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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: blue5sky




Asma is in heaven when she gets read and spend time here with her virtual buddies.

My Neel - aajkal mausam stormy hai yaar idhar..



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Jaldi hi mausaam badlega aur bahar ayegi NeelAsma.
Fir Indradhanush niklega.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nisha, I love what you write.
Present
Future
SoSy
Indradhanush
Baas aap likhte jao.
Loving the way Indradhanush is shaping up.
Waiting for more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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When she went to the office, ON TIME on Monday, there was no news from any school until then
They had "promised" to let every parent know, "even if their child did not make the cut off"
Suvi was hoping Aadhya made the cut off and she would get called, so it wont be a "thanks for applying email" but a real live phone call

Whatever Aadhya lacked in academics, Suvi hoped she made up for it by being cute and charming

Back home she was urged by neighbors to "let her model"

Suvi couldnt bring herself to do that
Even friends acquanitances at CST and locals would urge her

She was too focussed on fleeing Mumbai and fleeing Rutwik to worry about how to make money off her daughter.

She had too much to do, as Creative Director, at the moderate size agency, she hesitated to befriend people at first but slowly shed her inhibitions
Prayag was her lunch friend, he was "safe", he had a girlfriend so she wouldnt be foolish enough to sleep with him to stroke her gutted self esteem

She met Neel in the elevator, she smiled politely

"Aapko aaya phone?" she asked

He at first didnt know what she was talking about

"Apeejay se?" she explained

"Nahi... abhi to nahi, abhi Monday shuru hua hai" he mocked gently

"Barobar" she nodded

She wore black dress pants and a offwhite shirt, he decided he "liked" her in Indian outfits
She was not skinny, curvaceous infact, Wesetern work clothes werent a good fit... quite literally

"Mere chaaron campaign mein mujhe aapse consultation chahiye" she said politely

"Mera calendar updated hai, u can get some time" he nodded

He walked the other way from the reception desk

The walls were covered with print and TV commercials, Mckinsey & Morrison had developed

As warned, she showed up at his desk at 10, he hadnt accepted the meeting but she showed up anyway
Gomez was going on and on about some office lease expiration, he hated "housekeeping" biz.
In fact he hated many things now, he was finding it hard to concentrate, since Nupur was gone

"Trademax ka copy dekha aapne?" she asked

Trademax was a stock broking firm...

They discussed the copy, he asked questions about budgets and what recommendation she had made to the client, based on the "fancy location shooting"estimates

Trademax had wanted beach visuals, and ski resort visuals to depict vacationing after stock market wins


"Green screen to chahiye nahi na unko" he was irritated

"Budget hai... Neel' "Can I call u Neel?" she asked

"Naam hai mera... zaroor... kyon nahi" he grunted

She placed an ipad with choice of "vacation videos" the agency had in their archives, tipping over Nupur and Nihar's picture from their beach vacation

It fell back without shatering the glass topped table

He picked it up not amused

"Arey yeh bhi beach vacation ka hi foto hai" "Goa?" she asked kindly

"Nahi" he said trying to change topics


"Nihar looks so smart..." she said with joy... "Ur wife is beautiful" she said

He reached for his pic frame

"She "is"" he said
She didnt know what to say, but the silence was unnerving
They waited as if a band would walk in start playing

"ROI to kuch hai hi nahi, he flipped the estimate pages from the Account Mgt team" he said

"Depends kaun se markets mein ads screen karenge"

"Dadri aur Mewar mein se we cannot expect huge upsides" he said bluntly

She looked a lil starled at that blunt cynicism

"I am sorry... Tier I Tier II Tier III cities ke TV airtime estimates hain" she said softly

Sitting back quietly

He reviewed everything for the next two hours, still left unhappy

"Metros ka kahiye kar sakte hain, we cant do Tier II and Tier III spot buying at the rates u have" he said firmly

She got up to leave...

Turned back from the door and paused

"Foto nahi toota na?" she asked

"Umm..foto nahi toota" he said she nodded... calmly walking away, he leaned back and looked at the frame


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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely Nisha !!
He is attracted to her... He is checking her out although in a subtle way.

Foto nahi toota na?" she asked
Oh!! she is so cute 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just so sad both their situations. One is sad about losing someone close, the other because she let herself be lost in the web of lies and betrayal!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow it's going to be fun, someday since it's a love story of commoners there would some kind of advancement from the guys side, since Suvi assumes he is married there would be none from her until she is aware of the truth, it Would be so interesting to see how things take their course between them when any advancement from him would remind her of her "past" since she is under the impression that his wife is alive and she is too busy to come up for the child's interview. That perception of hers may make things ugly between them as she is judgemental and may think all men to be as her was husband was. 👏 👏 hats off to you nisha for that angle in this story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
There was so much deliberately understated sophistication about II , in her looks, in her demeanour that made heads turn . It was underplayed by II but it was surely there in abundance .
It's an inevitable comparison Nisha, as I try to give a form to suvechha in my head.
There's nothing so sophisticated about suvechha Dhabolkar , her lingo rustic, her personality pliant but surely there is an unmistakable old world charm (as one would say ) in her, the kind that makes Neel pandit check her out every single time he has laid her eyes on her .

This update helped me give a form to suvi in my head. The way she said 'barobar' bought a smile in me. Simpleton feel to it with a quality of goodness.

