Ritik's Past Revelation Flashes...(assumption)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guruji Kataka advices shivanya to perform pooja following Shiv Taandav to please lord Shiv ji to know or get any clue about Naagmadi like where it is and with whom it is...and also to get some Good powers...
(no one had clue about Naagmadi...Shivanya & co thinks it exists with Ankush raheja...where as Ankush raheja & co know it is hidden by the unknown devdi man at a safe place)

On an auspicious day Kataka, Guruji, Shivanya & sesha started performing pooja...along with many Naagins and shiv Bhakths...

On other side...Guruma performs yagya to regain back her powers & she gets them back...also while doing some chants she realises that today is an auspicious day for naagins and get to know if they perform so called pooja Naagin will get good powers n become so stronger...
She from her cave reaches Rahejas house... everybody are in hall...(includes Yamini ankush...ramya ritik...his brothers n sisters)...wish her n ankush takes her blessings...she informs everyone about the auspicious day and Naagin going to get extra powers...
Some thing should happen or some one should create some obstacles or destroy there pooja...(who does such dare...) else it would be difficult to control the Naagin...
Ritik says I will go to stop there pooja to save my family...
will go to any extent for welfare of my family...Yamini doesnt agree...she will start her melodrama...
but Ritik will be so aggressive that today either myself or naagin only one should exist...n will take his gun and start going to that old Shiv Mandir...(yamini tries her best to stop ritik due to her other motive...but he doesnt listen to her)

After performing pooja shivanya asks Sesha to stay at Raheja house in my roop...and let me know if anything is urgent...while i will be performing pooja...Shivanya senses something or some danger might happen or some one tries to obstruct pooja...and asks sesha to go there in her disguise...

Sesha enters raheja house and gets to know about Ritik going to shiv mandir...she acts at Raheja home saying Ritik went alone n he is keeping his self in danger n i cant let that happen...i wont allow him to go alone...i will also join him...and she goes from there though Yamini n Ankush tries to stop her...

Sesha thinks to stop Ritik without entering him to Shiv Temple...
Shivanya's Taandav starts...and she dances to core to impress shivji...mean while she will have bleed from her foot...but still she doesnt stop the Taandav and performs rudra Taandav dance...
Other side sesha tries to stop Ritik from coming to the temple by creating several obstacles on road...but ritik overcomes all those troubles...one by one...Sesha will be thinking...Shivanya might get hurt if i do anything to Ritik other wise i would have bitten him by now...

Sesha will create a drama in such a way like...she disguises in to Ankush raheja and comes in car besides Ritik car...and asks him to stop his car...Ritik stops his car besides and asks him...dad why did you follow me...i said i will go all alone...ankush says...how can i put your life in risk and sit at home...please dont argue with me...lets go home...lets go back he will say...then suddenly Ritik gets a doubt is he my dad or not and to confirm it...he asks his dad where is his ring which guru ma gave to him...Sesha in Ankush disguise will get tensed and says forgot at home...so lets go back...
Ritik's doubt get strong n he says so u r Naagin and he tries to take his gun out...

Meanwhile Sesha pushes him and starts running...n then she escapes suddenly...Ritik too runs behind her n he doesn't find her...he starts his journey towards Shiv Mandir...
sesha informs kataka about she being unable to stop ritik...Kataka says we need to stop him for some more time so that Taandav will come to an end...if he see's shivanya it will be a loss 4 us...we will not get any info about Raheja house hold activities...
Ritik stops his car and walk towards Temple...suddenly a tree falls infront of him...and sesha creates big toofan typo...

Shivanyas dances to the core, revolves and revolves and fell down on feet of shiv ji's idol...Suddenly a big Thunder witha lightening stroke appears and fell on shivanya such that she get some powers and in her divya drusti she gets to see a scenario and some flashes where Ritik is touching that Naagmadi and they both being in junglee with that Naagmadi...n somebody chasing them by gun shooting...and they both escaping...and a bullet hit to Ritik...She shouts Ritik's Name in that Trans...

Kataka gets stunned with shivanya shouting Ritiks name...and then the Lightening strike disappears...shivanya opens her eyes and tears roll out of her eyes...saying Ritik in some trouble...i wont let anything happen to him...i cant see him in problem...kataka says what happened shivanya...what did you see...did you find any clue about Naagmani...
Shivanya says...Ritik touched and carried it...some goons chasing us in a Junglee...
Then Guruji involves and says his life is already in danger...he need to support u in times n she only need to take care of him...due to some selfish peoples motive...his life is at stake...pray to shiv ji for shakti to save him first...janam janam ka rishta hain aap dono ki...shivanya gets shocked...
Guruji says that's y he can understand n gets to know about ur pain...u will come to know about his threats...he blesses shivanya and leaves from there...
kataka says hide urself ritik came till mandir to kill Naagin...and he too leaves from there...Shivanya with bleed foot leaves from there...

