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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai gud evening yaar 😛 Thanks for your update and pm and thanks for giving reply for our comments yaar 😉 . Nice update. I through out enjoyed it. Really not only astha I am also happy
But feel sad for shlok. I think from next update v will see our shloks love for astha henna Sai.
Hey Sai u asked anything questions is have unanswered yes. V asked u what is relation between niranjan and astha. Really I didn't get any answers yaar. That's y once again asking.
Ashlok together got shock because they can't believe that kalindhi is alive. And Ankush is taking them with him. Shlok is angry and asking who is the man. Ankush u called our hero bodyguard arey he is not her bodyguard he is her prince yaar.waw 👏
Really astha and her mother's meeting was superb. It was so emotional yaar. She was hugging her mom arey waw astha be happy now u got ur mom henna.😛.Shlok also are shocked. Ankush u did a good job yaar. U saved kalindhi
👏
Ankush told the flash back to ashlok. Really Akhil and Salman was a pakka criminal. 😡 Sai please don't bring them back from jail. How cruel r people henna for a misunderstanding how can a person can take revenge. Avdoot u r in a robbery case 😡. Really I can't believe it because in every story avdoot was a nice man so didn't get a doubt on him 😡 .really he deserves it.
Ankush u saved kalindi and but u made astha so much cry 😡
Shlok was irritated by Ankush. But shlok think onething because of him today kalindi and astha is alive yaar.
Abkush told about akhils plan but he was glad she was safe with her boyfriend. But shlok reply got me laugh boyfriend henna boyfriend look at her no one never go to near her then how can she have a boyfriend arey waw kya dialogue yaar. And he told what she mgs him. They all got laughed. This part was super yaar 👏 .
After that shlok and asthas small fight was super 👏 . Really v enjoyed that part yaar.
Then astha asked about Suresh.Ankush told he appointed him but there r confusion y did he wrote like astha will meet her fate. Anyway that chapter closed henna. Happy for this.
Astha u r angry with you father henna . I liked it because of him kalindhi met an accident henna. Don't bring him out astha let him live in the jail for some time.
She asked about the bank holders and how will they pay the money back. But Ankush have the cash safe.
Now Ankush u r a real brother saving his family 👏 Ankush u r seeing kalindi and avdoot as your own parents. Haan it is nice yaar. They also will see u like their own child. Niranjan called shlok and shlok told that he got astha and saw avdoot also.
Arey all r going to Pune. Shlok u did the wonderful job u called the police and gave the money. Now it is a big news so from now they can leave peacefully very nice.
Arey y shlok y didn't u eat anything u r angry. You r sad because of loosing asthu no shlok that chapter didn't close it is really going to open yaar. 😛
From ashloks eyes there r a lonely tear. Its love yaar.
Astha u and shlok r going to love yaar.
Anyway Sai super update. I think niranjan and avdoots relation are going to reveal thanks Sai.
Hats of u because u already completed the half journey of the story.
U really enjoyed us Sai. Anyway keep writing. V r waiting for ur next update.
Continue soon...


wow wow wow chechi u r commenting superbly yaar ⭐️
i now understand how u wait for my updates i daily eagerly wait for ur comments a lot and u amazed me yaar u wrote whole update for me thanks a lot chechi i bcame a huge fan for ur comment thanks a lot
keep it up 😃
hmm from now u will see Aastha's happiness hope u support me like this till the end
i m out of words thanks a lot chechi
Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Hey..such an emotional update..

Feeling so sad for shlok...😭
Please make them realise their love soon


heyy thank u vaishux
hmm Shlok and Aastha are always together in my ffs so dont worry
hmm they will they will wait and watch
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Catherine06

Awesome,all the ? r answered in this chapter,nice it is. Aastha's parents r alive,nice.

Now the love story will start I think,keep it up.

Waiting for ur update everyday,so pl continue.


thanks a lot Catherine06
yes love story starts hope u like it
hmm i never forget u ppl
u ppls r the main heads for my updates so how can i forget to update haan

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update...
loved it...

