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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shivanya in a confused state asks him who is Kaaruki...Shocked Ritik looks at shivanya in some pain...

Ritik will be so tensed and sweat on his forehead and a worried face...Shivanya understands his situation and guess something like he saw some dream regarding that devdi...She caresses and swipes sweat on his face with her saree so lovingly...n he looks at her and tears roll out of his eyes...she gets tensed and asks him...what happened...r u all right...pls tell me whats going in ur mind...am ur shivanya...who will always listen to u...

Ritik starts saying Shivanya pls dont think am talking all non sense...but i saw few visuals...i already told you earlier i had few visuals... me in shail libaaz and praying to lord shiv... n a diamond... like someone is asking me to come to protect it... Shivanya gets her flashes after SHiv taandav...
Ritik says now i saw further more visuals...I am a king...in a big darbaar making some announcements...
a very big war sequence...to protect that Naag madi...n confusingly i saw dad in a Naukar get up...n Maa being my maternal Aunt...and she is the one who stabbed me...from behind...shivanya gets shocked...

and importantly...he comes closer to her cuddles her face n says...
I knew it from starting we are related from past births...i saw u in that flashes...u r the one who always comes in my dreams as a Naagin in a special attire...i saw ur visuals in that attire...
Shivanya gets tensed...and we both love each other...n ur name was Kaaruki...i am shouting ur name and running behind u...and u had ur last breath in my arms...which i dont want to happen...while saying that he cries... gets tensed...shivanya to control, console him n stop his tensed reaction gives him a lip kiss(not too deep...jus a casual one...) he freezes and stops reacting and likes her softness...

She comes to normal and says...am sorry i didnt find other alternative to stop your worried and tensed situation...he becomes normal and starts pulling her legs...saying Akhele admi ko kiss kiya tumhne...
she again tries to cover up saying am so sorry it was not my intention but to stop you i didnt find any other way...pls believe me...maa kasam...i didnt know how to stop u other than that i really had no such intentions and looks in to his eyes...
she melts looking in to his eyes...even he feels the same...
Her inner mind says i really liked that moment of being close to you...i always wanna be like that with you...
His inner mind says...my love towards you is so strong...u love me or not i will love you till end of my life...

both of them break their eye lock...and suddenly Ritik says to shivanya...do you think all that i spoke with you is non sense...i really saw that glances...am unable to understand what to do now...from where should i start to know the hidden truth...which is awaiting for me...
Shivanya says from Panchener ki Haveli se...Ritik looks stunned and says you are right...and will ask Shivanya...can you help me and be with me...if u are ok...i will not force you...
Shivanya looks at him and says...i will always be with you and support you during all troubles & problems that you face...
will never ever leave you when u r in trouble...coz i cant see you in pain...
you did so much for me...and am indebted for you...and one important thing...we going to haveli should be a top secret...no one should get to know about it...particularly from our house...n hints about Ankush raheja and yamini...

Ritik comes to senses and says Panchneer ki Haveli chale...they both go to Panchaneer ki haveli in some different avtaars...such that no one in the haveli(who works in it) could identify them...they reaches that devdi and searches there for some clue...
they keep on searching...but gets no clue...suddenly Shivanya remembers there is another room hidden here and starts opening that door ritik comes and helps her in opening that door and both enter in to that room...
while shivanya would remain Normal but Ritik senses some thing different...he see the chains to which the unknow person is tied up...and gets his flashes of being tied him there for many years...
Ritik ssys to Shivanya last time when we came here u said u saw something here...am getting the flashes of a person who is tied and tortured here with this chains for many years...
Shivanya gets shocked to the hell and feels that Ritik is not a Normal person...He had some divine powers...he gets flashes about Naagmadi...n can feel the pain of me...his king get up...etc.., she thinks at any cost Ritik's past n truth should be known today...and starts searching for some clue...

Ritik looks at her searching so seriously...thinks how much she really cares for me...but why dont she convey that she loves me...once i get this mystery unfolded i need to talk to her and understand what her real problem is...Shivanya suddenly turns his side and gets to know he is looking at her...she asks him why is he looking at her instead searching...they both have a cat fight...and argue with each other and he pulls her close to him...and where she looses her balance and both fell on the ground and fall on each other and rotates till certain point and stops there...where shivanya is on Ritik...they both have an eye lock again...

Mean while the servant in Haveli listens to some sounds and informs the same to Ankush raheja...who gets tensed and says he will be coming there...

Then Ritik and shivanya comes to senses and says silence we need to search for clue and gets back to work...but suddenly both will feel something and comes back to that place where they fell and stopped...
They find it a hollow/resonating area and stamps on it...its noisy and starts to search for a clue there...
investigate there...Ritik finds out that it is actually a secret entrance to the Haveli...both gets shocked...
and goes through that secret passage way...

its the passage only Ankush & co knew about it...and they take away that unknown man through this way only...

