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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Thanks for u pm and update.
Awesome update yaar. Arey u changed the colours in writing is superb. The colours combination is absolutely suitable yaar. So please write the whole updates by using colours. 👏 👏.
In update
Astha Ankush and her mom entered their home. They felt happy. And astha was crying and telling her mom how much she missed her . 😭. Really that part show how much she love her mom and family.
From now she will be protected by her mom and Ankush 😛
Astha asked her mother y she wrote to astha to go away. Kalindi y she wrote that because of her baba.
But Ankush said don't blame him it is all done by Akhil. He will prove it and bring back him. But astha u r right. How many people he cheated. For what he did he want to be in the jail for that.

Kalindhi saw the bandage on astha's hand and asked. First she told it was a small scratch. But they didn't believe it. 😉 They asked once more then she didn't hide anything expect her closeness with shlok. She can't tell about it to them
Kalindi want to see them who helped astha. Astha told their names and asked would she know them. Her mother told no .she told they will be avdoots friend after kalindi missed. Then they decided to see them. Arey waw astha iss chakkar Mein kuch tho hey henna. 😉
Astha is checking her cupboard but didn't get anything . Her things are in shloks guest house. Arey astha how can u forget that. She was thinking about shlok and his family how they helped her. Who r they. She wants to know 😛 she was wondering how her life turned in one day. She went to bring her father but she got her mother. Really it was a turning point.
Astha was missing her princes badly. She was recalling his care his kisses his protection. Every thing single thing was coming to her mind. But she was sad because he didn't say bye and didn't look here last.
Yah gauri u r right astha is in love but she is confused she didn't know if shlok is loving her or not. But she was smiling. She was thinking how he brought pigeons. She wants shlok to touch her nose. Arey astha kya hey hmmm 😛 .
Shlok also was so disturbed like astha he also was missing her so much he wants to touch her kiss her. He know that he missed every thing he wants to see her arey shlok r u started loving her hmmm.
Hai Sai aagaya pyaar thanks yaar. 👏
Shlok told everything to hiis parents. They were shocked because kalindi was alive.
Gauri and shlokks family went to astha's house. They were happy.
Because of kalindi niranjali's daughter was saved. 👏

Niranjan did the good job he gave astha a job its nice now v can see our ashlok romance in office.
Shlok y r u drinking so much arey ur drama queen is going to be with you yaar.
But the last part please Sai don't make anything wrong.
Anyway nice update. Keep rocking. V r waiting for the next update in beating heart yaar.
Continue soon...


wow wow wow chechi u wrote whole update yaaar so sweet of u thanks a lot 👏
hmm y r u so serious about next update dont worry that much after they r characters right anyway u again rocked ur comment thanks a lot really u r great support to me hold it like that 😃
oh god do u even know how long i waited for ur comment anyway thanks for liking this ff and for ur support 👏
really i loved it a lot keep it up
and haan hold ur heart in ur palms it will be safe 😛


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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 23



Aastha was shocked. Shlok was kissing her. He slowly caressed her lips with his. Aastha didn't resist nor she gave in. Shlok slowly caressed her navel. Aastha moaned. Shlok took advantage of it and swept his tongue into her mouth, now Aastha too cant resist. She too kissed him back and tilted her head slightly. They were kissing passionately. Shlok kept his hands on her waist. Aastha kept her hands in his hair. Shlok slowly backed her to the wall.


They broke the kiss after a long time just to take breathing. Shlok and Aastha staring each other. Shlok saw her wet. He took his hands from her waist all the way rubbing her waist with his hands and came to her neck. He put both his hands on her neck and was caressing her both cheeks with his thumb. Shlok "dekho kya haal hogaya tumhare bina." Aastha felt much. She didn't say anything. She brought him closer and kissed him.


Shlok too reacted ferociously to her kiss. They were kissing madly and deeply. This was vigorous. Shlok came down and kissed her neck sucking water droplets on her neck. He brought his hands up. She sensed he was going to touch her breasts. Aastha was on fire but slowly brought him up and gave a peck on his lips and was going to stop him said "Shlok..." That's it he lost his conscious on her and just fell on her.


