MANAN SS Beintehaa (chapter 02 A/B/C/D pg 13 *pms later*) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: kitkat5756

meri bacha kaisa hain ?????? dekh main agayi teri story par apna comment dene mein...i know u missed me bohot sara...i missed u more...

areh baap re princess yeh kya tha ??????????? itna bara jor ka jhatka ??? baap re baap !!!
meri princess sherni baan gayi !!!!!! haww manik se nandu ko mar khawa di omg thats beyong my imagination... humari fun loving cabir baba ko angry hulk bana di baap re baap...super duper start ki hain tune...i just love ur starting ...awesome starting princess just love it...mmwahhh...hmmm dark ss very intresting... par jyada jhatka maat dena thora bohot romance bhi de dena...aryamaan and siya ka kuch connectio hain kya jo aryamaan ko malholtra sibblings hate karti hain

just love it...super duper start ...love u bbohot sraaa...inshallah teri yeh story bhi successfull ho baki stories ki tarah... hope u will like my comment bohot din o baad am commenting so dnt know hows it... love u bohot saraaa...tc of urself...update when possible...with lots of love and h
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thanku soo much appii
love u tooo
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: mehjaben_nahin

Hey firstly thnx for the pm
I love dark stories n if u can excute it well it will be awesome
Plz write n do justify with all the characters
As Manik n Cabir r hell dark in this story so there should be a solid reason
Whtever it is..i really liked the prolouge n waiting to read nxt
Cont soon n stay blessed

thanku soo much
well the story I have is something very common which usually men behave like manik and cabir
still I would like to know wheat according to u will be a solid reason for their behavior like this
plz pm me that
thankuuu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

CHAPTER 01

It was a bright new morning when nandini wokeup due to sunrays directly following on her face .nandini irritatedly opened her eyes but suddenly it got widened when she looked at the time .it was almost 7 that means she had only an hour for cleaning the dining area and preparing breakfast for manik usually she would wake up by 6 but today she got late and if manik woke up and all these things aren't there then surely it great start for nandini

Nandini rushed towards the kitchen and started to prepare the breakfast she was in a hurry but made sure not to make any noise to disturb maniks sleep and then call for another heart wrenching session from manik

In cabirs house

Here the scenario was also same but different too as cabir was same as maanik but he lived in a small flat with navya unlike manik who live in a bit mansion yet makes nandini do the all house work including cleaning

Navya too woke up and went to prepare breakfast for cabir

Cabir came out after getting ready though he isn't very particular about tme but he is a great neatness freak

Navya did everything and made it presentable ,cabir came and after inspection of cleannesss he had his breakfast while navya was standing beside him

That's the rule of malhotra brothers that their wives weren't allowed to sit with them whn they are eating and if by any chance they did any mistake than they had to eat in their husbands jhoota plate

Cabir finished his breakfast left for office but not before instructing navya to clean the house

In malhotra mansion

Nandini was in a great hurry as any time manik would be down and yet she hadn't set the breakfast on the table

However she quickly makes her breakfast by burning her hand in the process and then she places the break fast on table when on the exact time manik comes down and sees her putting the juice jug on the table ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

CHAPTER 01 B

Manik loves food but he cant eat all at oe time right but no he makes nandini to make different dishes for breakfast ,lunch and dinner as if 10-12 people are coming to eat it

Manik comes and settles himself on the table whiel nandini stand on the side

After finishing the breakfast stood up and takes his blazer when he turns towards nandini and says

M: aj mali kaka nahi ayenge to make sure u clean the garden also got it ??

Nandini instantly nods in yes and then he leaves

Nandini wishpers to herself

N:poora mansion to mene hi saaf karna hai aj kaka nahi aye to mali bhi ban jaaon gi

Nandini was wishpeeing this to herself when manik came back and said

M: and haan don't forget to clean the house I want neat and clean house

Saying so he leaves ...

Nandini for a second was happy seeing manik thinking that he came to bid bye but her hopes got crashed .its weird but nandini still hopes

N:kaash manik u would have come to say me good bye *sighs*

She then goes to clean the mansion( including every single room without any servants )

Nandini was cleaning the house when she found a diary ...her diary which she had stopped writing long back

She opened it up and it led her to reca;; her first meet with MANIK'

thanku soo much for the response

I know u all are curious to know why manbir are like that

so have some patience u will know it sooon

kesa laga do tell me enjoyyy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Dude dont mind..but ye toh pura domestic violence hai...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Really curious to know
The reason of tge behaviour
Nicee
But very short pls post long ones
And soon
Ty for pm!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Awesome update


But really curious to know the reason behind manbir behaviour



Superb update


Loved it



Loved the update



Waiting for the next part


Update the next part soon





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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Awesome

Nice


Devil brothers and angel sisters

Cool
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Amazing update...
But m not understanding y manbir is doing such things???
Plz tell d reason...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
amazing story line up
continue soon

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