My beloved - a forbidden love(a happy ending to be updated in pg 12)

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res..

Unres...

Firstly, sorry for the delay in posting my comment... Was little busy with studies... Just got some time to read... A much needed relaxation..

Loved this story to the core...

U have written it exceptionally too well...

U have a profound language... Loved the way u described the beauty of the palace.. Gives me such anaesthetic pleasure reading this amazing story...

Its indeed a very bold topic... I would have felt it was unethical to love a step sis... By blood or by law... But there is always an exception... And that exception is Rishbala... They make me feel this kind of too so pure & divine...

Loved the scene where madhu enters rishu's den... Lol... She really is a scared kitten but a beautiful barbie doll...

Glad rishab didnt scare her more by shouting at her for entering his place... But he was so gentle...

That prayer scene was so cute... Loved madhu's innocence...

I guess i don't like any character's in this story apart from Rishbala & bittuji... Oh & and dips! Surprisingly she seems to be good here... So far!

Okay... So their puppy love got intensified in the 8 long yrs gap... I wonder what all would have happened in the 8 yrs... Nothing big that would affect either madhu or rishab... But the actual issue starts only after his return...

Why Mohan killed rishbala?? Did he really killed them or it was Meera who did that? As she seems to be a money shipper...

Whoever it is... I just wish they rot him hell for killing those two poor souls...

A part of me feels sad that rishbala is no more... But part of me is happy bcos they r still together as souls... Lol... So they can still romance... Lol..

U really got me hooked up with this story... Will be eagerly waiting to read the future updates...

Thanks for the pm...

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago

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GOODLUCKANGEL

@GOODLUCKANGEL

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome start . 👏👍🏼
Although, im feeling sad to see my RM already dead but d way u have written their past is amazing .Loved every word of it.
so madhu is rishabh's unwanted stepsis [ not blood related]. From where mohan got her. Her father is someone else. I guess sheis mohan's friend's daughter n he adopted her.
D way u described dat palace in madhu's words was awesome.

Rishabh felt attracted to her when he was jus 11 😲🤣

omg! his hormones started working much earlier. wat wud he do when he wud b 16 n above.😆
cont soon dear.😳

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Oh God Madhu is Rishabh adopted sister n he feel in love with her Mohan killed Rk n Madhu
Amazing update waiting for next update

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silverfire

@silverfire

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome start, buddy.👏

Ok! I understand this is gonna by a sad story. But I'm having faith when Madhu says ' it will all end soon' is there going to be a reincarnation.😃

Yes, it's a very strong concept. Madhu is the step sis of Rishab but not a blood relative. An unwanted relationship. They r attracted at such a young age.😲

When I started reading I thought Rishabala were siblings, blood relatives n that made me a little hesitant. The way u have written it is awesome. Can connect to them instantly. We can see Rishabh does not have a good relationship his dad. He is a loner. Madhu is the key to his happiness but she is the unwanted sister for him. They share a more sacred, passionate relationship which may not be accepted by his dad.

Loved the way u described RK's riches. Eight elephants can sleep on his bed😲 so many clothes n shoes. Omg!

Great start to the story.

Waiting to see what happened as they grow up.

Plz do continue soon...

Thanks for the PM.

Edited by silverfire - 9 years ago

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Poorva

@.Poorva.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res Unres.. OMG... Wow!! You described every scene perfectly... Sad that Rishbala is already dead... But there past was beautiful.. Madhu is Rishbh step sis through not by blood.. And they feel connected with each other.. Waiting for the next part!!! Plz update soon...

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks for the PM!

I get to feel differently after reading rishbala .

Waiting...

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mahimesha

@mahimesha

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome start 👏
sad to see Rishabala already dead😭

so madhu is rishabh's step sister😃 but adopted one😃

the palace was awesome😲

she is older to him😃 i liked that idea😉

where is abhy he was not present during bittu speech so he didn't contributed in their love 😕

thanks for pm😳

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Indeed a bold concept.

very well written.

Rishabh is not happy in the palace , Madhu is also lonely without her father.

Both have fallen for each other.

Seems Mohan has killed them. Waiting to read more.

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merliah johanna

@madhumeandyou

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Such an awesome story. Its sad that rk madhu no more. Mohan shuld've been killed.thank god that he's going to be hanged for his deeds. So rishbala are madly in love with eachother. Just waiting for how they confessed. So rk madhu culdnt marry but they're together forever. Even death can make them apart

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

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Story is being narrated by rishbala's soul..madhu is elder to rk..but love knows no bound..both can relate to each other..both r lonely..madhu is rk's forced step sis😆rk is going to london..their bonding got stronger & bittuji is taking care of them...

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