Aastha said "Shlok Shlok kya hua." And she supported him and took him to his room. She slowly made him sleep on the bed. He was wet, so she took of his clothes and dressed him with his clothes which were already in his room. Aastha slowly came to his side and kissed him and said "Shlok u cleared my doubt Shlok I want to be with u Shlok every minute every second and I promise I will never leave u pata nahi har ek pal aapse rahna chahti hoon mujhe pata nahi ye sab kab hua kaise hua lekin mere liye sirf aap hain koi aur nahi." and she hugged him in his sleeping position and smiled.


She left him after sometime and she closed his door and took all her belongings and went away after giving him a shy glance. She was in cloud9. Wihin a day everything is in her hands which she thought she was lost somewhere in the world. She slowly went to her home still thinking his almost confession. Kalindi observed her "Aastha kya hua y r u wet haan come in how many times I have to say don't dance in rain."


Gauri "Aunti ab Aastha is not dancing in rain just bcoz of happiness." Aastha signalled her. Kalindi "Kya hain wat r u talking." Aastha "Kuch nahi ye tho aise hi majak karte hain hamesha main abi aati hoon." And both Gauri and Aastha went to her room. Kalindi suspects something. Did she do some nautanki again. Gauri "Kya hua Aastha batao mujhe." Aastha "mujhe kuch samaj main nahi ho raha kya ho rahi hain mere saath." Gauri "matlab." Aastha "Gauri kuch nahi main baad main batati hoon." Gauri "I understood tumhe us ladka se pyaar hogaya na."


Aastha "Gauri aisa nahi tum kyun soch rahe ho aisa." She asked pretending confusion in her face. Gauri "Iska matlab sach main pyaar hogaya Aastha ko haan haan Aasthu." Aastha "Gauri I said na aisa nahi tum batao y did u say like that." Gauri "Did u see ur face how it is glowing mujhe sab kuch pata hain buddhu." Aastha "Haan Gauri mujhe kuch samaj main nahi aa rahi hain main kya karu." Gauri "Aastha shall I talk with him."


Aastha shouted "nahi Gauri he just helped me that's it leave it Gauri I don't want all this I don't want to break my heart again I m saying truth." Gauri "heyy tum pagal hogayi kya wo bhi tum se pyaar karta hain tum samajthe kyun nahi buddhu." Aastha "Kya ye tum kya kah rahe ho." Gauri "Haan didn't u observe him tum daffar ki daffar ho hmm anyway u r going to meet him in his office right first u observe him then u decide wat to do k."


Aastha "Thanks Gauri don't tell to anyone haan." Gauri just hit her head with her hand and said "Tum sach main buddhu hain ab main jaati hoon bai." Aastha bid bye to her and was changing clothes and was recalling her incident with him. Did he just kiss her Oh my God wat the hell did happen now how can I face him did he remember wat had happened. He was drunk he was just attracted to me I think he doesn't love me she was thinking all these and touched her lips which were swollen. How can she forget that intensive kiss haan.


She was thinking kya ho raha hain kya usko kuch bhi yaad nahi rahega kya ab kaise milu main usse but to her utter shock she wants to kiss him again lekin main bhi na kitni buddhu ki tarah aise kaise kiss kiya unko oh god wat did she jus do wat if he remembers everything haan Bappa ye kya kiya main ne slowly tears started don't know y did she cross her limits but she felt content with him she wants him and more tears flew away she wiped them and thought to observe him and let him feel first.


At night Kalindi slowly came to her. Aastha smiled at her and lied in her lap and said "bohut dar gaya tha aayi bohut dar gaya tha aap mujhse kabhi door mat ho aayi pls main mar jaongi." Kalindi "Aastha aisa baat mat kijiye Aastha main hoon na tumhare saath ab sirf khushi hain hamare jindagi main tum tension mat le k." Aastha was smiling at her. She suddenly got up and took her laptop.


