My beloved - a forbidden love(a happy ending to be updated in pg 12)

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Aaniya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Thanks for pm... & i wanted to ask... Is radha & meera both bad... Radha is bad, it is clear as she passed on her quality to abhay... & meera...?? Is she too same as radha...??

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varsha joshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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interesting start dear

Loved it

So madhu is sis of rk by law

Mohan killed rk n madhu

Loved bittuji

I got confused in time pls make it clear for me

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manna43

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Beautifully written story. U described all details precisely. Want to read next part.

Thanks for pm.

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: v.p.joshi
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interesting start dear
Loved it
So madhu is sis of rk by law
Mohan killed rk n madhu
Loved bittuji
I got confused in time pls make it clear for me

The rishbala in my beloved is set in 1987...They met in june 1987 (june) for the 1st time when RK was 13 yrs old and madhu 15 yrs old...They will confess in 1996...and they will be killed in 1996 only...Mohan kundra is in jail for that crime for 18 yrs 11 months...but he couldn't be proved guilty...At last in oct 2015 , he confessed for his crime and pleaded for death sentence...So the story will be in flashback from rishbala's pov...they are remembering their love story that started in 1987 i.e. 28 yrs back...

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--
Thanks for pm... & i wanted to ask... Is radha & meera both bad... Radha is bad, it is clear as she passed on her quality to abhay... & meera...?? Is she too same as radha...??

I never said radha is bad...she died while giving birth to abhay...Meera , madhu's real mother , is a gold-digger...She married mohan for his money and become mother of two sons from mohan's 1st wife...RK was luckily saved from meera's bad infuence , but abhay couldn't...

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Anntempleton

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Interesting start.

Rishbala fell in love at such young age. I see their path is going to be difficult. It's sad to know rishbala die but I can't wait to know what Mohan actually did. I also a waiting to see their love bloom. Thank you for pm.

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jalebi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Unresed my comment on page 1... Kindly check it dear... Sorry for the delay...

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Aaniya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

oh ho... I misundrstood it back then... Meera is the one who is tricky woman here... Abhay influenced by her while rishabh didnt..!! I got it... Thanks for clearing...😊

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ananya2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome start.

Sad that Rishbala are no more but you have described the past beautifully, though its unethical to fall in love with a step sister but in for this story maaf hai for Rishbala. R.K is truly royal and the way you described his mansion was awesome. Happy Rishbala are together even after their death.

Continue soon, waiting for the next update.

Could you please PM me.

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HappySoul-4va

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Sorry fro being late girl but must say this is amazing...

I just loved every bit of narration..ofcourse the characters..wow...the way you narrated the whole story is amazing...

So RK- Madhu were killed by Meera and Abhay...in a way no body wil accept their relation but How and WHY is the question...

Also, Bittu hates MOhan, you narrated him to be ruthless..so he killed Meera and Abhay...ufff..so many things..guess I missed few yaar..nevertheless I am happy and curious..

So he went to London and they are hiding their feelings by pretending to be best friends...aaah curious...

Anyways...will wait for next chapters...and I love such fairy tales...wowww...love it.///

keep it up sweety and thanks for the PM 👏👏