Ritik and shivanya goes through that way...Ritik asks shivanya are you not scared...she replies am not...and more over am very excited and interested to know where does this go or end...she asks him are you scared...
he says ofcourse yes...bcoz u r with me naah...Naagin... i fear for you... shivanya stares at him in confused & shocked state... and he laughs saying mazak kiya... she gets releived and pass through that way...

after some way is passed they find it completely arranged with lights and good path...they feel like some one is visiting this path very frequently...they wanted people to get scared initially so they made the path so scary at starting and then arranged neatly...while in their path Ritik finds a Cigar and looks at it...
and says to Shivanya this cigar dad smokes this brand...they both look at each other and feel like we are coming near to something...chalo lets go fast...and they walk towards the direction of that unknown man...

That Unknown man feels the vibrations of Ritik and feels glad and excited...Ritik & Shivanya walks forward and finds a steel shield there...as a block to that path...they feel is it the End of this secret entarance...
both doesnt feel like agreeing to this...they were in no mood to go back without getting any clue...in between they search on all sides for any clue...they doesnt get...Ritik will give up and say lets go back...and suddenly he jokes at her asking i want to know the reason about why did she kiss me at that temple...if i go to that state again will you kiss me again...she replies saying no...will not do it...do u think u r so smart...and there knok jhoks start again...his hand mistakenly falls on a wall where they find a switch board...and presses the switch that existed there...and the steel shield gets opened...

Jata bhujanga pingala sphurath phana mani prabha. song plays...and Ritik enters hesitatingly and shivanya follows him... and go ahead...at the corner shivanya finds that unknown person and shows him to Ritik...that unknown person also gets excited seeing Ritik n shivanya...he jus says i know u will come one fine day...
I am waiting for you only all these years...am so glad you both came here...

rest continues...cheers
Edited by stopwatch12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Hey stop watch u again nailed it with ur creative writing... Loved it so much dear😊
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@stopwatch thanks for writing this...
RiVanya teamed up to find devdi raaz, I liked how Ritik pulled Shivanya's leg after she peck his lips...
they are so adorable!

continue soon (:
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome😊
Loved reading your stories.
Do continue please.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: stopwatch12

Shivanya in a confused state asks him who is Kaaruki...Shocked Ritik looks at shivanya in some pain...

Ritik will be so tensed and sweat on his forehead and a worried face...Shivanya understands his situation and guess something like he saw some dream regarding that devdi...She caresses and swipes sweat on his face with her saree so lovingly...n he looks at her and tears roll out of his eyes...she gets tensed and asks him...what happened...r u all right...pls tell me whats going in ur mind...am ur shivanya...who will always listen to u...

Ritik starts saying Shivanya pls dont think am talking all non sense...but i saw few visuals...i already told you earlier i had few visuals... me in shail libaaz and praying to lord shiv... n a diamond... like someone is asking me to come to protect it... Shivanya gets her flashes after SHiv taandav...
Ritik says now i saw further more visuals...I am a king...in a big darbaar making some announcements...
a very big war sequence...to protect that Naag madi...n confusingly i saw dad in a Naukar get up...n Maa being my maternal Aunt...and she is the one who stabbed me...from behind...shivanya gets shocked...

and importantly...he comes closer to her cuddles her face n says...
I knew it from starting we are related from past births...i saw u in that flashes...u r the one who always comes in my dreams as a Naagin in a special attire...i saw ur visuals in that attire...
Shivanya gets tensed...and we both love each other...n ur name was Kaaruki...i am shouting ur name and running behind u...and u had ur last breath in my arms...which i dont want to happen...while saying that he cries... gets tensed...shivanya to control, console him n stop his tensed reaction gives him a lip kiss(not too deep...jus a casual one...) he freezes and stops reacting and likes her softness...

She comes to normal and says...am sorry i didnt find other alternative to stop your worried and tensed situation...he becomes normal and starts pulling her legs...saying Akhele admi ko kiss kiya tumhne...
she again tries to cover up saying am so sorry it was not my intention but to stop you i didnt find any other way...pls believe me...maa kasam...i didnt know how to stop u other than that i really had no such intentions and looks in to his eyes...
she melts looking in to his eyes...even he feels the same...
Her inner mind says i really liked that moment of being close to you...i always wanna be like that with you...
His inner mind says...my love towards you is so strong...u love me or not i will love you till end of my life...

both of them break their eye lock...and suddenly Ritik says to shivanya...do you think all that i spoke with you is non sense...i really saw that glances...am unable to understand what to do now...from where should i start to know the hidden truth...which is awaiting for me...
Shivanya says from Panchener ki Haveli se...Ritik looks stunned and says you are right...and will ask Shivanya...can you help me and be with me...if u are ok...i will not force you...
Shivanya looks at him and says...i will always be with you and support you during all troubles & problems that you face...
will never ever leave you when u r in trouble...coz i cant see you in pain...
you did so much for me...and am indebted for you...and one important thing...we going to haveli should be a top secret...no one should get to know about it...particularly from our house...n hints about Ankush raheja and yamini...