Ritik overcomes all obstacles created by sesha and enters the Mandir...he finds some foot print with blood stains...n he follows them...meanwhile he gets the flashes of Shivanya in pain...n all that blood was shivanyas...he shouts her name...which she gets to hear...she doesn't understand anything...and be a bit confused...Ritik continues shouting her name and cries...he kneels down and catches his head as he gets some flashes of there past...where he is raja...and comes to the same shiv mandir and prays to lord shiv... and Naagmadi will be der on shiv ling...n his kingdom will be shown...a big Raja Mandir...big darbaar...where announcements happen...a big war sequence...a very big waterfalls...and a Junglee...where he(ritik in raja's attire) calls a name Kaaruki kaaruki...and runs behind a girl whose back side is shown...
and runs behind her with a lovely smile on his face...and girl turns back(who is shivanya) and see him but runs forward asking him to catch her...and some flashes of war with people coz of Naagmadi...and Ankush in Maali kaaka attire...n Yamini being his Bua(aunty)...and Kaaruki dying in Raja's hand and Raja(Ritik) shouting loud her name...and weeping badly...and Yamini stabbing him...

Coming to present...Ritik holds his head tightly and cries Shivanya and falls down...Shivanya see his trouble without his knowing and gets shocked and suddenly she changes her costumes to Normal Shivanya Ritik raheja and come near him with bruise to her legs and holds him...Hugs him and asks him to open his eyes...
she cries vigorously...and asks what happened to him...i cant see you in pain...pls wake up...she shouts saying I love you...nahi jeena mujhe tumare bina...pls open ur eyes...she goes to get water and sprinkle water on his face...he opens his eyes slightly and hugs her so tightly saying Kaaruki main tumhe kuch nahi hone doongi...and cups her face and kisses her fore head...and cries hugging her again n again...
shivanya in a confused state asks him who is Kaaruki...Shocked Ritik looks at shivanya in some pain...

Next part as soon as possible...Cheers...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautifully written
Quite interesting...
so maharaj n karauki were like in love and unka pyaar pura an Ho skaa but how is it related to ritik n shivanay?? Specially when they born before maharaj n karauki died😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I think the previous janam thing has nothing to do with ritik and shivanya in this season, but yes it may come into play in the next season. And as far as ritik's real father is concerned, I also don't think he is ritik look alike. If it was so then people (like gurudev and others) must have recognized his face. And with the rumors surrounding that aman verma joining the cast, he actually could play ritik's real father. 5th culprit can only be yamini...otherwise the story will again become complicated.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ritik might sense about the maharaja from his older janam. And I too feel karuki is related to the Raja Ritik.
But Ritik's father might or might not be Ritik look alike. I am not sure.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...Beautifully written.Kudos to you.👏👏👏👏

Am sure story goes similarly like our assumption...i do agree that Karuki and raja is none other than our Ritik and Shivanya and this is continuation of their incomplete love story.

I really want this below scene to happen and will happen as per OLV where shiv confessing love to ritik who is unconscious.

"Coming to present...Ritik holds his head tightly and cries Shivanya and falls down...Shivanya see his trouble without his knowing and gets shocked and suddenly she changes her costumes to Normal Shivanya Ritik raheja and come near him with bruise to her legs and holds him...Hugs him and asks him to open his eyes...
she cries vigorously...and asks what happened to him...i cant see you in pain...pls wake up...she shouts saying I love you...nahi jeena mujhe tumare bina...pls open ur eyes...she goes to get water and sprinkle water on his face...

he opens his eyes slightly and hugs her so tightly saying Kaaruki main tumhe kuch nahi hone doongi...and cups her face and kisses her fore head...and cries hugging her again n again...
Specially this scene...am desperately waiting..👍🏼👍🏼

shivanya in a confused state asks him who is Kaaruki...Shocked Ritik looks at shivanya in some pain..."

But the fact is CV's ka dimag itna sweet nhi hai na...kuch toh drama karenge...always give so much pain to our leads..😭😭

Please continue.👍🏼😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏Wel wel... Biggg wala hug dear😊... amazinggg, n wonderful each line😳... continue continue soon...👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very well written. 👏 I enjoyed reading it. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u so much guys for all ur love n support...Kit_kat, buscar, sanchu, ishi555, pari, n specially PAYANASHA15...
vl try to update next chapter also as soon as possible...
once again luv u all...n love Rivanya too...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: stopwatch12

Thank u so much guys for all ur love n support...Kit_kat, buscar, sanchu, ishi555, pari, n specially PAYANASHA15...

vl try to update next chapter also as soon as possible...
once again luv u all...n love Rivanya too...😊



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Awww... welcom dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was beautiful 😃
Loved it very much,keep writting dear 👍🏼

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