Arjun Draupadi [ArDi journey ] OS - Soch na Sake

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: -Saishree-
very very sorry sam for being so late in commenting here! going through my old pms today and just found i din read this os! how can i miss anything about ardi...stopping my bakbak and coming to the update!

sam this is awesome!
loved it to the core!❤️

Thank you so much Sai 😃

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
B r e a t h t a k i n g.
I'm so proud of you today, Sam!
This one is so so beautiful! You portrayed the up and downs in their life so beautifully!
You seriously write motion pictures! One can view it so clearly! The love, the happiness, the pain, everything! Love you SO much for this baby! Keep it up. 🤗

Thank you so much Proteeti 😃

@ bold 😲😲 thank you so much 🤪

@ red . Really ? Proud of me ?🥱 * dancing ! That means a lot Pro . Thank you so much .😃

@ italics and bold , thank you . 😃

@ underlined - love you too baby 😆😃

These words are really precious to me 😳

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun

Thank you 😊
@ bold , really 😲
@ bold and underlined - sure . I will never stop writing on ArDi even if all stop reading 😆
By the ways did I pm you 😕 just confused cause I don know if you were in the pm list 😆

@bold- Seriously.

No. I stalked you and found out :P

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Swarna

@Swarna_99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Amazing os. ..

Incredibly beautifully written. ...

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aanvi

@aanvi98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Acjcha, did i had a res here?? Sorry dont kill me meri yaadrash achchi nhi agar two res pad jaaye toh meri galati nhi...😆 ill unres after reading it so a res nd pakka wala padne ke baad hi unres...

Unres

Did i tell u tht THIS. IS. THE BEST OS IVE EVER READ!!

Seriously, agar tu mujhse inspire hoke yeh os likkhi hai, toh tu muhhse sau guna achchi hai!! The whole os was full of emotions!!! Just just just perfect!!

The first walk was the best part!! You know the teicj... sambhalke rakh cuz shayad main isse chura kar le sakti hun...😆

Too lazy to type, so sirf isse khush rhe...😆

SECOND PART...

Teri dhamki se peheli baar mujhe second time unrea karna pada...😆 aisi khatarnaak dhamki dega toh tu to kidnapper ban jayega!!! Kidnapped my fav ff nd now blackmailing me...😡🤣

Chodd isse... come to the os... pehele jo bhi bolna tha, bol toh doa... ab bolne layak kuch mil nhi rhi... abhi comment ka bhandaaar khatam kar aaya...😆

First walk ke baad woh dard wala haatsa... i seriously wanna slap arya for tht... lekin jo bhi ho, unke kahani mein dard hai, issiliye woh haamare fav hai!! Jiske wajah se itna saare bakbak... agar wob na hote toh humlog kabhi milte hi nhi!! All hail to ardi!!

Nd thn bundle of joy... our kirti... cutttieee!!!!! Jist love ardi family...😳

Nd thn VH... the worst part in ardi life... 🤢

The way u narrated the whole thing so so heart touching!! Agar saare incidents ek saath ho toh baat hi alag hai!!!all in one packege!!padke bada majaa aya!!

Btw, yaad aya... ki humne apna ardi index last two month se update nhi ki... gosh!!!

Edited by aanvi98 - 9 years ago

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: 8520NK
Finally unresing!
Thank god, you reminded me that I had to read this OS, otherwise I would have missed the opportunity to read which is hands down the best piece you have ever, and I mean ever written.
This was ArDi's story summed up in the most beautiful possible way.
Sam, I have got to tell you that I loved it.
What I like about your style of writing is it's simplicity and the raw emotion you present.
In each sub-part of this OS, I read the best of you, and the best of that raw emotion.
Starting from the part where they are walking towards the potter's hut. That was so wonderful, filled with their innocent feelings of first love.
Then when you wrote about him going away and the beginning of the silence that became synonymous with their love. That was something which left me awe-struck.
Also, when Arjun silently comes and makes her sleep on the bed. Their first night couldn't have been any more filled with love, their car, and them expressing their feelings.
The most precious part was the birth of Srutakriti and the beginning of their perfect family together. I loved, loved, loved that! It was my most favourite part of the OS.
Then even when you wrote about the after the Cheer Haran and the the war, it was heart wrenching and overwhelming. You have managed to present all emotions in their true form in this OS.
Kudos to you for the great work!👏👏👏
Lots of Love!😃