Ritik comes to senses and says Panchneer ki Haveli chale...they both go to Panchaneer ki haveli in some different avtaars...such that no one in the haveli(who works in it) could identify them...they reaches that devdi and searches there for some clue...
they keep on searching...but gets no clue...suddenly Shivanya remembers there is another room hidden here and starts opening that door ritik comes and helps her in opening that door and both enter in to that room...
while shivanya would remain Normal but Ritik senses some thing different...he see the chains to which the unknow person is tied up...and gets his flashes of being tied him there for many years...
Ritik ssys to Shivanya last time when we came here u said u saw something here...am getting the flashes of a person who is tied and tortured here with this chains for many years...
Shivanya gets shocked to the hell and feels that Ritik is not a Normal person...He had some divine powers...he gets flashes about Naagmadi...n can feel the pain of me...his king get up...etc.., she thinks at any cost Ritik's past n truth should be known today...and starts searching for some clue...

Ritik looks at her searching so seriously...thinks how much she really cares for me...but why dont she convey that she loves me...once i get this mystery unfolded i need to talk to her and understand what her real problem is...Shivanya suddenly turns his side and gets to know he is looking at her...she asks him why is he looking at her instead searching...they both have a cat fight...and argue with each other and he pulls her close to him...and where she looses her balance and both fell on the ground and fall on each other and rotates till certain point and stops there...where shivanya is on Ritik...they both have an eye lock again...

Mean while the servant in Haveli listens to some sounds and informs the same to Ankush raheja...who gets tensed and says he will be coming there...

Then Ritik and shivanya comes to senses and says silence we need to search for clue and gets back to work...but suddenly both will feel something and comes back to that place where they fell and stopped...
They find it a hollow/resonating area and stamps on it...its noisy and starts to search for a clue there...
investigate there...Ritik finds out that it is actually a secret entrance to the Haveli...both gets shocked...
and goes through that secret passage way...

its the passage only Ankush & co knew about it...and they take away that unknown man through this way only...

Ritik and shivanya goes through that way...Ritik asks shivanya are you not scared...she replies am not...and more over am very excited and interested to know where does this go or end...she asks him are you scared...
he says ofcourse yes...bcoz u r with me naah...Naagin... i fear for you... shivanya stares at him in confused & shocked state... and he laughs saying mazak kiya... she gets releived and pass through that way...

after some way is passed they find it completely arranged with lights and good path...they feel like some one is visiting this path very frequently...they wanted people to get scared initially so they made the path so scary at starting and then arranged neatly...while in their path Ritik finds a Cigar and looks at it...
and says to Shivanya this cigar dad smokes this brand...they both look at each other and feel like we are coming near to something...chalo lets go fast...and they walk towards the direction of that unknown man...

That Unknown man feels the vibrations of Ritik and feels glad and excited...Ritik & Shivanya walks forward and finds a steel shield there...as a block to that path...they feel is it the End of this secret entarance...
both doesnt feel like agreeing to this...they were in no mood to go back without getting any clue...in between they search on all sides for any clue...they doesnt get...Ritik will give up and say lets go back...and suddenly he jokes at her asking i want to know the reason about why did she kiss me at that temple...if i go to that state again will you kiss me again...she replies saying no...will not do it...do u think u r so smart...and there knok jhoks start again...his hand mistakenly falls on a wall where they find a switch board...and presses the switch that existed there...and the steel shield gets opened...

Jata bhujanga pingala sphurath phana mani prabha. song plays...and Ritik enters hesitatingly and shivanya follows him... and go ahead...at the corner shivanya finds that unknown person and shows him to Ritik...that unknown person also gets excited seeing Ritik n shivanya...he jus says i know u will come one fine day...
I am waiting for you only all these years...am so glad you both were reborn again...

rest continues...cheers





😲Omggg!!!.. 😃Interesting, Vry Vry Intrestinggg😃...Pls Continue... Soon!!!..👏👏👏 weldone @stopwatch👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey gal,you are so creative.Loved your 2nd post too.👏👏👏👏

Waiting for your next story.😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey hi @stopwatch
Tum story aur continue nahi korogiii??
Part 3 k liye vry much excite 😃 pls continue karna😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishi555

Hey hi @stopwatch

Tum story aur continue nahi korogiii??
Part 3 k liye vry much excite 😃 pls continue karna😭

Hey thanx buddies... Vl post on Tuesday...
😊😊
Edited by stopwatch12 - 9 years ago
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This is great...
Loving it
Update soon

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