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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
hi thanks 4 amazing update! Well written! Poor Maan! Geet doesn't remember him! Maaneet argue! Maan wants his Geet back! Pari intervenes! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Haye Rabba Maan Geet pe
jealousy ki trick .. use
karega ..
Waise .
Geet ne Maan ke heart ki wall ke paar dekh liya ..
Ab Maan Singh Khurana ..
Geet ka Diwana ..
Kya Karega . ..
hehe ..
Update Next part.. soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Awesome Update

I now understand why Maan wants Geet to remember Krish
but now she is totally avoiding Maan its almost as if they strangers
now it seems like the tables have turned Geet wants to be away from him while he wants her near him .
he tries and be patient but I guess its difficult for him and seeing that Geet ignores him too has made him now more desperate to have her in his life

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Posted: 9 years ago
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geet is not talking to maan too
she avoids him
n he is trying to make her normal with him
her distance made him chose another way
jealousy
will she..
nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part - 118

Next day...

Geet waits for Maan at the breakfast table but Maan asks Geet to come and see him with breakfast...

Geet gets angry she doesn't take his breakfast...

She goes to his room and never minds to knock in her anger...

She enters only to find Maan just coming out of his shower...

Geet closes her eyes and screams...

Geet: koi aaise nange pange goomthe hai kya?

Maan: Geet, you just entered my room without knocking

Geet: mein na badh mein aathi

Geet tries to leave but Maan stops her and arrests her within his arms...

Maan: dar gayi kya?

Geet: mein kyun darthi? mujhe koi dar nahi hai

Maan playfully caresess her and gets a little naughty...

Geet tries to conceal her feelings but fails drastically...

She berthes heavily but doesn't want to give any clues to Maan...

Maan doesn't need them for he already knows her mind...

Maan: mujhe laga aaise anjaan aadmi ke saath akhele mein rehne se tum darthi

Geet:hmm nahi

Maan: toh kahan baghthi ho, yahi wait karo, aur mera khana

Geet pushes his off...

Geet: I'm not your servant, samjhe aap?

Maan calls Nakul to bring the food...

Nakul brings nad Maan gets ready...

Maan serves the food and gives it t Geet first...

Geet looks surprised...

Maan: khana khilane ke liye naukar hona zaroori nahi, ye lo khalo, mujhe patha hai ki tum bhooki ho, issiliye aaise bhoothni ban gayi ho

Geet: haan, mein boothni hoon?

Maan catches hold of her and takes her to the mirror...

Maan: tum hi dekho

Geet looks at the mirror and she is red hot in anger...but then something else catches her attention, someone's intense gaze...

Maan is staring her only...

Maan gets closer to her while she avoids meeting his eyes...

Maan whispers : you look beautiful in every avatar

Geet: ab jaldhi apna kaam bathao, mere paas pura din nahi hai

Maan: hmm pehle khao

Maan gives her the plate and Geet snatches it from him and tries to finish off and go from there as quickly as possible...

But with Maan sitting infront and watching her she couldn't even swallow her food...

Maan: koi jaldhi nahi hai Geet, mere paas toh puri zindagi hai

Geet: aap nahi kaye?

Maan keeps looking at her...Geet takes a plate and serves him...

Maan is happy now...

Maan: mujhe na tummare saath khane ki aadat bangayi

Maan used to feed Geet and eat along with her only...

Geet has not forgotten that...Maan knows she can't forget him that easily...

After eating Geet waits for Maan to tell her about the job...

She is waiting with her pen and pad...

Maan: toh Geet you are ready, I like that, you are always ready to work for me

Maan winks...

Geet: toh bathao

Geet gets ready for the dictation...

Maan: note down carefully Geet, this is very important, this is something concerned about my life

Geet looks at him and stares...

Maan: this is for tomorrows matrimony ad

Geet: you want to start a new business? Well, you are not even good enough to find a match for yourself

Geet smiles sarcastically...

Maan: gud point Geet, you are my secretary and I know you will take care of that too

Geet: what?

Maan: looking for a girl with strong memory and a steady mind, aaise na ho ki uss ne shadhi ke dusre din hi hummare shadhi ko bhool jaye aur apna maika chale jaaye, haina Geet?

Geet knows that Maan is teasing her only...

Geet: bas itna hi?

Maan: tum hi bathao aur kya chahiye?

Geet: usually people look for good looking, smart, homely girl to take care of the family values, you like someone who will be your chamchi, joh aapke har baat ko maane

Maan: mere har baat toh Nakul bhi maantha hai Geet

Maan looks at Geet and waits for her answer...