Kalindi "Kya hua Aastha suddenly wat made u mad." Aastha "kuch nahi Niranjan uncle said he offered job I want to check my mail did he send any offer letter or not that's it." Ankush "didi didi." Aastha "haan bhai." Ankush came to her room "didi ye letter aagayi tumhare liye Niranjan Sir ne bheja hain uski peon se." Aastha came running and tried to take her. Ankush "arey aap itni tej kyun hain." Aastha "Kuch nahi tum de letter."


Ankush "pehle mujhe batao y r u so eager haan." Aastha "arey it's a new job I have to see wat is written in it pls give it bhai." Ankush "hmm didi I know y r u so eager u want to go to him right." Aastha was shocked "Kya!! Kya baat kar rahe hain tum give it to me." Ankush didn't give it to her but ran to his room. Aastha chased him. Kalindi saw them and felt happy. Kalindi to herself "ab sab theek hogaya ab koi drama nahi aana hain."


Aastha is so stubborn she didn't leave atlast she took the letter and read it. She was appointed as his PA. Her face was brightened which was not went unnoticed by Ankush. Ankush "Kya baat hain bohut khush ho rahi hain mere didi lagta hain uski body guard se pyaar hogaya." Aastha again shocked. Aastha " Kya tum aisa kyun kaha Ji nahi uss akdu se kaun pyaar karta hain bhai aap Aai ka dyaan rakhiye na pls." Ankush "Aastha didi wo mera Aai bhi hain tum pareshan mat ho main hoon na Aai ke saath." Aastha "thank u bhai agar tum nahi hain tho ham pata nahi." And she hugged him. Ankush "hmm didi don't hide anything from me if he again hurts u then let me know k." Aastha "hmm ab tum meri body guard hogaya kya." and they laughed.


Early morning Shlok got up with huge headache. Hmm he got drunk again and he slowly woke up and saw himself. He was shocked. Ye sab kya hain who changed my dress. He got up and saw here and there. He found his dress aside. He took it. It was still wet. Someone came here yesterday night who is that. Who has the dare to change my dress. He thought a lot but he didn't get anything. He slowly got up and got ready for his office.


He has a lot of work to catch up already he didn't work wen Aastha was here and now no Suresh too haan I will not leave him how dare he to betray Shlok Agnihotri. He came out of his room and saw her room. He slowly went in. He missed her being there but he doesn't know she occupied a private room in his heart. He went in and saw everything and came out smiling. He went to home to have breakfast. Anjali saw her and felt heavy. She cant see him always drinking.


Niranjan "Shlok where were u yesterday night haan." Shlok "Wo Baba main guest house gaye the." Varad "Baba lagta hain Shlok needs to get married." Niranjan "u r right Varad he doesn't care about himself and that too drinking daily is not a good habit Shlok wait for marriage now." Shlok "Baba.." Niranjan "nahi beta this is our responsibility." Shlok is feeling a weird thing since he woke up.


Something might have happened at night. His hormones were raging. He was eager for something he didn't know wat was happening to him. Niranjan "Shlok where r u." Shlok "Kuch nahi ur wish do whatever u want I want to go now." Niranjan and Anjali saw each other cheerfully. Niranjan "hmm Shlok go to office u will find a surprise." Shlok "Kaunsi surprise." Niranjan "U will know." Shlok didn't bother much he wants to see her once her smile she was an angel to him.


But he was thinking she was there yesterday night she might change his dress. Oho pagal y would she be there haan shut up ur weird thoughts. He was going to office while suddenly he saw her eating pani puri with that jhaansi rani. He stopped the car aside and kept on staring at her. Wat the hell is he doing. He is behaving like a teenager, he bcame angry on himself here he was worrying to see her atleast once there she was having Pani Puri happily sare ladkiyaan aise hi hota hain.


He drove away angrily saying gud bye to her last time. He entered his cabin with lot of headache. After sometime he started working. He was banging his head he was restless until he remember wat happened the previous night. Hmm he will die if he cant know it. He was being restless. He was thinking of kissing someone. Wat the hell has happened. He closed the file and was leaving the cabin and suddenly he saw Aastha there and was shocked. Aastha "Hello Sir gud morning." She was shy recalling that incident. Shlok "Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho."

