Originally posted by: sorathsheikh
Awesome update sis 😃
Jallu bhai ko kitna tease kia shivani ne 😆Hehe and he was trying hard to not to blush
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Originally posted by: sorathsheikh
Awesome update sis 😃
Jallu bhai ko kitna tease kia shivani ne 😆Hehe and he was trying hard to not to blush
Originally posted by: aishg1698
🤗 😳 👏 loved this too... :-)
Update pleasssee..
ill be right here waiting for u...😊
CHAPTER: 6
It is almost 9... more than 1 hour is passed since I have come out from Shivani's house... my family must have tried in my mobile innumerous times- that is ringing on Shivani's study room. Shivani's mother must have informed that I have left their house long back, and now everyone is hunting me like mad... but I don't care. I care for nothing... heartless I am; cruel I am...
"You are... so cruel Jalal; so cruel!"
The teary complaint in the sweetest voice... the pain inside the most beautiful eyes... the resentment in the lips... I cannot get over the sentence uttered by her! The words are roaming inside my heart, tearing up my soul, burning my entity... You are cruel Jalal, you are heartless! You have not even a heart to feel a person who has given away herself to you! You were proud with your poverty, never-ending problems; you were self-satisfied with the self-pity; were content in yourself by placing yourself in the category of platonic lovers of the literature... never even tried to explore her heart... Foolish you are...sadist... Absolutely selfish!
But now, overhearing of a little conversation has changed the route of my life... Jodha does love Jalal... just like he does... it is true! The dream of my life is true! An hour has passed in between; still I am standing under a lamppost of the dark lonely lane, detached from world and fighting within me... have I won all the happiness of my life, or is it a defeat of my ego, my prejudices and my selfishness?
The title track of a very famous and common serial of my locality was floating on the air... now this is dot 9. "Get up Jalal, go back to home! All are eagerly waiting for you!" The controlling power of my persona instructed me from inside and I got up. Am I seriously mad? After so many days my family is so happy and I am ruining their happiness by creating unwanted tension for them? I stood straight and dusted off my back; rubbed my eyes for once and just going to walk then...
I saw it right; Two headlights were rushing inside the lane, that just passed by my side, completely ignoring my presence and stopped a few meters before...
Black Audi! Does this means... There must not be much owners of Audi car in our town!
I could not hold my curiosity and stepped towards the car hiding myself, as a hard sound of heated argument was coming from that dark place where the car was parked. I peeped in... I was correct. Jodha was there, with the black Audi guy. Both were standing beside the car, and shouting...
"Don't create scene Jodha, get back to the car." The boy, Surya, whose expensive branded perfume was promoting his rich and wealth from that distance, ordered Jodha with a disgusted voice.
"Don't shout on me! What do you think of yourself?" Jodha told with double gravity in her voice. "You were going to drop me to my house; and this road is of opposite direction!"
"So? Do you think you will get any other vehicle in this dark lane now? Come and get back to the car Jodha, good girl; It is not safe for an alone girl to stand here in dark..." Surya's voice could not hide the viciousness while uttering those.
"We could have talked in my house. But you needed privacy, so you got me out of the house. And now ..." Jodha suddenly shouted in excitement. "What the hell you intend to do?"
"Come on Jodha... Don't be so conservative..." Did Surya tried to touch her? Jodha gave a jolt to him and moved some steps back.
"Maintain distance from me Surya." She warned. "You are crossing your limit!"
"I am crossing your limit?" Surya busted out. "It is you! After finalizing all things you are saying that you are not ready to marry me?"
"Did I finalize anything?" Jodha was no less than him. "Have you even tried to know my mind before sending the proposal through family? Why the hell you thought that I will happily agree to marry you?"
"What is the problem? I, Surya Singh, son of Mr. Siddharth Singh, himself is proposing you for marriage. Where the question of refusing lies?" Surya's voice had a touch of plead. "We are friend from a long time. I like you... and I think you like me too. Then why should I..."