Geet: mujhe patha hai ki aap ko kasie ladhki pasand hai

Maan: what? tum ne kuch kaha

Geet: nahi

Maan: toh tum bathao mujhe kaise ladhki chahiye?

Geet: someone who knows you as the MSK, who understands you, who is a friend and also loves you, cares for you, some one who can accept you as yourself

Geet almost breaks down as she says that...

Maan: there was a girl, as you said, but I lost her

Geet couldn't control her tears...she leaves from there immediately...: I'm sorry, I habe to go

Maan wouldn't let her go easily...

Maan: you can't keep rumming away like this Geet

Geet: let me go

Maan: I won't

Geet: I'll shout

Maan: try it Geet, I'm not going to let you go this time

Geet: are you mad or what?

Maan: yes, I'm mad, I was just happy with my life but you came into my life and look at me, I have turned mad, haan mein pagal ho gaya hoon Geet

Geet: I have to go

Maan: I know you still love me Geet

Geet: no, I never loved you

Maan: you may lie to me Geet, but your eyes don't

Geet tries to turn back...Maan stops her...

Maan: no matter how much you deny, the fact remains the same, you can't hide it for long Geet

Geet: let me go

Geet says in a harsh tone and Maan leaves her...

Maan publishes the ad in the paper and has asked the girls to come and meet Maan...

Maan has arranged a meeting point at the OH...

Some girls have come and Geet doesn't know anything about that...

It there an interview or what? that too at KM?

Geet: have you come for the job of Maan's secretary?

No one responds and all are busy drooling Maan's portrait...

Geet removes it from there and now asks them why they are here?

She wonders how come Maan accepted her resignation so easily?

She is shocked to learn that they have come for marriage alliance...she never gave anything to publish...

She then finds a crowd pushing and pulling to see Maan working out...

Geet goes and asks Maan to leave for he must be ashamed to be a show piece for the girls to drool...

But Maan tells that he enjoys all the that and is happy that so many girls like his physique...after all his hardwork paid off, haina?

Geet goes and tells the girls that the show is over for today and they can come back tomorrow...

They can now get ready to meet Maan in person and they have to prepare for their interview...

They are all surprised...

She says that it's happening every month and she dosen't know why all the girls escape after meeting Maan...

She tells them that Maan is very short tempered and wants his girl to be under his control, he also wants the girls to memorize today's paper and he'll conduct a memory test...

She warns them that he'll punish the girl's who fail his tests...he is maniac obsessed with martial arts and even wants his partner to be equally good...

Only those who have a black belt can survive...

Thus Geet succeeds in chasing off the girls...

Maan is happy to see the jealous side of Geet...

Maan has been watching her only...

Maan comes and sees Geet...

Maan: Geet, where are the girls?

Geet: I don't know

Maan: Geet, don't try to fool me

Geet: why should I?

Maan: I know you are jealous

Geet: I'm not jealous

Maan pins her aginst the wall and looks into her eyes...

Maan: joot mat bolo Geet, meine dekha tumme, you didn't like them watching me workout, why Geet?

Geet: woh

Maan: You don't want to see me with someone else, haina?

Geet keeps staring him...

Maan: abhi toh bathado Geet

Geet: what?

Maan: jo tummare mann mein hai

Geet: mere mann mein kuch nahi hai

Maan thrusts himself upon her in anger...: kuch nahi hai?

Geet is hurt...she is hiding her love...but why?

Maan can see the pain in her eyes...but he can't understand what's wrong with her...

Maan: Geet, don't do this Geet, I can't see you like this, why are you punishing yourself

Geet: b'coz I don't deserve this

Maan: what?

Geet: I'm just a secretary

Maan: no Geet, you are wrong, you are more than a secretary, you are my

Geet stops him...

Geet: don't say anything, I don't want to mess your life

Maan: it's already a mess, only you can fix it Geet, I don't know when you will realize this

Geet: I'm also trying to fix it

Maan: what?

Geet: I know what you are missing

Maan: Geet

Maan thinks that she has found the truth...she remembers everything...

Geet: I know you miss your girl friend, haina?

Maan: yes, I miss her a lot

Geet: I'll find her soon

Maan: but you need not search her out, she is here, right in front of me

Geet: no, I don't have the right, mujhe koi haq nahi hai

Geet murmurs to herself...

Maan: Geet, why don't you open your eyes and see

Geet: babaji ki lakh lakh shukar hai, he just opened me eyes on time

Maan: Geet, I can never understand you

Geet smiles...but her heart is crying...

Maan: Ok Ms.Geet, why did you sent the girls back?

Geet remains quiet...she looks at him and just smiles...

Maan: what's your probem Geet? you don't want me to get married?

