RagLak FF- I will destroy you

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Index:-

Chapter 1 (page 2)
Chapter 2 (page 4)
Chapter 3 (page 6)

Chapter 4 (page 7)

Prologue-



We can see someone's burning pyre and a 16 year old boy standing near it and crying. It's our very own Lakshya. A man comes to him and pats his shoulder.

Madan- Lucky beta, you have to be strong. Your father was a great man and he wouldn't like to see his son crying.

Lakshya- Who killed him, Madan bhaiyya?

Madan- His business rival, a gangster, Mr. Shekhar Gadodia!

Lakshya wipes his tears and goes inside his house. Upon entering, he sees the dead body of his mother hanging to the fan. He holds her legs and screams his heart out.

Lakshya- Mom! Mom, what did you do?

He calls out for help but before his mother could be taken to the hospital, she was pronounced dead. Lakshya breaks down and starts crying like never before. Madan comes and hugs him. He too had tears in his eyes.

Madan- Lucky beta, don't worry. Everything will be fine. I'm here! I'll take care of you. But you have to move on.

Lakshya wipes his tears.

Lakshya- I promise you Madan bhaiyya, one day I'll take revenge from this man called Shekhar Gadodia. I will show him how it feels when someone harms your family. How many members does he have in his family?

Madan- I don't know much about him but all I know is that he has a daughter.

Lakshya- What's her name? How old is she? Is she of my age or younger or elder than me?

Madan- I don't really know but I guess she is about 2 or 3 years younger to you. May be around 13 or 14 by age!

Lakshya- Okay. Is she his only daughter?

Madan- Yes.

Lakshya- I got it. I know what to do. I just have to wait for a few years.

Lakshya smirks to himself. On the other side, we can see a 14 years old girl coming back home from school. She changes her clothes and goes to her father's room. Her father, Shekhar Gadodia kisses her cheek and takes her on his lap.

Shekhar- My princess is finally back from school. How was your day, princess?

Ragini starts crying and Shekhar gets worried.

Shekhar- What happened to my doll? Why is she crying? Did your teacher scold you?

Ragini- No but a friend of mine said that my father is a gangster and he keeps murdering people.

Shekhar gets angry.

Shekhar- What's the name of your friend?

Ragini- Ruchika!

Shekhar- Don't worry about them, princess. They are just jealous of you because you are rich.

Ragini- Really, papa?

Shekhar- Yes, my doll.

Ragini- I love you.

Ragini hugs Shekhar and Shekhar hugs her back.

Shekhar- I love you too, my little angel. Now go and have your lunch. You must be hungry. After lunch, papa and his princess will go for an ice cream treat.

Ragini- Promise, papa?

Shekhar- Promise, angel.

Ragini- Okay papa, I'll be right back.

Ragini gets happy and goes to have her lunch. After a few minutes, Shekhar calls someone.

Shekhar- Hello, Sawant? Have you done your work? Have you killed Durga Prasad yet or not?

The man (over phone)- Yes sir, your work is done. I killed him mercilessly. He will now think a hundred times before messing with you in the next six lives!

Shekhar smirks.

Shekhar- Well done! I got one more work for you. Go to Ragini's school and take out information about her classmate named Ruchika. Find out where she lives and go to her place. She insulted my daughter. Punish her family for her sin.

The man (over phone)- Shall I kill them all?

Shekhar- No, don't kill them. Just explain it to them. But make sure they don't find the guts to make the same mistake again.

The man (over phone)- Your wish, my command, sir!

Shekhar- Great.

Shekhar smirks and cuts the call. Next day, Ruchika's mother is found raped inside her house and her father is found half dead in the hospital.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept .. Pls do PM the updatss
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Another interesting FF thank you
So laksh wants to take revenge from shekher using ragini

Please update soon
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nice prologue omg Shekar is horrible
poor Laksh lost both his parents

aww Ragini is so sweet and innocent

cant wait to read the story
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aww interesting start
luved it
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Nice concept
continue soon
waiting...
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Very cruel start
but waiting for raglak love story

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Very nice concept dear n waiting for next update dear thanks for pm
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First of all, I'm really sorry for creating such a bad Lakshya. But since this is a "hatred turns love" FF, I had to come up with something like this.

Chapter 1-

Its about 8 in the night. A girl is seen curling her hair with a hair curler wearing a white floral short dress with red lipstick and a white Caprese bag. She opens her wardrobe, selects a pair of matching white heels, wears them and sprays a little perfume on herself. She looks at the mirror and then her face is shown. She is now a grown up Ragini, a fashionista, a 23 year old diva.

Ragini (to herself)- Perfect!

Suddenly, her phone rings. The name on the screen says "Rishav". A smile comes to her lips on seeing the name and she receives the call.

Ragini- Hello?

Rishav (over phone)- Hello, Ragini? Are you ready?

Ragini- Yes Rishav, I am ready.

Rishav (over phone)- Okay, I am coming in 20 minutes. I love you.

Ragini blushes. This shows us that Rishav is Ragini's boyfriend.

Ragini- I love you too, Rishav.