Man Kalindi alive & fit & fine..
so Akhil was told avdoot destroyed their family so he wanted revenge..
but Ankush never thought so... he always thought kalindi - avdoot as his parents..
kalindi-astha getting emotional .. no comments..
Ankush was irritated with shlok's protectiveness & considered him Astha's BF cum bodyguard..😆😆
shlok irritated with ankush..
one confusion.. is astha elder or ankush.. coz astha called ankush bhaiya..
& ankush called astha didi😕
ashok fight 😆😆
so salman brainwashed avdoot into robbing the bank..
& avdoot agreed..
kalindi listened to this & decided to run away...
she got into accident so ankush created her fake death ..
bcoz of him astha cried so much😡

hmmm so this is y all people r always surrounded near avdoot's place for their money..
now the truth is out..
& people wil get the money as all money was kept safely by ankush..
Suresh was helping ankush.. so he isnt bad.. bechara bach gaya shlok ki maar se..😆😆

kalindi doesnt know shlok is anjali's son..
now more curious to know niru baba & avdoot's relation & anjali & kalindi's relation...
u dint reveal shlok's past yet..
so my all questions not answered...

continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..


thanks a lot didi
it seems u njoyed this update a lot
hmm hmm coin has two sides sorrow and happy so we saw her sad side now lets see her smiles
hmm well few questions r unanswered i know they will be revealed soon
thanks for ur support those means a lot to me hope u keep on commenting like this till end of this story
Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

Awesome update, now this chapter is closed. waiting for the new development in the story eagerly


thanks a lot
yes this chapter is closed now jus romcom
hope u like it too
hmm development tho nahi hain ab tak drama hogayi na so jus relaxing from now u will njoy it too hope u like it and support me like this daily
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: syvalini

hai sai...

how r u?
sorry for not commenting daily,
all the episodes were good sai...👏
n got answers for so many questions with this last episode,
but u made aastha sooo much cry,
do u like tosee her cry that much sai...,
feel bad yar i dont like aastha crying always...,😭
i hope now onwards she will not cry badly,😃
loved that ankush who saved aastha n kalindi, 😊
now shloks trauma should clear i think,😕
and sai... still some questions should be answered
y shlok was not talking to his aayi?
who warned aastha on that night dropping a slip,
how kalindi n anjali related, r they friends or they relatives in anyway?
all these can be answered in the way i think sai,
congratulations sai...👏👏👏 u have completed 21 episodes...
keep rocking bro...⭐️
thank u for ur pms.


thank u akka u r back after a long time missed ur comments a lot 😭 😭
anyway hope u comment often again thanks a lot
and yes Aastha cried bcoz to let u ppl know the value of her smile from now she have only smiles in her life
anyway thanks that u liked this story 😃
and thanks again this ff contains 50 parts

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

I feel sorry for shlok

She has to thank him atleast
Thank you for this nice update
Waiting for ashlok romance


dont feel such nothing is gonna happen bad from now
hmm she will wait and watch
hmm ashlok romance will be started right from todays update
thanks for ur support daily keep it up
Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chickyhoney

Very nice update now the mystry is solved waiting for ashlok's love story to begin...


thank u
and yes mystery is solved
hmm u r so eager to their romance right so be ready for it
next track is ready to be applauded by u wait and watch
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ss1609

Hi bro... Just now read the last 14 chpts...wow nice plot... Unexpected twists and turns..👏.finally astha found her family...her aayi is alive..her father is alive though in jail..and now she has a brother too..so until now astha's side of secrets r revealed. ..

Now shloks turn...pls reveal his secrets soon..
Who is swathi ...how did their relationship break... How do ashloks parents know each other...when ashlok r going to fall in love and confess to each other. ..(.though they already have fallen in love with each other..they haven't yet realised it😆)
So many questions unanswered. .so keep on writing bro...

Ps- story was so engaging i forgot to hit the like button and hit the link for next chpt😳..sorry. ..


heyy there sissy
how r u
after a long gap i think u njoyed reading all those chapters at once yes Aastha has everything now she is at cloud9
hmm sabar rakhiye arey jus now Aastha ki story hogaya u want drama again lets see their love story and some romance hmm confession keliye let us wait for sometime
u have to wait for Shloks story
hmm i already wrote everything sissy i update daily at 6pm u can catch it at 6pm daily
hmm i think from today i should not post link affter every part 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 22


Aastha came to her home and felt it as home after so many days. She stepped into home and directly went to her aai and hugged her tightly and cried "bohut miss kiya aai bohut miss kiya aapko." Kalindi "Aastha bas ab mat ro main aagayi hoon na ab mat ro mere bachchi chalo tum kya khaogi haan." Aastha "Aai mere kapde main aap ne likhe ke rakha hain kya Aastha bhaag jao bhaag jao."