Monday morning blues surely for someone. Ouch!! Neel pandit is grumpy. Suvi is watching it as to how to deal with Neel as her new boss and she herself is relatively new to the place. She has a child to support.And suvi is not confrontational even by nature, even with Tai she lets it go, but there's so much strength in her, she can definetely pack a punch if she has to. No mistaking that.
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Posted: 9 years ago

LOST AND FOUND

No caring souls that share my DNA

No heart that beats for me and mine

No soulmate with a soul that feels for me

No hand that reaches out to feed

No shoulder to lean on and cry

No ear to whisper sweet nothings and my fear

No finger rises to wipe my tear

No eyes but Aadya that look searching for clues to spy a tear

No arms that hold me securely in an embrace

None to praise what dishes I concoct

My creative energy is all that is visible

Pain and loneliness within me suppressed

My spirit is curtailed and stifled

By the weight of the cross I bear

A deceit that left me numbed and bereft

Saddled with a stone hearted Tai

Adorable Aadya is all I have

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nisha, aapne confusion create kar diya hai.
On one side I want Neel and Suvi's story.
On other side I am eager to know did R&B and II's movie date.
Pehle kya mangon ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Admission

Suvi finished up her day, picked up Aadhya from day care and got home at 7
She didnt collect mail at first from the guard at the gate.
She went up to find Tai texting under her blanket, like a teenager, unwilling to even greet her
She shut the door gave Aadhya a snack sat her on her bed and played a Disney movie on her ipad and went to the kitchen
Went down when she realized Tai had trashed all the fish, picked up her purse

Pulled Tai's blanket and asked "I am going down to get something, can u watch Aadhya?'

"Why cudnt u buy it on ur way home?" Tai counter questioned

"I am sorry I forgot," Suvi said

"I am busy" Tai said, as if Suvi was going to ask her to cook and clean the pig sty of a living room
"U dont have to do anything, Aadhya is inside watching a movie, can u keep an eye on her and not let go to the balcony?" Suvi begged

"Ur daughter has no friends why will she go to the balcony?" Tai asked

"I KNOW, she has no friends, but if kids play in the society in the evening she likes to peek, the bderoom window is of the frosted kind" Suvi explained everything again for the 100th time

"Dont open the balcony door bolt, even if she begs you" "She climbs the railing and leans over" Suvi warned
"My knees hurt really badly, I cant get off the couch, I need dinner, why will I be messing with your daughter?" Tai asked cynically

"Her hands are sore because the play school did some out door activity" Suvi said compassionately

"Even if her hands were fine she is not about to become a doctor or launch a rocket" Tai reminded her


Suvi let Tai talk behind her back and let herself out, went down to the 3rd floor landing and went up again remembering she hadnt told Aadhya

She opened the door and let herself in, Tai had unbolted the balcony door, and was walking just beautifully towards Aadhya's room
And stood there peeking

Suvi walked up behind her

And then turned around SLAMMED the balcony door shut, looked in the living room concrete shelf, under the shelf lining for the balcony key, and locked it and shoved it into the cell phone purse/pouch

Tai was startled, she turned to find Suvi walking towards her daughter

"She has to JUMP on the bed, the kid has no manners, the old person is sick and in pain" Tai changed her story

Suvi went to Aadhya, she was EXACTLY in the position Suvi had left her 15 mins ago, her lil cup of glocose biscuits and potato chips intact

She told her about stepping out for a few minutes
Aadhya smiled in the most cutest way

Tai was back on the couch scowling
Suvi seethed when she realized Tai had deliberately unbolted the balcony door tempting Aadhya to peek out and lean over and fall
She hated Tai
But who could she share it with?
NOBODY

Gomez didnt care, Varsha would chuckle...
"She wants Aadhya to fall off so I can go to jail for being a negligent parent?" Suvi speculated, murderous
Unable to get over her rage, Suvi went down took a rickshaw when she was about to get on it she realized she hadnt asked the guard about mail
She didnt have her mail box keys so he handed her her mail

He handed her her stack

She sifted through it on the rickshaw, one was from Apeejay NOIDA, she let the other letters fall on the rickshaw floor and opened

"We are happy to offer admission to Aadhya Dhabolkar.." she looked up at the traffic... her eyes glistening

There was nobody to share it with she was truly alone... Two years ago Suvi would use every power on earth to deny admitting it
Now it came as easy as drinking a glass of water

She bend down and picked up the other mail

When he got to Mother Dairy she got off paid him, found a fish hawker, bought her fave fish, NO TWO KINDS
Too many flies every where

"I must clean it well" she told herself
She looked at her phone and wondered if she shud call Varsha... there were a few missed calls from the day
She didnt know the numbers

She waited to cross the road

Neel was heading towards Mayur Vihar/NOIDA, his car passed a tired yest charming Suveccha

After he passed he turned to look at her through the back window

"Did she get a call from Apeejay like I did?" he wondered

Nihar had got into Apeejay...
He didnt know her cell phone number, even if he did he wouldnt call her

"Its not like we are friends" he told himself
He wanted to call Nihar but waited to get home

There was no one else to call... he had acknowledged it the minute after Nupur had passed

At the time he saw her she had too...

"Shud I have waved the letter?" Suvi thought chuckling

"What if his son hadnt been accepted, so rude Suvi" she checked herself

Took a rickshaw and went back to the DDA market by her apartment, bought a bunch of things Aadhya liked... and went up to her house...



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