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1st Person in phone : Hmm u know wat to do jab tak tum kaam nahi karenge tab tak tumhari aai mere saath hi rahenge aur jaldi hona hain.

2nd person: K aayi ko kuch mat karna pls main main vaisa hi karenge jaisa ap chahte lekin ye sab galat hain aap...

1st person loudly: bas ek aur shabd nahi jitna kaha utna hi kar aur vaise bhi hamko deal bhi hain na kam hone ke baad paise dedoonga.

2nd Person irritatingly : mujhe koi paise nahi chahiye theek hain main karta hoon aap jo bhi kahe bas aayi ko kuch mat kahna.

and there was beep other side and tears flown in 2nd person's eyes

Episode 24


Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Sai. Good morning yaar. Thanks for your update and pm. Thanks for your reply also.
Sai ur reply encourages our so much. That's y v r writing like an OS.
Nice update. Through out the whole update I enjoyed . From now love blossoms in our cute ashloks.
V were waiting for this. U wrote ur update superb. Really no words yaar. I only said by my view.
Hats of u. I am readed so much ff and ss and OS about our ashlok. But ur ff is going to the heart directly.
Everyone stories are nice. Thanks for all writers. Because of u people v r seeing our Beautiful Ashlok chemistry once again. 👏
Sai the first part it was super hot. Really yesterday I was feared but u do itt nicely.
The kiss only astha known with whom she kissed. But shlok he didn't recognize who was with him
but Sai please remember shlok it otherwise some misunderstand will come between them.
Once again don't make astha cry. From now she wants to loved and pampered by everyone pls.
Between their passionate kiss he lighty confessed.I liked it but I want shlok to know that.he felt unconscious. She changed his clothes arey asthu didn't u get shy. Before leaving him she hugged him and kissed arey something is coming on the way yaar waw 😉
She went to her home with her belongs but she was lost in shlok.
Kalindi gauri Ankush they were really confused by her behaviour. Arey gauri u r right astha is in love now.
Astha's and gauri's chatting was super and exited.
She got the appointment order. Arey Ankush y u r observing ur sister so much. U will know slowly yaar.
The teasing part loved it yaar 👏 .
Shlok woke up arey u didn't remember anything. K leave u will also know it yaar.
Niranjan varad and Anjali's talking also was super.
I think they are going to make shlok to marrying astha
If that's y they gave her the job as shlok PA for astha 👏
From now v r going to witness office romance yaar.
Speaking about marriage shlok went to office but on the way he was thinking about astha . He wants to see her once but like his mind reader he saw she eating pani Puri with gauri.
Waw. Super shot yaar.
But today shlok is going to get shock and same happy because she is going to be his PA.
But the last phone call is something danger. I think the one person will be Suresh
But the other man?
Anyway nice update yaar. Really really v enjoyed a lot.
Thanks for creating the magic for us.
V always wait for ur updates.
Keep rocking. Trust u
Continue sooon... 👏
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Well it was indeed a passionate update... But confused by the last phone call thing!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Saibhargav


thank u didiii
hmm yes kuch kam rahe gaye na aap tho kuch sochliya hoga un logo ke rishta ke baare main
no worries i wrote the previous track jus to know about each other thats it
hope it was gud and did work nicely
hmmm ab miss kar rahe hain dekho dekho aage aage hota hain kya


okk
got it..
yeah it was nice...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update..
well written👏👏
loved ur teaser style..
gud going...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Confuse about last part but it was sooo hot update
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Posted: 9 years ago
hai sai...
well written
finally got to know eachother missing equally,
n nice surprise gave to shlok by niru baba,
atlast love blosoms bet ashlok in the coming updates,
still we have surprises i think in the coming way...
thank u bro for such a wonderful update
keep going...
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Posted: 9 years ago
I can't understand this last part
I am waiting to see ashlok together
Thank you waiting for next update
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sai gud morning.
. Hai Sai 😛 😛' HAPPY VISHU' 😛😛
Arey all friends in IF who r following in this for every one wishing u vishu.
It is Kerala's one of the most important festival.
Thanks for everyone who are continuing in this forms.
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago

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