula rahi hain ab kya karu. She was literally shaking is it she made all that chii yak haan she herself made all that and now regretting haan nahi how can she regret she wants to do it again haan kitni besharam hogayi main bhi. Shlok just smiled at her oh my u r not so far very soon u will be mine in every way.

Anjali entered and saw him like that and also skipping rope "Shlok ye kya hain ghar main aisa khelna kab shuru kardi aur Aastha kaha hain." Shlok "aap mere room main aane ki koi jaroorat nahi hain aur u don't need to say me wat should I do aur Aastha andar nahan le rahi hain." And looked somewhere else than her. She felt tears in her eyes and went away. Shlok then looked at her leaving.

Aastha took bath and came down still blushing she didn't talk to him again she just ignored him she was shy very shy how can she face him again haan. She was thinking wat she had done. Kavya "chachi aap kya soch rahe hain dekho paani pura bhar di aur chala di bhi." Aastha then came to earth and stopped the water from over flowing. Shlok was coming down.

She saw him and looked down. How can she face him haan. Shlok came and sat on the chair. Aastha served him. She didn't look at him. She served calmly. Shlok took glances but she never saw him. Isse kya hogaya. Shlok completed silently and went to his room. He wanted his files but everything was ready on the bed files, keys, purse etc. He felt weird kya hua Aastha ko kai ye sab galat tho nahi samji na.

But Shlok wants to give her leaving kiss where is she. Shlok came down for searching her. She was working in kitchen. Shlok wants to see her atleast good bye. She was not seeing him kya hua iss ladki ko. She knows he was waiting for her. He was waiting for her near the car and was looking at the kitchen window. Aastha was looking at him through the window. She saw him. Shlok saw her and smiled. Aastha cant hide her feelings. She just ran out of the kitchen. Arey kaha chali gayi. She just went out to him and hugged him tightly and said "I love u I love u so much." Shlok too smiled and hugged her back and said "I love u too Aastha."

Aastha and Shlok smiled happily. Shlok "Aastha." Aastha "hmm." Shlok "Aastha office jaana hain." Aastha "hmm." Shlok "Aastha chodo yaar." He was smiling. Aastha "hmmahmm." Shlok "Aastha sab dekh raha hain." And she suddenly withdrew. Aastha "kaha kaha kaun hain." And she saw here and there. Shlok "pagli koi nahi hain ab main jaa raha hoon." Aastha "achcha teek hain bye." And she kissed him.

Shlok again kissed her and said to bring lunch that day too left. Aastha smiled and bid him bye and went in. She cant hide her feelings at all. After that she was always smiling. Both Sojal and Anjali observed it and they thought ladki ko kab sharmana nahi pata hain pagal ladki. Shlok too was thinking hmm kaha se aaya ye ladki sach main she will kill me one day with her innocence.

Shlok was driving happily and went to office smiling and also greeted good morning to everyone. They were surprised to see their boss like this. He bcame more fast in work too bcoz we work like a bullet if we r happy and like a passenger if we r sad. Aastha was recalling his body she now understood ye sab jaan boochkar kiya isne haan he knows everything akdu kahin kaa haan sach main bohut badmaash hain mere akdu but she wants to roam her hands on his body again she wants to touch him again.

Oh God wat he had done to nave Aatsha. Chii she let go of all that thoughts and busied herself in doing works and also had nice time with Jyoti she said about her life in clg and also shared her experience. Aastha listened everything and felt nostalgic and she too remembered all her clg days. Arey she didn't meet Gauri for long time. She wants to meet her too.

As usual she took lunch to him. This time Shlok took away his blazer and shirt. Aastha "Shlok ye aap kya kar raha hain ye office hain hamara ghar nahi hain." Shlok "I m thinking that like yesterday today too I don't need my coat spoiled isiliye and he pinned her to the wall." Aastha "Shlok koi aajayega ye office hain." Shlok "koi nahi aayega ye lunch hours hain they know to not disturb me in lunch hours only u have that right so I m not going to wear any shirt whole day until u kiss me" and he still neared her.

Aastha gulped "Shlok... aap...pls jaanedijiye I want to got to Gauri pls let me go." Shlok "nahi u r not going anywhere until u kiss me nor I wont wear shirt." Aastha "Shlok kyun tang kar rahe hain aap." Shlok "main kaha tang kar rahe hoon I know u too want to kiss me I can see it in ur eyes but u wont say that I know but I will make ur dream come true so don't worry this is also like our private room." And he cupped her. Aastha just gave a peck on lips and said him to wear the shirt and she stormed out. She went to Gauri's house directly.

They had lot of fun Gauri suddenly bursted out "Aastha kya baat hain bohut khush hain tum batao mujhe sab hogaya na haan haan." Aastha "Gauri chi tum bhi na hamesha aisa hi baat kar rahe hain tum agar tumhe itna shauk hain to tum bhi shaadi karle jaldi." Gauri "oo pagal I m asking an important thing y cant u understand it and y r u so shy that means u didn't do anything I can sense it." Aastha "hhaaan tumhe kaise pata hain."

Gauri "Kya!!! U ppl didn't do anything until now but y Aastha is there any problem kya hua sab theek hain na Shlok ke saath." Aastha "wo mujhse bohut bouht pyaar karta hain lekin Gauri SR ki baaat lekar mujhe bohut dar lag rahi hain pata nahi kyun." Gauri shocked "Kya!! Tum pagal hogayi kya." Aastha "main kya karu Gauri jab main uski bare main sochta hoon mujhe bohut dar lagta hain bohut pasine sok jaata hain aisa lagta hain ki main behosh hojaa rahi hoon."

Gauri "Oh my Aastha did u say it to him." Aastha nodded no. Gauri "Don't worry Aastha watch some romantic movies no problem har ladki ke saath hota hain lekin tumhare saath bohut jiddi hain but I really pity Shlok really a lot how is he sleeping beside u anyway." Aastha "Gauri pls we will leave this topic pls." Gauri "achcha teek hain.." and they had some chat.

Aastha was going to leave Gauri caught her hand and made her sit "Aastha listen me carefully wen u r married ur love can be measured mechanically but wen u take it to next step u cant measure ur happiness believe me Aastha u will be happier even and u two love each other a lot I can see don't delay it there might be misunderstandings later if u once dare to do it then no one will stop ur love u urslef will feel content u will feel everything beautiful k ab thoda himmat rakh ke meri baat socho jara Shlok bhi tumhare liye intejaar kar rahe honge ek kaam kyun nahi kar sakte tum honeymoon chale jao aap log."

Aastha "Honeymoon!! Teek hain main baad main baat karti hoon iski bare main k." Gauri too nodded with smile. Aastha too smiled and went away thinking about her idea. Shlok was working seriously and then this phone call came. Shlok "Hello Shlok Agnihotri baat kar raha hoon." Siddharth "Hello Sir aapki Baba ko accident hua jaldi aayiye."

Episode 34