"Your decision is not everything Surya." Jodha stated with fury. "I have told everything clearly. What more clarification do you want to understand my state?"
"It cannot be a reason. You should move forward and choose for a better life..." Surya tried to pursue her which made Jodha to bust out in rage.
"Who are you to advise me? Who are you to tell me which one is a better life for me? Listen Mr., if the definition of good life in your dictionary is to wear branded dresses, drive expensive cars and to trip abroad once a month; then sorry, for me the definition is entirely different."
"I still can't believe!" Surya simpered. "You are refusing ME for a lad of the street!"
"Who are you to judge him???" Jodha roared. "Did he ever take any favour of you? Do you know him? Then who are you to say ill about him?"
"You are mad Jodha!" Surya sighed hopelessly.
"Maybe." Jodha told. "But I have said you the ultimate decision..." Her voice drummed in by heart. "I am committed to Jalal; and if I marry ever, I will marry him only. Not anyone else. Now..." She continued... "Go back to your house; I will go on my own."
"So, I, with whom you have hung out for 2-3 months, am not worth of your belief?" Surya smirked cruelly.
"I always believed you Surya; always thought you to be my friend. But..." She sighed. "At this moment, I really doubt on your intension."
"If I had any bad intension then I would not have waited to marry you stupid!" The animal inside Surya was coming out of the mask of human. "I just want you to understand and get into sense. Get back to the car; we can talk on this matter more vividly in my new apartment... the place of restaurant was too crowded to make you understand."
"So mean!!" Jodha hissed. "And I was thinking you as my friend! Scoundrel! Characterless!"
"Don't bark much you wh**e!" The dirty nude personality had come out from the flesh of polished young man. "After seducing me from whole 3 months, after getting all the advantages of me and my father's post, now suddenly a new lover is born? And you are becoming sati-savitri'??"
"Surya!" Jodha screamed! "From which action of me you get the meaning that I am seducing you? I have many male friends and I behave with all of them same just I did with you. It was you who often crossed your limit by calling me with too personal terms; and I always have stopped you. And what advantage have I taken from you apart from lift in car?" She was quite shocked in this accusation in seemed.
"What do you think, you would get the promotion so early if my father has not told to favour you?" Surya roared. "No need to be so innocent now. Come with me... I don't like to be refused!"
A little silence from Jodha, then she uttered in a firm voice. "In this case, the resignation letter will reach to the office by tomorrow. I can never continue a job selling my self-respect that too in hand of an animal like you!"
"You s**t! Bitch! You are calling me Animal? What will you do if I force myself on you in this dark lane? You are showing me bravery? It seems the girls like you do not understand the language of gentleman. I know how to show you place..."
"Thhhasss!!" Poor Surya got a tight slap from Jodha while barking all this.
"Hope this has shown you your place. Best of luck in your life; I am going." She uttered and looked back, but desperate Surya pulled her hands and tried to force her... "You will show me place? You dared to put hand on Surya Singh?" He hissed and dashed her in front... she would have fallen on the road due to the jostle, but did not...
I held her, and pulled her behind me; stood in front of that coward dog and slapped with double strength.
Perhaps the slap was not very hard, but the speed of the incident had moved Surya's confidence. He perhaps had never got rejection from anybody... but today he has got, that too due to a negligible person... and when that negligible person slapped him, it converted into his worst nightmare! He kept staring at my eyes, which was beaming in rage and a new confidence... I, Jalal, am the only one who can stand with Jodha... not any characterless dog of a rich house- as Jalal the only one in this world, whom Jodha loves!
"Trying to molest an alone girl, dog!" I hissed holding him by collars. "You bas***d, scoundrel, swine, ******, ************,****..." I kept on with all the raw slangs I know! "Saale Kamine! Agar iske baad ek bar bhi iss elake me dikha na, to tujhe katke tere Audi me ghusake Ganga me baha dunga! Yaad rahe!"[You bustard. If you ever be seen in this place I will cut you into pieces, pour those inside your Audi and sink that in Ganga! Remember this!]