Maan's words hurt Geet and Maan also knows that...he is only trying to make her realize her love which she has forgotten...

Geet tries to get off his hold but Maan tightens his grip...he shakes her up...

Maan: jawab do Geet, answer me

Geet: I have already found the girl

Maan is shocked...: what?

Geet: yes, I'll bring her soon

Maan: are you sure?

Geet: yes

Maan is confused now...let's see who it is...

Maan is lost in his thoughts and Geet pushes him off and runs away...


Part119

Edited by ghsp2fan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Maan wanting Geet to remember but she seems adamant
Maan now places an ad and all the girls have come for an interview for marriage alliance but when Geet sees this she is shocked to hear they have come for Maan only and she lies to all making them leave while Maan watched her and is happy that somewhere she is jealous but than again she says she has found a girl for him
lets see what happens now

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n excellent update! Maan confronts Geet n she denies! Maan makes her j! Geet possessive! Geet says she found a girl 4 him! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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first he push her then want her in won life
maan tum bhi na


itne confuse kun ho

finally she recovering


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part - 119

Next day...

Maan calls Geet and asks about the girl she had found for him...

Geet syas that it's not an ordinary girl and he has to wait for some one special...

Maan: I already have someone specisl

Maan looks at Geet with pride...yes, she is his precious possession that he can always be happy to have got...but the thing is that Maan could only see it from a distance...

Geet: what?

Maan: I mean I have got a special secretary who loves me so much that

Maan looks deep into her eyes in search of that love...

Geet tries to distract him...

Geet: that's just your imagination, come back to reality Maan sir

What a turn of events, now Maan is more dreamy while Geet is so radical...

But Maan doesn't want to come out of his dream...very bad Maan...

Maan: dreams do come true Geet

Geet: yes, dreams do come true, and I promise you would live your dream oneday with the love of your life'

Maan is surprised...and is not able to believe it...

Maan: Geeet

He moves closer...with a lot of love and expectations...

Geet: I have primised to get your girl, and I'll definitely fulfil it

Geet leaves with a triumphant smile while Maan is even more confused...

That day Geet keeps herself busy with Pari and avoids Maan somehow...

Maan comes back from KC and waits for the girls...

But vicky comes alone leaving Maan upset...

Maan: Vicky? where are they?

Vicky: Bro, they won't come until the shopkeeper throws them out

Maan: but why did you leave them?

Vicky: Bro, I can't stay there like a watch dog

Maan: Vicky, how can be so irresponsible?

Vicky knows why Maan is so upset...

Vicky: sorry Bro, Geet asked me to leave so I left

Maan: it's OK vicky

Vicky: Bro, I don't think Geet'll be coming with Pari

Maan is worried...

Maan: why?

Vicky: she said she has some work with Pinky and might be staying there tonight

Maan knows that Geet is doing all this deliberately to avoid him, but why should she hide from him if there is nothing between the two of them as she pretends

So that's in a way makes Maan happy, it's not too far when Geet herslf would realize her love...her love for MSK...

Geet comes home late in the morning hoping that Maan would have gone to work...

She goes to the OH and finds out that Pari has left with Vicky...

She is on her own and she is relieved that she can be relaxed taking a day off...

Geet goes and haves a long shower...that was much needed to get rid of that stress that has been penting up inside her...

She gets dressed up in her pyjamaa as she has decided to stay inside her room all day...

She then goes in search of her chumka...she got it yesterday and she wants to try it...

Maybe she can wear it for Pari's wedding...

She goes and takes it from the dressing table and takes a look at it...

It's pretty beautiful and Geet is fond of chumkas always...

As she looks at the chumka she finds a shadow passing and is afraid that she might not be alone...

Geet catches a glimpse of her stalker on the mirror...

Yes, she has got company and that is non other than MSK himself...

Geet is angry as to why he is always after her, can't he let her live in peace for a moment...

She gets furious and turns back to show her anger...

But then he has vanished...Geet is a little disappointed...

Wher has he gone?

She gets up and looks around the room for him...

It's only her imagination, she has started having Maan fever, haina?

Geet: Geet, don't get carried away, it's Maan Singh Khurana, your boss, Maan sir, remember, he is just Maan sir for you and don't think about anything more, you are Maan Singh Khurana's secretary and your first and foremist job is to get him his girl friend, samjhi tum, aur kuch sochna bhi mat

She curses herself for thinking about MSK all the time...

But what to do? The more she tries to get away form him the more he gets closer making it tough for her to suppress her feelings...but she shouldn't imagine things, she is only a secretary and she has no right to think like this about Maan sir...

