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Posted: 9 years ago
Phew! that was some adventure for Arnav and Khushi... The cliffhanger in Chap 12 made me think of various scenarios featuring goons and all but not a panic attack. You brought it out very well. It seems like Khushi still has a long way to go before healing.
The good news is that Arnav does not show any signs of budging when it comes to his care towards Khushi. He is a real gentleman though. Really loved the way he rushes to come to her rescue...he is a hero in true sense.

Looks like my though about goons was not far off. There is actually someone trailing Khushi and I assume it's most definately related to the Kidnappings. What I didn't get was why the guy was smiling about having seen Khushi in Arnav's arms. It seems like there are big people involved in this syndicate.

It is going to be an entertaining ride for us readers to follow this mystery as it unravels.


Hope to read the next update soon.

P.S. I know I am also guilty of replying very late...too much happening in the real world right now.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sandhya, The art works you selected so far are quite fitting to the story you are writing. BTW, Dali lived in New York during WW II and on/off later as well. His widely recognized The Persistence of Memory is in the collection at Museum of Modern Art (MoMA) in New York. The second, The Disintegration of the Persistence of Memory is in the Dal Museum in St. Petersburg, Florida. The melting watches were supposedly inspired by melting camembert cheese on a hot day (per Dali himself). I have seen the first since it is in NY, but not the second.

For Book 1, the painting plus Khushi-Arnav, to me, depicts the passage of time since Anjali's vanishing and how it affected those closest to her, namely Arnav and Khushi.
The terrain reflected in Arnav's aviators represents the Nilgiris; aviators hiding the acknowledged pain buried deep; Khushi, outwardly serene, but a guilt-ridden nomad; and both meet up in a secluded location in the Nilgiris.
The 20 years can be thought of as a "frozen dream-wake" state for all affected to fully wake up from and be as "normal" as possible, but alas time passed and the memories continue to linger. However, the melting watches depict the fading power and stability of the "limbo" state just as the ants on the red watch depict decay of "Pandora's box", The Disintegration of the Persistence of Memory, to then be fully awake for rebirth of life and hope!!

For Book 2, the painting plus Khushi-Arnav, to me, depicts the publication of Khushi's fictional crime thriller based on her journalistic insights into police procedurals and thus unleashing a storm in the Nilgiris which will dislodge the closely held "secrets" to float to the surface. The plane surface from before now shows individual bricks depicting a breakdown in binding relationships and the destructive nature of humanity. Arnav looks like the hero cop in her thriller, smart-aleck attitude, kinda rumpled look, shadowy jawline , but no lopsided smile or any reflection in his shades!! I see a smile and a much calmer demeanor in Khushi depicting a stable relationship with Arnav who will stand with her through the adversity in-spite of his mother.

Curious about the third piece of art you will select.

PS: This is strictly my opinion based on what I have read about Dali, his art and what I feel about HoT.

Looking forward to the next Chapter.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sandhya - real life gets in way of best laid plans and happens to all of us. I am happy to hear from you whenever you write an update and will stay to hear the story you want to tell.
The whole chapter was very creative in how you had Khushi eventually talk to Arnav about her feelings regarding Anjalie, her grief and of course it raised the specter of the unknown menace in their midst. There is the emotional trauma that Khushi faced and continues to battle and then there is the physical danger that Anjalie and other little girls faced. There was a certain eeriness In the temple scene when Arnav noticed the flash of light. If this was the movie, I would almost hear the background score inspiring fear.

I loved that Khushi trusted Arnav enough to let him rescue her and take care of her. I am concerned that you are making this man way too perfect to be real. Does he have any flaws?

Please do write as time permits...I am so dying to know what happens next and of course you are will reveal it iWhen the time is right in your own measured pacešŸ˜†


Edited by Anamika100 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
What a magical update sandhya! Absolutely loved it!
Ok who is that man that was stalking! He can't be the one who kidnaps every girl or is he? Why are only girls who are kids being kidnapped? Is. It like they are selling them ? Sorry my mind is doing its job don't mind :D

And what could I say abt arnav khushi scene? Its perfect from the start to the end .. And your arnav is incredibly sweet and insanely hot ! Glad they could share their feeling with each other.

take care :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
When you write, I can see and feel the scene as if it is happening live. This update was like mystery, love, emotions and affection all of them there, reminding me of a movie. I can well imagine how much a gentleman your Arnav is and how much guilt ridden your Khushi is. I can also feel evil forces in the background including his mom and sheetal or shreya--can not remember her name but do not like her. She seems kind of sadist and obsessed to me but future story will tell.
this is a beautiful story with different concept and will desperately wait for next part. Meanwhile i will reread it again to enjoy each word and their meaning. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow what a story. I just came across it and just finished reading the 13 chapters then I realised its still on going. Really different plot hope u update really soon. I'm intrigued
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome part...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Ladies & Gentlemen (if any)

To those readers of mine who are still here ... A heartfelt thank you for continuing to read The Hands of Time.

I'll be honest. I was disappointed to see a drop in readership. But then, I know, I am to be blamed to a large extent. The time gaps between updates have been big and inconsistent. And the content itself may / may not be what you are looking for.

But hey, I will take this up as a challenge by delivering what I do best. I will write and I will update. I will leave the rest up to you.

I am also curious to see if the ink in my pen/fingers remains. šŸ˜†

Like I always say, hit 'like' to let me know you read the chapter. If you have few minutes to spare, do let me know your opinions on the content.

Take Care

Sandhya

PS - Those who want PMs and are not on my list, send a buddy request and I'll accept.

PPS - Part-2 (Arnav - Khushi scene will be coming up in a day or two.

PPPS - I am planning to trim my buddy list. I think many of those on my list are not even on IF. I don't mind sending pms but if it is going to remain unopened, I don't see the point in wasting my time. I'm sorry about this. I do not mean to offend any one or a group of individuals with this decision.

PPPS - Check out the terminology below before reading the chapter.


Here is some terminology that we may, may not come across in our daily lives.


India has 29 States and 7 Union Territories.


Each State is divided into districts. (The state of Tamilnadu is divided 32 districts. Nilgiris is one of them)


Each district is subdivided into taluks (sub-districts) (Nilgiris district is subdivided into 6 Taluks)


Each Taluk consists of one or more small towns and few or more villages.


PS - Police station


SO - Station Officer


SI - Sub-Inspector


PI - Police Inspector


DSP - Deputy superintendent of Police


SP - Superintendent of Police


RTI - Right to Information


10 Lakhs - 1 Million


1 Crore - 10 Million

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Posted: 9 years ago


Book 2 - The Disintegration




To Be Continued below ...



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Posted: 9 years ago

Continued from above ...


Chapter -15

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