MANAN SS Beintehaa (chapter 02 A/B/C/D pg 13 *pms later*)

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nabilaa456

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: nanoNikki
Interesting story...but I want to ask u one thing k kya Manik and kabir Ka character...end tak dark he raheyga...plz update first part soon waiting

No dear
It's just that they have a reason for their this rudeness fiestas navy and nankin
However they will definitely change at the end
But in starting they will be alot dark
I hope it's not an issue
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parthmanikniti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

pls updare long full chapter yar ...
I love dark manik...
but pls manik ko aise hi rakhna
...
cute manik se ye wala zyada a6a hai...

update soonish part 1

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Vidhiarora1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Quite interesting concept yr

Manik ka dark side theek h
But cabir ka dark side😲 first time ever

Very very rare

Plzzz don't make it too dark ss Okkkieee dokiiieee girl

Eagerly waiting for next part dear

With best wishes to your story
Vidhi

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Arunima

@jesse93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

What the hell,
how could he slap her,
qurious to know more about it,
continue soon.

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Mamiza

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

meri bacha kaisa hain ?????? dekh main agayi teri story par apna comment dene mein...i know u missed me bohot sara...i missed u more...

areh baap re princess yeh kya tha ??????????? itna bara jor ka jhatka ??? baap re baap !!!
meri princess sherni baan gayi !!!!!! haww manik se nandu ko mar khawa di omg thats beyong my imagination... humari fun loving cabir baba ko angry hulk bana di baap re baap...super duper start ki hain tune...i just love ur starting ...awesome starting princess just love it...mmwahhh...hmmm dark ss very intresting... par jyada jhatka maat dena thora bohot romance bhi de dena...aryamaan and siya ka kuch connectio hain kya jo aryamaan ko malholtra sibblings hate karti hain

just love it...super duper start ...love u bbohot sraaa...inshallah teri yeh story bhi successfull ho baki stories ki tarah... hope u will like my comment bohot din o baad am commenting so dnt know hows it... love u bohot saraaa...tc of urself...update when possible...with lots of love and hugs

Edited by kitkat5756 - 9 years ago

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Manancrazy_95

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Nice story
But as you written Manik love Nandini but don't show to her . If he have a feeling for her how can he beat her, slap her hurt her ???? "
Cabir is also like Manik
What happen that make Manik and Canir this cruel??
Poor Nandini and Navya
Amazing story
Cont soon

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anika mehjaben nahin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Hey firstly thnx for the pm
I love dark stories n if u can excute it well it will be awesome
Plz write n do justify with all the characters
As Manik n Cabir r hell dark in this story so there should be a solid reason
Whtever it is..i really liked the prolouge n waiting to read nxt
Cont soon n stay blessed

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Tanha Urmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Hmmm...it's a nice concept...! Yr tune toh totally 220 volt ka shocked de diya...!

MATLAB

Manik nandu ko Marta hai chaloo ye baat jaise taise diggest krli

But

Our coolest Cabir ko angry hulk bana di...😲

Tht was really shocking...!

Anyways

I like your concept...!

Plzzz

Update fast...!

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reet0143

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

concept sounds interesting

if manik love nandini then why he behaving like this with her

waiting eagerly

update soon

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nabilaa456

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu
Wow!!!! Prologue s up..
Its so awesum dear..

Seems vry interestin... Manbir may b little drk..

CS also nice.. A diff concpt..

Alwys cabir vil b cool guy..

Here cabir s same as manik...

Really suprb prologue...

Navni s alone.. Their family disownd dem..

Feelin vry bad 4 dem...

Dnt stp d stry dear ...do continue yaar..

Lukin 4wrd 4 d nxt prts ..

Thnks vry much dear 4 d pm...

thanku soo much dear