I didnt win the Silver, I lost Gold (Imp Note Updated)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I didn't win the Silver, I lost Gold
- Shravs.





"You killed her, You proved yourself a stepmother, I thought you will be different, but how can I forget your species. People use to rightly call you a barren, you are not capable to nurture a child, Today I also claim the same you are the worst mother a child can have, you should be barren. You are a bad omen to be with , the World is right about this. "

"You are leading a very happy life, These seven years were a cakewalk to you but not me. Why did you choose the baby that day and not me. Didn't you love me as your own? Didn't you claim I am your first Child? Didn't you claim I am the first person who made you feel mother? Why didn't you come in search of me? How can you be so selfish? For the first time, you made me feel your step-daughter. I feel ashamed of loving you."

"Aunty, You are our neighbour's daughter right? They told me you are gone to God, how did you come back?"

"Mom... Mom why did you go? You promised me you will never leave me? You failed me once again. You could have taken me with you, How much I missed you, do you have any clue? Everything at our home changed just because you left, Dad and Uncle fought, Grandpa and others stopped talking to each other. This house is not the same ever since you left. I have cried assuming, i will never be able to see you again. I will never have a mother by my side. None of you thought about me in all this mess, All you had was only Ruhi Isn't it? What about me? Am I not equally loved by you and dad? Why did you make me believe that you loved me the most? You failed me, You failed me mom."

"Ishu why did you not come to us? Why didn't you tell us you are alive? Do you know how it feels to see or hear your child suicide? How could you be so selfish that you didn't think about your parents? You are not our Ishu? Our Ishu wouldn't have left a merely born child to suffer, Our Ishu wouldn't have left her own home, her husband, her in-laws, her Adi. How could you Ishu? You failed us all who loved you and were dependent on you. "


To be continued...
Let me know if you wanna read any further?😉

Index :- (Do read the prologues)


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traveller_girl thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting
Would love to read it further
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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do continue...
wanted sumthng on current track post leap...
update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good, based on current track , plz continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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And you are back!
wait was this the thing you were talking about when i asked you why r you smiling without any reason wile typing?
omg u never told me! but wow one of my favourite emotional non-romantic person is back and how cud i not comment!
you are going to get from me but before that let me finish jumping of excitement!
I think i know what is runnign in your head miss pig headed :P
lets hope for the worst :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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These are the questions that CV's won't ever gonna answer.hope you justify these questions.curious about the update so update asap.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the pm dr...
Id loved to read plz do continue...
& Update soonish...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb dear

just love the prologue dear

its about what ishu did to her family and kids moreover her mistakes

why i felt that raman understand ishu and supports her even he is angry with her not telling she is alive

continue soon dear

eagerly waiting to read how it going to happen dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Definitely wanna read more
Plz if possible pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh please continue! I really want a glimpse into this storyline

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