Kalindi "haan Aastha I didn't think Avdoot will stoop so low." And she cried again. Ankush "aai aap fikar mat kijiye he was used by them don't worry I have proof I will bring him out." Aastha "nahi bhaiyya Baba jail main hi hona hain I don't want him to get released I m sorry to say this aai lekin I will not let him be free for wat he had done he didn't think about his account holders and he just robbed everyone's money just like that do u even know how they felt some of them were depended on those money how there lives would have been without those do u even know jo guna Baba ne kiya uski saza milna hi hain ab pls don't talk with me about him again."

Kalindi "Aastha ye kya hua haath ko." Aastha "kuch nahi aai there was a scratch that's it doctor already dressed it well." Kalindi "doctor kyun wat happened Aastha wat r u hiding from me mujhe sab sach batao kya hua." Aastha didn't hide anything from her then she said every damn thing how they cared for them how they consoled her ofcourse she didn't say about her closeness with Shlok.

Kalindi "kya kaun hain wo log main use milna hain chalo abhi ham chelte hain." Aastha "nahi Aai do u know about them." And she said their names. Kalindi nodded in a no. Aastha "then if u don't know who r they Aai I think Baba knows them after u were missed I think they consoled Baba and might have bcome close to Baba then." Aastha "Aai aap fresh hojao pehle and then we all will go there k."

Kalindi caressed her head and kissed her forehead. Ankush was just checking the house. Aastha went to her room. She opened the cupboard but found nothing. Sach main pagal hoon main everything is there in guest house and how would I expect here and she closed cup board and just sat on her bed and was thinking about the whole happenings within one day. She went for Baba but got Aayi how her life turned from darkness to ight within one day. Hmm she should thank them a lot how they helped them how her aai consoled her. But who r they y did they do this to me she want to know.

She was already missing him how he cared her how he held her face how he kissed her how he saved her from them, their almost kiss, his prmoisses to bring her father everything was running in her mind y didn't he say her bye y didn't he look at her atleast once wat happened to him y he is angry. She was lost in her thoughts and smiled recalling that teddy incident. Oh god she missed him badly. Is she right. Is gauri right all the way do I love him nahi wo sirf mujhe protect kar raha tha he doesn't feel anything like that for me at all he just accomplished his task and left away.

Did he go away just like that does he ever meet me at all doesn't he feel anything to me at all. How he gifted her pigeons and how he saved her from falling from the top floor. How he helped her in eating roti wen she got hurt on her palms. How he took her to temple and consoled her there everything was recorded in her mind how can she forget him yaar is it possible should I forget him like that. She was oscillating between confirmation and co-incidence. Wen will I see him yaar. She want him to touch her nose and say she is cute.

Shlok is no less disturbed how could he do it could he at all doesn't he see her at all again he doesn't know for his shock he want to hear akdu word from her mouth. Oh God he wants to kiss her from the day he missed that chance y is he feeling so wat does he want nahi ye pyaar vyaar sab jhoot hain asal main hota hi nahi lekin kyun vo mere khayal se bahar nahi aa raha hain hmmm damn u Aastha damn u.

Shlok went to guest house. Niranjan and Anjali came rushing towards him. Niranjan "Aastha kaha hain beta." Shlok slowly went in and sat on the sofa and asked Sita to bring water. Niranjan "Shlok Aastha kaha hain aur Avdoot ji." Shlok slowly started the whole thing. It took almost 15min to explain him the whole thing and after he finished he faced the most excited faces.

Niranjan and Anjali exclaimed at the same time"Kya Aastha ki Aai jinda hain." Gauri "Kya!!! Ye kaise ho sakta hain." Shlok "dekho jo hua wo main bola tha if u want to meet them they r in their home u can meet them now I have lot of work." And he left them. Anjali "Sahab ham abi vaha chelenge chalo." Niranjan "Haan Anjali chalo." Anjali "Sahab aaj main bohut bohut khush hoon aaj tak I m dying inside every second thinking she was dead chalo Sahab we will leave soon."

Gauri "rukhiye uncle main bhi aata hoon." Three of them went to her house. Anjali knocked the door. Ankush opened it and saw them "Oh aap log aayiye andar aayiye." All of them went in. Niranjan asked him "So r u the one Ankush." He nodded and said "Thanks uncle Aastha ki raksha karne ki." Aastha heard them and rushed to them.