Rishav disconnects the call and Ragini runs downstairs. She sees Shekhar and hugs him.

Shekhar- Where are you going, Princess?

Ragini- Papa, Rishav and I are going to a party.

Shekhar- Oh, Rishav huh? My future son in law!

Ragini feels shy.

Ragini- Papa please, don't tease me.

Shekhar- Okay I'm sorry, my angel. Take care. Have fun and come back home on time, okay?

Ragini- Okay, papa!

Ragini walks outside when suddenly some men enter inside the house and capture Shekhar's men. Shekhar and Ragini get shocked.

Shekhar- Who the hell are you all? What do you want?

A voice comes from outside saying "Revenge" and then a man enters. He wears a blue blazer, white shirt, blue jeans and brown shoes. He looked utterly classy!

Lakshya- Revenge!

Ragini and Shekhar look at each other shocked and then at Lakshya.

Shekhar- Revenge? What do you mean?

Lakshya looks at Ragini from top to bottom. Ragini feels uncomfortable by the way Lakshya stares at her so she keeps pulling her dress to her knees.

Lakshya- You must be Ragini, right? I must say, you're beautiful and sexy as well.

Shekhar gets angry when Lakshya mentions Ragini's name.

Shekhar- Who are you? Let my daughter go! Come and tell me whatever the matter is. Don't even dare to look at her.

Lakshya laughs.

Lakshya- That means I was right. I was on the right track when I planned to use your daughter to hurt you.

Ragini gets confused and angry at the same time.

Ragini- Excuse me, who are you? And how dare you talk to my father like this in my house?

Lakshya- Haven't you ever been told that youngsters are supposed to keep their mouths shut when two elders are talking?

Ragini looks at Lakshya in disgust.

Shekhar- Who are you?

Lakshya- Me? I am the son of your biggest enemy, the man whom you killed 9 years ago. I'm Lakshya Maheshwari, the son of Durga Prasad Maheswari.

Hearing this, Shekhar loses balance and falls down on the sofa, shocked as hell. Lakshya laughs on seeing this.

Lakshya- What happened, Mr. Shekhar Gadodia? Shocked? Don't be! I am just a man, not a ghost or something.

Shekhar- Why are you here?

Lakshya- I told you. I want revenge. You killed my father 9 years back due to which my life got destroyed. My mother commited suicide and I lost my parents. Because of you, I lost my smile. Because of you, I had to live without my parents. I lost my childhood because of you. I wanna make it even. You destroyed my life, I'll destroy your daughter's life. As simple as that!

Shekhar opens the drawer next to him, takes out a gun and was about to shoot Lakshya but before he could do that, Lakshya takes out a knife, pulls Ragini close and places it on her neck. Ragini was in utter shock. She didn't know what to do. Tears start flowing down from her eyes.

Lakshya- Put that gun down! Put it down or I'll slit her neck. Come on, fast! Do as I say or you'll lose her.

Ragini closes her eyes in fear and starts crying.

Ragini- Papa, please save me. I don't wanna die.

Shekhar throws the gun away.

Shekhar- Don't...Don't do anything to her. Kill me but leave her please. She's innocent.

Lakshya- Really? You think so? You think I'll let you die so easily? You're wrong, Mr. Shekhar Gadodia. I wanna see you in pain. I wanna see you dying to see your daughter for once. I wanna see you crying in pain when you see your daughter in pain.

Ragini tries to run away but Lakshya pulls her back and this time he twists her hand from behind. Ragini winces in pain.

Lakshya (whispers)- So eager to die, beautiful?

Ragini- Please, please let me go. You're hurting me. My arm is hurting.

Lakshya- I have no intentions of hurting you, Ragini. But ask your father to behave properly.

Shekhar goes down on Lakshya's feet and literally begs him crying.

Shekhar- Please don't do anything to her. She's innocent.

Lakshya laughs for a while and then kicks Shekhar. He holds Ragini's wrist and drags her outside to his car ignoring her tears and continuous pleads to let her go. Before leaving, he turns around to face Shekhar one last time and smirks.

Lakshya- Good bye, father in law!

Ragini and Shekhar both get shocked. Lakshya forcefully makes Ragini sit in his car and drives off to a nearby temple. In the midway, her phone rings. This call is from Rishav.

Lakshya- Give me your phone!

Ragini was about to receive the call but before she could do so, Lakshya snatches her phone, switches it off and throws it away. Ragini couldn't stop her tears.

Ragini- Why are you doing this? What have I done to you?

Lakshya- You don't need to know all that. Just shut up and sit.

After reaching the temple, Lakshya forcefully pulls Ragini out of the car and asks his secretary who was already waiting there to take her and prepare her for the wedding. She is then forcefully taken to a room and two of Lakshya's men are asked to wait outside the room so that she can't run away. After about an hour, she is brought outside in a red bridal attire. She was crying vigorously but couldn't even think of running away because around 100 men were surrounding them. Running away from there was like impossible. Lakshya was also wearing his wedding sherwaani. He walks to her and looks at her for a few seconds from top to bottom. She had tears in her eyes. Seeing the daughter of his enemy in tears, he starts smirking.

