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Posted: 10 years ago
Seems here as well kids are going to be reason for leads to cross their path else where apart from office.
Nisha, I really wait for this story to start moving in full swing.

But I know you are busy and secondly I also want Sosy updates.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Adhya and Nihaar's school admission :
I guess this is what can be described as Joy in the Face of sorrow ... Interconnected and inseparable this phase in life for both suvechha and Neel.
Something bubbled in my throat when I read suvi's checking back on her simple pleasure of wanting to wave out the admission letter to Neel, the minute she spotted him.
One feels like sharing something like a Familial connect that we feel with people whom we are acquainted with personally or professionally but the same people , neither can you call them strangers, nor one can call them Friends.
I'm thinking what would hv happenned had she waved the paper across to him, he would hv probably had a smile on his lips in acknowledgement, may be even indicating to signal the same news his end and probably be surprised to see a reflection of her smiling bk in his rear view mirror . I feel like I hv a camera in motion now. 😊 .

What's suvi's compulsion to tolerate Tai.
I guess it's a mix of respect to her mom's last wish, a bit of sympathy for a bitter woman in Tai , and an inability to be rude to elders even if you don't like them.
And this is exactly people like Tai use to their advantage.

Sometimes we hv nothing else to do but just hold on in hope, trust and belief that 'better days are around the corner '

Thank you for the update Nisha.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nisha, where do I refresh my page? Idhar ya Sosy?
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Posted: 10 years ago
"In his way"


They met at Apeejay next morning, unbeknownst to each other, to make the deposit and fill out the first set of acceptance forms
He had brought Nihar along too. She was joyous when she learned Nihar had gotten admisiion too

She didnt tell him she was going to share it while she was in her rickshaw last night

Nihar smiled at her shyly

Aadhya was delirious, like she knew him or as if he was her age

Suvi had to restrain her a bit as they waited in the corridor

Adhya opened Suvi's purse and brought her ipad out and handed it faithfully to Nihar

"U can play" she said in English

Nihar smiled condescendingly at her and looked at Neel
Neel chuckled "Khel lo beta" he urged
Nihar shook his head and slid his head under Neel's right arm
Aadhya stood there patiently

Suvi was embarrassed, she pretened to respond to some texts on her phone, then turned finally

"Adhya... nakko" she whispered

"She speaks Marathi?" Nihar asked in awe

Suvi nodded

She meet Neel's gaze, and suddenly felt self conscious, realized she was wearing a black bra underneath the dark orange kurta
She looked away hoping one of them gets called first


Nihar accepted Adhya's tablet and Aadhya sat down by him and watched him

Nihar scrolled through all the juvenile games and looked up at Neel and smiled again, conspiratorially


"She is a girl... aur bachi hai" Neel explained

Nihar found "Monkey World" "Motion Math" "Faces iMake" "Princess Fairy tale maker" "Hair salon" and Disney games"

Aadhya placed a fat fist on "Hair salon"

Nihar was shocked, she expected him to play that game he looked at Neel startled

"thats OK... try it, your school friends are not here" Neel encouraged

Suvi tried not to smile

"My most favorite" Aadhya declared with a thick marathi accent

Suvi noticed, Neel was always dapper, in copper brown trousers and a peach shirt, and dark brown shoes
His socks looked like new... Rutwik was a sloppy clothes wearer
Neel seemd to care for his appearance

"Must have a caring wife" Suvi concluded

Aadhya watched Nihar rack up some serious points in the hair salon

She noticed Nihar observe Aadhya chuckle when he shaved off the model's head... one half of her head

He tattooed a hair design on it...
Adhya exploded in laughter

Nihar looked up at Neel and smiled as if he was saying "KIDSSS!!"

He did more goofy things to make her laugh...
Aadhya was overjoyed

She placed a fat fist on his shoulder and bent under his face and asked "Are u going to this school also?"

