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Posted: 9 years ago
Updating with my first thoughts.....😊

More intrigue in the Nilgiris, Naxals, Cannabis, incompetent local police force, fudged reports...let's see how this progresses.

Shyam is here...he is a smooth talker, so many dreams about a woman he hesitated to offer assistance to on the train. Already ready to bend the aforementioned delay tactics to assist a journalist...ahhh, but it is his dream girl!! šŸ˜†

With such Smooth Operators what chance do children and youth have..".hop aboard I will take you home...cannabis cookie dear...". 😲


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Still thinking...will be back later with thoughts of Part 2 - Romance in the meadows...ā¤ļø

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Updated comment...Romance in the meadows..

"I wouldn't mind waking up to her every single morning". Of course, once is not enough!! He spent the night in Khushi's room watching over her, dozed off and was awakened by her snoring. 😃
His call, the spring in her steps, heightened emotions, skipped heartbeats, ahhh those early giddy, arousing, falling in love dating days. Impromptu daytime rendezvous in a romantic nature setting is simply irresistible and a fast food lunch is enjoyed as if it were nectar and ambrosia. šŸ˜›
Arnav's secluded property sounds so beautiful, reminded me of Twelve Oaks. Their love shack at the top of the hill awaits their mingling.
Khushi and Arnav connect very naturally. They understand each other, they are deeply attracted to each other and know it!! All the prior hesitation, rejection, reasons to hold back are spoken and mutual desire is acknowledged, they embrace and loose themselves in each other's arms.
Family not discussed and that silence speaks for itself. Khushi and Arnav will stand together for each other (I said so...pg 93).
All this closeness with a hired peeper investigator diligently doing his job with a new found greed for extra revenue. Aarti is not his client, but she will be approached for payoff. The client is (or connected to) the "psychopath" who does not want the police records analyzed.

For now let's enjoy Khushi and Arnav's budding romance before she leaves for her new job; Arnav has a need to drown himself in his Khushi's whiskey eyes!!
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Edited by bkamber - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shyam makes an appearance!
Hope he is not the bad guy here.
Shyam seems quite enamoured by her.
Hope and wish he is an honest police officer who really does help her with her research.

This is what I love about your writing, Sandy.
In the guise of a romantic thriller, this story deals with actual political and geographical situations which really do exist. The drug mafia, the naxal issue and the corrupt police and forest officials. Makes for a very interesting read. Are the kidnapped girls taken away as part of the naxal movement or a prostitution racket? Only time or you will tell.
The photographer presents another new angle to the story. Who hired him to follow Khushi? The obvious choice would be Arnav's mother. But maybe its not so simple. The story has a hold on the reader and its tough to wait for updates.
Waiting already for the next chapter.
Edited by 1chilly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Eagerly waiting for an update... you are faboulous clif hanger... as well as amazing writer, when ever i read your any story i always feel that i am also a part of story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Okay... now there will be a love triangle. Interesting!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 1:

Ready, Set, Go!!!!
And we are starting the roller coaster ride from this update !!!!

Sandhya, what do I say about your writing skills. You are par excellence.šŸ‘

Collecting so much of information about how the system works and then trying to incorporate it into the story, just amazing.

Shyam Ponnappa is the train guy !!!
(Is he a Coorgi by origin?)

And he is the SP too. Quite an influential guy.

And him talking regarding Naxals and certain villagers growing marijuana, I was wondering if the villagers support the Naxals and that is the reason they are not getting caught easily.
Also the labour problem faced by the Raiz tea estates, is it related to above problem too.

Farmers find cultivating marijuana more profitable than growing tea. And Naxals buy the crop of marijuana and inturn get the security and safety net from farmers and villagers too. Is that what is happening in the districts which is supposed to be patrolled by the police?

Now are the Naxals behind the kidnapping of the girls too?

Quite a real topic you have chosen Sandhya. Naxals or Maoists do not get caught easily due the help they get from the local villagers either by buying them or threatening them.

Will Shyam be able to put a stop to the Naxal activity and get justice to all the girls who have been kidanapped? Waiting eagerly with my seat belts on.

And not to forget Shyam is smitten by Khushi. He is in for a heartbreak too. How would he react to this revelation?

Now waiting for part 2.
Edited by canapoem - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 1

That was a "curveball" of a chapter.New characters that are crucial to the mystery element and very interesting ones. I like the way you paint very three dimensional characters in your story.

Before I proceed with further thoughts, Could I have this Shyam? He is a dude and a dude in uniform is totally irresistible and Khushi already has Arnav (She has tonnes of work to do before she gets him but she will right?) Of course, that question rises only if he will have me lol. He seems smitten by one and only Khushi.

All right, I will start from the very beginning all over again.


Nilgiris is your story is not merely beautiful but also very intriguing. The missing children, the naxals, the drugs - one has to name it, they have it. But that is real world. The idyllic setting in the mountain does not translate to saintly people.In fact by juxtaposing the dark deeds, moods and grey characters against the stunning emerald setting, you bring out the realism.

I loved Shyam. He is handsome, smart, strong and understanding. He tactfully sent the junior officers out of the room, before taking on DSP Vishnu and that speaks of respect to his colleagues.

DSP Vishnu seems like a strong deputy/ally to have. But why did the people he recruit turn out corrupt. If it wasn't for the anonymous tip, The fake report would have been presented to the bosses and super bosses. Dal mein such kaala hain.

Shyam and Khushi scene was very sweet. The poor guy is smitten and sadly, his heart will be broken. Will he take it lying down? Only time can tell.

Great writing. Waiting for part-2.
Edited by VishMaram - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Waiting for part 2
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shyam was the man who offered help to Khushi . He was also looking forward to meet the mysterious girl , hope doesn't turns out to be a villain . Because the name Shyam has created a bad image for the man .
May be he will become a very good friend to khushi .
Shyam is dealing the case of naxals , are these people behind the little girl's disappearance? May be they are selling the girls for raising there funds or worst sell the girls for organ donation or flesh trade . The fate of abducted girls is very horrific .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww...new character is introduced and he seems pretty interesting...looking forward to the next update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
ieks. ..
so here come shyam and he is not even a creep but a police officer who wants to do his work properly , you made it difficult to just ignore him.
I can't wait for next update ...arshiii (dreaming ).
about pm well, I am good at stalking.

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