My beloved - a forbidden love(a happy ending to be updated in pg 12)

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

hey I just read it and its awesome..my babies suffered a lot for Six months awww

So...That Jerk is jailed but hias parents are blaming Madhu for everything...seriously..and RK si there for Madhu..to take care of her and to sooth her...that's awesome..

its heart breakign to see Madhu so vulnerable and a helpless RK but finally they burned the barriers around and became one ..

Ufff need cool air to reduce the hotness of the update ..ufff and then Madhu's reply hahahah kinda sexy too ..

hmmm so confession...wait this is gng to be their last union I guess...that's why they are so happy now coz my babies happiness is short term and sorrows are for lifelong...

pooor souls...

thank you so much Lady for the update

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

I really can't understand Meera how can she blame Madhu
Abhay is jail he deserve dat
Finally they confessed their love n rk is determined to tell their parents
Awesome update

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Emotional and sad update

R.K is such caring, he just can't leave Madhu alone for a sec also, aff a long wait of 9 yrs they confessed their feelings n became one, hot n passionate.

Thanks for the PM dear.

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radhadd

@radhadd

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Hi...too good update. ...really loved how rk supported her...It true relationship. ...whatever problems...what ever circumstances if we love someone we have be with them till end...that is what rk portrayed. ...Thanks for emotional and love made update. ..

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Thats molten hottt update☺️.. Too awesome. From start Rk supported her, help her to heal, made her feel the need of survival.. Survival for him.. He is determined never to leave her again.. And finally their love making.. Awesome updt.. Tnx fr pm..😳

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keerthana selvaprasd

@keerthiprasad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Read all of the part in one go and waiting for the next update dr...

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merliah johanna

@madhumeandyou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

All the description u give are fantastic. Ur a fab writer. So mohan is trying to get rk married to pari. I dont think mk n wife are having gud ideas as they knw rk wnt agree. So rk and madhu did it. I dint read 18 above parts as u write very descriptively and im still a minor. Really gud update. Thanks a lot for the pm. Yes I read ur comment and ues ur idea is gud. Im planning for an os contest too.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

loved both the parts... but i guess i loved part 4b a little more & i guess u could guess the reason... i don't belong to the bachcha party... hehe... i read the update fully & kinda dreamed their muddy romance, their kisses & touches... but after that i read but didn't imagine.. becos thats Rishbala's so private moment.. haha.///

honestly, that pottery idea was just mind blowing.. one of the best romantic love making scene i have ever read...

u have written it so beautifully... little bit detailed way of showing their love making scene.. but that's okay... mainly becos it wasn't vulgar at all... i didn't flinch at any places or shut my eyes feeling Eewww... it was so pure... honest to goodness love!!

finally the inevitable happened... they confessed their long hidden only truth.. their love to each other... that's just wow!

okay... let me mention a little bit abt the first half too.. starting i felt bad for madhu... she was totally shaken... she looked so lost & lifeless... but thanks to Rk... for bringing his princess... well, i love when he called her baby & kissed her forehead ... a goodnight kiss & put her to sleep... such a cute gesture... he succeeded in bring her back to her normal state... with his shenanigans.. if i must say... haha...

just enjoyed the updates.. so emotional at one level & so romantic at the other... nice song selection..

okay... now they r going to let their relationship out to the world? that will bring more trouble as senior Kundra is planning to sell his son in the name of marriage to a Oil co. owner's daughter...

how i wish Rk had just taken madhu with him to london & settled their happily?

looking forward to read the next update...

sorry for taking too long to comment in this lovely story dear... & i m still following this story so do send me pm...

thanks!

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

In the whole part I could only see their pure unadulterated love and longing they have for each other. Nothing else matters when they are together. The song...is from a tamil movie Bombay. The original version is also nice do hear it. 'Kannalane enadu kangal...'

Their lovemaking scene is so romantic. They finally told what they have for each other.

How are they going to convince their cunning parents?

Thanks for PM

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Previously in My beloved

The Khurana royal family was the oldest and most prestigious royal families in India.They were the richest and most powerful family among all. The owner of the Khurana Empire "Yash Singh Khurana" fell in love with Mohini , who was already married , when he saw her in a party.Lady Mohini Singh Khurana was the 2nd wife of Lord Yash Singh Khurana.Lady Mohini and her orphaned ex-husband Mohinder Handa , had a daughter together

named Geet whereas when Mohini married Yash , he was already a father of 2 little boys "Maan and Ranveer" from his 1st wife Lady Naina Singh Khurana , who died while giving birth to Ranveer.Maan , who was never loved by his parents , became an introvert while Ranveer turned to be like Mohini.Both brothers fell for Yash's adopted daughter Geet while Geet was in love with Maan which was no secret to Ranveer.When Yash sent away Maan for higher studies , the separation brought them closer.But Ranveer took this separation as a perfect opportunity to force Geet to make him his , but failed which angered him more and he became desperate.After Maan returned back to his country , Yash threw a party in Maan's honour , but the night turned ugly when a drunken Ranveer tried to sexually abuse her.Although Maan reached on time and saved her , but the incident shook her and she became a juicy scandalous gossip for the media.Infact , her position in the castle worsened as Yash-Mohini considered her as the root cause of Maan sending Ranveer to jail , and spoiling the family name.

Maan found a way to bring his old geet back...He took her to the basement where he told her to free herself and pour all that was going inside her into pottery...In doing so , they came close and expressed their love...and finally they took a decision to confess what they feel for each other to their parents...

ch 5 updated next page...

Guys , the low comment is making me sad...So ,I will finish it in the next update..

Edited by sanghita0000 - 9 years ago