He laughed... and looked up at Neel again, "why would I wait here if I wasnt goingt oa ttend Apeejay"

Neel patted his back "She is only 5" he reminded his son

Nihar surreptiously loaded the Princess fairy tale maker... with a embarrassed look

Aadhya showed him how...

Suvi was asked to go in...

She turned to Aadhya

She begged with her gaze

Neel said firmly "she is fine with us Suvechha" he said

She nodded in gratitude and left... returning 27 minutes later
With Adhya's new diary, and school supplies

Nihar and Neel and Aadhya were gone

She waited, Aadhya returned... with a bottle of Fanta... and orange lips

46 minutes after Suvi was back, Suvi thanked Neel profusely for the soda
She fished in her purse for Rs.50, Neel waved and took on a stern look

An employee came up and said, they need to go for "ID cards"

Aadhya's Apeejay picture would now have her show off her orange lips

They walked out into the blazing hot sunshine

"Are u going t o office?" Neel asked

She nodded, and withdrew and corrected "Pehle isko play school mein chhodkar" she said sheepishly.

Neel and her parted ways on the same spot on the foot path

Suvi wandered tryingt o find an auto, Neel's car pulled up "I can give u a ride" he said

"Main yahi Trans Yamuna mein rehti hoon" she said embarrassed

"Then you are in my way" he said casually getting off and opening the back door for Aadhya

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Posted: 10 years ago
I am Loving it. Thank you Nisha.
I am thanking my stars that Sosy when I started reading the first thread was over. Its not that I was less anxious about story coz of that reason. Infact I am still anxious what happens next in II and R&B's life.

Coming back to Indradhanish I so wait for the characters to reveal themselves. Story to come in its full form.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woow so the ride to there journey together Begins
👏

Loved the way kids interacted
I also hav to keep reminding my elder one that her sis is only four all the time
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But as it is kidsss!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Most heartwarming moments of ID in this short journey so far,
Ironic that I still feel a certain kind of nostalgia.
Perhaps cos it's 9 /10 updates in two months or so.

Neel's last line of "then it's on my way" is one of the significant moments where when if Neel and SUV reflect , would go bk to this moment a few years down the line as one that's a catalyst or a shift in
Momentum to moving on . Small and random yet significant.

To go bk, I remember your post that said a little girl crying out aai kuthai was the single idea that inspired you to spin on it.
From that story concept or idea , to building it to be a awesome story premise , it's wonderful, the characters , plot all structuring out so beautifully.
Just like how you get to hear about in a rough diamond acquiring cut, symmetry and polish of top quality that lends to it's finest sparkle.

We have a fine cut in SoSy already .Build on Nisha. This is so good.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aadhya pulling out the iPad to give it to Nihaar and the little boy trying his best to keep the little girl happy. This is how open children are isn't it?. Sooo goood.

And not to miss mentioning Suv having an eye for Neel's looks and being self conscious about the inners she is wearing .
Neel is definitely Dapper Nisha in his style of dressing. I go bk to your describing him in a white shirt and a navy combo. Dapper... Surely 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kalpana
THANK YOU
I thought, HOW would it be if they both started to fall in love without conflict. You know... its not something they want to do, he is still grieving
She has been betrayed, but how would it be if they were to fall in love?
She or he, both are devoid of arrogance
He is the top boss, but has no airs about it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Kalpana
THANK YOU
I thought, HOW would it be if they both started to fall in love without conflict. You know... its not something they want to do, he is still grieving
She has been betrayed, but how would it be if they were to fall in love?
She or he, both are devoid of arrogance
He is the top boss, but has no airs about it



This kind of love actually is the real life parallels that it would base itself on.
I love this. Most conflicts in marriage and life is actually later when one gets used to the other person's presence in their life . After which comes the willingness to work it out through the differences and build a life together, if one sees a purpose that way from there.

Everything that I read about Neel, I feel like I know him from the bk of my hand. He is a good man to be around for Suv.
And she for him. 😳 .

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