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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: neet135712
So...good. 👏👏👏
Loved it very much.

Thank you.

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

Rocker

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

im in awee of it kiara!

It has left me speechless!

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sskazii

@sskazii

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Lovely piece of writing! Such a simple realistic approach put down so effortlessly.
I loved it!

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-mujna-

@-mujna-

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Lovely... It's been a long time since I got a chance to comment on your work... This is really good... The best thing is that it is ONLY about them... 👍🏼

PS: still waiting for the Subbu OS!

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Tc_Tc

@Tc_Tc

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Your writing style is amazing and I love the way you explored their relationship.

Very well written 👏

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Just read all the parts now. Had read the last two before too, but read them properly again, will comment tomorrow. Will edit comments for all 3 parts here.

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Ki WOAH. I have read your work for the first time. And I can't even imagine how beautiful everything else will be, if this piece of 3 parts was so perfect 😳 I LOVED IT.

It's amazing how you chose a concept that puts light to Ishita's feelings, the ones she hides behind and that were barely expressed. What's worse is that Ishita was barely shown human after a point. And your story gives her the chance to be like any woman, who has a breaking point, who reacts after being hurt, is not always selfless.

Raman's love, feelings were also beautifully expressed. Very rarely do people balance feelings for both characters so vividly. He wanted to be loved and her to express it and wanted her to know he loved her the way she was... and he did. He was able to wipe the sadness off her eventually.

The last part has to be my most favourite. Any good story needs a befitting conclusion. Because stories are always remembered by how they end. And your last part was perfection. I can't put fingers on what was it that made it perfect. But it is... a very wholesome part. Ishita's confession, her breakdown, his understanding of her love that she had been expressing without wording them, and the pregnancy which was so subtly mentioned.

Lovely work Ki.. I am a fan now. Hope to catch up with your other work soon 🤗

Edited by -Anku- - 9 years ago