MANAN SS Beintehaa (chapter 02 A/B/C/D pg 13 *pms later*)

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helloo everyone
here goes the character sketch
MANIK MALHOTRA : a handsome hot hunk who made girls go crazy for him is CEO of MALHOTRA INDUSTRIES is married to NANDINI MURTHY manik is a guy who is really short tempered he loves his wife but...something stops him to show that to her and behave like that with her
NANDINI MANIK MALHOTRA : a cute bubbly girl , interior designer by profession married to manik malhotra loves him madly like a crazy lover but what she gets in response is totally opposite of this ...abandoned by her family for choosing manik over them that's why maniik is her only family ...
CABIR MALHOTRA : maniks younger brother and the MD of malhotra industries is married to NAVYA MURTHY cabir is althought jooly and fumloving who loves her wife but like manik something tops him tooo from expressing it ...and to behave like this with her
NAVYA CABIR MALHOTRA :a sweet girl who is an architect married to cabir malhotra is nandinis chahcas daughter they also disowned her when she chosed cabir over them ... navya and nandini are like sisters to eachother they know eachother very welll
MUKTI MALHOTRA/ MURTHY : manik and cabirs sister married to abhimanu nandinis brother is a music teacher
SIA MALHOTRA : manik ,cabir and muktis younger sister just like a baby to them she is jolly .loving and happy soul but something changes her ...
ARYAMAN AND ABHIMANU MURTHY :nandinis and navyas brother nandini and navya are there jaan one scratch on them and they set fire something in past led all to be destroyed aryaman hated by all malhotra siblings
aliya and dhruv are married but aliya has a little liking towards manik ...
mukti is happily married to abhimany ( nandinis brother )
so here is the character sketch
kesa haii ???
I know u all will say I am so irregular still I am posting new story and not updating others
so the answer this story was on my nerves so I had to post it ...
I dot know how is it ...
prologue up iin some time
plzz suggest me some suitable name for ths ...
thanxxx😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the prologue :)
Waitinggg impatiently for the update.
AMZING writer you are. :*
Loved the concept.;)
Big fan of your writing::))
Pm me too:)
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Originally posted by: SAFARNAMA

new story???wooowww!!!! waiting...

updating in a while
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Originally posted by: thisissanjanap

Loved the prologue :)
Waitinggg impatiently for the update.
AMZING writer you are. :*
Loved the concept.;)
Big fan of your writing::))
Pm me too:)

thanku soo much dear
will surely pm u...
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PROLOGUE

Nandinis POV

Ayyiaapp what have I done jis ki mujhey yeh saza mil rahi hai ...was my decision so wrong that I have to pay this hard for this ... aj phir he beat me just because his shirt was not pressed properly although it was but I done knoe how some lines came on his shirt due to which he scolded me so badly and as always he had to complete the quota of the day by beating me up and he did that

...FLASHBACk...

M:what the hell ?? yeh shirt press kun nahi hai ??

N:it is pressed mene abhi ise press kia hai !!

M:ohh really do u think k ise press karna kehte hain haan

Manik barks on nandini

M: are ise behtar to gali ka dhobi bhi achi press karta hoga ... Hath men jaan nahi hai kia ????

Maniks words hurt nandini badly she starts crying

M:kia chahti ho tum haan k men yeh pehn k jaaon party men aur apna mazaak banaon haaan

And with this manik slaps on nandini face and twist her hands badly that she cries in ppain the bruise on her hand was so bad that it actually swells

After that manik leaves

...FLASHBACK ENDS ...

Nandini recalls this all by applying bandage on her bruised wrist and cries badly because she couldn't infront manik as then it will lead to another beating session

On the sametime in another house

Navyas POV

Hey matarani app hamain konsi galti ki saza de rahhe ho...she criesremebering wht happened with her

FLASHBACK

Navya prepared dinner when cabir came she settled the dinner by mistake in daal there was more namak on which cabir did a huge hangama and scolded navya badly he even pushed the daal thaal whick broke into pieces and one piece got stuck in navyas foot causing bleading but cabir didn't pay any heed to it ...

FLASHBACK ENDS

navya cries remembering that incident and here nandini also cries recalling all that
some times destiny can be this cruel that we cant believe on it but sometimes its the payback of our own taken decisions tooo!!!!
NOTE: this may be a dark manan ss especially manik and cabirs character will be dark if u r not ccomfortable plz let me know I will stop this right here ...
kesa laga
do let me know with your comments ...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome c.s...
Sounds interesting...
Plz continue soon...
Will be waiting anxiously...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arre yaar it's nice don't stop please continue but feeling bad for both nandini and navya want to know the suspense update fast can't wait to read chapter please update fast
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Interesting prologue...
Wud luv 2 read more...
Plz continue soon...
Will be waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it..:)
Update soon. Waitinggg :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey...awesome prolouge. I always wanted to read this kind of story where manik will be harsh on nandini but loves her.Just scolding &twisting hand or wrist or forcing her is okay...but slaping & beating...i think it's too much.Sorry if i told anything wrong...plz continue this story.

Update today if possible

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