Do I look very scary type? I don't think so... but maybe the higher-status men like Surya use to have an assumption that any boy of lower-middle class with short t-shirt, old, cheap jeans, shampoo-less hair and hard face is anti-social, directly involved with underworld, right hand of the don... They fear from the bunch of poor unemployed struggling boys actually, and that fear worked today. All his courage that he was showing to Jodha vanished in a second, and he fled in his black Audi at a blink of an eye after I loosed his collar!
I gazed to his path for some minutes; Jodha's hands were touching my shoulder, her head had gently leaned on my back... I heard an amused tone along with giggle from my back. "Aree waah! Mera Hero! Tu to Salman Khan nikla! Kya entry maari!"[Wow my hero! You came out to be Salman Khan! What an entry!]
"Zyada daant maat dikha!"[Don't laugh much!] I grinned in fury. "If I ever see you with any faltu' boy like this anymore, I will break all your teeth, I swear!"
"I was just giving you chance to become hero!" Jodha was unable to stop giggling. Her eyes were content with pure happiness... I was lost again inside her eyes... she is mine, she is only mine!
"What happened? What are you seeing?"Jodha smiled to me. She slowly touched my cheeks with her soft hands... I started smiling.
"Now I have to check your friend-list vividly. I let you to roam free for some days only, and you have made friendship with so many idiots? Uhhuh! I have to keep an eye on your activities from now on!"
"Ohhh! Bohot protective ban raha hay?"[Now you are becoming protective?] Jodha chuckled, but this time a strain of tear could be felt even in the dark! "Then why were you showing atti at evening when I came to you?" She complained, and started mimicking me. "Congratulation for your marriage... I am very happy to see you happy... I will always pray for your happiness... Dramebaaz kahika!" She was making fun, but the string of hurt was not hidden...
"What is my fault? How would I know that IITian Ms. Jodha will be such an idiot that she will prefer a second hand scooter, that too broken, to a sophisticated black Audi?" I laughed out loudly.
Silence for a moment, then a low sound of sob jerked my heart... Again I hurt her! The little hesitation that I still had was wiped out at once; I got closer to her, cupped her cheeks, and wiped the drop of pearl that was rolling down... "Sorry!" I murmured. "I had belief on you... but not on me...But now, I believe on my strength, my love! I will never let you to go..."
Jodha smiled brightly, and hugged my neck with her arms, and leaned on my chest. "Pagal kahika!" [Mad boy!] She murmured.
I closed my eyes, spontaneously my arms embraced her body... and the heaven came down to the earth...
Two drops of drizzle fell down from sky. "Let's go Jodha, it may rain..." I told, but she held my hand...
"Let us enjoy the rain together..." she whispered in an enigmatic passion... "Remember that day..."
The heavy rain started showering on earth along the love and peace of heaven. Under the vast sky we were standing together... both of our entity was mingled with each other... we became one... forever...
Ten years have passed... I am a successful higher-middle class family-man now; sales executive of a renowned company- father of two little children... We have shifted into a new apartment from our old two-roomed house almost 6 years ago... My father is doing well now under the well treatment and therapy; Mother's treatment is going on in full-fledge; my sister has opened her own boutique; her elder son is going to appear for boards this year. My son is in class two, where my daughter still crawls on ground. Jodha, my dearest and greatest wife, is successful both inside and outside the house...
But still today, when the cloud of rain envelops the east sky at dark night, and the whole world is showered with the drizzled of love; while losing my whole entity in the aroma of the body of my beautiful wife, I can see in front of my eyes, how two matured young man and woman had lost their entities in the love for each other in the rain in dark lane ten years back, and how the warm wet touch of my Jodha's lips in my lips had rung like the bell of victory inside my heart...
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