As Geet struggles with her emotions the last person she wants to know about her raising desires is here alreadywvitnessing her cute warnings that she try to impose on her innocent little heart...

Poor thing it does beat for him and him alone, though Geet has forgotten the past her heart still beats for MSK and is loyal to him only...

Maan knows that it belongs to one and only MSK and even Geet herself has no right over her heart now, he is angry that she tries to control his property, how dare Geet?

Geet again sees MSK's mirror image and thinks that it's again her mind that is playing this game with her...

Geet looks at the image and warns directly...

Geet: get out of my sight, you you you, don't you get it, I don't want to see you, now get lost and don't come back

Maan pretends to be angry...

Maan: Geet, what did you just say?

Geet is shocked, it's him, it's the real DD...ohh no what has she done?

But she manages to be brave...

Geet looks at his eyes thru the mirror and talks...

Geet: aap kamakam har jagah gusthe rehthe ho, aap ko sharam nahi aathi aaise dusron ji jadah pe unke ijazat ke bina jaathe?

Maan stares her...: agar apnon ke jagah ho toh?

Geet: what?

Maan: agar koi mera ho toh unka dil bhi mera hi haina? no one can stop me from entering it, it's my permanent abode

Geet pretends not to have understood his indirect speech...

Geet: I think you didn't understand what I said

Maan: no Geet, I understand everything, it's just you who doesn't understand it

Maan is stuborn...he wants her to accept the fact that she likes him at least...haina?

Why pretend to hate him and why hide her feelings?

Geet: don't you know you have to knock before just entering someone's room?

Maan: this is my house, this is my room, I don't need anyone's permission to enter, I have every right to enter my property and no one can throw me out of my place, samjhi tum?

Maan means both the OH and also her heart...

Geet too understands what he is trying to say, but it's better to be ignorant than knowing unwanted things...haina babaji? It's nothing to do with me...

Geet: OK then I'll go out

Geet tries to go but Maan stops her by catching hold of her...

Geet turns and stares him...

Maan had seen her trying to put on the chumkas and not able to do it...

Maan takes it from her and puts it on her ear himself...

Geet tries to stop him...: it's mine, give it back

But Maan won't listen to her at all...after all he is the MSK...

Maan: ssshhh chup bilkul chup

Geet freezes and he continues his job...

Imagine the scene where Maan unjewels Geet...it's more or less similar situation...

Maan: Geet, what happened to that girl that you chose for me?

Geet: who am I to choose a girl for you?

Geet subconsciously says that though she wouldn't want to say something like that to Maan...

Maan: who am I? you are the one Geet, you are the only one who has evry right on MSK, I don't know when you'll realize the truth

For a change they speak their mind without fighting...

Geet: but I know what you want?

Maan: then why don't you give me what I want?

Geet: I'm just trying to do that only

Maan: I don't think so Geet, you don't know what I want?

Geet: I didn't know before, but now I know you, I know all about you

Maan gets naughty...

Maan: then my job is easy

Geet: that's why I have asked that girl to come immediately and she'll be here soon

Maan is again puzzled and he could never understand Geet...when he thinks that he knows her so well she shocks him with her googly

Maan: ohh is that so?

Maan looks into her eyes and asks firmly...

Geet fumbles a bit by she is also our sherni...

Geet: yes, she is coming

Maan: you better ask her to come fast, or it may be too late for MSK might have made his choice then, she can avoid any disapponments if she makes it in time, and I think MSK has already made his choice

Maan keeps staring at her image in the mirror and she looks stunning with that chumka on...

Geet: but you have given me that job

Maan: I don't think you are capable of finishing that job succefully

Geet: you can't say that before you see my job

Maan: I'm still waiting Geet

Maan keeps looking at her longingly...

Geet: I promise I won't let you down this time, you'll understand when you meet the girl

Maan: I don't think that anyone can impress MSK but for

Maan pauses with his eyes fixed on Geet...

Geet: I know, that's why I'm trying to help you

Maan: MSK has got to get help from you Ms.Geet? babaji, isse achche din kehthe hai kya?

Geet: now will you let me take some rest, I have a lot of work pending

Geet looks at him as though he is jobless...

Maan thinks that it's enough for the day and he starts leaving...

He turns back as Geet is till staring him only...

Maan: BTW you look beautiful in those chumkas

Geet immediately looks at the mirror...

Maan knows what's wrong with Geet...she is on love and she is trying to hide it from Maan...but is that even possible girl?


Part120

Edited by ghsp2fan - 9 years ago
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geet trying to avoid him
n she is imagining him everywhere
when he comes in real she shouts at him
maan teases her n she is trying to avoid him
nice part

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