My beloved - a forbidden love(a happy ending to be updated in pg 12) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: silverfire

Omg! What a story! Great...just awesome.😛

Feel very bad for RK n Madhu. They can't confess becos of the society. To hell with this society... They deserve happiness.
For a minute I thought Abhay completely had his way with Madhu.😡 Thank God RK came at the right time. Good that he moved to the mansions near madhu's room. Only he can keep her safe.
Now meera will poison Abhay more n this may result in Rishabala 's death. Mohan must have a hand in it that's way he is behind bars now. Wonder what happened to meera?

Great writing, dear. We can actually feel their pain. The pain of loving someone but not able to confess. The future looks dark for them. Like there is no light at the end of the tunnel. They have accepted their fate.

Plz show reincarnation of Rishabala in the end. It's a request... If not in this life then at least in the nxt birth we want to see them happy.
A very emotional update.
Waiting for the nxt part...plz make it fast.
Thanks for the PM.


My stories always have sad endings...But due to readers demand I changed one into happy ending like in Forbidden tale of love...😆...Ur request of reincarnation is good...I will think about it...😊...But the main problem is that the whole story is written in the flashbacks of the souls of the leads...Still , lets see if I can do something about it...

Lastly , in part 1 , I mentioned that meera and abhay died when they tried to flee from police and mewt with an accident...So , only mohan is alive and now soon to be hanged till death...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Oh boy such an update.
Felt bad for rishbala,poor guys they can't confess their feeling because o society. But i guess they are not going to hide their feelings for long. Thankfully rk saved madhu in time, But she must be emotionally scarred due to events.
I believe now abhay and Mohan are going to plot against rishbala.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Awesome update, loved it.
Mohan is worried about his prestige than his sons.
Can't wait to read more of it, please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
wondrful updt..!! That abhay is such a creep.. When rk was away his eyes was on madhu.. Aww.. Rishbala hugged inspite of all eyes on them.. Abhay tried to create a rift by saying rk is taken care by girls..Bt that didnot affect madht..Their bond ws strongr
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Rk notice the indifference between abhay & madhu.. & madhu too didnt spell out anything.. Flashback scene of rk holding madhu ws lovely.. Rk's dad is a pig.. Only care abt heir nor his son..good.. Abhay got in jail.. Tnxx fr pm..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Previously in My beloved

The Kundra royal family was the oldest and most prestigious royal families in India.They were the richest and most powerful family among all. The owner of the Kundra Empire "Mohan Kundra" fell in love with Meera, who was already married , when he saw her in a party.Lady Meera Kundra was the 2nd wife of Lord Mohan Kundra.Lady Meera and her orphaned ex-husband Shamsher Malik , had a daughter together
named Madhu whereas when Meera married Mohan , he was already a father of 2 little boys "Rishabh and Abhay" from his 1st wife Lady Radha Kundra , who died while giving birth to Abhay.Rishabh , who was never loved by his parents , became an introvert while Abhay turned to be like Meera.Both brothers fell for Mohan's adopted daughter Madhu while Madhu was in love with RK which was no secret to Abhay.When Mohan sent away RK for higher studies , the separation brought them closer.But Abhay took this separation as a perfect opportunity to force Madhu to make him his , but failed which angered him more and he became desperate.After RK returned back to his country , Mohan threw a party in RK's honour , but the night turned ugly when a drunken Abhay tried to sexually abuse her.Although RK reached on time and saved her , but the incident shook her and she became a juicy scandalous gossip for the media.Infact , her position in the castle worsened as Mohan-Meera considered her as the root cause of RK sending Abhay to jail , and spoiling the family name.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Awesome update, loved it.😃
mohan is such a😡
Rk and madhu i just feel so sad for them ... they suffered so much 😭
they shared some moment that made them happy 😃
why life was so cruel for them 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Superb update
Their parents are cruel
I hope madhu comes out of her depression soon
Rk is so loving n caring
He is best
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Emotional as well as passionate update.Rishabh takes care of broken Madhu.But she couldn't forget that night.Finally rk have to confess his love n they became one.But I guess their confession to their parents bring dire consequences for them.Both songs r my favorite.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
What an update.
It had n emotions and passion. Rk was so caring towards madhu. They expressed their love for each other. But seems the consequence is going to be dire.
P.s. great song selection.

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