She saw Anjali and rushed to her and hugged her. Anjali hugged her and cried "Aastha tum pagal hogayi kya aisa achanak main kitni dar gaya jaanta hain tumhe bohut shaan hogayi tum ek baar bhi nahi socha hamare bare main haan bohut badi hogayi tum.." Aastha "Aai Aai Aai shaant hojayiye ab theek hoon na main." Anjali "Aastha kaha hain tumhari Aai dikhayi nahi de rahi hain." Aastha "haan wo andar hain I will call her." Ankush "nahi didi u talk with them I will call aai." Aastha nodded.

Gauri hugged Aastha and cried. Aastha broke the hug "arey I m fine after a long time and u r crying now chalo ham pani puri khane keliye jaayenge." Ankush brought Kalindi out. Aastha was going out suddenly Kalindi said "aap log aap log haan aap log vahi the na hospital main aap log hi hain na." Aastha stopped and looked at them. Aastha "Kya hua aai kaunsi hospital."

Anjali was shocked "aap jinda hain aap sach main jinda hain heyy Bappa ki laakh laakh sukhar hain aap jaante hain har ek din har ek second I felt guilt u don't know how we felt Kalindi ji u don't know wat we have been gone through thank god u r alive." Aastha was confused and also Ankush. Kalindi "arey aap royiye mat I know how u feel dekhiye aap log meri beti ki raksha karne keliye thank u thank u very much I owe u my entire aise bura vakt aapsab log mujhe help kiya thanks a lot."

Niranjan "nahi Kalindi ji we should thank u agar us din aap nahi hain tho pata nahi hamare beti ka kya haal hoga thanks tho hame hi karna hain." Aastha "Ye kya ho raha Aai aap in logo ko jaante hain." Kalindi "haan beta us din main jab apni Baba se bhaag rahe the us din ek ladki exactly of ur age was crossing road having ear phones in her ears I saw truck coming on her way so I pushed her. In the mean time I lost balance and was hit by edge of the truck and fell on the divider and then I remember they brought me to hospital there I saw them I said ur name to them to save u uske baad kya hua mujhe pata hi nahi aur wen I opened my eyes I was with Ankush."

Niranjan "haan Aastha beti we thought u were in danger so we came to know about u and followed Avdoot from then but after reading whole scene in newspaper then I came to know about all this but I didn't suspect Avdoot but I had only one aim to protect u at any cost beta that's all we can do since she was the one saved our daughter at the cost of her life." Aastha "oh Aai ab dard theek hain na accident ke baad kuch hua tho nahi."

Ankush "nahi didi aai bilkul theek tha just internal injuries she was cured within 7 days." Niranjan "Ye tho bohut khushi ki baat hain Aastha beti idhar aao." And he caressed her head. Niranjan "Kalindi ji u have a beautiful daughter I want to gift her something." Aastha "Gift mere liye." Kalindi "Kaunsi gift." Niranjan "I want to give her job in my office so wat say Aastha beti bohut takleef main tha jab aap log uske saath nahi tha I want to give her this small gift." Aastha "Yee aap..." Niranjan "Don't worry we know ur whole bio data." Aastha saw towards Kalindi. Kalindi nodded. Aastha "achcha teek hain thanks a lot uncle." And she took their blessings.

At night Shlok was restless he wants to see her once. He went to bar. He drank full he didn't know wat he was doing y he was doing. Everytime she is in his thoughts. Her cries for father everything recorded. At the same time Aastha went to his guest house to bring her belongings. She went to her room and saw around it emotionally. Small tear escaped her eye. She took the teddy she saw pigeons and smiled.

She took them and went to terrace and released them. It was going to rain. She happily saw the clouds and shouted "Common wet me u bloody coward." And soon rain started. Aastha started dancing in rain. Shlok drank full and drove to guest house. Aastha was still dancing there and stopped suddenly hearing car sound. Shlok aagaya kya iss vakt and she ran to the door. Shlok barged into house. Aastha saw him again drunk and went to hold him to prevent him from falling. Shlok saw Aastha.

Shlok in drunken state felt emotional by seeing her "Aastha tum yaha kaha chali gayi thi tum, tum jaante ho main kitna daaarrr gaya tha don't ever leave me like that Aastha never leave me Aastha." And he just hugged her. Aastha felt wonderful kya ye bhi mujhse pyaar karta hain kya. Shlok broke the hug and saw her in drenching form. Desire over took his mind. He slowly moved his hand around her waist and brought her closer. She was just staring his eyes. Shlok came down and took her lips into his mouth.

Episode 23


Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago

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