Lakshya- You look beautiful in red.

Ragini pleads him to let her go but he ignores it, holds her hand and forcefully takes her to the altar. She is made to sit beside him forcefully, then he holds her wrist and takes the 7 vows forcefully. All this time, Ragini keeps struggling hard to get away from Lakshya's grip but the more she tried, the more tightly he held her wrist. After the vows ritual is done, the pandit ji asks Lakshya to fill Ragini's maang with sindoor. He looks at her and smirks. He then takes a pinch of sindoor in his fingers and slowly comes close to her. She was crying and he could clearly see it. She looked at him one last time with tears.

Ragini (whispers while crying)- Please, please Lakshya! Don't do this. I'm begging you. Don't spoil my life.

Lakshya (whispers back)- Your father spoilt my life. In return, I'm spoiling yours.

With this, Lakshya fills Ragini's maang and smirks while she cries harder. He then ties the mangalsutra around her neck. By now, Ragini had stopped struggling because she knew no one could save her now. There was no use of struggling. Lakshya was going to marry her anyhow. All she could do was cry, cry any cry. After the marriage was over, Lakshya holds her hand and she keeps walking like a lifeless body which only knew how to cry and nothing else. She is then taken to Lakshya's house which is a big bungalow in the outskirts of Mumbai. The bungalow was beautiful. It was surrounded by a beautiful big garden with too many flowers and a fountain in the middle of the garden. After reaching the house, some women ask Ragini to kick on the vessel filled with rice and step inside after stepping on the red sacred water. She refuses to do all this and starts shouting out of frustration.

Ragini (shouts while crying)- I'm not doing all this nonsense, okay? Let me go! I'm not married to this man. I love Rishav. I don't consider this a marriage. This is all bullshit, a f**king drama!

Lakshya gets angry. He grabs a part of her hair and pulls it hard. Ragini starts wincing in pain.

Ragini- Lak...Lakshya, leave me. It...it hurts!

Lakshya- Will you ever do that again? Will you ever speak to elders like that? Will you ever misbehave with anyone?

Ragini- No! Never, please...Please leave my hair. Aaah! It's hurting.

Lakshya smirks and leaves her hair.

Lakshya- Be a good girl, okay? You are not Miss Ragini Gadodia now, you're Mrs. Ragini Lakshya Maheshwari. So learn to behave properly.

Ragini does as she was said. She slightly kicks on the rice vessel and walks inside after stepping on the red water. The women then take her to Lakshya's room where she starts crying vigorously. After a while, Lakshya enters and sees her crying.

Lakshya- Ufff, so much you cry, Ragini! Don't you get bored of crying?

Lakshya passes a night gown to her.

Lakshya- Here, take it! Go, change and then go to sleep. You must be tired after all this drama.

Ragini comes close to him, grabs his collar and pulls him close.

Ragini- What the f**k do you want, Mr. Lakshya Maheshwari? Why did you do all this?

Lakshya- Hola, get your hands off me!

Lakshya pushes Ragini's hands off him.

Lakshya- I told you, I want revenge. Your father killed my father and not only that, but he is also a rapist.

Ragini slaps him hard. This slap raises Lakshya's level of anger to its peak.

Ragini- Be in your limits, okay? Don't you dare speak a word against my father!

Out of frustration and anger, Lakshya forcefully pushes Ragini on the bed and lays on top of her. Ragini gets shocked and scared at the same time.

Lakshya- I didn't want to do this. I had no intentions of touching you but you provoked me by slapping me. I'm sorry for what I'm gonna do to you now.

Ragini (shocked, angry and scared)- What? What are you gonna do to me? You know what, Lakshya? I hate you. After whatever you did today, I'm never gonna let you touch me. Never!

Lakshya smirks.

Lakshya- So you won't let me touch you, right? But who wants your permission, babe?

With this, Lakshya rips off Ragini's clothes and throws them on the floor. Ragini keeps struggling hard to stop him but he was anyway stronger. He places both her hands above her head and pins them with his hands, pinning her to the bed. He then kisses her forcefully while she keeps struggling and crying. Having no strength and energy left to struggle any more, she finally gives up and Lakshya ends up raping her brutally and violently. This was the first time she was getting physical to someone and it hurt her a lot. Her "private part" (if you know what I mean) was bleeding due to the loss of virginity and the deep and rough thrusting but he was so blinded in hate and revenge that he ignored her pain, tears, blood and kept "banging" her as fast, hard and rough as he could even without stopping for a second. After about two hours, he gets tired and goes to sleep. Ragini was in pain. She places her hand on her stomach and keeps weeping secretly making no noise. She didn't want to wake up him up. She was now scared of him. But she was so numb, weak and in pain that she could barely move. Both of them slept on the same bed that night. Lakshya was in deep sleep in one corner while Ragini keeps weeping silently in pain in the other corner of the bed.
Edited by chandra1998 - 9 years ago
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OMG!!
I am on the edge. This is really dark😲

Ragini is the only one innocent here.
Thanks for the pm

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