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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello folks.😃 This time its a trial of writing a modern story on modern Jodha and Jalal. This story is a graph of ups and downs of life, but how the love stays constant in all the triumph and disaster... The story is about a poor, struggling youth and his childhood sweetheart who is a successful woman in her own profession, and their love that had been buried under the heap of time, but still alive successfully...

The story is written from the perspective of Jalal; he is the narrator of the story throughout...

Maybe the plot is too childish. And more than that I don't know whether I am successful to express the actual thought through the story. However, I will dare to post that here if and only if my friends want me to do that as I am not very confident about it. So friends, I am waiting for your responses.😳

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Chapter 1

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sho123

@sho123

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Posted: 10 years ago

congrs for new story
Nice concept

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@old_charm

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Posted: 10 years ago

congrats for ur new story...& bring it on...👍🏼

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sho123

@sho123

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swriter
Me first

better luck next time 😉

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mickeymini

@mickeymini

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wah !! wah !!
Stuti awesome concept but why did you mention about their love being buried under the heap of time ????
Will they be alive or its just jalal narrating his story ???
Yar subh kaam mai deri kiski 😆
U should continue
By the update your Other two stories yar
I m waiting 😉

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swriter

@swriter

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Posted: 10 years ago

Oye sherri ki bacchi main first thi😡

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sho123

@sho123

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swriter
Oye sherri ki bacchi main first thi😡

but abb main hu 🤣

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maniwood

@maniwood

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome prologue... Any story is amazing yaar puchna kya hai update soon... I am already getting the essence of the story 😆

But you will not forget your other stories na? 😛

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mickeymini
Wah !! wah !!
Stuti awesome concept but why did you mention about their love being buried under the heap of time ????
Will they be alive or its just jalal narrating his story ???
Yar subh kaam mai deri kiski 😆
U should continue
By the update your Other two stories yar
I m waiting 😉

No no they are alive.😆😆 It would be like a diary of Jalal. And by mentioning about 'buried under heap of time' I meant that they both used to love each other in their childhood but with the time passing, they have gone far from each other. I hope it will be clearer after first chappy.😃

I am getting bored of writing New Life and Destined Love so this one is a mouth-freshener. 😎😆