Swara ,Sanskar and Laksh OS :Charon's Cosmology

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Komal

@teribts7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

This was so beautifully written, Jenny. Reminds me of high school 😆

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Esther

@Buckwheat

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

hey jenny 🤗

1st time read a SwaSan OS just for you yaar.

And omg you are such a great writer.

wish i could also write like that 😆

anyways..

i love tragic stories and this one makes me speechless.

Love your OS!

great work!

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naina

@hp_2006

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Hey Jenni my love..🤗 Really nice OS...wonderfully written yaar..👏

Lakshya is the villain Poor Sanskaar and Swara😭

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Dear Jenny,

Despite it being a tragedy (leaves one melancholic rather than outright sadness - as one reads about the lives snuffed out) it was quite a captivating read.

Nyna

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -Ros-
Wonderful OS Jenni. The writing style.. honestly threw me back to my school days where I studied Shakespeare..even this has a tragic ending, like the many I have read and gives out a good message.
I'm kind of in awe of the first paragraph.. I don't know why.. 😆

Is there anything you can't do? 😲 You sing, you make edits, you write poems and now this.. ⭐️

I m happy that ,I made u Nostalgic😃😃

I am a writer basically then alone , I started to learn all other things

Love u soo much Ros 😳😳