IshRa OS || Decipher - Page 2

Originally posted by: zeny_Nian

Nice OS! You gathered his pov/thoughts so perfectly!

loved thag part where he wishes all this to be her possession not some silly plan! Bhoot track was the last nail to her grave just like surrogacy was of ramans!

they are fools in love!

anyways once again you wrote well! Loved reading it

Originally posted by: gargpoo

Awesome os Atii...u portrayed Raman's thoughts n emotions really well...she is his life...he knows he will forgive her...bt not now ...
Yes she ws suffering too physically n mentally bt all bcs of her stupid planning..
But Raman ws suffering bcs of her...
Both r fools in love...both r imperfect that's y perfect for each other..
Loved it!

Poonam

Originally posted by: vaishnavi28

nice os

Originally posted by: Mdwst

Wow..beautiful, powerful, intense

Perfect ...

Loved the line " his life,his solace, his existence "👏

Originally posted by: Boo2014

Unreserved

You write so beautifully and I hope this and the other comments posted gives you the push to continue to write more.

You manage to convey Raman's emotions and the journey from the realisation of Ishita's betrayal to the acknowledgement that he will forgive her because even with her flaws, she is his life line.

Your words that he wishes she was possessed as it is better than having to accept the truth of her betrayal, speaks volumes of the pain he has endured.

In the show, they never delve into a characters mind set and as a viewer we are left to analyse them and make assumptions as to what must be going on is a character's mind. With your OS we are taken on a journey inside to Raman's mind from the initial feelings of betrayal to acknowledging what we all know, that he is incomplete without her.

I loved that he refused to pick up her calls as his way of getting his own back for the pain she inflicted.

My favourite bits:

Every single day was a challenge to get through, every single day was appalling. Every single day it was hard. Every single day, it was like walking and breathing fire, too hard to breathe'

'Because how can you live without a person, who is your life. And that is what she was, is and will always be. His life, his sanity, his solace, his existence'.

Please continue to write more.

👏

Originally posted by: -Anku-

ATII 🤗

Sorry for being so late. But you know what held me back.

I love reading the inner turmoil or feelings of characters, because in real those are never paid attention to in Indian soaps. And it was amazing to read something from you, on Raman's feelings during the Bhoot track. A scene where he thought about everything was needed there, and you gave it to us. I love how Raman accepts that no matter how angry he is with Ishita, he cant stay away from her or stay angry with her for long. He knows that one teary glance or plead and he would melt, would understand why she did what she did. His love for her, in your words is very palpable. He cannot survive without Ishita, it's not possible for him to and he knows and accepts it. She's his biggest strength and biggest weakness and that was more than evident even in your writing of his side of the story.

You're amazing at writing Atii, and you need to continue writing...give us something IshRa too 😳